The test papers for the weekly math test were distributed the day before yesterday. My deskmate scored 113 points and I scored 28 points. After she read my test paper, she burst out laughing.

When the teacher is not there

"Ding Ling——", the morning reading class rang, but the teacher did not come to class. As the monitor on duty, I looked anxiously in the direction where the teacher came from.

Suddenly, hurried footsteps came from the corridor, followed by a loud "Report!" I looked back and saw that it was Zhang Qing, the Chinese teacher's neighbor. I saw her face turned red and she said out of breath: "Oh no, the Chinese teacher - she is sick - can't come to class." After hearing this, I felt like a mess. What to do? The classmates also started talking about each other, and the class was "boiling".

My brain was running rapidly: "What should I do now that the teacher is not here? Today I am the monitor on duty and should be in charge of the class. Now... yes, that's it!" So, I I cleared my throat, walked quickly to the podium, and said loudly, "Students, please be quiet now!" Everyone stopped talking immediately, and all 55 pairs of eyes in the class looked at me. I stood on the podium and directed everyone like a little teacher. "Xiaofen, come and read!" "What's the lesson?" "Lesson 17." So, the students started reading loudly, and suddenly the sound of books was loud in the classroom.

Although the class has temporarily settled down, I am still extremely anxious. Because after the morning reading class, there is the morning exercise class. Without a teacher to lead the class, I am afraid that the students will be in chaos. The time was coming soon, and I was so anxious that I stamped my feet. Why hasn’t the teacher come yet? It rang, so I had to bite the bullet and say to everyone: "Students, the teacher didn't come today. I will lead the morning exercise class. I hope everyone will attend this class in an orderly manner." "Yes!" The students answered in unison. Even so, I was still worried, for fear that something would happen. But my worries are unnecessary - the students abide by the discipline, the team is neat, and the movements are consistent, it is better than when the teacher was there! A stone in my heart finally fell to the ground.

When I led the team to the room, I found that the teacher was already waiting for us. There was a happy smile on the teacher's face, and I felt happy from the bottom of my heart.

Wonderful clicks

① The question is answered accurately and the time range is "when the teacher is away".

②The structure is clear and clearly describes the two things that "I" boldly and appropriately handled when the teacher was away - morning reading and morning exercises.

③The narrative is appropriate, and the characters’ psychological activities and events are real and natural.

Determine the quantity range

Some essay topics stipulate the quantity of selected materials. When reviewing the topic, you must be careful not to choose a topic that exceeds the scope. If you choose too many materials, not only will it not work, but it will make mistakes.

Wonderful exercises

An incident that happened after the exam

The midterm exam was over. Teacher Meng asked me and squadron leader Li Haixia to grade math papers in the office . He took out his own paper and marked the standard answers one by one. In the end, the total score was 98 points. My heart feels sweet. But when I think about it, if I grade my own papers, others will definitely say this and that when they find out. So, I asked Li Haixia to review it for me. Li Haixia looked it over and said, "Yes, it's 98 points. It seems that you are number one in the class. It's really not easy!" I said, "It hasn't been approved yet. Maybe there are people who can answer better than me!" ” But I was secretly happy. Huh, if I wasn't first place, how could I be the math class representative?

I hummed while continuing to correct, and suddenly I found that one paper scored 99 points. When I looked at the name, I saw that it was Li Shihua, the representative of the Chinese class! I really didn't believe my eyes - Li Shihua was better at Chinese than me, but he couldn't beat me in mathematics every time. Why did he get to my head this time? I opened my eyes wide, looked at the standard answers, and rechecked each question one by one, not even missing a decimal point. But I really can’t find any place where I can deduct points anymore. I secretly thought to myself: A math class representative who usually scores first in the class unexpectedly failed the Chinese class representative this time. It’s so embarrassing. How will teachers and classmates treat me in the future? Thinking of this, I was heartbroken and deducted 2 points from one answer, changing Li Shihua's total score to 97 points. I thought to myself, I just won’t let you surpass me!

After doing this, I felt uneasy for some reason. My face felt hot, my head broke out in cold sweat, and the hand holding the pen trembled. Li Haixia is still correcting attentively. I looked over and saw her putting a bright red "X" on a scrawled number. I said, "You were too harsh in your approval. The number is correct, but it was not written clearly." As I said that, I opened the paper and saw that it was Li Haixia's.

