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It is often said that official script gives people the feeling of being too flowery, while regular script gives people the feeling of being too rigid. Clever Zheng Banqiao combined official script and running script to form a unique "Banqiao style". It's wonderful that it's crooked and patchy! Some people say that this kind of work is "indispensable, indispensable", which is really reasonable and I agree with you. Not only in calligraphy, but also in our society, there is either a lack of "Zheng Banqiao" or too many imitations of "Zheng Banqiao"! What we need is a real "slab bridge", and what we need is innovation, not a flood of empty shells.

When I was young, I studied calligraphy, mainly copying in the early stage, and I worked hard at first; I didn't find out until later. It turns out that it is very difficult to learn other people's fonts and styles, especially to integrate that font with your own thoughts and feelings and even brushwork. However, the real state lies in practicing your own style, which is even more difficult. I have studied for many years, but I still haven't become a climate. Therefore, I admire pioneers like Zheng Banqiao. However, many people who call themselves "calligraphers" in the calligraphy circle are actually as embarrassed as me, but their "temperature" is deeper than mine. In fact, they also lack their own "personality". Although their "description" can be similar in shape, their spirit is not similar, which also verifies the truth of "either one or the other". Not only calligraphy needs "Banqiao style", but also our society needs its injection.

In our composition field, the word "plagiarism" often appears. Now books are flooding, everyone is a "writer" and everyone can have one or two "works". However, there are still most of the treasures, which is really embarrassing. They copied the treasures of famous artists and collected a book, but made it look like nothing. Therefore, you can't copy what is truly valuable and artistic. It's better to start your own brand and be self-reliant!

Let's talk about Shenyang, which has been popular for a while recently. Everyone was attracted by his funny talent. Small Shenyang is really unique, unique, but small Shenyang can have one, not two. One is fashion, and the other is unfashionable, which not only greatly reduces its originality, but also greatly reduces the aesthetic taste of the whole society. Therefore, in any case, our society needs "Banqiao style" and needs to inject new vitality and richer elements, just like fonts.

"Banqiao style" not only contributes to the development of society, but also tells us the truth of being a man. Neither too ostentatious nor too rigid. Only by combining official script with running script can we be neutral. According to your own conditions, you should be creative and shape your unique personality.

Looking forward to the future, I hope that there will be more different "Banqiao" in our society, and we are all unique and unrepeatable. Dance out of your own stage easily!

[Comment] Candidates' understanding of materials is closely related to the theme of advocating innovation and developing individuality, which shows that they have the ability to read and refine. The evaluation of the characteristics of regular script and official script at the beginning naturally leads to the composition material, which shows its ability to handle the material. Starting with the theory of "Banqiao Style", the text describes the feeling of learning calligraphy "description" at a young age, the "plagiarism" in the writing world and the new funny fashion in small Shenyang. This argument, from shallow to deep, shows that he has the ideological quality of knowing things.

Although language expression needs to be tempered, it is still valuable as an examination composition.

2. Harmony and unity

When I travel to Huangshan Mountain, I always daydream about the lonely peaks and pines. When I saw it with my own eyes, I couldn't help but feel excited and shouted magnificently-that solitary pine is like the back of an old man. That dangerous peak is also rugged and steep, with a tendency to tilt. The two people themselves are not beautiful, but they have harmoniously constructed an elegant and noble picture!

Some individuals may have their own characteristics and some shortcomings, but they have never been intrigued or tit for tat. In this unity, if viewed as a whole, it is actually a different kind of harmony. Walking down Huangshan Mountain, I can't help thinking.

Yes, if you are looking for an individual founder, then the final result may be just a stagnant pool, empty and boring. Didn't you see the popular eight-part essay in Ming and Qing Dynasties? Eight-part essay does not pay attention to integration at all, and does not pay attention to the overall charm of the article. It only seeks the spirit of saints, only the system norms, and every word is square. This is the exclusiveness of a local corner, which eventually makes the text lose its original weight and aesthetic feeling, and even makes the Ming and Qing Dynasties stagnate.

I think, true beauty should never be like this! It should be looking for fulcrum, blending of elements, single subversion and harmonious unity.

The individual waves are calm, even the edges are oblique, but it is like a cloud that makes a whole and has a unique style. Mr. Zheng Banqiao once said, "If you are going to write first, you must make a rule." Those who deliberately stay out of the law are also becoming machines. "This is his interpretation of his calligraphy. Using official script to participate in running script has reached the artistic height of harmony and unity and "Banqiao style" There are many such examples. I have seen He Liwei's "Moonlight Beans" before, and I am not only impressed by the combination of writing and writing in his article. Classical Chinese, exquisite and meaningful; Vernacular, without losing the beauty of lyric. Perhaps only one of them will make the article potbellied or the text fat and barren, but the combination of the two will make the whole article show a different charm.

