Composition in the second volume of the eighth grade

No matter in study, work or life, many people have written compositions. Composition is a narrative method that expresses a theme through words after people's ideological consideration and language organization. Do you know how to write a good composition? The following is the second volume of the eighth grade 10 composition. Welcome to share.

1 I picked up my glass and walked slowly outside the door. The idea of "drinking to drown your sorrows" came uninvited.

I was drinking when I heard a sweet flute. I am surprised, excited and very happy. Listening to the sweet flute, everything in my hometown comes to my mind. Really, it sounds like the voice played by musicians in my hometown. His face, his hands and that beautiful flute. He sat there, blowing and blowing Many people sat there, listening to wonderful music, and people cheered. ...

I looked up at the bright moon in the sky and couldn't help thinking of my scene of "crossing the mirror lake with them for one night on the moon" So put down your glass and listen to the flute along Luoyang city. I was walking on the road, listening to the flute, and I couldn't help wondering, "Where did the flute come from?" I looked at the houses on the edge of the city. Most shops in this city are closed. There are few people walking on the slate street, and occasionally one or two birds are singing. This feeling is really cold. Walking up and down gradually, there is always a flute.

I don't understand. I wonder, where did this sound come from? So I went back along the original road, walking in the street, and occasionally there was a cool breeze, which was a little cold. I listened slowly. After walking for a while, the flute suddenly stopped and then blew again. Wow! This sound is familiar. It's "Folding Willow Song". Yes, but I'm more excited. I suddenly remembered the big willow tree in front of my house. Spring has come, the willow leaves are green and dripping, and flocks of birds are perched on the willow trees, chirping. When I left home for Beijing, my relatives and friends all saw me off under the willow tree. I saw them crying. I want to say something, but I can't say anything. There really is a scene of "I will leave infinite meaning for people and stir up the spring breeze in a thousand ways" ... I think of my friend Wang Lun and can't help singing: "Li Bai is going by boat, and suddenly I hear singing on the shore. Taohuatan is deep in thousands of feet, not as good as Wang Lunqing. "

Singing this poem, I thought of the loneliness of life and recalled the warmth of life at home; I think of the hardships of my official career and the fun of staying at home; I remembered the pain of being alone in a different place; Recall the enthusiasm of the people in my hometown. I saw the smiling faces of the people in my hometown, heard their eager words and felt their love.

I walked on, accompanied by the beautiful flute, and unconsciously returned to my cabin. Picked up the glass of wine, fierce drink two, came to the table, spread out the paper, quickly wrote:

Yu Di's dark flying sound scattered into the spring breeze in Los Angeles.

In this serenade, I heard the breaking sound of willow trees. No one can miss home!

-Too white a topic

In the vast universe, there are too many puzzling things. How I long to know the mysterious world. But, mom, I ignored you, my mother, by my side.

Mom, what a warm sentence, but I ignored its meaning. My mother gave birth to me and raised me, and I have paid a lot of hardships, but sometimes I boss my mother around! Mom, here, I want to say: I'm sorry!

Usually, the teacher always tells me that we should observe the dribs and drabs around us in order to write a good composition. I always take you as the prototype and write one emotional article after another. However, now I suddenly find that I have never understood you and your love well. It turns out that the mother's love of unrequited love has been quietly paying for me by my side.

I still remember the story you told me when I was a child, especially the hardships when you gave birth to me: it was a cold early spring morning, and I was lying quietly in your stomach. Suddenly, you think you can't feel my heart beating, so you call the doctor. After a long wait, I was lucky enough to come to this loving world safely.

Mom, I haven't forgotten the scar on your stomach. That long scar proved my birth. I am a weak and dying fetus. Your love gave me life and made me cry for the first time. I haven't forgotten the tired and gratified smile on your face when you hugged me and shouted "baby" to me; I didn't forget the furniture name literacy note you posted on the furniture and said to me, "Baby, this is the door, this is the bed, remember!" " "... in a blink of an eye, I became a big girl, and you gave me the right guidance. I still haven't forgotten that you held up an umbrella for me in the storm. I know, in your eyes, I am still that little "dawn".

I am 12 years old this year. I will always remember you. Mom, I am a bud in bud, and you are a green leaf to shelter from the wind and rain. With you, I have strength!

