Travel, writing composition framework

1. composition travel 600 words horizontal narrative, come on, this is a less prosperous city. Speaking of it, only a few people know that the pace of life is not as fast and amazing as that of a metropolis. Although small, it is also amazing in my eyes. Even if it is only a small city. I failed to finish it. I live between school and home like a road idiot. No, I should say I am. Ever since I heard about this semester, I have been pretending to be a child who didn't learn geography well. I can't tell the difference between the east and the west. In other parts of the city, maybe I just heard the name. In fact, I didn't know where I was when I arrived, and then I called my friend in a panic: "Hello ... XX, I'm in XXX Street, come and pick me up!" Then I stayed on the side of the road with my mobile phone. Twenty minutes later, my friend sent me home safely. So, although I'm almost a tourist here, I don't know anywhere, but I still dare to walk boldly in the street, and then my thoughts will be confused. Finally, I didn't know how to get there, and even turned into a dark and secluded alley that I had never seen before, and then casually asked a passerby: Then press my friend's phone. My trip is still going on, but my memory is not good. Every time, a person strolls around the street with a rechargeable mobile phone, listening to his favorite songs. In fact, my soul doesn't know where I wander. Finally someone took me home. It was unexpected for me to know Junyi. He's, uh, not handsome. I remember it was the first time I went to my best friend's house. I wanted to surprise my best friend that day and asked her home address, but I didn't know where I was wandering or how I got to that huge square. Although I said it was a square, there was no one there. I was scared and wanted to call my best friend, but my cell phone was dead. At that time, it could really be described in two words: helpless, crying in this strange place ... I don't know how long it took, and I don't know how many tears I shed. Suddenly, a beautiful voice came, "Are you from J?" I'm from W. My name is Junyi. What's the matter with you? Do you need any help? "I paused, slowly raised his head and saw Zhang Xiuqing's face. Although chubby, it is cute and has a nice voice. Even a smile seems to have sunshine. What a beautiful name … I stared at his smile and his "Hello!" " "Pulling me back to reality, I scolded myself in my heart: dead wheat, anthomaniac, wandering again! Then, I said, "Oh, hello, I'm Maizi, um, I'm lost ..." He was obviously puzzled and said, "Oh? Don't you know the way? Then how did you come here? " I quickly adjusted my mood and said, "I want to see my best friend, but I don't know the way, and then I don't know how to get to this terrible place, and my mobile phone is dead, and there is no one here." He smiled again and said, "I'm not human? Hehe, where is your home? I'll take you home! " He looked at me, looked at him doubtfully and said, "What, you don't trust me?" Afraid I'll sell you? Well, I'm familiar with the road in Z city, and your school has a good relationship with the students in our school. By the way, after listening to my mobile phone number/kloc-0 13xxxxxxxxxxxxο ο, I immediately dispelled my doubts about him and foolishly thought, haha, I met a sunshine otaku today, so kind and made a lot of money! It was in this situation that I met him for the first time. When I got home, I invited him to have a cup of my favorite green tea at home. After the dark green leaves are mixed with boiled water, there is a faint fragrance in the air, and there seems to be a dark green silence in the faint fragrance. Before he left, I wrote down the string of numbers and wrote the word "Junyi" on a piece of paper ... Every week, I spend a little time floating from home to a strange place I have never been to, and then Junyi always comes so soon after I make the phone call, giving me the illusion that he follows me. When I am bored, I will call Junyi and play games while joking with him. The days pass by day by day ... I counted carefully. I have known Junyi for just one year, four months and four days, and the fourth is my lucky number. I rely on this number and like it very much. Over the past year or so, I have been to many places by Junyi, and I can't count them ... I skillfully took out my mobile phone and called Junyi. Unexpectedly, the cold system voice came from the phone: "Sorry, the number you dialed does not exist, please check it before dialing ... toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot, toot. Originally, I didn't get lost at all, but I got lost in the direction of finding Elegance ... At eleven o'clock in the evening, I held the pillow that Elegance gave me and listened to ㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡㄡ𞭑𞭑𞭑1257 I don't know why I am crying. I don't know why, my mind is still blank, but tears keep pouring out. I wonder in my heart. I seem to have lost something very important ... after that, I still travel. Unlike before, I went home alone by my own memory. At school, I can still laugh and be regarded as a crazy bitch by others, but the faint dark green sadness like the fragrance of green tea has long been quietly hidden in my heart. When I am alone, I just sit there in a daze and look at the empty playground. Looking at the dark red sky, I silently thought: maybe, dark green and dark red can never be together, otherwise it will be laughed at by the world ... unlike before, I never cried again ... A month later, I received a letter.

