How to write a travel composition How to write a travel composition

1. Describe the scenery in the order of tour. When writing, you should carefully observe and memorize the scenery you visit, and write down the scenery you see in the order you see it. Only in this way can it be organized, natural, and clear, and not cluttered.

There are usually two methods for observing scenery. One is fixed-point observation. For example, stand in a corner of the park and observe the park from far to near. Another example is when we climb to the top of the tower and observe the scenery below the tower from the four directions of southeast, northwest and northwest. The second is mobile observation, which is also called the step-by-step transposition method. Just change the position with the movement of your footsteps and observe one place at a time. Once you have chosen the observation point, you have determined the order in which you will write. For example, in the text "Visiting the Great Hall of the People", the author writes about the scenery in five places in the order he visited. First, write the national emblem and pillars at the main entrance of the General Assembly Hall, then the ceiling and floor of the central hall, then the auditorium, and then the banquet hall and conference hall. In this way, the scene that the author saw in the Great Hall was written down in an organized and focused manner.

2. Grasp the key points of the tour and write the process in detail. During a tour, we saw a lot of scenery, and we cannot keep a "running account". You should write down the things that impressed you most among the scenery you saw, and the rest can be written briefly. While we were visiting, we also wanted to capture the characteristics of the objects and observe them carefully. For example, if we want to write a narrative focusing on the scenery we saw during our trip, the focus of writing is to focus on writing down the scenery we saw. For the particularly good scenery we see, we need to describe it in detail and highlight the key points. For key scenery, pay attention to describing their location, movement, static, color, etc. in detail. For example, when we write "chrysanthemum", the color can be "red like maple leaves, white like frost, yellow like wheat ears", etc., and the shape of chrysanthemum can be like "little girl's curly hair, fluffy chick, hydrangea" etc. wait. We need to write the process in detail and concretely, so that the priorities are clear and the details are appropriate. Only then can the written articles highlight the key points and be clear and understandable. Only then can the meaning of the tour be written and have educational significance.

3. Briefly describe the before and after, combining emotion, reason and scenery. When we write travel notes, we should write the beginning and end briefly. Be clear about the time, place and people at the beginning. For example, "A Tour to Shanjuan Cave" begins with "There is a famous tourist attraction in Yixing, Jiangsu, my hometown - Shanjuan Cave." At the end, you should write down your feelings in an argumentative or lyrical way. For example, at the end of "Natural Zoo Wandering Notes", "'Haha...' We ended this happy outing with laughter. The fun of visiting the Jukumi Natural Zoo is endless. No wonder people from all over the world visit it. There’s an endless stream of people.” In this way, the article written has a beginning and an end, and gives a complete impression when read. We need to melt our emotions into the scenery and write our true meaning. When writing, we have to pour our thoughts and feelings into it. Also, while writing about the scenery, we either explore the true meaning of life, or talk about ideological issues and academic spirit, so that readers can be inspired and educated while appreciating the natural scenery

Travel notes are the most difficult thing for primary school students to write. A kind of composition, because as the journey progresses, there are countless scenes witnessed and heard, and it is difficult to organize the materials properly, so it is often written as a running account. How to write a clear and detailed account of your travel itinerary? How to avoid writing your travel notes as introductions to scenic spots?

The most troublesome thing for everyone is that the trip involves a long time and many scenic spots, so how can you write it well? It's not like a running account, but it has its own characteristics?

The first is "giving up". Only by learning to give up can we have a focused description. There are so many attractions that it would be difficult to describe them all in detail. Only by highlighting the most distinctive places can we write out the characteristics and clearly describe the travel experience. For example, if you travel to Yunnan, you will see the Stone Forest in Kunming, the Erhai Lake in Dali, the ancient city of Lijiang, and the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain. You must bear the pain and choose one of them as the focus of your writing, and mention the others in one or two sentences at most. Only in this way can you explain your travels clearly.

The second is "short". This "short" does not mean that the length of the article is short, but that the time span involved in the article should be short. Don’t start writing from the departure point and continue writing until the end of the full day trip. There will be a lot of unwarranted details, which will disturb your thinking. Just start writing when you arrive at this scenic spot and end when you visit the scenic spot. Concentrating your time will help you better organize the materials and highlight the features of the attractions.

"True" again. This is the most easily overlooked point by students, and it is also the one that best reflects the writing level. Many people think that writing travel notes means telling others about the scenic spots. Not really. Travel notes are records of travel, emphasizing one’s unique travel experience. When visiting the same place, adults and children will have different feelings, and boys and girls will also have different feelings when visiting the same place. How to express your unique feelings? That is to write down your "discoveries" during the tour. These discoveries can be "touch," "smell," "listen," "look for," or even "guess." Think about it and write it down. The most taboo thing in travel notes is to describe the scenery throughout the whole article. If you have your own activities that appear during the tour, that is your own tour experience.

The last thing is "fun". The reason why travel can attract people is that it is interesting first. Then, your travel notes should also express the fun you felt during your travels.

This kind of "fun" has a broad connotation: it can be wild play, leisurely strolling, funny scenes, or different customs... As long as you find it interesting, you might as well write a few more strokes to describe it. Share your happiness with everyone!

Finally, there is one very important thing: in any travelogue, the description of the environment of the scenic spots is an essential part, and it must be written in detail and vividly