Write an essay about only one scenic spot (500 words) with a total score and structure

Visiting the Valley of Dreams

Today, during the holiday, I, a "thousand-mile-friendly" person, found out about a new tourist attraction - the Valley of Dreams. Taking advantage of the holiday, I pestered my parents to take me to feast my eyes on it.

We passed through a winding mountain road and finally found our destination at the top of the famous Queshi Scenic Area in Shantou. At the entrance of the Valley of Dreams, what you see is green, and your tired eyes suddenly relax. Then, bursts of fresh air hit your nose, making you feel refreshed and happy. It is truly worthy of being called a "natural oxygen bar". Compared with the noisy city, the quiet and pleasant scenery makes people feel like they are in a paradise. Entering the Valley of Dreams, we visited the Parrot Rock, Dream Searching Platform, Tingquan, Tanyuan, Turtle Stone, Sansheng Stone, Lover's Cave, Marriage Cave, Yuelao Stone, Qingqing Stone, Immortal Clog Stone and other beautiful attractions. These rocks can be described as rugged and craggy rocks. Especially Marriage Cave, Parrot Stone and Camel Stone. The structure of Marriage Cave is really an amazing work of God. There is a gap between two boulders. Standing on the gap and looking up, it seems that the boulder above your head is about to fall, and it seems that it is the scene of a couple meeting for the first time. The most eye-catching thing about the parrot stone is its bright eyes. It looks ahead. It seemed like he was watching his children soaring in the valley. And what about camel stone? The connected, curved stone looks like the two humps of a camel, so interesting! Nature is really full of wonders! As we walked, we looked down from the cliff and immediately felt dizzy. ah! The mountains here are so dangerous! It looks like it was cut with a knife and an axe, and it pierces the blue sky like a sharp arrow. The mountains and hills of Dream Valley are covered with lush vegetation. Even the cliffs are covered with green pines and cypresses. Even an open space the size of a palm is covered with moss. This tree, it grows tall and tall, with dense branches and leaves. In order to get sunlight, each one rushed into the clouds and became a towering tree. Standing on the top of the mountain and looking up into the distance, the trees all over the mountains and plains merge into a sea of ??green. Look, the emerald cypress is bent down, graceful and graceful, like a fairy descending to earth, wearing a gauze scarf, with various postures. In short, the wonder, danger, and greenery of the Valley of Dreams are truly unforgettable! The only fly in the ointment is that there is no winding and interesting gurgling water among the vegetation here. On the mountain road, there are few colorful pavilions that provide shelter from the sun and rain. If these two points are improved, then the Valley of Dreams will definitely be more charming.

The sun goes down, and the Valley of Dreams becomes even quieter.

I shouted to the valley affectionately and loudly: "Goodbye, Valley of Dreams!"