2. According to the total score structure, write a 350-word composition about scenic spots.

It's getting late, and the moon with a golden halo finally rises!

First of all, she is golden, passing through the smoky white clouds and rising upwards. Suddenly, in an instant, the color of the moon became lighter and turned white! She stood proudly high. She is so lovely and pure, just like a silver jade plate reflecting white light!

The moonlight lit up half the sky. Only in the distant sky can one or two stars be seen, flickering faintly and disappearing slowly. The river that has been running for a day has subsided and flowed quietly. A full moon is reflected on the water, and the evening wind is blowing, shining with phosphorus scales. Ah! The river is illuminated, and the whole wide river is like a mirror, like a ribbon inlaid with jewels. The ground is so bright that at first glance it looks like a layer of frost.

A white cloud covered the beautiful face of the moon. The moon tried to release the light from Bai Yunbian and set it into a brilliant halo around it, while the stars scrambled to release the faint light. ...

I like the charming moonlight. ...

3. At the foot of Nvshan, a composition about Youxian Mountain. Looking from the foot of the mountain, it's all green, just like a green ocean.

We embarked on the road, full of expectations. I really want to get to the top of the mountain at once. On the way, I saw a big bird flying from our heads to the ground. We all thought it was an owl. We looked at it with uneasy heart, and its discerning eyes stared at us tightly. We were frightened and ran away at once. Wherever you go, there are green trees. We came to a fork in the road, because this is our first time here, so we don't know how to get there. We asked the farmers who lived there. We walked to the stone steps, surrounded by pine forests, and I picked up some pine cones.

We walked for a long time and finally reached the top of the mountain. Looking down from the top of the mountain, green trees seem to surround fairy mountain. There are pine cones on the big pine tree. At noon, we had lunch at the top of the mountain. In the afternoon, we came to a yellow land. The pine trees above are shorter than people, and the pine trees are sparse, but there are also pine cones on the trees. On land, there is no grass at all. A yellow land, only pine trees decorate it, just like border guards guarding the motherland.

On that day, we were all very happy and finally came to fairy mountain to play.

I want to write a 1200-word Hainan Travel Notes. What is the writing framework? Let me give you an example for your reference.

Travel writing framework:

The first paragraph, introduction, talks about time, place and people.

And why you're here. For example, spend the summer vacation with parents, spend the summer vacation with classmates and so on.

In the second paragraph, enter the text and explain your first impression.

It's what you imagined, and what's the difference between it and what you see now. Be as detailed as possible to give readers a clear understanding.

The third paragraph, the process of writing and playing, can be written in different places or at different times, depending on your habits. This detailed writing scene

Write about some things and local scenic features.

In the fourth paragraph, write down the summary of a few days, and then write down your disappointment.

5. Travel composition should be divided into several paragraphs to write how to write travel notes.

No matter what kind of travel notes, you should pay attention to the following points when writing:

1, clues in travel notes

Some people say that writing an article is like beading. Without a clue to connect all the elements, the article will be fragmented or chaotic. This is especially true when writing travel notes. There must be a reasonable clue running through it This clue can also be said to be the order of writing.

In travel notes, the most commonly used writing order may be whereabouts, that is, in the order of visits. For example, a travel note about a visit to a zoo can be described one by one in the order of visits. In addition, there are some clues about the organization and direction of the landscape. We suggest that beginners must use certain clues to organize articles when writing travel notes, so as to form a coherent writing habit from the beginning.

2. The theme in the travel notes.

The subject refers to the person or group that did it. Since it is a tour, there must be a theme of the tour. In the writing of travel notes, if there are no characters, it is almost the same as expository writing or landscape prose. There are many different ways to point out the theme in travel notes. For example, at the beginning of a travel note, the author wrote: "Today, students in our class visited Peking University under the leadership of Teacher Li". In addition, the theme of travel notes can also appear naturally in the writing process or be pointed out at the end of the article.

3. Scenery in Travel Notes

Scenery description is also an important part of travel notes. Man is the subject and scenery is the object. The description of scenery in travel notes should be selective and focused according to the needs of writing. The description of scenery in travel notes is best consistent with the theme of the article. For example, a classmate wrote an article about visiting the Great Wall, focusing on the ancient and spectacular scenery of the Great Wall and the surrounding clean and tidy scenic environment, and closely combining the scenery description with the themes of cultural relics protection and environmental protection.

4. Places in Travel Notes

When writing travel notes, you must pay attention to the places you want to go, such as aquarium, prairie, science and technology museum, etc.

Remember to give priority to your trip.

