My journey to English composition 45 words, more than 3 sentence patterns

Travel diary

Early in the morning, we all set off for the beach. We took a lot of pictures on the way. Bynoon we arrived at the hotel. After having lunch there we went to the beach. We were so tired that we spent the whole afternoon lying on the beach and swimming a lot. On the way back to the hotel, we went shopping for presents. In the evening it rained. We all stayed in the hotel and played table tennis.We had a good timetoday.

Early in the morning, we set out for the beach. We took a lot of photos on the road. We arrived at the hotel at noon. After lunch we went to the beach. We were so tired that we spent the whole afternoon lying on the beach and swimming a lot on the way back to the hotel where we went to buy gifts. It rained at night. We all stayed in the hotel and played table tennis. We had a lot of fun today.

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