Pure sea composition, about 600 words, thank you!

During the summer vacation, my father and I flew to Hainan, which we have been longing for for for a long time.

The most interesting thing in Hainan is watching the sea. The sea I saw was different from the sea I imagined in my heart. The sea in my heart is blue and pure. However, the sea I saw was colorful. Nearby, some are yellow, some are green, a little farther away, it is light blue, then dark blue, and finally the sea and sky are the same color. Ah, what a sacred and spectacular sight it is!

We came to the border island, also known as the beautiful island. Beautiful island is as beautiful as its name. This beautiful island is like a beautiful girl lying on the sea. This island is very interesting. You can play diving. I put on my diving suit, boarded the speedboat, went to the designated diving area, put on my oxygen bottle and life jacket, and followed my coach to the bottom of the sea. Suddenly I came to the underwater world. "Wow, how beautiful!" .

I saw many small fish swimming around me, as if welcoming me. Their colors are different, such as red, blue, gray, red and white ... How beautiful!

I saw many jellyfish, and I touched them with my hand. My back is smooth, and jellyfish are flying in the air like butterflies. I also stepped on a coral reef, which was prickly and hard. I am so happy in the underwater world.

Next, we took the longest cable car across the sea in Asia and arrived at Monkey Island. There are many monkeys on Monkey Island, which can be seen everywhere. They are not caged, but free. These monkeys are not ordinary monkeys, but extraordinary working monkeys. They have working hours and off-duty hours like us humans. These monkeys hold flags to welcome guests! They are smart and likable.

There are many gadgets in Hainan, and my favorite ones are shells and conchs. I found many small shells and shells by the sea. Some are like small fans, some like trumpets, some like vases, and some like ice cream. The shell like a fan is white as jade, the small conch like a song is black and white, the small vase is light yellow, and the ice cream is gray. My favorite is the little conch like ice cream.

Hainan, I love you, your spectacular sea, your colorful underwater world, your beautiful monkey island and your charming shells. I will come to Hainan again when I have the chance.

Let's take a look at mom's speech again:

I am 17 group of Jiangsu seven-color flowers. I've been in the group for half a year, and I haven't let myself study hard. I often (three days and two days) see that extraordinary teacher encouraging mothers not to lose heart, to study, and to make them feel that they are at the beginning. So in May this year, I cheered myself up so that I could spare some time after work.

After a long time, I have come to the conclusion that Mr. Chang Fei really treats every mother sincerely, which confirms the sentence "It's a long way to go, and it's a long time to see people's hearts." My children usually write their compositions whenever they want, which is dry and gives people a messy feeling. A few days ago, my child just came back from a trip to Hainan, and I asked him to give a composition, which happened to be typed by his secretary on his computer (the purpose of this is to make it easier to operate on the computer in case it is revised). In the morning, I promised to come back and type for me at night, but in the evening, the child was a little unhappy and said, "I don't want to talk about it tonight, I'll talk about it tomorrow." I agreed, son.

I started chatting the next night, saying that I also saw the teacher's previous comments. I told my child about the head, body and feet of the article, and then asked him to start from three aspects to make his body symmetrical.

I asked him that part of the sea in the form of dialogue, "Ah, what a sacred and spectacular sight!" " "-this is what he said.

The beautiful island was almost his own words, and with his consent, a little saliva was removed when it was revised.

This passage from Monkey Island is also his own words. I think children compare "monkeys" with "we humans" and say it very well.

The description of shells and small conchs is dominated by me. I also led him to look up and see what he said about his feet.

Teacher Fei, to tell you the truth, I didn't intend to post this article for you, because I saw you commenting on a trip to Hainan in your book. It's the child's second plea, let me decide to send it to you.

This is a conversation between my child and me:

The child (full of admiration for teacher Chang Fei and a little delighted) said, "Mom, you can also send my composition to teacher Chang Fei." (I didn't mention this to my child) At that time, I was glad that my child had such an idea, but I only promised verbally. The next day, after modifying the saliva with the child, the child smiled and said, "Mom, send this composition to the teacher."

At this time, I told my children what I thought. I am embarrassed to say, "Mom, to tell you the truth, this trip to Hainan was written by children before, and the teacher may not tell it again." At this time, the child reluctantly retorted: "But what I wrote is different from that child, and what I wrote is different from him!" "Maybe the children are also worried that the teacher will not comment after seeing the same topic. At this time, the child thought about it, had a brainwave and said happily, "Then I will change the title to Happy Travel, which will be different from others." I analyzed and said, "If the topic is changed to Happy Travel, wouldn't the topic of the composition be straight to the point?" The child smiled and nodded clearly, thinking that my analysis was reasonable. Finally, the child said firmly, "that won't change, just a trip to Hainan." "So, please ask Teacher Fei to give our children a chance, give him a sense of accomplishment and give him some confidence. thank you

The above is the original speech of the child and the mother. I hope everyone can experience the parent-child relationship, loyalty and harmony from the testimony of their mothers. At the same time, for the effect of future comments, I hope I can take the time to preview the Hainan tourism on page 38 of How Big is the Composition-the improved and beautiful sea, the improved I love you on page 2 18, and the trip to the Yellow Sea on page 120.