5 shorter modified sick sentences for kneeling.

1. I really can't agree on how to handle this matter, since you said it should be like this and he said it should be like that.

2. Over the past 2 years of reform and opening up, the living standards of China people have been significantly enhanced.

3. No matter how difficult he met, he didn't flinch.

4. after this lecture, it is very inspiring to everyone.

5. We middle school students should actively respond to "Start with me and protect the environment".

6. The new leadership of the school has improved and established a set of class management system.

7. Before cleaning the classroom, students should dust off the walls with a duster.

8. These candidate songs have been widely sung by the masses.

9. whether you can study hard is the key to improve your academic performance.

1. The key for a person to become better or worse is that internal factors play a decisive role.

11. I sincerely congratulate you.

12. We don't deny that this poem doesn't reveal hope, but that hope is slim.

13. Development has no end, practice will not end, so ideological emancipation will not be achieved once and for all. Can we deny that this is not the truth?

14. As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see all the pictures and posters about Macao's history hanging on the walls of the corridor.

15. This person doesn't even know the headmaster.

16. In order to prevent such traffic accidents from happening again, we have strengthened the education and management of traffic safety.

17. No matter the climatic conditions and geographical environment are extremely unfavorable, the climbers still overcame the difficulties and climbed to the top successfully.

18. Some people in this city try their best to copy fake and inferior products.

19 As soon as we entered the West Lake Park, we saw colorful flags flying and singing loudly in the park.

2 It is urgent to educate young people on the socialist concept of honor and disgrace.

21 In view of the unhealthy phenomena existing on the Internet at present, many people have issued a civilized network.

22 ① The influence of books on people is subtle. In short, reading can not only improve oneself, but also increase knowledge. Generally speaking, reading can improve the quality of the Chinese nation. Let the book overflow every corner of society and life, and be a happy reader!

23① As a high-tech product, Ruyan does not contain tar, carbon monoxide and other harmful substances. (2) The "smoke" coming out is the aerosol produced by the electronic chamber, which has pure and rich tobacco fragrance, and the floating aerosol is fog, which is non-toxic and harmless. (3) it can prevent the harm of "second-hand smoke" to people around you.

24① As a new media for people to obtain information and communicate interactively, the rapid development of the Internet has met the cultural life level of the broad masses. However, with the rapid development of the Internet, some websites are also harmful to society, such as spreading unhealthy information and providing uncivilized audio services. ③ Creating a healthy and civilized network culture environment and eliminating unhealthy information has become an urgent need for spiritual civilization construction in the new period.

25 With the completion of the Shanghai-Hangzhou maglev line, the dream of "Shanghai has a West Lake and Hangzhou has a Bund" has come true.

26 leaders of several schools discussed how to carry out the education of socialist concept of honor and disgrace with "eight honors and eight disgraces".

1. How to diagnose a sick sentence? Look at the part of speech, distinguish the meaning, check whether the words are used properly. Find the trunk, branches and leaves, check whether the collocation is appropriate. Look at the structure, distinguish the relationship, check the sentence meaning, distinguish the logic, check whether the expression is appropriate, look for the object, and check whether the components are incomplete. 2. Type of sick sentence

(1) Improper words? (2) Improper word order? ((3) Improper collocation? (4) incomplete or redundant components

(5) disordered structure? (6) unclear? (7) illogical

Third, the method of correcting the sick sentence principle: keep the original intention method: 1, add: add incomplete components; 2. Delete: delete redundant components;

3. change: change with appropriate words; 4. Shift: improper word order adjustment;

IV. Specific analysis

1. Improper use of words. For example, "the word bionics may be unfamiliar to us." "Yes" is the wrong object, so it should be changed to "We are interested in the word bionics ...".

Title:

(1) I saw two movies last night.

(2) The original price of this kind of radio is 6 yuan, but now it is 2 yuan, and the price has been reduced by three times.

（? ) Last semester, there were more than 4 books in our library.

(4) At present, tourists from all over the world keep coming to China, and the tourism industry is thriving.

2. Improper word order. For example, "We should learn to study and investigate problems." "Investigating problems" should be put before "researching problems". (1) Half an hour later, someone handed in their papers one after another. (2) Every ambitious young man hopes to be a person who contributes to the four modernizations in the future. (3) The Eighth Route Army soldiers are bravely fighting against the enemy at the top of the mountain. (4) The staff of the whole factory discussed and listened to the director's report on improving management.

