600-word model essay on excellent narrative composition in junior middle school (5 selected essays)

How to write a good composition, many people don't know what factors are needed to write a good composition, so here I will sort out 600-word model essays (selected 5 articles) for you. Let's have a look!

I was walking in the corridor of the campus when suddenly a young leaf fell on me, which made me notice its "mother".

I gently hold the leaf in my hand. It is very thin, thin and oily green. Gently stroking its weak body is so smooth and soft.

Then I looked up, and it was a very slender tree, facing the tree in my seat. I don't usually notice. It is only as thick as the wrist, and the thumb and forefinger are enough to grasp its weak body. The trunk has some bumps and is not completely smooth. But it grows very tall, towering into the sky, up to four floors.

After careful observation, I found that its branches grow very regularly and neatly. Look! Its stem is growing, and its branches will grow like it. Moreover, they are not messy, but neatly layered with branches in a circle, like a group of children playing games hand in hand.

I approached the tree slowly and smelled its leaves carefully. It turns out that it does not have the strong fragrance of roses, nor the charming fragrance of lilies ... it has a faint jasmine-like fragrance, which makes people feel refreshed.

Suddenly, there was a strong wind and heavy rain. I immediately returned to the classroom, looking at this fragile tree from time to time, thinking in fear and trembling: Ah! What a thin tree! Will it be attacked by thunderstorms and blown down by strong winds? But as I expected, it was not struck by lightning and blown down by strong wind, but stood upright and motionless. The soil seemed to really wrap the roots, like a kind mother protecting her son. Look at the trunk again, it's really shocking and I can't help but exclaim.

Looking at this tree, I unconsciously think of the tree in my community-its "companion". I always stop every time I pass that tree. The faint fragrance of green leaves makes people relaxed and happy. It seems that the whole community is filled with this kind of floral fragrance, which makes people feel like singing and dancing. And every time, I want to take off the "green cloth" on it, put it in my palm and walk with its fragrance. ...

There are all kinds of plants on campus, but that tall and thin tree attracts me.

The sky is blue in May, the trees are lush, the flowers are fragrant, the songs are beautiful and our campus is colorful in May.

In this colorful May, the wugang city No.2 Primary School Campus Culture Festival also kicked off here.

In the activities of the campus cultural festival, our campus is full of songs and laughter. In order to welcome the arrival of the Culture and Art Festival, the students and the Eight Immortals crossed the ocean together-some danced, some sang, some painted ... The most attractive thing was the closing ceremony of the campus culture festival.

The day before "June 1st", our campus culture festival was held in the Mine Culture Palace. The front door of the Cultural Palace shows the award-winning works of students of all grades, including photography, handwork, calligraphy, painting, one by one, or vivid or exquisite, which also makes us deeply feel the versatility and Excellence of the students.

The performance has begun. The best program was selected through a variety of selection methods such as guzheng solo, poetry recitation, drama performance and award ceremony ... I also participated in recitation and drama performance. Although I was very nervous on the stage, I saw my classmates looking at me with encouraging eyes and shouting: "Guo Yilin" you can do it, "Guo Yilin" you are the best! Come on! Suddenly, a force spread all over my body. Thank you, my lovely classmates. I meditated in my mind. I'm not afraid anymore. I read aloud emotionally and played my role well with my heart. Thunderous applause rang out from the audience. I know I did it.

Two students in Class Four (1) made the whole audience laugh. Class one (1) students performed three and a half sentences, which made people laugh their heads off. My fifth-grade sister's Latin dance is a must, so beautiful, so beautiful. As the saying goes, one minute on stage, ten years off stage.

The campus cultural festival ended in our applause, but all this will remain in our hearts.

The campus in May is red, the campus in May is hot, the campus in May is full of vitality, and our campus in May is even more colorful.

I was very excited on my way home from school. I got 98 points in this math exam. When I get home, my parents will definitely praise me, and maybe even reward my favorite color diary. Miss me makes me happy.

After opening the door, I had a little doubt. Recently, my parents are working at home. Why don't you come and say hello to me? Have they gone out? At this moment, there came the voice of mother's approval from the room: "Tong Tong did really well in the exam this time. Really improved a lot! " . Does mom already know my grades?

I rushed into the room and a girl was sitting between my parents. She wears a ponytail like me, has the same figure and almost the same facial features. Holding a test paper in hand, mom and dad are looking at her happily. Who is she and why is she in my house? My clone? A series of questions rolled in my mind, and I forgot to think and shouted, "Dad, Mom!" " "Only then did they see me standing in front of them. My mother immediately opened her mouth in surprise and stammered," That, that, who are you? "Which is my daughter?" "me!" I shouted in unison with the girl. I'm nervous. Mom and dad, you must have a good look. I am a real daughter!