Mom, when I grow up, I will take care of myself and raise a red sun for my elderly mother!

Unconsciously, Mr. Chun came to us quietly, and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, emitting the fragrance of the earth. Swallows flew back from the south and the stream thawed. From time to time came the voice of "Ding Dong, Ding Dong", as if thanking Miss Chun for coming.

The earth in spring presents a vibrant scene. I saw the winter jasmine hiding behind the branches and leaves, and countless flowers Hu Die were flying in the flower bed, red, purple, yellow and white ... A closer look shows that it is a vivid iris. When the spring breeze blows, they move with the wind. From a distance, they really look like Chinese.

In the orchard, peach trees, apricot trees, pear trees ... you won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow. They are comparing beauty with each other, as if to compare who is more beautiful.

The farmers' uncles looked at the trees full of fruits and flowers and smiled happily.

The weeping willows by the river are also very happy, and they all bend over with laughter. They used the river as a mirror for dressing, and all the birds came to the river and chirped at the weeping willows, as if to say, "Xiaoliu, you are so beautiful!" "

How beautiful spring is! I love spring!

Facing the summer sunshine and with passionate dreams, I came to Zhangjiajie with a tour group. The scenery here is picturesque, such as entering a fairyland, being in it, and going in and out of it is a bit refreshing. Among the many beautiful scenery, I can't forget Jin Bianxi and Huangshizhai.

Jin Bianxi, 7 length. 5 kilometers, "there is no rain after a long drought, and there is rain after a long drought." It is not as mysterious and profound as Jiuzhaigou, nor as vast as the Yellow River and the Yangtze River, but it has its own jasper-like gentleness. The stream is cool and thorough, and it unfolds before our eyes without talent. Through the clear water, the pebbles at the bottom of the stream and the shadows of the peaks and hills set each other off. It's really "a thousand paintings of strange peaks and dangerous valleys, birds singing and flowers singing, and a song of stream poetry". At present, we are all cheering and jumping, and all gentlemen and ladies are desperate to take off their shoes and socks and blend in with the mountains and rivers. The cool stream washed away the sultry summer heat, and a group of us seemed to have returned to our innocent childhood: playing with each other, water droplets splashed all over the sky, like strings of pearls shining in the sun, and cheerful laughter boiled in Jin Bianxi. There is only one wish in our hearts, that is, to love nature and mountains and rivers! How I envy the quiet grass in the fragrant shadow of water. I always feel the flowing water with tenderness and no complaints ... not far away, there is a huge stone lying in the water, stirring up water and being as clean as jade. I am very happy to rest on the bluestone. All the dust and troubles seem to flow away with the clear spring. ...

Along the stream, Cangsen on both sides carved its curve in our sight, extending to the end of the day. I stood there, inexplicably moved by this far-reaching green. How much pure warmth has it retained in the impetuous world?

The oncoming climbers attracted our attention. A blue brick weighing about 180 Jin was carried on his slightly bent shoulder until we saw him sweating like a fly. I looked at the road under my feet, all paved with blue bricks, extending layer by layer for a long time ... how many footprints are there on each blue brick? How much sweat and bitterness does each blue brick contain? Thinking like this, I feel that the blue bricks at my feet are not blue bricks, but stone tablets.

The trip to Huangshizhai is another open realm. The thrill of taking the cable car and our screams are still reserved versions of what our group of participants are talking about. From a bird's eye view, I naturally have a taste in my heart: the mountain is a mountain of iron bones carved with knives and axes; Trees are strong and proud trees that grow in rock walls; The sky is clear and cloudless, as clear as the blue sky. As soon as I stretch out my hand, I can touch the white clouds floating leisurely over our heads, which makes people daydream infinitely. Living in the city for a long time, we haven't seen such a pure sky for a long time, so we can't help but open our arms and give it an unrealistic hug! Climbing Lingyuan, thousands of peaks overlap obstacles, and we are immersed in this thick green, and we don't know where to go. Anxious colleagues quickly picked up their cameras and only heard the click of the shutter, leaving a smiling face like Xiaohua Mall. Thin photographic paper captures the moment, but what remains in our memory is eternity!

