About argumentative essays

If I were asked to write this article, I would choose a more conventional way of writing an argumentative essay: discuss one issue at a time.

One thing: It can be a rumor or something that happened around you. I was a high school student in the No. 1 Middle School of Gucheng County, Hubei Province. There was an incident of student casualties in the school. This incident can be used as an object of discussion. Please refer to the description of the incident below.

One discussion: In response to this matter, we discovered the failures in school education, the flaws in students' academic attitudes, and the deficiencies in family education. In this regard, we can inspire classmates, appeal to society, and think about education.

I hope my answer is helpful to you. The following is my comment quoting the web page.

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Why do top students bring knives to school? Investigation into the mass murder on the campus of No. 1 Middle School in Gucheng County

(2006-09-13 06:42:54) Chutian Metropolis Daily

Reporter Shen Wei, Chen Shuguang and Song Zhentao

< p>Core tip: The teacher commented that 15-year-old Ajie was a top student with both good conduct and academic performance, but no one noticed that he was carrying controlled knives with him. In a small campus dispute, he stabbed randomly with a knife, causing a campus tragedy that killed one person and injured four others.

Yesterday, reporters met Ajie face to face in the detention center. His statement was shocking: "After I stabbed him with the knife for the first time, I looked at the knife. There was no blood on it at all, and the other person didn't move away. I thought I missed it, so I kept stabbing it..."

The murder at the door of the classroom stabbed 5 students in 3 minutes

Tall, thin, and delicate His face, his polite conversation... If it weren't for the prison uniform on his body, 15-year-old Ajie would have been a high-spirited "sunshine boy" on campus. Today, in the detention center of the Gucheng County Public Security Bureau, Ajie is still deeply repenting...

At around 7:30 a.m. on September 9, the morning self-study at Gucheng County No. 1 Middle School had just ended.

15-year-old Ajie walked out of the classroom on the second floor as usual and stood in the corridor to breathe fresh air. Suddenly, a group of boys from other classes came over in a dark crowd. "They barely said a few words before they came around and beat me. I didn't understand why at the time." Seeing the other party attacking in groups with chairs, brooms, etc., the classmates who stepped forward to break up the fight were also pushed away.

With no way out, Ajie took out the fruit knife he carried and shook it, but the opponent did not stop. Ajie swung his knife and stabbed the crowd in front...

It only took about 3 minutes before other students pulled them apart. As soon as Ajie returned to his seat in the classroom, there were bursts of exclamations from the corridor. Several students who were stabbed were bleeding profusely, and two of them gradually collapsed on the ground.

110 and 120 came after hearing the news, and all five students who were stabbed were sent to the hospital. Among them, the 15-year-old student Li was already dead when he arrived at the hospital. The other four also received emergency surgery. He is still receiving treatment in the hospital.

Ignorant impulse "If there is no blood on the knife, I will stab it again."

Why do you kill your classmates like this? When the reporter asked Ajie what he was thinking when he committed the crime, he seemed a little aggrieved. "At that time, there were more than a dozen people on the other side, and I had no room to give in. I was so anxious!" "I took out the knife first. I wanted to scare them, but they didn't see it, so I had to stab them with the knife."

Why stabbed 5 people in a row? Ajie’s statement was even more shocking: “After I stabbed the knife for the first time, I looked at the knife. There was no blood on it at all, and the opponent didn’t move away. I thought I missed it, so I kept stabbing it... ..."

The police investigating the case said that the ignorance revealed by Ajie's confession is sad. "After stabbing the human body with a relatively smooth knife, it will rub against the clothes when it is pulled out, so it will not be stained with too much blood. In fact, every knife Ajie stabbed was extremely dangerous regardless of the consequences."

The police said that during Ajie's stabbing spree, 15-year-old boy Li was stabbed in the heart and was already dead when he was sent to the hospital. A 16-year-old boy had his kidney punctured and had to have it removed. Among the other injured, the stab wounds were not far from the fatal area. "If the police and ambulance personnel had not arrived in time, the consequences would have been even more terrible."

But sadly, before the police notified the casualty results, Ajie always thought that the students who were stabbed by him "were not seriously injured."

A tragic tragedy: The self-defense "complex" of a "top student"

The police said that the knife used by Ajie to commit the murder was a jumping knife, which is a controlled knife.