The same is true of dependent literature. Jung said: "Culture is ultimately deposited in personality." I think, our hearts may also rely on the integration of countless disharmonious factors, which will be more full. "My heart is full of tigers sniffing roses." This is a poem by the poet Sason. Tigers are inevitably fierce, and roses are too flexible. If both are involved, it will be a full romantic humanity! Just like Li Yian, there is a daughter modality of "fighting for crossing, fighting for crossing and opening gull heron beach"; There is also "I miss Xiang Yu so far and refuse to cross Jiangdong." Breathing through Changhong. Her character is not graceful or provocative, but romantic, which makes people miss the Millennium.

Tao is related to everything, and the harmony and unity of everything has long been great in the world. Looking back, I looked at the vigorous solitary pine and the steep cliff. In the sunset, they blended for a long time and were patchy. I feel relieved.

[Opinion] This article is clear in context, substantial in content and rich in language expression. The article starts with the relationship between the individual and the whole, and extends to the harmonious unity of literature, and then to the harmonious unity of personality. The context is very clear, and the field of vision is getting wider and wider. The selected materials, whether in class or out of class, are refreshing because of clever touch.

However, although the examinee wrote that "dependent literature is like this", when it comes to the issue of "harmony and unity of personality", it still stays on the display and analysis of literary works, lacking the targeted analysis of the writer's personality structure, so the article seems a little thin.

3. Characteristic is the catalyst of success.

Zheng Banqiao's calligraphy is famous for its "Banqiao style" because his works are unique, unique and irreplaceable. Imagine if Zheng Banqiao only used official script or running script, even if he imitated the handwriting of famous people, he wouldn't have made such great achievements in calligraphy!

For example, the catering industry is now fiercely competitive and may be eliminated by the times at any time. According to online statistics, most restaurants with good performance and popular customers are theme restaurants. There are restaurants that eat in the dark and restaurants that specialize in white-collar women. Considering the troubles of white-collar women, we specially provide free nutrition diet packages and disposable slippers to get rid of the discomfort of wearing high heels. The reason why these restaurants can maintain good performance under the influence of the financial crisis is that their supervisors are well-run and know how to highlight the characteristics of their own stores and meet the needs of customers.

Another example is 16, the famous British painter george moran in the 7th century. When his oil paintings were first shipped to China as a tribute, people thought it was ok from a distance, but when they looked closely, they could see nothing but pieces of paint. It is precisely because of this feature that his oil paintings are gradually accepted by other countries, and he is even proud of his collection.

Actually, why not ourselves?

As Shanghai is now making great efforts to build an international financial center and an international shipping center, universities in finance, economics, maritime affairs and oceans are very popular this year. Many people have herd mentality, even if children don't like it, they are forced to fill this school. I don't think it is advisable to do so. When our own characteristics are the same as those of others, we can't call them "characteristics". On the contrary, as long as you fill in the school according to your favorite major, even if this major is unpopular, you can learn well as long as you are interested. Maybe you will become the talent that the company competes for after graduation!

The same is true of being a man. There is a proverb that says, "Go your own way and let others talk!" As long as you think something is meaningful and worth doing, then let go and work hard, why care about other people's eyes! Live high has good characteristics.

But characteristics are not equal to personality. Before you do anything, you should consider whether it infringes on the interests of others, within the scope permitted by law.

Cultivate your own characteristics, I believe you can live a more exciting life and life will be full of fun.

[Comment] Recognizing the relationship between characteristics and success from the "Banqiao style" can be regarded as grasping the essentials of materials. From catering to art, from academic direction to life path, the topic extends naturally and appropriately in simple tone and language. This reminds me of an old saying: gold always shines. In fact, maybe we are not gold in the usual sense, but we can also have extraordinary value because of our own personality and characteristics. In today's era of advocating diversity and individuality, the truth expounded in this paper is cordial and credible.

Except for the penultimate paragraph, which is slightly redundant, this article gives people a sense of unity as a whole. Among many gorgeous college entrance examination compositions, this article does not diminish its brilliance.

4. Inheritance and innovation

"Banqiao body" looks like a single zigzag, but the overall feeling is patchwork and unique. If someone envies Zheng Banqiao's achievements and wants to be famous by imitating his style, he is doomed to a dead end. Because some people say that this kind of work is "indispensable and cannot have two." To say "indispensable" is to affirm the unique artistic value and immortal artistic status of "Banqiao style"; Saying "you can't have both" reveals the truth in artistic creation. As Jia Pingwa said to her little sister in the letter, "For a master, you can only learn, not imitate."

