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Life is in a hurry Only by pursuing height and creating brilliance can we walk in the world this time without regrets.

One's life is like climbing a mountain. If you stop, you can only see the ordinary scenery. Climb the peak bravely and have a panoramic view of the world's lakes and seas. Imagine if you are ambitious and want to be the brightest moon in the sky, I think you can really realize your dream through unremitting efforts. If not, you can at least be the brightest star in the sky. Aren't stars also appreciated? This shows the importance of pursuing height.

Dapeng has always wanted to soar since he was born. Although his height is not considerable, he has been reluctant to give up. Chi Yan (a bird by the pool) sneered, "Why bother? We didn't fly more than a few feet before we fell. Why not play in the weeds? " However, as a result, Dapeng flew from the East China Sea to the South China Sea, flying freely on a wider sea surface, and only spent his life in weeds. "Does the swallow know the ambition of the swan?" Refuse to pursue heights, and you will only be mediocre in your life. Dapeng spirit is worth learning.

Thales walks with ordinary people, Thales walks higher and ordinary people walk lower. Thales accidentally fell from a height and ordinary people laughed at him. Thales said, "You don't have to laugh at me. You don't even have a chance to fall. You are sad. " So Thales struggled to the heights again. Yes! If you are content with the status quo, you won't even have a chance to fall from a height. Great people will introspect after falling and reach a higher level by continuing to struggle. Beethoven was a musical genius, who composed numerous famous songs. Then he became deaf, as if he had fallen into an abyss from a high cloud. Unwilling to be teased by fate, he grabbed it by the throat and created more beautiful and moving songs like moonlight. I think his later achievements should be more precious and rare than his previous achievements. The new heights he has reached are awesome.

I once heard a classic saying from a friend: "Be a low-key person and do things with high profile." The "high profile" here may mean pursuing height and perfection! I'm trying to make myself such a person.

Ding Ling once said: "Happiness is not drinking under the moon and reciting poems before flowers, but fighting bravely in the storm." Friends, please pursue heights without fear. Perhaps this process is painful and long, but you will certainly fly to new heights in the fight of wind and rain. If so, what regrets do you have in your life?

Comments: The articles are criss-crossing, which is quite galloping. How concise and powerful the beginning is. The skeleton of the article is established and the writing is measured. "Dapeng" and "refusing to face" are the highlights of the article. After reading Zhuangzi, I realized my heart and carried out all the articles. First came Dapeng, then Thales and Beethoven. From bird to man, step by step, it was vivid and heavy. The article echoes from beginning to end, highlighting the pursuit of a high degree of "no regrets" without leaving traces. If the use case is fresh and contemporary, it will be even more beautiful. Rating: 57/60. (Comment: Ouyang Yubei)

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Mao Weiting, Class 0608, Grade Two, high school attached to hunan normal university

Du Fuyun: "Once you climb to the top of the mountain and peek, you will see that all other mountains are dwarfs under the sky." The poet stands on the top of the mountain, singing to the boundless earth and all sentient beings, because he has "height".

Height should pay attention to both "height" and "degree". Facing things, we need to hold our heads high. "Stand tall and see far." American scientists Axel and Barker may be as unknown as many scientists if they only pay attention to the olfactory cilia when studying the secrets of olfactory signals. However, they stood higher than others and studied the function of G protein. Sure enough, they made great progress. Next, they didn't stop, but climbed another step towards genes, and won the Nobel Prize in Biology.

The spirit of these two scientists climbing the peak of science deserves our admiration. And their research method of "standing high" is worth learning and learning from.

Because we stand tall, we can see farther; Because we stand tall, we are more confident; Because we stand tall, we are more fearless in pursuit. It's like walking in a maze. If you are in the maze, you will get lost, get lost and hit a wall everywhere. If you look down from the sky, you can clearly see your goal, and of course you can move forward more boldly.

Of course, the higher you stand, the better. We must also grasp the "degree" in order to have the due effect.

