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1. Write a 400-word essay using the explanatory method with a self-prepared title

I have an inseparable friend who always serves me silently; My partner, it always pays for me without complaint

It is my close partner - the mechanical pencil. It was given to me by my mother on my ninth birthday

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My pencil is light blue, thin and long. There is a beautiful girl on it: she has light brown hair, blowing in the wind

Yang is so beautiful; her little mouth is very red, like a cute little cherry; she is wearing white and light blue silk clothes, beautiful

Appearance One glance at it will make you unforgettable for a long time.

The rear of this mechanical pencil is not an eraser like other automatic pens, but an iron cover with a thin iron hanging on the cover

Chain, when you write, listen carefully and there is a small, thin sound that sounds nice. The sound is like the sound of wind chimes colliding.

Mechanical pencil, I don’t know how many minutes you have spent with me. During the scrambling Chinese and math exams, in every homework book, and in my favorite art class, you have left behind With your busy figure and beautiful footprints, my feelings for you are increasing day by day.

This is an item I like - an ordinary but A mechanical pencil full of love. 2. Use two methods of explanation in a 50-word composition about plants

In spring,

sprouts are bright green, and the poles are only 1 to 2 decimeters long. In summer,

has lush branches and leaves, and the leaves are very strange. A very thin stem has some thin needle-like things on both sides, which are very similar to

's leaves. In autumn,

blossomed, and the small flowers were fluffy, some were pink, some were purple. Although it is small and inconspicuous, when you look closely, you will find it beautiful and cute. It is a delicate beauty that is very attractive. In late autumn and early winter, Mimosa pudica bears fruit. The fruit looks like

with a green shell on the outside and seeds inside. After some time, the shell turned brown, and soon, seeds jumped out of the shell and landed on the soil, waiting for next spring to take root, and it is so to multiply from generation to generation, and its interest rate is like that of other plants. No different. What makes people wonder is why the leaves droop and close when you touch it? I

had no choice but to look for information online.

It turns out that Mimosa used to live in the desert and often appeared in the desert

When the sand blown up by the wind touches the leaves of the Mimosa, the Mimosa will feel very painful. , the leaves closed.

It becomes grass that closes when its leaves are touched. On the stem of Mimosa

, there is a sac that stores liquid. It looks like

inside

Usually, the sac is filled with liquid. When you touch the leaf, the liquid in the sac flows toward the upper part and both sides of the leaf, and the leaf closes under the action of gravity. After it calms down for a while, the liquid slowly flows back into the sac from both sides, and the leaf expands again. .

Sometimes, I touch them deliberately and joke with them.

Do you know why he was named Mimosa? Because it

is most sensitive to the outside world, if you gently touch its leaves, it will quickly close; if you touch its long leaf stem, it will quickly fall over 5 ~8 minutes later, it can return to its original state, hence the name Mimosa.

I have always regarded mimosa as my good "baby". But it's also a good "assistant" for me. You may find it ridiculous: How can Mimosa become a good 'assistant' for people?

I can tell you why I call it an "assistant". Because every time I write a composition, I can't think of a topic, so I time it. If it times out, I will write other homework first. After I finish writing, I will time it again. If I still can't think of it, I will time it again until I can think of it. until it comes out. Guess how I time it, I think you must already know it, the mimosa will return to its original shape in 5 to 8 minutes after being touched, so I only need to touch the mimosa to time it.

From that day on, I watered and removed the mimosa every day.

The mimosa grew up day by day under my careful care.

After some days, the pot of mimosa actually grew a little one

... 3. In the composition of poplar euphratica tree, use the explanatory method

Who is holding up a shade for us in the desert? Who stands there with his chest straightened every day? Who is there to guide us?

It’s a poplar tree! Although the Populus euphratica tree grows in a harsh desert environment, it has no complaints. It just takes root deeper again and again to make itself stand more firmly and absorb more water to continue to grow well.

When the sandstorm came, he never flinched. With his companions, he held hands together to open up a small world. Without his companions, he faced the storm alone. It is different from the happy-go-lucky cactus. The cactus is often blown to another place, but as soon as the storm passes, it begins to grow. As for Populus euphratica, no matter how terrible the storm is, he still holds his head high to greet it. In the face of his spirit, sandstorms will also retreat. After experiencing the sandstorm, Populus euphratica's body was covered with sand, but with the breeze blowing, he could shake his body and shake off all the sand. At this time, the poplar trees seemed to be more radiant, energetic and green.

Populus euphratica is like this, never wavering, with amazing perseverance.

If you are lost in the desert and there is no water, you lower your head in disappointment and walk silently, and when you raise your head again, what do you hope you can see? A bucket of water? A lot of money? Or a car? I definitely wish I could see a tree, a poplar tree. Because a poplar tree is like a bucket of endless water, an umbrella that never wears out, and an eternal compass. You can drink water from him, you can sleep well under him, and you can also rely on him to walk out of the desert...

