500-word composition for fifth grade primary school: Travel Notes on Xianhua Mountain

Composition title: Travel Notes on Xianhua Mountain

Key words: 500 words for the fifth grade of Huashan Primary School

Number of words: 500 words composition

This article is suitable for: fifth grade primary school students

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This composition is a 500-word composition about fifth grade primary school students. The title is: "Travel Notes on Xianhua Mountain". Everyone is welcome to contribute. Xianhua Mountain has beautiful scenery and very fresh air. When I entered the entrance, I found a large area of ??bamboo. The air was fresh and very quiet. There are also many bamboo shoots that will grow into bamboos. When we entered the amusement palace, a master shouted loudly: "Would you like to ride a horse? It costs two yuan to run a lap." I said to myself: "It's too restricted in the mountains. I only want to ride on the grassland." Here!

"After walking for a while, I found three big characters "Test Gallstone" carved on a cliff. The cliff was very steep and uneven, as if it might collapse at any time, which made me frightened when I tried the gallstone. When I passed the stairs built on the cliff, I saw such a narrow staircase and couldn't help but said: "How...how do you go up here?" But I bravely took the first step and slowly climbed up. Move for fear of falling. "Ah!

Finally succeeded!

" I shouted. I saw a wooden sign that said: Lovers Rock. Two huge stones stand upright and lean on each other. I took several photos of my parents here. After a difficult journey, we finally arrived at a viewing platform. Looking at Xianhua Mountain from here, it can be said that there are so many mountains and green mountains!

The happy time is always so short, and the time to go home comes so quickly. I really hate that time passes so fast. Comments from famous teachers: Travel notes are narrations of people’s travel activities. At this point, the author can pay attention to the characters’ activities throughout the travel notes and write down his true feelings. However, a complete travel note cannot be separated from the description of the scenery. Although the author's description of the scenery is somewhat involved, after reading the entire article, we still have no deep impression of the scenery of Xianhua Mountain. It is recommended that the author closely follow the travel journey, further grasp the characteristics of the scenery, and combine the details to make readers feel as if they are actually there.

(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Chen Ting) 2009-4-26 23:06:00