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Yichang City, Hubei Province, composition topic selection guidance and material application demonstration

20 13 Demonstration of Writing and Material Application for Senior High School Entrance Examination in Yichang City, Hubei Province

Wang Dafu, Hubei

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A person's life is a continuous walking process. Walking is not only walking, but also an attitude towards life and a spiritual journey. When we were young, we often walked in natural scenery, in streets and lanes, in art galleries, in the vast sea of books, in the warmth of love ... We were either happy, or moved, or hesitant ... These colorful walking experiences made us feel, urged us to forge ahead and promoted our growth.

Please use "walk in"

"Write an article for the topic. Write your own walking experience, unique experience and sentiment.

Requirements: ① Complete the questions first; 2 There must be no real names and places where candidates' information is leaked in the text; ③ About 600 words.

Writing instruction

This is a semi-proposition made of materials, and there are many lines to fill in. According to the materials and tips, it can be realistic or imaginary; In fact, you can write about natural scenery, but you can choose books, art, kindness, warmth and so on, but you should put the word "go" on it to reflect the process of growth.

It is very important to write this topic well, supplement it and determine the main idea. The "walking" in the title limits the object of writing; The title material shows the content and scope of writing. Candidates can fill in the blanks according to their own ideas and determine the theme. Such as "Walking on the Road of Youth", you can write a story of youth growth; "Walking in the Art Gallery" can write the course of spiritual cultivation; Walking in kindness and warmth can write the goodness and beauty of human nature; Walking on the road of dreams can write the process of pursuing struggle. ...

Examination room masterpiece

Walk on the road of growth

An examinee in Yichang city

Walking on the road of growth, my heart is full of expectations and longings.

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The day before junior high school, my parents scrambled to send me to school.

I think I am a boy of 12 years old. I do my own thing and go my own way. Thought of here, I made up my mind-no one is allowed to send it, and I will go to school by myself!

The next day, I found a bamboo pole and went to school with my luggage. Although mom and dad insisted on sending it, I flatly refused. When we set out, they looked at me with extremely uneasy eyes. I pretended to be relaxed and continued on my way, humming a cheerful song.

Facing the morning sunshine, breathing the fresh air, I feel really grown up! Thinking like this, my heart is full of comfort and pride. Walking on the way to school, birds are singing, flowers are blooming, and my steps are getting lighter and lighter, as if the whole world is full of vitality.

After walking more than two miles, I felt hot and dry, and my feet seemed to trip over something and I couldn't walk any further. I gradually feel shoulder pain and the burden is getting heavier and heavier. It seems that someone is playing a prank and constantly putting pressure on my shoulder ... my breathing is a little blocked, my mouth is dry, and there seems to be smoke coming out of my throat. I gritted my teeth and insisted. Suddenly, I feel that the sunny weather is like a "total solar eclipse". In front of him, Venus appeared at random, wobbled and almost fell to the ground. I sat down on the ground, exhaled and touched my face. Ah, it was all sweaty!

Once you sit down, you don't want to get up again! At this time, I vaguely regretted: I really shouldn't let my parents send it, because I haven't grown up yet! Thought of here, my nose is not sour. ...

"Ha ha! How's it going? I said you can't. Is this delicious? " Just when I didn't know what to do, a familiar voice came. I looked up and found my father standing behind me, gloating at me. It turned out that he was not at ease and the game secretly followed me!

"Hum!" I am ashamed and annoyed. I wanted to crustily skin of head to defend myself, but I was speechless, and at the same time a disappointed tear rolled down! When my father saw my sweaty appearance, he immediately turned into a merciful "Guanyin Bodhisattva", stroking my flushed shoulder with a pole affectionately, and solemnly praised: "Well done, it's raining! Although it's a little uncomfortable to be involved, you've been exercised. Dad believes that you will succeed in the future! " I turned my face away stubbornly, but my heart was as cold as ice water.