The birth of other artistic styles such as "Banqiao School" and "Yangzhou Eight Eccentrics" has its unique historical background and significance. In the Qing Dynasty, which suppressed the development of talents and destroyed the nature of talents, the Eight Eccentrics of Yangzhou expressed their personality ideals and noble sentiments with an artistic style that did not conform to the secular aesthetic standards, which was the pursuit of freedom and the contempt and struggle for the dignitaries. It can be said that "Banqiao Style" is a symbol of spiritual freedom, which is also the charm of Zheng Banqiao's works. If future generations imitate the "Banqiao style", they can only have its shape without its spirit. Of course, there can't be two such works. However, many people do not believe in this principle. When literature and fashion are linked together, it seems that literary creation can be industrialized, and writers can also produce in batches according to the same model. In the bookstore, mystery novels occupy the best-seller shelf for a while and philosophy is popular for a while. Patterns are always being refurbished, but most of them are the same. Although those books sold well for a while, they were soon forgotten in the corner, covered with dust and cobwebs. A famous person once said, "All value is only time in the end. Time will filter out all works that follow the trend, leaving only one or several works that reflect the spirit of the times and pay attention to human beings and life. "

So, should we stop learning other people's works? Of course not. Those superficial works that drift with the tide, it is precisely because of the lack of inheritance and research on culture and art, will not paint a tiger as a nuisance and fall into the stereotype. Therefore, inheritance is the foundation of cultural survival and development, while innovation injects a steady stream of vitality into it.

It is not only artistic creation, but also inheritance and innovation in many aspects of life and production practice. After the reform and opening up, China has had frequent scientific and cultural exchanges with the outside world, and has learned many successful experiences and tasted the sweetness. But now, China's innovation strength is relatively weak. A few days ago, Wen Wei Po said that Shanghai's service industry management copied the manufacturing management model, which hindered the service industry from dancing. Here, the management mode of the manufacturing industry is also "indispensable, and there can be no two". Only flexible innovation can make a breakthrough.

No matter what industry you are engaged in, you should learn from the successful experience of others, fully understand your own characteristics, choose the right development direction and be brave in innovation. Paying equal attention to inheritance and innovation is the foundation of the development of science and technology, literature and art.

[Opinion] The summary of the topic "Inheritance and Innovation" captures the essence of materials. The logic and speculative color in the discussion are also commendable. Firstly, this paper interprets the connotations of "indispensable" and "indispensable", which not only makes the topic clear and focused, but also subtly reveals the "uniqueness" and "non-repeatability" of Banqiao style, so that reviewers can quickly grasp the author's thoughts and opinions and find the basis for their dialogue with readers (reviewers). Then, the article points out that the spiritual essence of "Banqiao style" is "breaking free from bondage" and "emancipating the mind and soul", which makes the thought seem heavy. At the same time, the author turned his thinking to the real society, showing a valuable consciousness of "combining articles with the times" Of course, the most valuable thing is the dialectical exposition of "inheritance and innovation". It is commendable that there is such speculative discussion in the examination room.

If the article continues to dig deep into the methods of inheritance and innovation, it will be more profound.

5. Very artistic, very discerning

The poet blends his own unique thinking between the lines; The painter sprinkled his feelings on the paper in an unobstructed view; Calligraphers shed fresh ink in their brushstrokes, so the art history of the Chinese nation is unprecedentedly prosperous, and every development and change has written a unique stroke for it.

In Zheng Banqiao's calligraphy, the combination of official script and running script forms a Banqiao style that is neither formal nor modern. I think if he is just an antique, how can he leave a thin piece of Zheng Xie in the history of calligraphy in China? Similarly, if you don't have a pair of special eyes to capture and appreciate, how can you leave this very artistic treasure!

But it is a pity that the present art has rarely appeared in the world in an extraordinary form, but collapsed among all sentient beings because of the lack of extraordinary vision.

When Zhang Xiaogang's contemporary paintings changed hands at a high price of 40 million yuan, the flowers applauded and the flash was endless; However, when the economic cold current swept across the world, contemporary artists fell off their horses one after another, so the ridicule and ridicule of critics followed. Seeing this, I can't help wondering, what is the yardstick for judging and appreciating art? What kind of attitude should we take towards such emerging contemporary art?

We can see that when such a very artistic form brings rich economic benefits, people call it innovation, and when its market plummets, people call it naivety. I think the benchmark for judging the artistic value should not be the market, especially such a deformed art. After copying the works of famous artists, these young artists boldly integrated their understanding of the universe and life and their understanding of art into it, creating a new art form, and their courage can be seen. No matter whether such art is naive or innovative, kitsch or profound, one thing is certain, that is, at least they have experienced, suffered, been happy and sad, which can not be concealed by a value or unworthiness.