At this time, I felt my face burning even more intensely, and I didn’t dare to look directly at Li Haixia, for fear that she would notice my embarrassment. I quickly turned over Li Shihua's paper and changed the score from 97 to 99. Then I breathed a sigh of relief, and the stone in my heart finally fell to the ground...

Wonderful clicks

①The title of this essay stipulates that you must write "one thing" after the exam "Thing", therefore, the author only chose one thing to write about.

②The story of what happened is written vividly and vividly, enough to reflect the author's psychological process from "vanity" to changing "vanity", and the language expression is true and vivid.

Determine the range of persons

Some essay questions stipulate the persons for writing. When reviewing the questions, you must determine the range of persons according to the requirements and make it clear whether you are writing about yourself or someone else. Which should be used? If it is in the first person, never use the second or third person.

Wonderful exercises

My deskmate

"Unlucky, so unlucky!" At the beginning of the new semester, the head teacher transferred a boy who was very poor in studies to Come next to me, sit with me. I was really angry at that time because he couldn't do anything, so I hated him and wanted to stay away from him all the time.

His name is Mao Hongwei. He has a round head and looks silly. Every morning when I came to school, this "annoying guy" was already in his seat. When he saw me coming, he smiled and said, "Wu Yao, you're here!" "However, I didn't appreciate it and always gave him a fierce look. Many times, I threw the waste paper with ink on his desk. He never said anything, he just smiled at me honestly and said The waste paper was thrown into the trash can. So, I pretended not to see what the teacher wrote on the blackboard, so I stood up and deliberately pushed towards him, often pushing him to the ground and causing him to "bloom". I smiled casually and got up from the ground.

Last Wednesday, at the end of the third period, a classmate asked me to explain a question to him. When I finished explaining the question and walked to my seat, The teacher was already handing out homework books. There were two notebooks, one good and one bad, on our table. Mao Hongwei was sitting in his seat. I wanted to run over and grab the good notebook, but I was afraid that my classmates would laugh at me, so I had to do it myself. I accepted my bad luck and thought: A disgusting guy like him would definitely snatch away a good book. But the situation was exactly the opposite. Mao Hongwei's behavior surprised me. I saw that he tore a big hole in the book without hesitation. He took the "bad" notebook and wrote his name, then put the intact notebook on my desk. What a surprising move! His behavior made me feel ashamed and made my heart pound. Jump straight. You know, this is not a simple action, it contains a sincere feeling and embodies a noble quality.

My deskmate, he really impressed me! Compared with him, I seem so small. Although he couldn't get the ideal results in the exam and publish excellent articles in the essay selection, I saw from his behavior that he had a shining mind.

Wonderful clicks

①In the article, "I am me, he is he", the use of personal pronouns is accurate and meets the requirements of the title.

②Use "I" and "he". The contrast highlights the selfishness of "I" and the value of "him". It is very contagious and convincing.

Determine the scope of the place

Some questions define the place. Scope. This requires us to grasp the location of the incident in accordance with the requirements of the topic when reviewing the topic, and cannot take what happened on the playground into the wild.

Wonderful exercises

< p>Dance party in the kitchen

One night, I was sleeping in bed. Suddenly, the sound of "ding dong, ding dong" in the kitchen woke me up. I got dressed and quietly came to the kitchen door and opened the door. A small crack opened. Through the crack of the door, I saw pots, chopsticks, spoons, and bowls having a grand dance party. I didn't expect that the director was Mr. Pot, and what I didn't expect was that the table became the stage of this grand party. /p>

"Now, the party officially begins," the host Miss Spoon said, "First, Miss Chopsticks and Mr. Wan'er will perform a dance - tango dance. "That couple danced really well. They held their heads high and their chests high. They danced really well and received rounds of applause from the audience.

Miss Spoon came to the stage and did He made a beautiful appearance and said: "Now, let's ask Mr. Cup to tell everyone a story. "Mr. Cup tells it vividly and deserves to be called the "King of Stories."

"Next, is the cooking performance of Mr. Pot and Little Shovel! "said the host. Pot and shovel are the best cooking brothers and sisters. They made braised pork, green vegetables, etc. for the audience to taste. After tasting the delicious dishes, the host said: "Let's break up the meeting in silence! ”

At this time, the night is already deep, and I should go back to sleep. I didn’t expect that the elves in the kitchen are so versatile.