The journey is very short, and three days passed quickly; I have a long memory. When we open the window of the soul and relive the beautiful scenery of Zhangjiajie, that smile will definitely stay in the corner of our eyes.

Farewell to beautiful Zhangjiajie! Every day is free, I will definitely revisit the beautiful scenery of Zhangjiajie!

8th grade's fifth teaching goal of the second volume of composition

1. On the basis of students' original writing, constantly improve and exercise their basic writing ability to meet the basic writing requirements.

2. Be able to write about people and things you are familiar with, so as to be clear and coherent; Write your true feelings. Write something with personality in your composition. The composition should be original and have distinctive personality characteristics.

3. Focus on training narrative writing, use lyricism and discussion, write more feelings, and stimulate understanding.

4. Use a variety of writing forms freely and flexibly.

Specific measures

1. In the proposition, try to guide students to find composition materials from their own practical activities, and extract expressive topics that can arouse true feelings through discussion and dialogue. The design of the topic should be from shallow to deep, and the action should be in the heart.

2. Pay attention to guide students to feel life, think about life, strengthen the exchange experience between students, learn from each other through the best language expression, so as to understand the true meaning of writing, urge students to write "I speak my mind", and let students pour out their hearts with composition as the carrier.

3. In the revision of the composition, students can read their first draft repeatedly, and more importantly, they can judge and revise the composition with the help of the strength between students. On the basis of the original work, we should modify and polish the text, delete those branches that do not conform to the emotion and theme of the article, and add some sentences or related words that are excessively concerned where necessary, so as to make the sentences of the article more beautiful, clear in thinking and smooth in context, and finally achieve the effect of both quality and beauty.

4. When commenting, students are the main body, and examples are presented in contrast, so that students can feel whether the article meets the requirements of the topic, and then summarize the advantages of a good composition and the modification scheme of a poor composition through discussion and research. This has a stronger guiding significance for students' composition. In this way, teachers will no longer sing the leading role alone, and students' writing ability will also be improved.

Unit 1 Narrative clues

First, the training objectives:

1, continue to learn to write narratives. Carefully observe the people and things around you, while observing, while recording, while thinking, and then select the most representative things or life fragments to show a person's characteristics in one aspect or several aspects. Show one side of this person's life through everything or everything in life. This is to break through the detailed writing mode of primary school composition. ) 2. Students should pay attention to the language characteristics of narrative when writing. 3, to train in narrative and description interspersed with appropriate lyrical and argumentative writing methods, and pay attention to the language transition between writing paragraphs.

Second, the training theme:

Junior: There must be something exciting and exciting in your life. Someone must have cared about you and helped you. These people or events have left you with beautiful memories and treasured them in your heart. Recalling these past events, you will be excited and encouraged again, thus gaining the strength of life. Now, please pick up a pen and write down your cherished memories with the theme of "Missing". Advanced: 1. The sunshine in my life

Writing Description: Sunshine in my life is a figurative topic, and sunshine is the title, which means warmth and light. That person should give me sunshine-like warmth, give me the most precious enlightenment, illuminate my way forward, and guide students to recall the sunshine-like person in their lives, and how he helped and warmed themselves.

2. Save your life (life is the theme of this unit)

Lyric by borrowing things

First, the training objectives:

1. Let students learn to melt their emotions into the narrative and express their emotions through things.

2. Learn to use a variety of expressions, eat some food specifically, write its characteristics, and integrate into your own feelings.

3. Clever use of association and imagination to find the appropriate point of the "emotion" to be expressed by the selected "thing".

Second, the training theme:

Elementary: (in a word)

1. The poplars planted on the Youth Road in our school * * *, what kind of feelings did the poplars place on the members of * * *? Ginkgo trees are also planted on campus. What does this mean?

2. Write about 200 words about the school playground (using various expressions).

Advanced:

1. Read the following materials and write as required.

The twenty-four solar terms in China not only correspond to phenology and seasons accurately, but also have rich names. Let's take a look at several solar terms in spring: "beginning of spring" still carries the residual cold of winter, but the warmer weather brings the breath of spring, which is a turning point and a sign of the alternation of the old and the new; "Stunned" is like a story. A spring thunder awakens Qian Qian's sleeping life, just like a father's booze, and makes stubborn children know how to forge ahead. On the day of "vernal equinox", the sun is just above the equator, meticulously distributing its light to the north and south of the earth, showing a kind of justice. Please write an article with no less than 600 words on the topic of beginning of spring, Jing Ke and Equinox.