This extraordinary art requires extraordinary vision. The so-called original vision is not to look at the art market with an old-fashioned eye. However, some people think about contemporary art with traditional artistic thinking, fail to see all the development and innovation of contemporary art, or blindly pursue commercial interests, so that some excellent new art forms are buried in the world.

At present, what people should do is to stop looking at extraordinary art from a utilitarian perspective. Extraordinary art should come out in a more mature and rigorous state and create a real modernist school. Don't let other non-artistic factors affect our thinking. Art is unique, but also * * *.

Life needs innovation, science needs exploration, and China's art needs fresh blood. What contemporary calligraphers urgently need after mastering the eight-character method is to think and feel about art, life, the world and the universe, and at the same time have the courage not to be kitsch.

[Comment] There are three subtleties in the examinee's composition: First, the topic is cleverly planned, closely related to the main idea of the material-it has a unique feeling; Second, the opening is clever. Through the description of the unique styles of the three kinds of art, we can get the value judgment of the unique art-the feeling of being happy to read; Third, this is a clever analysis. After analyzing the relationship between "extraordinary art needs extraordinary vision", it is concluded that "life needs innovation, science needs exploration, and China's art also needs fresh blood. What contemporary calligraphers urgently need after mastering the eight-character method is to think and feel about art, life, the world and the universe, and at the same time, to have the courage not to be kitsch-the meaning of epiphany.

If the examinee can jump out of the thinking category of calligraphy art, it will add more depth to the analysis.

6. China's wisdom of harmony but difference.

At the calligraphy exhibition in the museum, I was shocked by the fascinating exhibits and was at a loss for a moment. Suddenly, a work came into view. Its words look crooked, but on the whole, it has a different taste. It is beautiful in form and spirit. I'm a little shocked.

"That's what Zheng Xie said." A deep voice. I turned my head, and it was a smiling grandfather.

I can't help but sigh: "This word is so beautiful. Although it doesn't look like Liu Tiou's orthodoxy, it doesn't hinder his unique beauty of integration. It really deserves to be the masterpiece of Zheng Banqiao, the head of Yangzhou Eight eccentrics. "

The old man smiled and said, "This is China's great wisdom of harmony but difference. You can see it from a small pair of calligraphy. Every word is crooked, it doesn't look beautiful, but it is very inclusive and contains the energy of everything. "

"This is a concrete sense of great harmony, that is, accommodating all different harmony," I said. "This kind of harmony does not insist on the identity of all things, but beauty is in name and beauty is in reality."

The old man nodded and pointed to the work in front of him: "Look, Banqiao's handwriting is written in official script, not official script, and so is China's wisdom." It has never had a specific paradigm, and there is no unified demand. The ancients let their wisdom walk in front of us, let us have a glimpse, absorb and coexist various cultures and elements, and finally reach a harmonious state. Look at every masterpiece handed down in front of you. Every painting has its own special charm, even if it is not like a Banqiao, it is not ancient and is born out of the most primitive spirit. "He suddenly stopped and laughed." Perhaps this energy is given by Cang Xie's characterization. "

On reflection, I said, "A gentleman is harmonious but different, and a villain is not harmonious. So should a person. Only by gaining the power of harmony can we turn words with strong personality into one. Harmony is different, it is different, no, it must be different. Only in this way can we not be willful, not confined to our own narrow space, not seeing everything, and not having the tolerance to feel it. "

"So some people say that Zheng Xie's calligraphy is indispensable and cannot have both." The old man replied, "He's the only one. That's the difference." Look at those famous people: Jin Nong, Badashanren, Zhang Xu. They are wild and restrained, energetic and feminine. They seem to have such distinct personalities, but in fact they are all footprints in the history of China's calligraphy. China culture embraces these unique beings with its unique attitude. "

"Harmony is different. I have never thought so seriously about the wisdom hidden in such a painting. " I said with emotion.

The old man patted me on the shoulder: "China's wisdom has never been illusory, it has already penetrated into everything." Take a good look. "

I am immersed in the alternation of black and white. I return to absolute being, turned to look at it again. The old man has disappeared.

[Comment] As an examination composition, the most admirable part of this article lies in its rational thinking, cultural thinking and the free and successful use of dialogue forms in writing. The topic of "China's Wisdom in Harmony but Different" is obviously the result of accurately grasping the materials and then concise and sublime thinking. The author talks about people and things in words, and advances them layer by layer. Starting from the "Banqiao style", there are self-cultivation, being a man, inheritance and extension in the middle, and then summarizing with cultural characteristics, and thoroughly expounding the true meaning of "harmony without difference": accepting differences, accommodating individuality and moving towards great harmony. This paper adopts the way of dialogue, or combines figurative materials with abstract things in whole or in part to discuss, which better realizes the discussion requirements of having substance in words and making sense.

Of course, if the article can broaden your horizons a little, it will be thicker.