Four model essays on students' writing "what they have seen and heard"

The student's composition "What I See and Hear" is a model essay. Four articles about what they saw and heard, 600 words (1)

The high temperature that lasted for dozens of days has finally eased. We took advantage of the cool weather, and my father took our family on a short trip to stretch our bones and muscles after staying at home for too long.

We first came to the farmhouse near Yangcheng Lake to eat farm food. All vegetables are fresh vegetables that have just been pulled out of the ground. They are green in color and delicious. The best food is June yellow, which has just been listed. Crabs are small and full of crab roe, which is delicious.

After lunch, we came to Xishan Island in Taihu Lake. There are three bridges on Xishan Island, connecting several small islands in Xishan. The car is driving on the Taihu Bridge. Under the bridge is the wide Taihu Lake. The green lake is sparkling and beautiful under the breeze. Looking into the distance, you can vaguely see several continuous islands. The island is shaded by trees and the scenery is pleasant, just like the lakes and mountains in the south of the Yangtze River.

When we arrived at Xishan Island, we found a natural swimming pool in which many tourists swam. My father and I rolled up our trouser legs and went to the lake to splash water on each other. The cool lake patted our feet gently. Ah, that's cool! Then we went back to the island. The island is full of clean and tidy farmhouses. Residents put baskets of fruits under their awnings, and there are many tourists fishing by the lake. There is also a small pond on the island, which is full of lotus flowers. Pink lotus with green lotus leaves reminds me of an ancient poem? The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely blue and the lotus flowers are of different colors. . Dad bought a bright red water chestnut that had just been fished out from the bottom of the lake. The taste is light, slightly sweet, and there is a unique fragrance of water chestnut.

Happy times always pass quickly. After dinner, as night fell, we set foot on the road home again. At this time, the street lamps on the Taihu Bridge have been lit up, flashing silver like pearls. The three bridges are like pearl necklaces scattered in Taihu Lake, which are extremely charming against the dark velvet night. Sitting in the car, blowing the breeze on the lake and listening to the gurgling sound of running water, I feel very comfortable. Today, in this hot summer, it is a rare leisure day to taste seasonal food and enjoy the beautiful scenery of Taihu Lake.

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What I have seen and heard is 600 words (2)

In the morning after the rain, the air is particularly fresh. I was walking alone on the country road in grandma's hometown. The sky is so clear, the air is so fresh, and my mood is so happy. But the ground looks a little bumpy after the rain. In addition to pedestrians passing by from time to time, there are some sparse vehicles. It seems that everyone is moving slowly on the path. Cyclists are more careful, hunching their shoulders, holding their arms, and keeping their eyes on the front, for fear of accidentally falling into a puddle.

Suddenly, a middle-aged man appeared in front of me He lost a hand because he ran into a puddle. Bicycle? Hua? He fell to the ground with a crash. He lost his center of gravity and accidentally fell to the ground. The thermos bottle tied to the bicycle was broken, and the hot soup in it was spilled on a passing young man, and the straight suit was full at once? Xiaohua? . Passers-by stopped to watch the excitement, and everyone thought it was a scene. War of words? It's explosive.

Unexpectedly, the young man ran straight to the middle-aged man who fell. He quickly bent down, lifted the middle-aged man up and asked with concern. Did you fall hard? Does it hurt? Do you want to go to the hospital? The middle-aged man was full of apologies and quickly said to the young man: It doesn't matter to me. I was in a hurry to deliver meals to patients in the hospital, and I was not careful? Is such a nice suit yours? I'm sorry, I'm so sorry! ?

Everyone's eyes turned to the young man, who took some toilet paper from his pocket, wiped his suit and said with a smile, Never mind, don't mind such a trivial matter. The soup you sent to the patient must be delicious. My suit is really delicious. I have tasted it. Aren't you in a hurry to deliver the meal? Let's go! ?

After the crowd gradually dispersed, I couldn't help but feel a sense of admiration when I looked at the back of young people walking farther and farther. If only all of us could be as tolerant and loving to others as that young man!

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What I have seen and heard is 600 words (3)

I haven't returned to my hometown for four years. What has my hometown become now?

Go to the entrance of the village, and you will find a brand-new cement road that has been repaired and goes straight to my door. Battery cars and cars come and go on the road. Further inside, tall buildings stand on both sides of the road. Yellow tiles, pink walls and shiny glass windows are really beautiful! When I saw my old friend feeding the puppy at home, I greeted her happily. She also recognized me, ran over and took my hand, asked me how many days I would stay at home, and promised to take me to her strawberry planting shed.

Finally home. On the endless field in front of the door, some golden rape blossoms opened, the breeze blew, and the scattered yellow flowers seemed to blink at me. In the distance, green hills are continuous and white clouds haunt the top of the mountain. Really beautiful!

On the left of my house are rows of neat greenhouses. What will be in the greenhouse? I carefully opened the plastic curtains, and a heat wave came on my face. When I looked intently, it was all strawberries! Against the backdrop of green leaves, small and exquisite strawberries hang on the ground, just like small bells. Their shapes are different, some are like flat combs, some are like conical love, and some are like volcanoes that have just erupted. Very interesting! Suddenly, a big red strawberry caught my eye. I couldn't help taking it off and taking a bite. Sweet and sour, full of water, really delicious!

At this moment, my mother's cry came from my ear: Come and eat strawberries. Your uncle planted it himself! ? I smiled and went out of the shed and said, I have tasted it. It is delicious. ? What a clever card! ? My uncle came over and touched my head and said, eat more if you like. Now many people in our village have made a fortune by planting strawberries and keeping bees, and their lives are getting better and better. ?

Eating sweet strawberries, I hope that the life of my hometown people will always be as sweet as strawberries and honey.

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What I have seen and heard is 600 words (4)

In the recent holiday, my parents and I went to Xinjiang. Every stop on the Silk Road is full of beautiful scenery and magic. It seems that everything I see and hear here can infect me. Actually, I like everything very much, too.

The first stop we arrived at was Xi 'an, the ancient capital of the 13th Dynasty. The Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses here are world-famous, which was built by Qin Shihuang who unified China to bury him. They are magnificent and lifelike. The second stop is Dunhuang. We went by train. I made some new friends on the silk train. They are three big sisters who are going to high school in the same tour group. The train arrived at its destination at 8 pm the next day. Although it took us a day and a half, we had a good time on the train, because we made many new friends, so we didn't feel tired at all.

The next morning, we went to Mingsha Mountain and Crescent Spring to enjoy the boundless desert scenery and explore the wonders in the desert by camel. In Dunhuang, we also saw the murals of the Mogao Grottoes, with flying fairies and dancing pipa. This is really the work of ancient craftsmen! However, according to the narrator's aunt, such a precious monument is now threatened to be swallowed up by the desert. On the fourth day, we took the train to Turpan, a famous vineyard in Xinjiang. We tasted the sweet grapes, enjoyed the beautiful Xinjiang songs and dances, experienced the heat of the flaming mountain and watched the amazing Karejing water conservancy project.

After bidding farewell to Turpan's vineyards, we came to Urumqi, the terminal of the Silk Road, visited Tianchi Lake in Tianshan Mountain, dressed as Xinjiang girls, ate mutton kebabs and watched the adventure? Big baby? High-altitude tightrope walking program, enjoy the enthusiasm of Xinjiang?

This trip, let me see the beauty of the mountains and rivers of the motherland, experience the customs of different nationalities, appreciate the wisdom of the ancients, learn a lot of historical and geographical knowledge and make many new friends.

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