3. Improper collocation. There are mainly improper collocation of subject-predicate, verb-object, attribute and head, adverbial and head. For example, "the quantity and quality of the products of this company have been greatly improved." "Quality" and "improvement" are matched correctly, but "quantity" and "improvement" cannot be matched. It should be changed to "quantity" and "increase".

Title: (1) His amiable voice, smiling face and persuasive teaching reappeared in front of me.

(2) Summer in Tianshan Mountain is simply a beautiful big garden.

(3) The reason why these flowers grow so well is the result of careful management by flower farmers. (4) The foundation of our class is a better class in the whole grade.

4. Incomplete or redundant components

For example, incomplete components. There are mainly missing subjects or predicates or objects. For example, "When he came running, he was holding a ball." If the subject is missing, the words "in" and "when" should be deleted.

for example, repetition is cumbersome. "There has been an unprecedented upsurge in tree planting in schools." This kind of speech disorder is caused by semantic repetition, so when revising, delete one synonymous word.

Topic

(1) As long as you are diligent and willing to endure hardships, no problem will be difficult for you.

(2) Through this study, I have improved my understanding of the importance of environmental protection

(3) Zhang Haidi's report deeply touched us and received a profound education.

(4) Although he encountered many setbacks in previous years, he was not discouraged at all.

(5) Celebrate the International Labor Day.

(6) during the festival, the department store was packed with people, crowded and jostled with each other.

5, the structure is chaotic: different sentence patterns are mixed. Etiology: the two sentence patterns are mixed, resulting in structural confusion.

Title:

(1) We must change the Pearl River.

(2) On the issue of changing jobs, I once had a wrong idea.

(3) The key for a person to become better or worse is that internal factors play a decisive role.

structural confusion: two sentences are nested. Etiology: putting two sentences with non-fixed format that should be said separately together, resulting in structural confusion.

Title:

(1) I have advised him on this problem that needs to be studied.

(2) I grew up near the Pearl River, which is a rich land.

structural confusion: active and passive mixing. Etiology: The mix of active and passive sentences leads to structural confusion.

Topic

(1) The abuse of dialects should be criticized.

(2) They took us home and were warmly treated.

Structural confusion: unclear structure

Title

(1) Our school is one of the foreign language training schools established by XXX with a donation of one million US dollars.

6. Ambiguity (that is, ambiguity)

Topic

(1) No.1 Middle School and No.2 Middle School finally beat them at the last minute in a basketball match.

(2) Xiao Wang and Xiao Li were walking on the road, and Xiaoding quickly approached him asking questions.

(3) Some teachers and students go by car.

(1) inconsistent. For example, "having good psychological quality is one of the conditions for us to get good grades in the senior high school entrance examination." Positive premise leads to uncertain conclusion. The word "no" should be deleted.

(2) Deny misuse. For example, "Isn't it our responsibility to cultivate high-quality talents?" The negative rhetorical question means affirmative, and the word "no" should be deleted.

(3) unreasonable. That is, things or phenomena that do not exist in real life. For example, "the deep blue night sky is full of bright moon and stars." When the bright moon is shining high, it is impossible to have a "starry sky" situation, but it should be "bright stars are sparse".

Topic

(1) You are not allowed to bring anything into the examination room, only pens, pencils, rulers and compasses.

(2) The Chinese review materials compiled by our school are already in press.

(3) The night was silent, and only raindrops were ticking.

(4) With the development of science today, no one will deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun.

(5) Those lovely children in the mountains are waiting for me all the time. I must get back as soon as possible.

(6) whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.

(7) academic performance is not innate, but the result of hard work.

5. Show off your talents:

1. There are five linguistic errors in the passage, please choose three of them to correct them.

a few years ago, (1) when the color TV market was seriously selling, (2) Changhong Electric Appliance Factory took the lead in cutting prices. Although it lost money, it won both production and sales, and (3) its economic benefits quickly jumped to the top of the same industry in China. (4) Through the management concept of Changhong Electric Appliance Factory, we have learned a truth: (5) If an enterprise is good at using the strategy of "losing money", it can make a bright future or add icing on the cake; (6) On the other hand, cling to the frame of "only earning without compensation" and refuse to sacrifice the immediate small profits, or even the blood will be lost in the end.