Wonderful clicks

< p>①This is an anthropomorphic fairy tale, which is very interesting. It can be seen that "dreams" can also be turned into compositions!

②The author uses fairy tales to inspire imagination and delight the soul. < /p>

③The "place" is concentrated and reasonable. The "kitchen" is the theater, and the "pots, bowls, spoons" are actors; these "actors" are most suitable for acting in the "kitchen".

Determine the "Title Eye"

The "Title Eye" is the key word in the composition title. It is the core of the meaning of the composition title and the focus of the specific content to be reflected in the composition.

You must grasp the key when studying and doing things. This principle is used in composition, which is to grasp the key of "question eye"

Wonderful practice

An interesting thing.

Every Spring Festival, my father has to bite the bullet and go to the barber shop to be "generous". This year's Spring Festival is coming again, and my mother got angry and returned a full set of hairdressing equipment, preparing to "be self-reliant."

When my father came back, my mother and I sang along and treated him both softly and hardly: from the high price of haircuts outside to the importance of every penny saved to the economic development of the family. With our sharp tongue, we finally defeated Dad. My mother and I pushed him onto the chair, and my father raised his head and sighed: "Okay, let's go for it!" He was quite heroic in facing danger.

Amidst the "click" sound of mother's scissors, father's hair was cut off in circles. At this time, my mother said: "You are backing your head, it is too unfashionable, change it to 'partial'!" "Okay!" Dad agreed. After a while, my mother said to herself: "How about changing the 'board size'?" Dad looked helpless and said with a wry smile: "It doesn't matter, it's just a bald gourd!"

"The cut is over!" Mom yelled. When I saw the shape of my father’s head, poof! The water I just drank in my mouth spurted out. I squatted on the ground laughing so hard that I couldn't breathe. Dad's head felt like a piece of watermelon rind had been buckled, and it was crooked. While dad looked in the mirror, he stroked his pitiful hair with great treasure, and said jokingly: "This time, let me lead a new trend in hairstyles." Mom muttered to the side: "It's because the scissors are not very easy to use. Besides, It’s not the same as shearing sheep.” I laughed and quickly said, “Okay, great business, the first customer is free...”

Great clicks

①The exercise is about a very common thing - mother giving father a haircut, but it expresses the joyful atmosphere of a harmonious family.

② "Fun" is reflected in: Dad's "heroic" spirit, helplessness about the bald head, and simple and humorous language. These are all derived from the author's careful observation of daily life.

③Through this article, we can realize that as long as we observe carefully and experience with our hearts, we can extract "interesting" things from many ordinary things in daily life.

Determine the meaning of metaphor

Metaphor is a metaphor, which is a commonly used rhetorical method. This rhetorical method helps illustrate the problem vividly. Many of the composition questions we usually see use this rhetorical method. Therefore, it is very important to understand the metaphorical meaning of the title. For example, in the title "An Unforgettable Scene", the "scene" should refer to the performance on the stage. But it has a metaphorical meaning and can be used to illustrate a glimpse, a shot, a scene, etc. in life. Therefore, before composing, you must first determine its metaphorical meaning to increase the connotation of the article.

Wonderful exercise

An unforgettable scene

That was last year. At noon on a Sunday, my grandma took me to play on the street. When we came home, we were waiting for the bus at the South Road Bus Stop.

With a "pop" sound, an uncle spit. Thick strands of phlegm hung on the flower beds on the roadside, which made everyone feel very uncomfortable. At this time, an old lady on duty came up and said: "Young man, you have violated the city's health management regulations. Please wipe up your spit and pay a fine of 5 yuan." The uncle tilted his neck and said: " Who spit? Did you see me spit?" The old lady said patiently, "Everyone saw it!" But the uncle refused to admit it and even quarreled with the old lady. Suddenly, the noise stopped. I followed everyone's gaze and saw a little boy carefully wiping the phlegm stains with a piece of paper. He was about four or five years old, with a red face, wearing a grass-green military uniform, and a toy pinned to his waist. People were stunned. After the little boy finished wiping, he crossed the slow lane and threw the paper into the garbage bin. Then, he walked up to the old lady and said one word at a time: "Grandma, I don't have any money. Can I give you this gun?" The old lady stroked his head and said, "Good boy, you didn't spit." "Why do you want your toy gun?" The little boy said, "My father spit, I paid for him."

