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Can you read the welcoming pine on the cliff of Huangshan Mountain? Clouds around it, fog around it, rain pumping it, wind destroying it, frost bullying snow pressure, thunder and lightning thundering, nature seems to be unable to tolerate its existence, and it must be removed quickly. However, it does not bow its head, does not give in, and is not afraid of the criticism of the wind knife and snow axe. In countless counterattacks and howls, it has developed a clashing iron character and condensed a strong car spirit. Time and again, it is Once, it tore the clouds into pieces; It forces frost and snow to escape with majesty; It drives away the thunder and lightning by being rigid ...

All the longing, struggle and struggle of life are shown in this symphony of destiny shaken by pines. Don't you think our Anhui is just a majestic and tall Jinsong after reading Huangshansong? Anhui, with the Huaihe River, has been stirring for thousands of years and has experienced several ups and downs. How many thrilling stories have been staged on this vast land! It used to be one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization. Taoism of Laozi and Zhuangzi, Three Cao Hua Zhang, Xin 'an Literature, Tongcheng Prose ... these are all indispensable parts of Chinese culture. A sentence "Misfortune is a blessing; Blessed, where the disaster lies, "tells how many vicissitudes of life;" The phrase "weeding at noon, dripping with sweat" tells the hard work and hardships of Anhui people. "Never tire of looking at each other, it is unique to respect Tingshan", "Tianmen interrupts the opening of the Chu River, and the clear water flows eastward here", "Wuyue returns without looking at the mountains, and Huangshan returns without looking at Yue" ... Don't these prove the literati's yearning for the beautiful scenery of Jianghuai?

Everyone knows that Dayu "went through the house three times and didn't enter", but a few people know that it is our girl from Anhui Qianshan who is leaning against the door and looking forward. "Qiao Gong and two women show off their bells, and the autumn waters bloom with hibiscus" makes the poet full of infinite yearning, but doesn't the love of Jiao Liu, who "raises his hand and works hard, and his feelings are the same", also move people across time and space? Four Treasures of the Study, Huizhou architecture, Wuhu iron painting, Huangmei Opera, Fengyang Flower Drum ... These are all the crystallization of the wisdom of Jianghuai children! The vigorous uprisings in Chen Sheng and Wu Guang that overthrew the brutal rule of the Qin Dynasty a thousand years ago, and the epic deeds of countless warriors who fought bloody battles in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression and the liberation war a thousand years later, all proved that the sons and daughters of Jianghuai were fearless of oppression and resisted bullying. Huang Shansong, I have read you!

This article has a profound meaning. The author takes "Huangshan pine" as a symbol, and through the description of Huangshan pine, he expresses his praise and admiration for Anhui culture and the spirit of Anhui people. Starting from Huangshan pine, the entrance is small, but it can be seen from the small, and the literary talent is flying. The whole sentence is used alternately, and "quotation and parallelism" is another major feature. The admiration for Huangshansong and Huiyun was strengthened. The full text cited a large number of facts and expressed the admiration for Huangshansong from different angles. The feelings were sincere and convincing. Taking the similarities between Huangshansong and Huiyun as the main line, a large number of materials were strung together, and the topic was deepened. The article was far-reaching and insightful.

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