Although travel notes are a record of the tourism process, they are not comprehensive records. I once saw a travel note written by a college student, starting with getting up in the morning, then writing about how to eat breakfast, how to go out by car, what I saw on the road, what happened ... one after another, and how to go home at last. A travel book has written tens of thousands of words, but nothing can move people. This is not a travel note, but a running account.

Since ancient times, there has been a saying that "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world". Today, I came to Guilin, a world-famous fairyland with beautiful scenery.

As the saying goes, "There is heaven above and Suzhou and Hangzhou below." Although I have seen the West Lake in Hangzhou, the Taihu Lake in Wuxi and the small bridge in Suzhou, I think the Lijiang River in Guilin is the most beautiful and charming.

The sky is getting dark, and the water of Lijiang River is no longer rippling like blue waves during the day, but colorful lights on both sides illuminate it, thus showing its mysterious beauty.

I can't wait to jump on the cruise ship. At that time, the lights in the cruise ship were still on, and Jihai was filled with the smell of yeast. I felt that the Lijiang River at this time was meaningless and not beautiful at all, but it became dark.

With a bang, the ship moved a few times and left the dock. The lights on the boat suddenly went out, but the Lijiang River suddenly looked extremely beautiful. The colored lights beside the two banks are reflected on the river, making the Lijiang River look bright and colorful. The fountain on the island in the middle of the lake kept beating. Sometimes they spray high, sometimes they spray low, sometimes they spray water to the center of the water axis, and sometimes they spray water into the Lijiang River ... We just passed by, and its water column spewed in the direction of the Lijiang River. Some tourists on the boat covered their eyes, some quickly picked up cameras to shoot, and some were still laughing and laughing there ... and heard a "wow", and the water column fell into the river and fell into the river.

The cruise ship crossed several bridges, crossed several waves, and came to an iron gate, only to see the iron gate slowly open and the ship slowly drove in. After the ship sailed in, the iron gate was closed again, and in front of the ship was an iron wall several times higher than the ship. We can't fly, let alone drive by. We can't bump or jump, but we won't all be locked up here, will we? At this time, several water pipes are working at the same time, and all of them are filled with water. "Mom, we will drown!" "I thought with anxiety and fear. I saw the water surface rising slowly, and the bottom of the boat kept bubbling, "Gollum, Gollum", as if there was a huge fish breathing at the bottom of the boat. Release the water and lift the ship. In a blink of an eye, the iron gate just above us has fallen before our eyes. When the iron gate was completely submerged, our ship sailed forward again. It's amazing!

After reading it, I was surprised and immediately ran to the deck and put my head out to have a look. What we see is a bustling scene: the duplex villas along the river exude golden light, and Elephant Trunk Mountain, Laorenshan Mountain and Diecai Mountain stand on the river in the bright moonlight. The star-picking pavilion on Diecai Mountain also exudes a soft light. Vega is just above the Star Picking Pavilion. She seems to be looking at the ships coming and going and thinking about her cowherd. ...

In the distance, the Sun and Moon Towers complement each other. The Sun Tower is resplendent and the Moon Tower is crystal clear. The water was dazzled by them, and the bright moon was somewhat eclipsed. The surrounding stars shyly hid in the pale clouds. ...

Ah, the water in Lijiang River is so clear that you can see the end at a glance. The mountains of the Lijiang River are really beautiful, so beautiful that people can't forget to return; The tower of the Lijiang River is really strange, so strange that you seem to have entered a dream world. The night on the Lijiang River is really beautiful!

7. How to write a composition about tourism I have long heard that Sanya's sunshine, beaches and seawater are unique in the world. The winter has arrived in June 5438+065438+ 10. As a northerner, I have been looking forward to taking my parents to Sanya for a holiday in warm winter. While there are still more than ten days of annual leave, I decided to travel to Sanya on June 5438+February.

The internet is really convenient. So, I collected a lot of tips and precautions about Sanya tourism on the Internet, and finally finalized Humboldt and Cactus Hotel, which have a good reputation among netizens. After the hotel was selected, I began to place an order. There are many websites about Hainan tourism and Sanya tourism on the Internet. There has always been a feeling that the flowers are getting more and more fascinating, and I can't make up my mind. Mainly for fear of being cheated. Although the internet is convenient for netizens, it also gives online scammers an opportunity. So I asked my friends who had traveled to Sanya how to book a hotel. I heard that the service of a jubilee travel network is good and the price is not expensive. After thinking about it for a long time, OK chose him, so I booked a round-trip air ticket and a hotel online and took part in their one-day tour.

