Junior one English past tense tourism composition

Last summer vacation, my family went to Hong Kong. In the morning, my father drove to Shenzhen. After lunch, we went to Hong Kong by bus. Hong Kong is a financial center. There were many people there. We just went shopping, and then we had a big dinner. The next day, we went to Ocean Park, which was very interesting and wonderful. Good expressions are moral messages. They can save lives and show many things. They are smart! I like Hong Kong very much! Last summer vacation, my family went to Hong Kong. Early in the morning, my father drove to Shenzhen. After lunch, we went to Hong Kong by subway. Hong Kong is a financial center with a sea of people everywhere. We just go shopping and then go to eat. The next day, we went to Ocean Park, which was fun! What impressed me most was the dolphin performance. They can save lives and perform stunts. Very clever. I like Hong Kong.