College entrance examination composition: conception and model essay analysis 14

14. Read the following materials and write as required.

There is a "100 hour law" in the American investment community: if you want to get rid of the layman's hat, you can't spend 100 hour, or even 10 hour. Painting, maybe you can't become Da Vinci if you spend 10000 hours; However, people who learn to draw simple figures and artistic figures can surpass painting blindness in less than 10 hour and get numerous praises in the circle of friends. Photography, if you spend 65,438+/kloc-0,000 hours, you may not become Bresson or Daido Moriyama; But it takes less than 10 hour to take photos with "artistic sense" and "advanced sense" by mobile phone.

American writer Stephen Gass introduced his starting point for success: 1 day 1 push-ups, 1 day/reading 1 page, 1 day to write 50 words. Two years later, he had his dream physique, wrote four times as many articles and read 10 times as many books. This is the magic of a small starting point that is almost impossible to fail.

After all, all great actions and ideas have a trivial beginning. But why do you still belong to the 80% that has been surpassed?

How do you feel and think about the above materials? Please synthesize the content of the material, choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style (except poetry), write a title yourself, and write an article of not less than 800 words.

Intention analysis

This question examines students' ability to write expository, practical and literary texts. The ability level is to express and use E. This composition is a material composition. Before writing, read through the material, grasp the content of the material as a whole, and understand the truth contained in the material. Then choose the right angle to conceive. This composition material provides three paragraphs. The core of the first paragraph is that there is a "100 hour law" in the American investment community. The connotation of this definition is that you can't use 100 hour or even 10 hour to get rid of the layman's hat. At the same time, taking painting and photography as examples to prove it. The second paragraph refers specifically to the American writer Stephen? Gus introduced his starting point of success as an example, proving that a small starting point can achieve great success. The third paragraph summarizes and evaluates the above two paragraphs, and draws the conclusion that all great actions and ideas have a negligible beginning. And call on readers to take action. The whole material emphasizes the usual work, focusing on accumulation, and don't ignore the small, which can bring great success. From this, we can make up our minds, stick to it and win; Great achievements are conceived in small things, or achieved in ordinary things; Work in peacetime; Start with trivial things; Thick accumulation and thin hair. Other ideas, as long as they are within the scope of materials and meet the requirements of materials. When writing an argumentative essay, the viewpoints should be clear and accurate, the arguments should be typical, the arguments should be strong and hierarchical, and the arguments can be demonstrated from the surface to the inside and from the superficial to the deep. The method of argument cannot be single. To write a narrative, we must write about people and things, pay attention to details, and move people with emotion.

Methods the finishing touch

The first step is to understand the material and grasp the main idea. First of all, we should pay attention to the characteristics of materials: a single material should grasp its main idea as a whole; Many materials should find out their similarities and differences, so as to grasp the center; Metaphorical materials should understand their metaphorical meaning; Materials containing philosophical fables should grasp their meanings. The so-called grasp of the theme (that is, the intentional tendency and emotional tendency of the material). The second step is to choose the angle and accurately conceive the material of a single theme. Rich materials can be conceived from multiple angles, namely divergent thinking and multi-faceted conception. Generally speaking, a material can be viewed from at least two angles: affirmation and negation. For the material of "one thing with many people", there are often several perspectives of "people"; There are several "causes" in the material of "one thing with many causes", and there are often several perspectives. An event, according to its different background and writing purpose, has produced several different perspectives.

Model essay reading, small persistence, great success

I have a bad habit, that is, I do everything by halves and I can't stick to it. Why not? That's because the goal is too big.

There is a story of three clocks that has been lingering in my mind and inspiring me.

A newly assembled Jason Chung was placed between two old clocks. Two old clocks "Tick-tock" and "Tick-tock" are walking minute by minute.

One of the old clocks sighed and said to Jason Chung, "Come on, you should work, too. But I'm a little worried. After you left 32 million times, I'm afraid you can't eat it. "

"My goodness! 32 million times. " Jason Chung said in surprise. "I can't do such a big thing, I can't do it."

Another old clock said quietly to Jason Chung, "Don't listen to his nonsense. Don't be afraid, your task is to race against time. "

"Wow, there is nothing so easy in the world!" Jason Chung with a grain of salt. "If so, I am willing to do it."

In this way, Jason Chung easily "ticks" every second. Unconsciously, a year passed and I did it 32 million times.

Oh, how simple! 32 million times is a huge number, but if you really want to do it, you only need to play it once every second to finish it.

At this time, another story about this truth came to my mind-running towards the goal in stages.

Japanese athlete Honda participated in the 1984 Tokyo International Marathon Invitational Tournament, beating many famous athletes and winning the championship unexpectedly. Reporters gathered around to know why he achieved such amazing results.

Yamada said a short sentence: "Beat your opponent with wisdom." Nobody understands.

1996 Ibn Yamada revealed the secret in his autobiography.

Before every race, he has to take a bus and walk the race route carefully. Draw a striking sign on the paper. For example, the first sign is a bank, the second sign is a big tree, and the third sign is a red house … and so on until the end. After the start of the race, he rushed to the first goal with a sprint mentality, and then ran the second goal with the same mentality after running. Yes, run to the target in stages. Eat the rice bit by bit and walk step by step.

A big goal may be suffocating, but as long as it is broken down, who can say that it can't be done every day? Every little persistence can make a great success.

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