The uncle's face turned red and he hurriedly left. He took out five yuan from his suit pocket, stuffed it into the old woman's hand, turned around and pulled the little boy away in a hurry, disappearing among the people...

Wonderful clicks

①The young author is here The "scene" reflected in the composition is a real shot in real life. It is an annoying and thought-provoking thing that happened on a specific occasion. It grasps the metaphorical meaning of the title and very good.

② This "scene" reflects a scene of "father-son confrontation" - the vulgar father is ashamed in front of the childlike child. It is compact and vivid, revealing the problem and making this "scene" , appears to be content and valuable.

2． Material composition

What we have discussed above is about the review of topic composition, and we hope that children can grasp it well. Here, we briefly talk about the review of material composition. When reviewing the material composition, we mainly focus on two aspects. I summarize them into two methods.

1) "Inseparable" method

This method requires that the center of the exercise and the ideological content of the material be "inseparable". For example, to rewrite, expand, abbreviate, supplement, continue, imitate, etc. a narrative, one must understand the six elements of time, place, person, event, cause, and result, as well as the central idea of ??the material. Only in this way can you write a good article that meets the requirements.

Wonderful exercise

Expansion of "Swallowing Jujubes"

Original text:

A young man bought a bunch of fruits, including pears and dates. , sitting on the roadside to eat. An old man saw it and said, "Young man, don't eat too many pears. Although these are good for your teeth, eating too much will damage your spleen."

The young man asked: "What about dates?

The old man said: "Jujube is good for the spleen, but it hurts the teeth, so we can't eat more."

The young man thought for a while and said, "That's easy, I'll eat pears." I just chew it with my teeth without swallowing it into my stomach; as for the dates, I just swallow them whole without chewing them with my teeth."

Expansion:

This is a fruit harvest. season. In the bustling market, there are red apples, yellow pears, purple-red grapes, lantern-like persimmons... The vendors are shouting loudly. Shouting, it was very lively.

A young man came in from the entrance. He was wearing a green robe, with a bun on his head, a melon face with a pair of bright eyes, and a high nose. There is a small mouth under the nose. The young man was holding a cloth bag in his hand, which was swaying as he walked. He picked from left to right and bought two kilograms of pears at a pear stall. He looked at the dates on another stall and saw that the dates were also good, so he added a few kilograms of dates. After finishing, he sat under the tree by the roadside and ate with relish.

After a while, he ate a pound of pears and half of the dates. At this time, an old man over sixty years old came from a distance. His bronze face was covered with wrinkles and his eyes were sunk deeply into his sockets. He stroked his white beard and asked the young man: "Young man, what are you eating?" The young man raised his head and looked at him and said with a smile: "Old man, I am eating pears and dates. They taste really good. Come and try them too. "Taste it?" "Oh, young man, I won't eat it. But I have to remind you, don't eat too much pears. Although these are good for your teeth, eating too much will damage your spleen!" the old man advised sincerely.

The young man was confused and asked: "Pear hurts the spleen, but what about dates?"

The old man thought for a while and said to him: "Although dates don't hurt the spleen, they do. Don't eat too much, it will hurt your teeth!"

The young man thought for a while and said, "Old man, that's easy. I can chew pears with my teeth instead of swallowing them, so it won't hurt my spleen. "Jujube, I can swallow it whole without using my teeth to chew it. This way, it won't hurt my spleen or teeth."

The old man waved his hands and said, "No, no, fruit." This is not the way to eat. There is always a pattern in everything. If you do what you say, you may end up eating something wrong. ”

Wonderful clicks

①The original text is not available. There are many words in this expanded article, which is about three times as long as the original article.

② Based on the content of the original text, the author imagined the environment at that time and the appearance, language, and demeanor of the two people, and the description was vivid and specific.

③ While highlighting the center of the original text, the writing is consistent and can be said to be "inseparable".

2) "Tight to the point" method

This method requires that the writing should reflect the requirements of the composition form in every aspect and be "tight to the point". In material composition, some require the material to be changed in style, some require changing the person, some require changing the order of the narrative, and so on. When reviewing the topic, you should pay attention to every detail of the composition requirements, and they must be "perfectly consistent", otherwise it will be easy to go off topic.

Wonderful exercise

Rewrite of "Gift to Wang Lun"

Original poem:

Li Bai was about to go on a boat when he suddenly heard footsteps on the shore. .

The water in Peach Blossom Pond is a thousand feet deep, not as deep as Wang Lun’s love for me.