Looking forward to the stars and the moon, our flight CZ67 12 finally arrived at Sanya Phoenix Airport. As soon as you get out of the hatch, you can feel that the winter in Sanya is still so warm. Out of the airport, I quickly took off my bloated coat and asked Master Yao to pick us up. He has been waiting for us in the lobby. In the car, Master Yao has been explaining to us how beautiful Sanya is and how our itinerary is arranged. I feel very enthusiastic. It takes about 20 minutes to drive from the airport to Dadonghai, and finally we arrive at the Humboldt Longdu Hotel, which is a quasi-5-level hotel. The hotel is divided into two buildings, the main building and the auxiliary building. We live in a luxurious room in the main building, and we can see Dadonghai from a small angle. The facilities in the room are quite new, and the overall feeling is good.

When we arrived in Sanya at night, everyone was a little tired. After a hot bath, everyone fell asleep, and we had a close contact with Sanya for the first time in our dream. Today, our trip is to Nanshan, which is in the west of Dadonghai. It is a 5-A scenic spot with charming scenery, and 70-year-olds can also enjoy preferential treatment.

The main buildings in Nanshan include Nanshan Temple, Guanyin Buddha statue in Nanhai, Guanyin Cultural Park, Tianzhu Holy Land, Buddhist Scenic Area Landscape Park, Shifang Tallinn and Guiyuan Garden, Buddhist Cultural Exchange Center, and Suzhai Shopping Street. Generally, if you go to Nanshan, you won't miss the Tianya Haijiao Scenic Area. No matter whether the ends of the earth really originated from a foreign land complex, and whether there is a love stone and "Southern Tianzhu" behind 2 yuan's money, people want to witness it with their own eyes.

When I saw the blue sea, white sand, fishing sails, coconut groves, waves and rocks merging into one, I really got a foreign land complex. We got up early the next day, because today we are going to Wutizhou Nantian Hot Spring, which is far from Dadonghai, so the master who picked us up called us early to get ready.

Wuzhizhou's environment is well protected. Although the beach is not as good as Yalong Bay, there are many coral bodies on the beach, and some places are a little prickly, but they are as white as soft. Yalong Bay is rated as the most beautiful beach in China, which is not worthy of the name.

There are not many buildings on the beach, basically the same as two years ago. It is said that 300 new rooms will be built. I wonder if more people on the island will damage the environment?

Wuzhizhou is also a good place for all kinds of sea sports, such as motorboats, banana boats and paragliders. Especially for divers. I came back by boat after 5 o'clock, and the waves were much smaller.

After a short rest, go straight to Nantian Hot Spring. When I arrived at Nantian Hot Spring, I bought a ticket and changed my swimsuit. I asked a waitress for directions. She told me enthusiastically: first take a hot spring bath, then take a medicine bath, a coconut milk bath, and finally a small fish bath. I can't help wondering. Hot spring bath, medicated bath and coconut milk bath are not difficult to imagine, but what will this small fish bath be like? We advanced to a shallow pool and hung out with a family of five grandchildren with a northeast accent. Two little grandchildren always wanted to swim in the pool, but the water in the pool was very shallow, and they splashed all over. My husband and I moved our positions while laughing.

On the third day, today is Yalong Bay Cactus Resort Hotel. Cactus hotel is dominated by elegant style, and the atmosphere of elegant style is everywhere. The most famous is this funny little man.

Before going to Sanya, I heard that cactus is far from the seaside. When I really arrived, I found it was not far away. It takes up to 7 minutes to walk from the hotel lobby to the seaside, and you will pass a small lake along the way. And the sign to the seaside is clear, and the location is not worse than the first-line hotel. Compared with the price, BF and I both have a sense of superiority. It is also romantic to take a walk together and enjoy the scenery. Every hotel in Yalong Bay has a private beach and lounge chairs. The sea is crystal clear, and small fish and transparent crabs can be seen in very shallow places. The golden sunshine is warmly sprinkled on the recliner, behind which is the blue sky, and at the foot is the blue sea. It feels like a dream that you don't want to wake up. The fourth day's trip is to the rainforest. The development of Sanya tourism calls for the interaction between "mountain" and "sea", while the development of Hainan tourism looks forward to the integration of "blue" and "green".

Yanoda Rainforest Cultural Tourism Zone, through careful planning, careful design and careful construction, restores the most primitive and clearest natural world, rich creatures and rainforests, and the natural nature of human beings living in harmony with everything. Through the sunshine of mountains and seas, people can enjoy the green air here, pursue the green desire together with the rainforest, and build a just visiting that makes people cross the ancient and modern times and forget themselves. Here, you will deeply feel that your soul has been purified and your thoughts have been sublimated. Only through the infiltration of the rainforest can you get a natural and tacit understanding with nature, life, heaven and earth, and gods.