I heard my father say that Populus euphratica is the strongest tree in the world. It possesses the spiritual quality of "immortality for a thousand years after birth, immortality for a thousand years after death, and immortality after death for a thousand years." It can exist in this world unyieldingly for three thousand years!

The Poplar euphratica tree is very magical. It has two kinds of leaves, which are obviously divided into two large pieces, upper and lower. One half is like a Poplar leaf, and the other half is like a Poplar leaf, hence the name.

Populus euphratica, I love you, you are a "strong tree" in my heart that will never disappear. I will also become stronger and stronger in the wind and rain, the difficulties and setbacks in life. 4. When writing about an animal or plant (write at least two explanation methods), do not use

Bamboo

Bamboo is a common plant, although its branches are not very thick. , but the toughness is very good and it can be folded continuously. Therefore, bamboo has been loved by people since ancient times. Some people praised bamboo as "an open-minded bamboo has thousands of bamboos"; another person wrote a poem specifically for bamboo, "Stick to the green mountains and never relax..." This shows the position of bamboo in people's minds.

Bamboo is very beautiful in appearance. The bamboo joints one by one and the long and thin bamboo leaves are evergreen all year round, full of vitality, and bring people a kind of beautiful enjoyment. Therefore, bamboo is the subject of many painters' paintings.

Bamboo has many uses. Since ancient times, people have liked to use bamboo to make furniture. There are people who make bamboo rafts, chopsticks, chairs, tables, writing brushes, toothpicks...there are so many. The ethnic minorities in the Yunnan region of our country can make many things out of bamboo; there are houses, beds, baskets, cups, and bamboo mats... Bamboo can not only be used to make furniture; Musical instruments; there are bamboo flutes, shengs, and cucurbit flutes...

There are many types of bamboo, including phoebe, mottled bamboo, luohan bamboo, moso bamboo, purple bamboo, square bamboo... all kinds of varieties.

Bamboo likes to live in the south and does not need fertile land. It can thrive where there is soil in the mountains and ridges. There is no need to water, fertilize, or weed, and bamboo grows very quickly and can be practical in less than a year. Therefore, bamboo is a good economic crop.

Bamboo shoots are also a delicious and nutritious vegetable. During the New Year and festivals, people always forget to have a plate of meat and fried bamboo shoots. Bamboo is also the best material for making paper.

Bamboo is a valuable plant with treasures all over its body. Its vitality is tenacious, its appearance is beautiful, and its growth rate is very fast. But when the bamboo is young, it relies on strong will to form in the soil, ready to break out of the hard ground at once. I like the beautiful appearance of bamboo, and I admire its tenacious vitality and rapid growth rate. 5. Use more than three explanation methods to write an essay to explain a kind of school supplies you like

I have a beautiful pencil box, it is called Benben. This pencil case was given to me by my parents. I like it very much.

It is a rectangular parallelepiped, light blue in color, dotted with some white flowers. Next to the flowers are some little bears. The little bears are so cute. It is wearing a blue dress with two small buttons on it. Round eyes, long nose, and small mouth. It looks at you curiously, as if thinking: What is this? There are two rows of English letters next to the bear. It looks at it motionlessly, as if it is speaking English!

When I opened the pencil case, I saw only a rectangular piece of glass with my class schedule behind it. The "little intestines" in my pencil case - pens. One of the black pen brothers is my "general" and the other is my "prime minister". There are all kinds of pens, some are chubby, some are medium-sized and delicate in structure, and some are small and exquisite. Some of my pencils were dressed in black and white and red uniforms, some in red sportswear, and some in sky blue skirts, all very beautifully dressed. The long ruler lay on the big bed in the middle. The pencil sharpener has many functions. It can sharpen pencils and look in the mirror. I kept its belly full, and the pencil case was also my good friend.

Whenever I do well in an exam, it seems to say: "Little master, don't be proud." Whenever I fail in an exam, it seems to say: "Little master, don't be discouraged, don't be discouraged, try your best next time!" < /p>

My pencil case always serves me in obscurity. 6. A short composition written using two explanation methods (about 100 words)

There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. I like my brother the most. My younger brother is six years old this year. Even though he is young, he is very smart and has big, twinkling eyes. He is very lovable. Coupled with his sweet mouth, no one dislikes him, and no one will be angry with him even if he does something wrong.