Miaoyu stands too high and sees too clearly. "Too clean and suspicious", she left a too clean figure for the world; Mao Zedong stood too high and looked too far. During the Cultural Revolution, he left people with the image of "seven points of success and three points of failure". And Qu Yuan stood too high and looked too far, which also made him disheartened.

They have "height" but don't pay attention to "degree" Such a "high" will not only make you understand the situation clearly, but more seriously, it will make you fall into a "comprehensive" misunderstanding, or make you think too much and become complicated, or make you foresee further and get quick success, but haste makes waste.

In fact, it's like a microscope. We have to raise the lens barrel to see clearly. When we are ascending, we should look at it with our eyes and adjust it to the clearest degree, so that we can see it more clearly and accurately.

Poets sing on Mount Tai because for poets, Mount Tai has both "height" and "degree", and its height is exactly what poets want. Its degree is exactly what the poet wants "many mountains and small mountains"

Comments: This is an article that can express one's views. The author pays great attention to the examination of questions, and the article always makes a fuss about the relationship between "height" and "degree", showing a strong correlation; In determining the concept, it also showed some insights. The full-text language is concise, with distinct levels, clear examples and orderly discussion, which shows the writing quality in many aspects. The disadvantage is that the writing shrinks too fast and the follow-up is somewhat weak. Rating: 55/60. (Comment: Ouyang Yubei)

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Peng Wenying, Class 0608, Grade Two, high school attached to hunan normal university.

A person's life is to climb mountains. Maybe everyone has a different starting point and different climbing tools and equipment, but the height of that mountain is endless. Life is a process of climbing, maybe blocked by snow, maybe exhausted, but it is a higher place in your heart.

Hawking, one of the greatest scientists of our time, climbs mountains in a wheelchair! When he learned that he had a terrible incurable disease, he didn't flinch, because there was not much vitality left. He chose to move on! Illness confined his body to a wheelchair, and he said, "My mind has flown to the universe!" " "Indeed, his persistence in truth and seriousness in science are his right and left wings, and he flew to the top of the mountain with a brief history of time that shocked all mankind. What's the problem if you don't stop in a wheelchair? Hawking used his miracle to prove to us that nothing is difficult as long as the heart is upward; Only when you have dreams in your heart can you bravely challenge higher heights!

In fact, "high" is composed of many "low". Maybe we can't fly in ordinary life, but at least we can keep our feet on the ground step by step. When a child takes care of and raises a younger child who has nothing to do with himself day after day, when he uses the money he earns year after year to help people who need help more than himself, when he studies hard to support his whole family, and when he deepens his image of simplicity, simplicity and strength in the eyes of China people, he has moved China. I think I will never forget the name Hong Zhanhui. You too, right? Every ordinary person can do it bit by bit, every little makes a mickle, and every effort and every effort is to make himself by going up one flight of stairs. When time goes by and I look back inadvertently, I will naturally find that I climbed unconsciously, which brought me into contact with the newer air.

Mountaineering is not a simple task. The higher the altitude, the harder it is to move forward. Liu Xiang, a native of China, won the gold medal of 1 10 meter hurdles for the first time at the 2004 Athens Olympic Games. It seems that it won the honor in less than 13 second, but how many people will understand the hardships behind that 13 second? Hundreds of high leg lifts every day, seemingly uninterrupted running practice, large and small injuries and pains, and sweat that never stops dripping. Ten minutes on stage, ten years off stage. What he has experienced is an effort that ordinary people have never experienced. Only by constantly paying hard sweat can he get what he wants!

Climbing is doomed to be endless. Facing the height, I never thought of shrinking! Facing the wind of the times, I bravely advance to a higher height with open arms!

Comments: The opening part breaks the topic and focuses on what you want to discuss. The image is simple. The article can combine the accumulation of reading with the feeling of life, discuss life, take care of yourself and talk calmly and generously. Moreover, it is very rare to have a clear point of view and a clear level. The article is full of emotion and appeal, and it is also a prominent highlight. It would be better if the use case has a broader vision. Rating: 56/60. (Comment: Ouyang Yubei)

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Guo, Class 0608, Grade Two, high school attached to hunan normal university

All we can look up to is a little height.

