How to write the composition of going to Beijing on National Day?

The essay model for going to Beijing on National Day is as follows:

Fan Wenyi:

National Day is coming, and our family is going to Beijing to play. We came to Tiananmen Square and saw the portrait of Chairman Mao. Wherever I go, he always smiles at me, which is really interesting. Below Tiananmen Square are flowers and some grass.

The next day, I climbed the Great Wall of Wan Li. The slope of the Great Wall was really difficult to walk, so I managed to climb it. On the way, I heard my mother say that the Great Wall of Wan Li was built with bricks on its back. I listened and thought, "It's so hard to walk empty-handed, and it's even harder to walk with heavy bricks on my back?" Later, I went to play some places and felt that Beijing was really fun!

Fan Wener:

Yesterday was our first day in Beijing. Originally, our seats were together, but because the travel agency changed cars, our seats were badly adjusted. After bargaining with the tour guide, our seats were adjusted together.

When we arrived in Beijing, we first went to Tiananmen Square. Tiananmen Square is really big! According to the tour guide, Tiananmen Square is the first city square in Asia! There is a monument to the people's heroes in the center of the square, as well as floats in various cities. For example, peony floats in Henan and the Bird's Nest floats in Beijing ... The national emblem on Tiananmen Gate is called the first national emblem of China.

On both sides of the front of Tiananmen Gate, there is a unique pillar, which is a China watch. There is a small animal called "roar" on the huabiao (according to the tour guide, the roar on the huabiao in front of Tiananmen Square is outward, which means that I hope the emperor will not be too playful outside, so I call it "Wang"; The roar on the Chinese watch in the tower faces inward, which means that the emperor can go out more and observe the people's feelings, so it is called "looking at the king" )。

Then, we visited various ancient buildings, such as Duanmen, Wumen, Hall of Supreme Harmony and Baohe Hall. This is the real gold wall. We went to Wangfujing in the afternoon. Because there are many people and cars, there are traffic jams on the road. When we arrived at Wangfujing, it was already six o'clock. Although at night, there are lights everywhere, which is simply an ocean of lights and a world of light. Beijing really deserves to be the city that never sleeps. After dinner in Wangfujing, we went to the hotel to rest and prepare for the next day's trip.