Rewrite:

Today, the weather is exceptionally sunny, with white clouds floating in the blue sky, and the sun hanging high in the sky. Everything looks so beautiful.

Last night, my friend Wang Lun and I drank, sang, and talked late into the night. You know, we have been close friends for many years! But Jing County is not a place where I will stay for a long time. I plan to say goodbye today. For this reason, I had booked a boat the day before and repeatedly asked Wang Lun not to see me off, so as not to be sad.

I got on the boat and was about to sail when I suddenly heard a rhythmic sound from the shore. I looked back and saw Wang Lun standing by the Peach Blossom Pond, seeing me off. Ah, didn’t you agree last night not to let him send me off? Wang Lun's friendship for me is really deeper than the water in Peach Blossom Pond!

With tears in my eyes, I waved goodbye to Wang Lun. Alas, we say goodbye today. I wonder when we will see each other again.

Wonderful Clicks

① The exercise rewrites the original poem into a complete narrative in the first person.

②The theme of the rewritten article is consistent with the original poem, which can be said to be "perfectly accurate".

③Enrich the content of the original poem through reasonable imagination and enhance the readability of the article.

My favorite photo

I have many photos of my home, but there is only one that I particularly like. That was the graduation photo I took with my classmates and teachers from a summer art training class when I was in kindergarten. I have kept it well.

There are more than 20 children in our training class, all of whom are very smart, but the teacher likes me especially because I study very seriously.

The two people in the last row in the photo are our teachers. The man’s surname is Luo. He was still studying in the Art Department of Southwest Normal University at that time, and he taught us sketching. The girl's surname is Mi, and she teaches us crayon drawing.

When I first arrived at the training class, my painting was very poor, but Teacher Mi always taught me step by step. With her patience, my painting has improved a lot, and I like painting more. I usually start painting whenever I have free time. When I was in senior class, my paintings "Autumn" and "Spring Story" were published in the "Quxian Newspaper".

Now, whenever I don’t want to draw, I always think of this photo and my teacher, and I try my best.

Memory of a photo

Every time I open the album and see the photo, I think of the blue sky like a vat of blue paint, and the rolling snow-capped mountains like a white carpet. , the scene of me riding a tall horse running on the grassland.

I remember it was the May Day holiday, and my parents took me to play on the plateau. As soon as I reached the plateau, I rushed out of the car and lay down on the endless grassland, looking at the blue sky as if it had been washed by rain, with white clouds like small boats ready to set sail, and dotted with little flowers. . At this time, my mother found me a tall white horse, and my father picked me up on the horse's back. My horse took me for a slow walk on the grassland like a gentleman. From time to time I smell the fragrance of flowers and touch the mane on the horse's back. My heart is intoxicated in nature. Just then my dad took this photo of me.

Although I live in the city now and there are high-rise buildings outside my door, my heart still likes the blue sky, white clouds, green grass and running horses. My heart is with nature.

A photo

The school's annual sports meeting is over. Although I did not participate, I got an unexpected gain - a photo.

This is a photo I took of Chen Xiaozhong. The photo is a touching scene: Chen Xiaozhong is running desperately in front; the teacher is chasing after him hard; his classmates are shouting at the edge of his voice, "Come on!"

I couldn’t help but think of the scene at that time. Before the competition, my class's score was not very satisfactory, but the teacher saw it and was anxious in his heart. If we don't get good results on the last day, our overall score will drop to fourth. Today is the women's meter final, which is the strength of my class, because our class has "double insurance" (Chen Xiaozhong and Hu Xiaoxiao). But Hu Xiaoxiao has just finished running the meter, and the insurance factor of the meter is not high. The most important thing now is that Chen Xiaozhong cannot have any error.

The athletes are making preparations, and tactics are being nervously arranged next to them: first follow the run, and then sprint for the last meter. The classmates next to them also secretly cheered for them.

With a gunshot from the starter, the game begins. The athletes chased each other and started a fierce competition. Maybe it was because Chen Xiaozhongjue was very strong, so he competed with them for first place from the beginning. This was because he was desperately shouting from the side: follow them first, follow them first. Chen Xiaozhong slowed down after hearing this. Suddenly, an athlete from another class quickened his pace and slowly opened the distance between him and Chen Xiaozhong. The situation was very serious. The athlete was already 30 meters ahead. But the distance to the end is only meters.