-Shakespeare

A glimpse of life shows that our life has so many heights.

The mountain is a height and the most unexposed miracle on earth. It has unyielding bony uplift, which is closer to the sun and farther away from the plain. This is the bravest and loneliest horn on earth. It experienced the cruelest folding and won the highest honor.

People are like ants in front of the mountain. Looking at that awesome height, human beings have the desire to conquer. Perhaps the mist and flowers on the mountain will make people feel as indifferent as Tao Qian, or a sense of pride and achievement in reaching the top. Bi Shumin said that the real mountain is invincible, but at a certain moment, the mountain generously accepted the climbers, let you rest on its head for a while, and let you have a glimpse of the real style. This high level of existence keeps us humble and respectful all the time, knowing that there are some things that we must look up to in this world.

People appreciate height-parents expect their children to grow taller; Residents hope that the building will be built higher; Scientists want planes to fly higher-that is, height, which is the symbolic meaning given by height: a place close to heaven.

Life really needs height. Higher, faster and stronger is an interpretation. At the height of challenge, in order to pursue higher goals, human beings constantly improve themselves and break through their own desires.

Perhaps because of people's jealousy and thirst for the unknown, everyone expects to stand at the highest level they can achieve. And when I stand at that height, I will sigh, "That mountain is higher than this one." As a result, people struggle all their lives-for a high degree of struggle.

I have always felt that some things are not high. Even if you start climbing by yourself, you can't "climb to the top of the mountain and someone will see you". One must keep climbing in order not to fall behind. Salinger's Good Girl has a faint overflow of sadness: the wheat is golden again and again, and people are slowly losing their hair and beard, but they are still watching. Is he waiting for his new height? I don't know, but I know that people are destined to climb to a higher level. Morning dew is epiphyllum, close at hand; Eight thousand years old, a night of glory, how short is life? As the saying goes, "Sing to wine, what is life?" It's better to be as ambitious as the poet Taibai: step on the green hills!

Please do not hesitate for a moment. The whole life is the road to climb the peak. Instead of making this height a dream of spring flowers and autumn moon, watching others climb high and see far, their youth will wither before it is in full bloom. Better pack your bags, aim at your height and climb tirelessly!

After that, all the other mountains looked short under the sky. There will naturally be a sigh: this mountain is just an ear. Turn around and continue your journey.

Comment: This is an article by a gifted scholar. The most prominent feature is the sophisticated language and delicate charm. The article begins with a point, which is clear and vivid; Comparing people with mountains is not without philosophy of life; Then sublimate the literary thought to the understanding that "life needs height", which can be described as a meteorological surprise. I poured a brick in my heart with Li Bai's "Go for an outing", which not only echoed the effect, but also broadened the realm of writing. The ending has a long aftertaste, and it was collected when it was collected. Rating: 60/60. (Comment: Ouyang Yubei)

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Zhang high school attached to hunan normal university Class 0602, Grade Two, Senior High School.

Born as a forest, I will thrive.

Life is the grass, and I shake the cymbals.

As a grass, you don't have to envy tall trees, because you can play with beetles and dewdrops; As a stream, you don't have to expect the vastness and depth of the sea, because you can run on rocks and mountains; As an ordinary person, you don't have to learn the wisdom of genius and the wealth of the rich, give yourself a height, give yourself a position, don't cry in the shadow of others, and live a wonderful life under your own sky!

Give yourself a suitable height! Don't fantasize about your ideal state, it would be better if it could be realized; Don't be discouraged if you can't reach it. Struggle is enough! The classic works written by Haizi, a gifted scholar at Peking University, have touched countless readers and made them crazy! As a writer and poet, I want nothing more! However, he chose to lie on the tracks for the life of "facing the sea and warming bloom in spring", and ended his young life. What a pity! The painter Van Gogh left many immortal classics in his life. The golden leaves of sunflower seem to shed infinite passion for life, but for a woman, he cut off his left ear to show his loyalty and shot himself in the wheat field, ending the life of a child prodigy!