In the detention center, the reporter asked Ajie why he carried a knife? His explanation is that he took it from a relative's house a few days before the incident. His original intention was to peel fruit and "self-defense", but he did not expect to cause such a big disaster.

After investigation, the police found that behind the campus tragedy, there were indeed hidden psychological fluctuations in the peaceful life of young Ajie.

Aqiang, a first-year high school student in the school, "fell in love" with a girl, and Ajie happened to have a good relationship with the girl. The day before the incident, Ajie and the girl were having fun in the classroom, which was reported to Aqiang's ears as a "scandal" by his classmates. On the day of the incident, Aqiang invited many classmates to "settle accounts" with Ajie, which resulted in this tragedy.

The impulse caused a tragedy that killed one person and injured four others.

What drove Ajie to commit such a horrific act? Ajie was full of remorse in the detention center: "At any time, I never imagined that there would be such consequences."

Ajie said that his parents have always been very concerned about him. He was sick when he was young, and his mother gave up. Work took care of him, and he never had a job. This incident made him feel very guilty towards his family.

Ajie’s tragedy made his teachers and classmates lament. In the eyes of his classmates, Ajie loves reading and music, gets good grades, and rarely fights with others.

It is understood that Ajie was admitted to Gucheng County No. 1 Middle School with a high score of more than 560 points in this year's high school entrance examination.

Principal Zhang of Gucheng No. 1 Middle School said that Ajie had only attended the school for a few days and the teachers at the No. 1 Middle School didn’t know much about him, but Ajie’s admission scores and classes were quite good. When Mr. Zhang, Ajie's head teacher in junior high school, heard about the murder, he was so shocked that he couldn't speak. "Excellent in both character and learning is my only evaluation of him." Teacher Zhang said that Ajie’s outstanding performance in junior high school made it difficult for them to believe the facts in front of them.

It is urgent to reflect heavily on the psychological education of students

Perhaps still immersed in the grief of the tragedy, before the reporter left Gucheng at noon yesterday, Ajie’s parents still did not go to the detention center to visit their son. , and during the entire interview process, the parents of other students in the case were unwilling to talk about the matter.

Ajie has been detained by Gucheng police on suspicion of intentional injury (causing death). Apart from "impulsiveness" and "ignorance", neither Ajie himself nor his classmates and teachers could give any more explanation for this campus murder. However, from the shocking murder of Ma Jiajue to the murder of classmates by a poet on campus in Enshi (reported by this newspaper), scenes of campus murders deserve our deep reflection.

Yesterday, reporters interviewed experts in sociology, education and psychology. Several experts analyzed the underlying reasons for the frequent occurrence of campus tragedies from their respective research perspectives.

Professor Chen Huizhong from the Department of Sociology of Huazhong University of Science and Technology said that at present, my country's middle school education is still generally exam-oriented education, and everything is centered on the college entrance examination. Schools and parents only care about their children's academic performance and do not care about their children's academic performance. Insufficient attention is paid to ideological and moral education and the cultivation of social communication skills, and undesirable psychological tendencies in children cannot be discovered in a timely manner. In addition, teenagers are immature mentally and are prone to impulsive emotions. However, some parents and teachers lack knowledge about youth education. As a result, when problems arise, they often do not know how to guide them correctly.

Professor Chen Huizhong said that if things go on like this, some small problems that were originally easy to solve will slowly accumulate and become very complicated. Once they are induced by external forces, they will suddenly break out and produce serious consequences. Parents and teachers should have more contact and communication with their children and strengthen psychological counseling. It is very wrong to pamper your children too much or to let your children have their own way.

Professor Ye Xianfa, deputy dean of the School of Education of Hubei University, said that the formation of adolescent personality is related to many factors, such as family education, school education, social influence, etc. When one aspect of influence is dominant, the child’s thoughts The situation will show similar characteristics. Today, when information dissemination is very developed, children have more opportunities to be exposed to popular culture such as online games and movies, and it is easy for them to accept the values ????propagated in them and imitate the behaviors of the characters consciously or unconsciously. Teenagers have weak willpower and are prone to develop impulsive, paranoid, and extremely self-centered personalities. They have a weak sense of law and traditional moral values ??have become the object of ridicule. The consequences are worrying. In order to eliminate the impact of adverse environmental factors, families and schools should take on the important task of "correcting errors." However, some current traditional education methods are single in form and boring in content, and are not easily accepted by young people. Therefore, parents and education departments should reflect on and explore educational methods with rich forms and content.