Dad wiped my sweat with a towel on his shoulder, took out a bottle of my favorite "cold crooked" from his spacious pocket and handed it to me. Then he picked up the burden I left on the side of the road, shouldered it firmly, and turned to me and said, "Let's go, Dad will take you!" " Say that finish, then strode forward.

The shoulder pole creaks on Dad's shoulder, just like a beautiful rural tune. I followed quickly, catching up with my father's brisk pace.

I think, when can I train my father's strong shoulders, provoke the burden of family life and reduce the burden on my parents?

Walking on the road of growth, my heart is full of expectations and desires-grow up quickly!

comment

This paper closely follows the theme of "walking" and tells the story of "growing up". The article is typical in material selection, complete in narration, clear in structure, natural in transition, humorous in language and lively and playful. In particular, the dialogue between the characters and the description of psychological activities in the text are vivid, delicate and touching. The image of a clever and sensible, filial to parents, considerate and grateful sunshine boy is vividly on the paper.

Learning and applying in practice

20 13 the road to success in composition provides guidance on the use of special materials for senior high school entrance examination.

Low conception angle 1:

You can fill in "On the Road to Youth" on the horizontal line, choose the story of youth and growth, write your own "walking" experience, and express your unique experience and sentiment. Docking materials:

The road to success in composition (junior middle school edition) 20 13,No. 1, a paper, choosing two themes of puppy love and running away from home, describes the bitter youth stories of some middle school students who have gone astray in their growth; In the same period of the same year, in the story of growing up, young authors expressed their growing process and feelings by watching photo albums as clues; The fourth issue of 20 13, Gorgeous on the road of growth, growing through experience, is a model essay of "walking on the road of growth". ...

User's guide:

The article "Waiting for Bloom" in Out of the Misunderstanding of Growth involves a sensitive topic that people don't want to mention-"puppy love", which reproduces the gloomy landscape that can often be seen in contemporary campuses. Although the school explicitly prohibits students from falling in love, once they have emotions, they will make those boys and girls who have just entered this world unable to extricate themselves. Fortunately, the boy in the article is very rational, and he clearly tells the girl to "wait for bloom". In the article "I travel at the age of eighteen", the girl fell out of the list on the eve of the college entrance examination because she was distracted. In the process of "running away from home", her soul was washed away, and finally she overcame setbacks and conquered herself, from which she gained the feeling that life must go through setbacks and flowers must wait for spring. When writing a composition with "growth" or "youth" as the main topic, you can use these two articles as both positive and negative materials. As for the three excellent works of students about "growth" mentioned above, they can be used as reference for the model essay.

● Conception angle 2:

Add the topic to "Walking in Kindness and Warmth", choose the kind and warm stories you encounter, show the goodness and beauty of human nature, and express your true feelings and experiences.

Docking materials:

The road to success in composition (junior middle school edition) 20 13 1 contains two articles about family affection, expressing children's gratitude for their parents' love and thinking about life; In the second and third issues of the same year, in the article "20 13 composition simulation test questions and writing instructions", the first simulation test question is please use "

Warm "or" warm "

Write a composition on the topic, with specific and essential "writing refers to Tianjin"; In the same period of the same year, the article "Warm Looking Back" expressed the father's love and affection. These materials can express the theme of "kindness and warmth".

User's guide:

In Walking in the Sunshine of Love, the famous writer's beautiful article Love Hidden in Persimmon describes the process of a rural father going to town to give his daughter persimmons and other items, which magnifies family ties and makes people sing for it through extremely ordinary life details. "Student's Work" and "Love Hidden in the Details" tell two family stories, which express parents' love for their children incisively and vividly from a subtle perspective, and make people feel the warmth and greatness of family ties. Another exercise, Looking Back Warmly, tells the story of my father riding a bicycle to accompany me to buy books. From my father's warm eyes, "I" understood care and affection. These articles all express the theme of "kindness and warmth".