Look at Beethoven, a musical prodigy, who wrote a more tragic and wonderful movement in the case of deafness, because he gave himself a "I am a composer, I want to dedicate my life to music and touch all living beings!" " Facts have proved his greatness!

They are also "lunatics". The former left others with confusion and regret, while the latter left an admirable and immortal legend, because they gave themselves different heights! Sometimes, a certain height does not limit a person's ability. On the contrary, it urges him to create a flower of life as brilliant as summer flowers within his own ability.

You have the ability and verve that "all other mountains look short in the sky". I have the happiness and satisfaction of "one bird for one day", you have the publicity and ambition of "Are we Artemisia selengensis?" I have the low-key and wisdom of "If the mountain is not high, there must be a fairy." You and I have different heights, and we live a wonderful life at our respective heights!

Maybe there will never be a talented player like diego maradona on the football field again, but the stars are still running on the football field. They don't want to surpass their predecessors, just want to sweat and show their youth to the fullest.

Perhaps there will never be a philosopher like Socrates in Pandora College again, but there are still endless students there. They don't make shocking remarks, but silently dedicate themselves to defending the truth. ...

Give yourself a height! Not for anything else, just to live more wonderfully!

Comments: This article is both reasonable and reasonable, which embodies the author's certain life accumulation, ideological precipitation and strong language control ability. The opening is good, the double-row sentence is handy, and the literary talent is brilliant, which is convenient for expressing the author's point of view; Take Haizi, Van Gogh and Beethoven as examples, which are very convincing. Then express your unique life experience, related to the topic, and reflect your good literary accomplishment through quotation. The end echoes the beginning, emphasizing the central argument. The full text is natural and calm in one go, but the example of diego maradona cited later seems to be out of harmony with other examples in the text, which should be considered. Rating: 55/60. (Comment: Yang Xiaochun)

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Huang Shaobo, Class 06 10, Senior Two, high school attached to hunan normal university.

The width of the pyramid determines its height.

The Egyptians told us this truth thousands of years ago. After wars, floods, urbanization, natural and man-made disasters and changes of the times, it is impossible to stop the soldiers who guard the Pharaoh's soul from standing on both sides of the Nile.

Teachers are willing to preach and teach, and their favorite is the "barrel theory": the water storage capacity of a barrel is not determined by the longest piece of wood, but by the shortest piece of wood. You can make every other board bigger, but as long as one board is missing, water can only be put there. To a certain extent, this board is more important than all other boards. In short, the foundation is more important than anything else.

Yao Ming is the height of China and the height of the world. Many people think that Yao Ming, as a basketball player, shines brilliantly in the game only because of his proud height, but he doesn't know that besides his excellent physical fitness, his skills are more outstanding. There is no shortage of adults on the basketball court, but a dominant center like Yao Ming is rare. Already a superstar, he successfully told me: "Stand firm and you are a giant."

Sprinters shed tears on the runway for ten years just to improve their performance for one second; The actor practiced the same movements with the dancers for ten years, just to appear in front of the stage for one minute; The writer meditated in the dim light for ten years, just to complete a manuscript that he was satisfied with ... Without the substructure, the hanging garden in Babylon could not be built.

When two writers meet, scholars despise each other. A male writer saw another female writer's ugly appearance and shabby clothes and sarcastically said, "How many books have you written? I have published 339 novels. "

"There is only one novel."

"What's the name? I'm not sure if I have read it. "

Gone with the Wind

We can't verify the names of male writers in the story. Whether 339 novels have been published or not, but a novel Gone with the Wind is enough for us to remember the names of female writers.

Hercules in Greek mythology is invulnerable and invulnerable, but he suffered a lot because of the weakness of his heel. Gossip may stop at a wise man, a journey of a thousand miles, and a single step. However, if you want to reach a height that others can't reach, please keep your feet on the ground first.

Sweat can wash away the dust on the cornerstone, and the cornerstone can support the height of the Tower of Babel. Stand firm! You are a giant.