President of the Hubei Psychological Association and Professor Yan Meifu of the Department of Psychology of Hubei University said that in some campus murder cases, the murderers remained calm after committing the crime, which shows that they lack basic respect for the value of life, and this is also part of Problems among teenagers. Adolescence is a critical period for personality formation. Long-term acceptance of "fast food culture" and failure to pay attention to absorbing nutrients from traditional culture will lead to a weak knowledge structure, insufficient cultural literacy, deviations in outlook on life and values, and serious personality disorders will form. Life is like grass. We neither cherish our own life nor the lives of others. This is also the main reason why juvenile crimes, especially vicious crimes, have been on the rise in recent years. In this regard, schools and parents should strengthen children's mental health education, pay enough attention to their personality deviations and correct them in time to avoid lifelong regrets.

Opinion

After the news of this newspaper was published yesterday, Sina and other websites reposted it, and more than 3,000 netizens commented. Here are the excerpts:

●Another letdown A heartbreaking story. Schools should intensify legal education to prevent this type of phenomenon from happening again.

●Cherish life! Looking at the psychological defects of today's middle school students reflects the sadness of today's \(family, school, society\education). Educate students first to be adults and not to just care about grades.

●It's a pity for this boy. Some of the injured students bullied the weak. The security problem in the school needs to be strengthened.

●I am now studying for a Ph.D., and I remember how much I felt when I was in high school. There were so many "student gangsters" who bullied classmates. It can be said that I have been afraid of these gangsters for the rest of my life.

Institutional and management deficiencies are the root cause of campus tragedies.

●It’s not easy to get into No. 1 Middle School. It’s a pity that it’s all caused by the violent “culture”.

●Many middle school students are proud of violence. After entering society, they are proud of having more money and downplay the source of the money.

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A freshman from Gucheng No. 1 Middle School stabbed five classmates with a knife, killing one and injuring four (picture) 2006-09-12 08:23:58 Source: Chutian Metropolis Daily netizen comments 0 entries Enter the forum

Jingchu.com (Chutian Metropolis Daily) (Reporter Shen Wei, Song Zhentao and Xiang Wen) The opening of school is only A few days ago, a tragic tragedy occurred in Gucheng County No. 1 Middle School: When a 15-year-old high school freshman was surrounded by nearly ten male classmates, he pulled out a fruit knife he carried with him and stabbed him randomly, resulting in one death and four injuries. Yesterday, the juvenile murderer was detained by the police.

According to the memories of classmates in Class 7, Grade 1, Gucheng No. 1 Middle School, at about 7 a.m. on September 9, just after morning self-study, Ajie, a student in this class, walked out of the classroom door and was surrounded by a group of male classmates from other classes. . After a few arguments, the boys began to attack Ajie. Outnumbered, Ajie suddenly took out a fruit knife and stabbed the boys who were besieging him. Amid the screams, five male classmates were stabbed. Upon seeing this, Ajie threw away the fruit knife and returned to his seat in the classroom to study.

School leaders and teachers rushed to the scene after hearing the news and sent the injured to the hospital for rescue. The police then took Ajie away from the classroom.

Among the five students who were stabbed, Li died unfortunately. Zhu and four other students were stabbed in multiple places on their waists and backs and are still receiving rescue treatment in the hospital. The five casualties were all between the ages of 15 and 17. Like Ajie, they were both freshmen in high school who had only been attending the school for a few days.

According to Principal Zhang of Gucheng No. 1 Middle School, Ajie was admitted to the school with a good score of more than 560 points in the high school entrance examination. His family background is average. The school had conducted safety and legal education for students the day before the incident, but unexpectedly the tragedy happened.

According to the police who interrogated Ajie, during the interrogation process, Ajie, who had always been relatively calm, showed deep regret after learning that a classmate had died.

According to Ajie’s confession and related classmates, the incident may have occurred because Aqiang, a foreign classmate, “fell in love” with a girl in the school, and Ajie had a good relationship with the girl. Aqiang once warned Ajie not to get close to the girl, and brought a group of classmates to teach Ajie a lesson that day, which eventually led to a tragedy.