Dad seemed calm and asked, "Tong Tong, which friends do you often play with at school every day?" I thought to myself: she won't know this problem. It's time for my parents to know that I am the real "me". So I quickly replied: "Yu Miao, Cao Cao, Sandy." But unexpectedly, she also said the same answer. I was even more panicked, and I was so anxious that tears swirled in my eyes, fearing that my parents would not recognize me. And she smiled at me, as if to say, "I will be Tong Tong, the daughter of this family, and you are nothing!" " "

Dad looked at me, then at her, and then asked, "Who can find out what 3925 1x949 is first and who is my daughter?" I suddenly panicked. How could my father ask such a question? Usually, my arithmetic is always prone to mistakes. This problem must have at least eight figures. How can I work it out? I was so anxious that I broke out in a cold sweat and cried. The girl said unhurriedly: 37249 199. A few seconds later she came out and gave me a sly look.

But then my parents suddenly looked at me and smiled. My mother opened her arms to me. I understood my father's meaning and threw myself into my parents' arms excitedly.

The fourth chapter: 600-word model essay of excellent narrative composition in junior high school, just inadvertently turned around and walked into the field I had forgotten.

The path is still the same path, the sun shines on it, and spring has grown on both sides of the road, and green grass has broken ground. I always remember this road clearly, which is the road to my uncle's field. The earliest memory is that I was held and walked along this road with some uncle's hard linen clothes. Later, with one hand holding the grasshopper and other gadgets, I walked and played on the path. At that time, like other children my age, I was not afraid of bugs at all. I just think that little turquoise has endless fun. Later, I was often ridden by my brother over a narrow path. When I got to the ground, my car tilted, and I went to find that endless joy. Never go home with a happy and restless heart until the sunset drags the shadow long.

Now, as soon as I set foot on this path, my memory suddenly became bright like being splashed with colored paint.

I walked on, as if I had found something I had lost for a long time, and my heart was full of happiness.

The field of vision suddenly widened, and the wind could clearly smell the dirt inside. The rape in the field has just produced three or five shy little yellow flowers. It seems that with a little more effort, these yellow and green little guys will dye the fields into large areas of golden yellow again.

I remember when I was a child, Xiao Su was the favorite playmate among us, so she was always stained with yellow petals and pollen, which made everyone laugh. He always said that there was a smell of orange fruity candy in rape blossoms, but no one felt the same way and laughed at him as a little liar.

Is Xiao Su a little liar after all? I still don't know. That rape flower doesn't care about anything, only cares about opening year after year, and I don't know how many cycles it has gone.

I walked along the dirt road to the ridge by the stream and sat down. The sun is warm and the soil is a little lazy. I don't like it. I thought for a long time before I found that the shade of the big mulberry tree was gone. I remember Xiao Su once fell into a stream while picking mulberries from this tree, and his ridiculous embarrassment suddenly appeared in his mind.

I suddenly want to laugh out loud and turn my head, but I can't see any face. I turned around again, and the air was quiet, only the sound of running water in the stream could be heard.

I looked forward, and it was the vigorous rape tree. Further on, there is a reinforced concrete school.

Let's go, although a little lost, but I am trip worthwhile, because it lets me know that no matter how tired my heart is, there are still my beautiful memories here, and there is always a field that I can set foot on at any time. When I am tired, I will think about this field. I know it's behind me, smiling year after year.

Article 5: A 600-word model essay on excellent narrative writing in junior high school. Who is my best friend? This is a big secret, this secret, God knows, knows clearly, and he and I also know. However, I think you will know after I introduce you!

My good friend is neither fat nor thin. He is a big man who is one meter eight. Whenever I am with him, I feel safe. Although usually clumsy, but the brain is much smarter than others! Every time I have a question I don't understand, I will ask him. After he tells me, he will ask me, "Do you understand?" If I don't understand, he will tell me again until I understand. You see, he is not only clever but also helps people to the end! I always thought he was stingy because he never bought anything for himself. But one thing is, it's time to change my opinion of him!

Once, I went out to play with him. We came to a shop that bought chestnuts. It says: three yuan a pack, fragrant and sweet. I asked him, "Do you buy chestnuts?" He said, "What's delicious about chestnuts? I don't eat. " If he doesn't eat, I can only look at the ocean and sigh! Let's go on shopping. I walked past countless shops before I bought a dress. We are taking a walk. Suddenly, he stopped, pointed to the other side of the road and said to me, "Let's go and have a look!" " "I looked at his fingers. It turned out that a middle-aged woman was begging there with a little girl in her arms. I said disapprovingly, "Isn't it just a beggar? What is there to see! " I pulled him away. He went that way, so I had to follow him. He squeezed into the crowd, looked at the sign in front of the woman, and without saying anything, put thirty dollars into the basin in front of the woman. I also said a few words to that woman and then came out!

I ran to him and asked him, "I asked you to buy a bag of chestnuts for three yuan at first, but you didn't buy it." Why did you give someone thirty dollars this time? " He didn't say much, only said: "Sometimes, giving others is happier than getting yourself!" " "He said these words and went away, leaving me alone. When I came to my senses, he had already left! I quickly caught up with him and said, "Dad, I didn't expect you to be so generous! I finally saw one of your advantages. " He said disappointedly, "I just found one! "Your father and I have many advantages!" "It seems that I have to discover your advantages!" "Of course!" ..... so we went home laughing.

Speaking of which, you must not know who my good friend is! Congratulations, you also know this big secret!