One day, he and I went to the park to play and saw a pond. The younger brother pointed at it and said, "It's so big! It can hold ten elephants." Because he had just watched the cartoon, he thought elephants were the biggest animals. I was too lazy to pay attention to him, but I didn't expect him to lie down on the edge of the pond and look in. I was so scared that I quickly grabbed him and yelled angrily: "What are you doing? You are looking for death!" He said to me with a smile: "Brother, there are a lot of small fish in the water, let's go catch them." "How can that be okay! If you fall, you will die." Originally I was firmly against it, but I couldn't help but call my brother "good brother" to the left and "good brother" to the right. I had to surrender. We lay down by the pond, and my brother grabbed my legs. I leaned forward and touched inside. I felt nothing for a long time. I said discouragedly: "Brother, you can't catch it." My brother blinked and said, "Brother, you have to get food. The little fish must come when they see food." I shook my head no, and he added: " Otherwise, I'll catch him." So I grabbed his legs. He was holding a few biscuits in his hands, leaning half of his body into the pond, and slowly throwing biscuit crumbs into it. Not to mention, the fish really swam towards us. My brother jumped forward, but I didn't catch him. I only heard a bang and he fell into the water. Fortunately, the administrator uncle rescued him in time, otherwise I don't know what the consequences would be. Of course, we got a lot of criticism, especially from me.

When I came out of the park, I said bitterly: "I will never take you out to play again, you troublemaker." Unexpectedly, my brother smiled, stretched out his hand and said to me: "Brother. Look." It turns out that there is a fish in his hand. My brother is so naughty, and he is neither popular nor loved. 7. The 500-word essay should use explanatory methods. Examples: make comparisons, list numbers, etc., and create your own.

Cactus

Its indomitable character is very surprising. There is water and there is no water. It doesn't care whether it's hot or cold. The emerald green body has palm-shaped stems covered with hard thorns, and a "green small hand" grows out of a "green palm", which makes people think a lot. The shape of the cactus is like a grotesque big hand, stretched out wide, and its appearance is really unsightly. She is dressed in yellow and green clothes, and is covered with little thorns. As long as your fingers come into close contact with it, even if you touch it lightly, you will definitely get one of them. If you pinch it too hard, it will bleed. Woolen cloth. So people don't like it!

It grows in the desert. In the hot summer, other plants hang their heads, but the cactus raises its head like a warrior and looks at the blue sky; in the bitterly cold winter, other plants have already withered. But the cactus withstood the wind and frost, standing proudly in the wind regardless of the surrounding environment, as if it were a warrior guarding the border.

Cactus has a wide range of uses. It contains protein, calcium, iron, vitamins, etc. It can lower blood sugar and blood pressure, clear away heat and detoxify, detoxify and build muscle, etc. When you are very thirsty in the desert but there is no water, the cactus will devote its life to quench your thirst and keep you away from death. It serves us silently and sacrifices itself for us.

Cactus is not a plant that makes people envious at first sight, nor does it have a colorful body. Its whole body is covered with needles, which makes people feel a chill when they see it. How admirable its noble quality of obscurity and selfless devotion is!

In life, there are many such unknown people, such as cleaners, who clean up our city early every morning. It is they who make the floo sprinklers drizzle out a fresh dawn; They wave brooms to wipe away the dirt in the city, making the city tidy and clean, with a radiant appearance. In summer, someone asked: Do you feel hot? Everyone would say without hesitation: "It's so hot!" We were surrounded by the summer heat. The bustling community in the past was now deserted! People are hiding under the air conditioner to enjoy the coolness. In this weather, the only thing I admire is the hardworking cleaners cleaning the streets. Look! Glittering beads of sweat wet their clothes, and the hot sun made their faces turn red. In winter, the air-conditioning envelopes the city. We all like to hide at home, especially in the morning, but they are not afraid of the cold and insist on building a beautiful home for everyone, but their hands are frozen to death... But they don’t ask for a big size. return. And how can society continue to exist without them?

They are so ordinary and yet so great. In the future, I will also be like them and contribute silently and selflessly to society! 8. A 550-word essay using the above explanation methods

Commonly used explanation methods include: defining, classifying, giving examples, making comparisons, listing numbers, making analogies, drawing charts, making explanations, etc.

The explanation method used is determined by the purpose and content of the explanation.

[Examples]: Use concrete, vivid, and easy-to-understand typical examples to illustrate complex, abstract things or concepts. For example, to explain the "death" of the Dead Sea, cite examples that there are no fish, shrimps, aquatic plants, and even no grass growing on the seashore. To illustrate the "immortality" of the Dead Sea, cite examples that even people who cannot swim always float on the water. The fear of drowning is convincing.

[Column numbers]: It is easy to describe the characteristics of some things in terms of quantity, and some numbers can be used to illustrate them. For example, in "The Sun": In fact, the sun is 150 million kilometers away from us. To reach the sun, if you walk non-stop day and night, it will take almost 3,500 years; even if you fly by plane, it will take more than 20 years.

[Compare]: Compare the thing being explained with other things to show the characteristics of the thing. Through comparison, we can understand the special points of things or the similarities between the thing being explained and other things. For example, in "The Sun": "When we look at the sun, we don't think it is big. In fact, it is very big. Only 1.3 million earths can equal one sun." Comparing the earth with the sun highlights the size of the sun. This characteristic is huge.