In this unusual spring.

Unit 3 Reasonable arrangement of explanation order

(If the writing content of this unit appeared in Unit 3 last semester, it is feasible to respond to the text, but this unit is a unit to reflect on the living environment and let students establish environmental awareness. So the writing in the textbook is not applicable, so let's continue to deepen the writing content of the first two units)

First, the training objectives:

1. Clarify and learn to use narrative writing ideas. (Time sequence, place change, plot change, emotional change ...)

2. Learn to use reasonable structural layout to achieve the purpose of having substance in words and substance in words. (Parallel, progressive, total score, subtitle, diary ...)

Second, the training theme

Primary: 1. disappear

Advanced: Expand the ancient poetry describing the scenery into prose, and pay attention to the use of descriptive techniques.

A number of small landscape essays are interlocking, which are composed of fragments, juxtaposition, progression and subtitle structure to express the theme of loving nature and protecting the environment.

Unit 4 Description and Lyrics in Narration

First, the training objectives:

1. When writing a narrative, the characters should be vivid and vivid, and the description methods such as appearance, manner, movement and language should be used properly. 2. When writing the narrative of scenery and events, we should present the scenery, things, events and feelings to the readers on the basis of careful observation and comprehensive use of various descriptive techniques and lyric means.

3. Lyricism strives to be natural and let nature take its course, so that love comes from things and affection comes from affection.

4. Personalized material selection, delicate description and sincere emotion.

Second, the training theme:

Elementary: 1. Philosophers often say that see the sea in a drop of water and the world in a grain of sand. Indeed, even some trivial things in our daily life, such as the custom of festivals, the habit of eating and dressing, and the architectural diet in their respective hometowns, are closely explored, and almost everything contains profound cultural connotations and valuable resources of Chinese studies. There will be many surprises when we go to the folk to "collect folk customs", pay attention to the folk customs that we usually don't follow, and explore the "knowledge" behind our daily life! Write an article on "Folk Custom".

2. Hometown festivals or "things" in China

Advanced: 1. Stranger people or things around you.

Writing guidance: before writing, students can collect materials, first select the characters described, and then focus on the selection of characters. For example, there are many people with special skills in TV programs: for example, CCTV 3' s "Avenue of Stars" and Oriental TV's talent show have many folk artists, and everyone has a skill.

If you carefully observe the streets, there are also many folk artists: like the grandfather who painted animals with maltose, the aunt who turned your name into a picture, and so on. The cry of selling medicine and sugar ... (Guwen Street)

2. True friends P 160

Unit 5 Learning to write letters

First, the training objectives:

1. Understand the stylistic features of "epistolary composition"

Letters are the most widely used practical writing in life, study and work, and they are also a common communication tool. However, if you want to use it to write a composition, you should not only regard it as a communication tool, but also regard it as an "article".

(1), sincere, easy to express true feelings, infectious. (often used in the second person)

(2) Flexible expression. Narrative, descriptive, lyrical and argumentative essays can be used.

(3), the content is informal, the structure is free, and there is no need for complicated transition.

(4), the object is very wide.

(5) Low language requirements. This is not to say that language can be boring without personality characteristics. )

2. Learn the format of the letter and pay attention to the requirements of the letter

The format of the letter mainly includes five parts: title, body, ending, signature and date.

3. Pay attention to all communication etiquette in speech.

Second, the training theme

Elementary: 1. In the process of growing up, there must be many puzzles that you can't answer, and there must be many troubles that you can't talk about. If you don't want to talk face to face with your relatives and friends, try to open your heart to them in the form of letters and talk about your heart.

Advanced: 1. If you write a composition on the topic of "cherish" and express it in letters, what can you think?

Please write an epistolary composition on the topic of "choice" or "growth".

3. I face to face (pretend to be an ancient man)

Unit 6 Writing Learn to Write Travel Notes

First, the training objectives:

1. Learn the writing method with wandering as the clue, and be able to change scenery with moving steps and observe at fixed points.