2. There is something wrong with the following paragraph, please correct it in the original.

travel channel's "Together" program broadcast on May 4th was protested by many animal protectors. In this program, (1) a cat was thrown from the fourth floor as an experiment to confirm whether the cat was still safe after falling from a height. According to the relevant data, (2) even if the cat can quickly adjust its posture and land on all fours during the fall, it can only play a certain buffering role, and (3) it can't completely avoid fracture and internal organ rupture. Animal protectors expressed their anger at this program of cruelty to animals. Today, the person in charge of travel channel Program Center said that (4) there will be no live animal experiments in the future, and he apologized to the audience.

3. Read the following passage carefully, find out the mistakes and correct them.

everyone has their own dreams when they are young, and they are eager for success. Success needs accumulation, which is the most primitive and simple truth. If we can't only see the brilliance of successful people when they become famous, but ignore their hard and determined efforts before that.

4. The following is the opening paragraph of a student's exercise "The Most Beautiful Hand". Four sentences are ill-chosen. Please correct them and write them on the horizontal line below.

that night, (1) I lay under the covers and watched the model contest on TV with relish. (2) In the awarding session of the contest, a "beautiful hand award" was awarded. (3) Looking at the magnified delicate hands on the screen, I can't help thinking, if only I had beautiful hands like those on the screen! However, growing up in the countryside, (4) Even at school now, I don't have to do much farm work, but I will grind these hands into rough and rough "rural hands" one day. I suddenly thought of my mother's rough black hands, especially in winter, and the frozen blood cut was terrible.

5. In the following paragraph, there are four mistakes in * * *. Please point out the serial numbers of the mistakes and correct them.

(1) In order to create a humanistic atmosphere in the school, (2) elite schools decided to collect the characteristics of frontline schools, school-running concepts and school mottos that are in line with students' reality, and (3) hoped that all teachers and students in the school would be eager to contribute. (4) After the notice was issued, teachers and students from many schools took an active part in this activity. (5) The students in Class 1, Grade 7 were carefully prepared, and (6) a class meeting on the theme of "School Motto in My Heart" was held. (7) After this activity, students have enhanced their sense of ownership and exercised their creativity.

6. There are three sentences in the following paragraph, each with a linguistic defect. Please correct it.

① Recently, the 25 Flower Exhibition held in Hong Kong, "Liuhe Bell" produced by Qianjiang Management Office in Hangzhou, won the "Grand Prize for Design of Large Garden Attractions". As an entry in Hangzhou, "Liuhe Bell" embodies the efforts of producers for more than half a month. The judges believe that "Liuhe Bell" won the prize because of its exquisite conception, full image and the most Jiangnan characteristics. (Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province)

7. Recently, two banners in the streets of our city are particularly eye-catching. One is: warmly congratulate a certain local restaurant for winning the title of "China Famous Hunan Cuisine Store" in a row; The second is to resolutely prevent gambling activities from resurging after the "summer offensive". Each of these two banners has a linguistic defect, please modify it and write it down below. (Changde City)

8. Modify the underlined sentence in the following paragraph to make it semantically coherent and free from language errors.

Time is a magical and heartless carving knife, creating miracles between heaven and earth. It can melt hard ice into spring water and support seedlings into big trees. Of course, it can also turn gardens into deserts, and A can turn ruins into cities. If you cherish it, it will grow green shade around you and bear heavy fruit; You ignore it, it turns into light smoke, and B disappears. (Henan Province)

9. Modify the following ill sentences with symbols, and only change one place in each sentence. (Huangshi City, Hubei Province)

(1) Xiandao Lake in summer is a good time for people to enjoy the summer and study.

(2) In order to avoid the outbreak of infectious diseases after the tsunami, countries all over the world and local governments in the affected areas of the Indian Ocean have made great efforts.

1. The following sentences are ill-chosen. Please correct them in the original sentence.

(1) The pardoning of agricultural tax by local governments is one of the reasons why farmers' income has increased year by year.

(2) It is our strategic decision to actively participate in the cooperation and exchange activities in the Yangtze River Delta region and take the initiative to connect with Shanghai.

(Jiaxing)

11. Read the following passage carefully, find out the mistakes and correct them.

everyone has their own dreams when they are young, and they are eager for success. Success needs accumulation, which is the most primitive and simple truth. If we can't only see the brilliance of successful people when they become famous, but ignore their hard and determined efforts before that. (experimental area of basic education curriculum reform in Shaanxi province)

12. Find out two mistakes in the language expression of the following words.