When you walk into "Ah-Ah-Da", you really understand why it has become a mysterious, magical and sacred green paradise, closest to you.

8. You must have heard of the West Lake, which is located in Hangzhou, a paradise on earth in China, with beautiful environment and pleasant scenery.

On the first day of National Day, my mother and I flew over the white clouds and soon arrived in Hangzhou. There are trees and flowers everywhere in the streets of Hangzhou, which makes us full of praise along the way.

Our hotel is next to the West Lake, overlooking the restaurant in the distance. The West Lake is surrounded by mountains on three sides and next to the urban area on one side. It is like a piece of jade embedded in the mountains, with a panoramic view of the three islands in the lake, with Su Causeway in front and Leifeng Tower in front on the left. According to my mother, the West Lake is 3.3 kilometers long from north to south, 2.8 kilometers wide from east to west, and the water surface area is 5.66 square kilometers.

Putting down our luggage, our family walked to the west lake, and the fragrance of osmanthus came face to face. I am like a happy bird jumping happily on the willow-shaded path. Soon we rented a boat, the boatman shook his oars briskly, and the boat rowed slowly to the center of the lake.

We rowed to the largest of the three islands in the lake-three ponds reflecting the moon. Soon, we saw three stone ponds more than 2 meters above the water. The boatman is a strong uncle. He enthusiastically explained to us: "In ancient times, on the Mid-Autumn Festival, the ancients lit a big candle in the pond and thirty moons could be reflected in the water." Do you know why?

It turns out that each of the three pools has five round holes. At night, when the candle lights up, the five holes light up, and the three pools have 15 bright spots. Together with the reflection in the water, there are 30 moons, and 1 in the sky and water is 32. With 1 in mind, there are 32 moons.

The boatman also told us that every Mid-Autumn Festival, boats come and go on the lake, and people play and sing around Santan, which is very lively. When he said this, I couldn't help thinking of an ancient poem: "The bright moon gives birth to the sea, and the three pools and the moon are everywhere; In the night boat ballroom, people walk in the mirror. "

Just thinking of this, suddenly, a water heron flew down from the sky, quickly picked up a fish, stopped at a stone pool and flew south. I quickly picked up the camera and took this rare moment. At this time, hundreds of swallows circled in the air in groups, and they arranged in various squares, which was very spectacular.

Ah! The exquisiteness and beauty of the West Lake are in harmony with the taste of nature, bringing out the best in each other. It can really be said that "light makeup is always appropriate, and it is difficult to paint poetry in ancient and modern times"!

9. What do primary school students write about group travel? Take a book to travel. The ancients said, "Read thousands of books and take Wan Li Road."

I think what I said is very reasonable. When you drag your suitcase on the train, pick up a book, read it carefully, drink a mouthful of fragrant tea and drive to your destination; The cool wind blows outside the window, and the fragrance of tea and book blends into the air perfectly.

Is all this beautiful? I think it's much more interesting than waiting in the car for hours to get to the destination. During the summer vacation of 20 12, I came across the book "The Next Stop in Kanagawa", which is one of two travel notes written by Jing M.Guo and others.

Although the language is not as beautiful as a famous artist, it is simple and slightly fresh, and with exquisite illustrations, it looks very artistic. When you fly to Japan with this travel book and arrive at your destination smoothly, you will feel that the air is fresher and the sky is bluer than in China, which is quite different from the so-called "grey" in China. Clouds like cotton candy are floating in the air.

Walking the streets, the ground is cleaner than in China. It won't get dirty even if it rains. "It's just that the air is washed out by the smell of mud renovation", emitting a fragrance. Palm-sized, layered leaves are bright green under the baptism of rain.

As the capital of Japan, Tokyo is self-evident, and the cars coming and going are driving in the streets. However, it is rare to run a red light without waiting, but people in China often do such things.

After all, Japan is a developed country. Look at their time-honored culture. Whether it's big enough to go to a shrine to worship sacrifices or small enough to visit relatives, there are still many etiquette. Naturally, they are also very disciplined.

Nothing in this travel book is more popular with the author than the sea in Kanagawa. There is hardly a cloud in the blue sky, standing on the beach, enjoying the sound of the sea rushing to the shore. The bright and warm sunshine covers you and the whole sea, and the golden beach under your feet also shines brightly.

The sea breeze mixed with a faint fragrance came to my face. "When people recede, they have a spicy and salty taste." Take out your camera and leave a beautiful moment for this seascape. It's also interesting to look through it once in a while and recall the good feeling it gave you.

The "rumble" of the plane taking off. Although the trip is over, the beauty it brought you will never disappear. It stays in your heart, just to see if you can savor it.