2. Pay due attention to details and learn to choose materials.

3. Highlight the distinctive features of the scenery and skillfully use rhetoric.

4. Explain the knowledge about scenery appropriately.

5. blend in with the scenery.

Second, the training theme:

Mainly:

Everyone should have had the experience of traveling. During the trip, we not only observed the natural scenery, learned about the folk customs, but also had novel feelings, resulting in a lot of thinking and daydreaming. Do your own topics and write travel notes.

Advanced:

Introduce your travel history to your foreign pen pal in the form of letters, introduce him to the beautiful scenery of China, and also introduce the relevant knowledge of your tourist destination: myths and legends, historical stories, etc. , thus enhancing the culture and interest of the article.

8 th grade, volume 2, composition 6 Who made the buds of the branches fat?

Who let the willow spread its green branches?

Who let the frozen stream melt slowly and sing sweet songs?

In the morning, warm sunshine covers the earth, and golden sunshine fills every space. I walked on the faint path, observing the grass and trees around me. I don't know when the green buds on the branches are screaming, many and dense, and a big tree is decorated with light green. A breeze blew, and the green buds on the branches fell off in disorder one by one. Standing under the tree, I held my breath. This is green rain. They dance and spin in the air. After a while, the ground was covered with green buds, and the English that fell was like a big green carpet.

The trees have turned green. What about the sky? I walked in the street and looked up. It was a sunny day, and only a small white shell-like swimming cloud was floating gracefully in the Wan Li. In this boundless blue, there is no cloudy sky, and the days are short and the nights are long. It's it. It's coming.

I stepped on the lawn, and there were some flowers on the lawn. They smile at the sun. It is the warm sunshine and fertile soil that give them life. Tough grass broke through the ground, as if giving someone a promise, eager to come out and visit the world.

Yes, it's coming, and spring has come quietly!

It is spring, which makes the tooth clusters of branches quite large;

Spring has arrived, and the willows stretch their green branches;

It's spring strips, which make the frozen stream melt slowly and sing sweet songs.

If you carefully observe the changes of plants around you, you can easily find that spring is very close to us; No, it's spring!

The seventh composition in the second volume of the eighth grade, "Going to the folk to collect folk songs? What wind? "Maybe you have some questions, but after reading the following, you will understand.

Human emotion

This first wind is naturally to adopt this human wind. As the saying goes, "A distant relative is better than a close neighbor". Without the help of this village, China, a big city, would not be peaceful. You help me, I thank you, and I am integrated with you. Why not? Therefore, human feelings are the most beautiful scenery among the people.

Festival wind

There are many festivals in my hometown! Although it is not as ostentation and extravagance as the "foreign" festival, it is also a tradition of this great country! "I miss my family more during the festival". The festival is the wanderer's deep yearning for his hometown, and it is also the reluctance and concern of his loved ones. For the post-90s generation, Valentine's Day is the most popular, but they only know Valentine's Day on February 14, but where do they know the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl on July 7?

Specialty feng

Speaking of this specialty, Anhui is most famous for Anhui cuisine and tea. I eat Anhui cuisine every day, although I don't know its details. The best tea should be Huangshan Mao Feng! Although I haven't had the honor to taste it, its reputation has long been heard. This major is so much, I don't know the rest.

Custom style

There are not many customs left at home now. Except those two important things, they have been washed away by the trend of scientific modernization. Tomb-Sweeping Day's "outing" is also known to all. Its original intention is to pay homage to the ancestors and warn the younger generation to study hard.

In fact, there are many winds in my hometown, but I don't forget the real charm of my hometown. I can only write fur in front of everyone.

You can't read all kinds of folk customs, your hometown and all kinds of vulgar things in your hometown by picking people's elegant demeanor.

My hometown is a beautiful city. Wudalianchi, surrounded by fourteen volcanoes, has two divine springs, Nanquan and Beiquan, which are known as world famous springs. One of the most distinctive is the stone sea.

There is a platform on the rocky sea for people to watch. Standing on the platform, at first glance, it really looks like a sea. The waves are rough, and rows of waves are pushing up. How magnificent! Tenacious grass grows on the rocky sea. They are embedded in the rocky sea, adding a touch of green to the sea.