Just when the students were anxious, they only heard a shout: Let’s come together and cheer. Suddenly, the loud cheering sound of my class sounded on the playground. Hearing this sound, Chen Xiaozhong suddenly got excited and quickened his pace. The distance shortened. The students cheered even more energetically, 20 meters, 10 meters. When they turned the last corner, there was only 5 meters away. It seemed that they had already caught up. Not on. At this time, the students could not help but wave their hands and ran behind Chen Xiaozhong, shouting desperately: "Hold on, chase, hold on, chase." Chen Xiaozhong gritted his teeth and quickened his pace. It was close, it was close. Seeing this scene, I quickly picked up the camera, pressed the shutter, and captured this moment.

In the end, Chen Xiaozhong won the championship as he wished, and our class also achieved third place in the team. Whenever I see this photo, I think: unity is strength.

My favorite photo

I have many photos at home, and my favorite is the photo I took at the China Dinosaur Park.

Look! There are a few white clouds floating in the blue sky, and there are many small pebbles in various shapes on the beach. There is a small boat on the beach, and there is a coconut tree behind me, with lush leaves like a big green umbrella. I was standing at the stern of the boat. I was wearing a yellow cotton jacket on my upper body, a pair of blue jeans with a slight pattern on my lower body, and a pair of red sneakers on my feet. I put my hands behind my back and spread my feet apart. Because of the strong sunlight, my eyes were like a line and I squinted tightly.

Looking at this photo, I can’t help but think of the scene when the photo was taken. I remember that I went to the China Dinosaur Park with my dad and some aunts to take the photo. When we were playing on the beach, I saw a small boat in front of me, so I jumped on it, and my dad took the opportunity to take a photo of the scene.

I really like this photo.

I opened a thick photo album at home and saw one of my favorite photos. This is a photo of me playing in the water during my trip to Shaoguan. The beautiful scenery there left a deep impression on me.

I remember that on New Year’s Day this year, my father and mother took me to travel to the Grand Canyon. When I walked into the scenic area of ??the Grand Canyon, what caught my eyes was a sparkling water bridge. People were wading across the bridge. I was also excited to walk barefoot on the water bridge. At first, I walked carefully and felt the water flowing through my little feet, as if kissing my little feet. I couldn't help but pick up those little ones. At this time, I heard my mother shouting: "Shanshan, look up." As soon as I looked up, there was a "click" sound, which scared me and stuck out my tongue, so I kept this precious shot; In the photo, I am wearing a little white hat and a little skirt, sticking out my little tongue, and happily playing in the water!

Every time I see this photo, I think of the beautiful scenery of the big lake. Canyons, interesting water bridges and happy travels

My beloved photo

I have a precious photo in my photo album. This is a photo of me on the top of Duxiu Peak. As soon as I saw me in the photo, the scene of me climbing Duxiu Peak clearly appeared in front of me.

It was the winter vacation last year. My father and I took a bus to Guangxi Normal University to climb Duxiu Peak. When we came to the foot of Duxiu Peak, I looked up and said, "Ah, Duxiu Peak is so high!" I couldn't help but shout out. Then, my father and I climbed up to Duxiu Peak. At first, I thought it was easy to climb Duxiu Peak. Along the way, we also saw many small flowers and some trees growing in the cracks of the rocks. We continued to climb up the mountain road with stone steps more than one meter wide. When I climbed halfway up the mountain, I was sweating profusely and my clothes were soaked. I saw something right in front of me. He found a pavilion, so he said to his father: "Dad, let's take a rest in the pavilion and stop climbing." Dad shook his head and said, "No, you have to have a beginning and an end when doing things. You can't give up halfway. Climbing a mountain must have a beginning and an end." After listening to his father's words, I thought: Yes, persistence is victory. So, I took a deep breath, gathered my strength, and continued climbing. The flowers, plants and trees on the roadside made a "sand, sand" sound under the breeze, as if encouraging me to say: "Come on! Come on!" Finally, my father and I finally climbed to the top of the mountain. I looked up and saw that the distant peaks were as hazy as an ink landscape painting drawn by an artist, while the nearby mountains were as green as emeralds. "Ah, what a beautiful scenery!" I couldn't help but admire. When I was intoxicated by this beautiful scenery, I only heard a "click" and my father took a photo of my unforgettable moment.

I love this photo because it makes me understand: to enjoy beauty, you also have to work hard, and you can’t do things halfway.