300-word composition for the third grade of primary school: Puppy Travel Notes (1, 1)

Composition title: Puppy Travel (1, 1)

Keywords: Puppy Travel 300 words for the third grade of elementary school

Word count: 300 words composition /p>

This article is suitable for: The third grade of primary school

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This composition is a 300-word composition about the third grade of primary school. The title is: "Puppy Travel Notes ( 1,1)》, everyone is welcome to contribute. In a trash can, there lived a puppy named Piru, a stray dog. Piru has no parents, but he has a heart that loves travel and adventure. He once thought of visiting several other cities, but he gave up because he knew he would get lost. But one day, his wish came true...it was a sunny morning. Piru just woke up, but his house (trash can) rolled up, and Piru was knocked unconscious... When he woke up, he found himself near a city. The city was very beautiful, and Piru wanted to go in, but he was afraid of getting lost. Will Piru go in? Please watch the next episode: Puppy Travel Notes (1, 2) Comments from famous teachers: It can be seen that this is a very vivid fairy tale. It needs to be the beginning of the story, but it is already written in a more attractive way. Puppy Travel Notes begins here . I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a wonderful article. Here is a suggestion: the article can be written more vividly. It will be better if you first describe the appearance of the puppy and add more descriptions of actions and language to the story of the trip.

(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Lin Yaoji) 2009-1-15 12:40:00