There are many strange lava in the rocky sea. You can really imagine many scenes. Look! Bears, lions, stone apes, camels, etc. Shihai is really a natural zoo!

General Zhang Aiping, the Minister of National Defense, once wrote a poem: "Five pools print the moon, fourteen mountains, and fires soar into the sky. Stone dragons dance in the sea, mountains stand in the water. The word Shihai was also mentioned by the general.

The formation of the stone sea is caused by volcanic eruption, and the stone sea is magnificent.

Shihai is called "Natural Fire Museum" and "Open Volcano Textbook" by scientists. How spectacular the stone sea in my hometown is!

Some people say that mother's love is selfless; Some people say that maternal love is great; I said that maternal love is God's most beautiful gift to each of us.

I can't forget who is asking for cold and warmth around you and me in the cold winter; I can't forget, I have a fever and a cold, who has been waiting for you and me; I can't forget how many sleepless nights, who helped us cover the quilt again and again … Oh, the selfless mother; It is a generous mother; It is the earth of millions of great mothers.

People often compare mothers to sunshine and rain, and children to flowers and plants. Yes, if there is no sunshine, no rain and dew, how can young seedlings thrive, how can they become lush towering trees, and how can they bloom with the most charming and dazzling light? Whenever and wherever, mothers always silently dedicate their love to their children. Every mother, in her children, pours hope and reposes hope.

Motherly love is not as thought-provoking as fatherly love; Nor will it be as unforgettable as teacher's love; But she also has a bright side. Every mother moistens our hearts with their love, and they teach us the truth of being a man. Perhaps the mother's painstaking efforts are nothing to children, but in their hearts, they are the most precious and rare. Mother created one world after another with her selfless love. . When you and I succeed, mother's smile is the best reward, but you can easily find that there are many wrinkles on mother's smiling face; When you and I are frustrated, my mother will always use those kind words to gently heal the wounds in our hearts and pull you and me out of the ocean of disappointment again and again. At this time, you will feel a warm current flowing in your heart and mine.

Ah, mom! I praise you! I praise you! You, like a ladder, lead us to glory; You are like a key to help us open the window of our hearts.

The fifth day of the fifth lunar month is the traditional Dragon Boat Festival in China, also known as the Mid-Autumn Festival and Duanyang Festival. This festival began around the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. It, together with Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival, is called the three major festivals in China.

There are different views on the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival. The most influential thing is to commemorate Qu Yuan. Qu Yuan was born in Lepingli, San Lv, Zigui County, Hubei Province. Because of his profound knowledge, his knowledge of dealing with chaos and his rhetorical skills, he became a leftist in Chu Huaiwang. Internally, it advocates "promoting talents and empowering", and externally, it advocates "uniting Qi and resisting Qin" to finally achieve the goal of unifying China. However, his political views were opposed, excluded and framed by a group of traitors in Chu State, and he was exiled to Hunan and lived in Dongting Lake. Before long, he heard the news that the capital of Chu had been breached by Qin Jun. He could not bear the pain of national subjugation and died in the Miluo River on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. In order to save him, people rowed to find it and threw zongzi into the water.

Others believe that the Dragon Boat Festival is to ward off evil spirits and avoid drugs. Chronicle of Jing Chu Times said: "On May 5th, intellectuals staged a hundred herbs together, and there was a scene of a hundred herbs war. Ai Ai thought he was a man and hung it on the door to poison him. " "Custom Pass" said: "On May 5, those who tied their arms with color set off soldiers and ghosts to make people not ill." Up to now, the custom of picking mugwort in the wild in the early morning of the Dragon Boat Festival and hanging it by the door and tying colored lines to children's arms is still preserved in the rural areas of Northeast China.

Modern scholar Wen Yiduo thinks that Dragon Boat Festival is a dragon festival, that is, a totem festival held by ancient Wuyue people (a dragon totem tribe).

Others believe that the Dragon Boat Festival originated from the summer solstice, that is, the summer solstice festival in the Xia, Shang and Zhou Dynasties.

Ye Fan's Book of the Later Han Dynasty holds this view.