How to write an essay?

1. Composition is to speak with a pen

“Composition, composition, it’s hard to kill a villain!” “Composition is difficult, composition is difficult, and I feel upset when I think about composition.”…These , has become a mantra for some students. Actually, writing an essay is very easy. Why do you say this?

Composition and speaking are the same thing. People have to talk every day. When people talk normally, do they ever feel embarrassed, worried or tired? Composition, in fact, means speaking, but instead of speaking, you use a pen. In this regard, Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous modern Chinese writer and educator, has long said: "Composition is talking with a pen." In other words, writing down what is said by the mouth with a pen is composition. It can also be said that anyone who can speak and write can write. Because: you can write whatever you say on weekdays; you can write whatever you want to say; you can write whatever you want to say.

1. Write whatever you say

Life is colorful, like a kaleidoscope and colorful sunshine. Inside and outside the school, students gathered together and had endless things to say. When you talk, what do you say? It is nothing more than telling others what you see, hear, think, or personally experience every day or every moment, and express your joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. Taking what you say orally and writing it down in words is a composition or an article. In other words, which article written by the students can be separated from what they have seen, heard, thought and done? For example:

Self-portrait

My surname is Wang and my first name is Xin. Needless to say, "Wang" is the surname passed down from my father. As for "Xin", the font looks like three "gold" characters falling together. Maybe my parents hope that I will become a "rich man" when I grow up.

I have now spent 12 years.

I am not good-looking, with a big face, small eyes, and a high nose.

I have many advantages, but the biggest advantage is that I am competitive. I remember that it was last semester when I participated in the composition selection contest held by the Central School. At that time, I was very confident and thought to myself: I will definitely be selected. However, the reality was contrary to what I thought, I lost the election. When the news came, it was like a bolt from the blue, exploding in my head. When I came home from school, I couldn't control it anymore, so I lay on the table and cried. My mother saw me crying so sadly, asked why, and said, "This means your writing skills are not high. It doesn't matter, failure is the mother of success! If we fail this time, we will have another chance. There will be more opportunities in the future." I'm here!" I cried after hearing this: "If I lose this opportunity, I'm afraid I will never have another chance in elementary school." As I said that, I started crying again...

I also have many shortcomings. . During class, I often make small movements and talk. Because of this, the teacher kept staring at the area where I was from time to time. Sometimes, when I talk in class, the teacher wakes me up. Because of this problem, I feel very troubled. I deliberately restrained myself from talking in class, but I just couldn't control myself and kept talking.

Students, you know something about me, right? What do you think of me? Please tell me.

This short article is what the young author said when introducing himself to the whole class and the new teacher in class. After class, she wrote down in detail what she said. Look, isn't this an excellent article? Students might as well give it a try. First introduce yourself to your friends, and then pick up a pen to draw your own "image".

Thinking exercises

(1) Why do people who can speak and write write articles?

(2) First introduce yourself to your partner, and then pick up a pen to record what you said

2. Tell the truth and write the truth

Normally, when students get together, they always tell the truth and speak their own thoughts. People tell lies only if they want to intentionally deceive the other person. It is not good to tell lies and lie. Why tell the truth? Telling the truth, speaking the truth from the heart, and saying what you think is a good character. Only by telling the truth will others love to hear you and can you move others. Telling lies, telling lies, not saying what you mean will bore others, and if you cannot move yourself, how can you move others?

The purpose of writing is nothing more than to let others understand yourself, express your thoughts and feelings of joy, anger, love and hate, and then infect and impress readers. Therefore, the composition must also tell the truth, write the truth, write what is in one's heart, and cannot tell lies or lies. This is the most important and basic requirement for composition. For example:

Dad in my eyes

The person I dislike the most in the world is my father, because I feel unhappy everywhere when I am with him.

Take what happened this Sunday as an example. Brother Dai Yun, who lives across the street from me, came back from participating in the Shandong Provincial Middle School Games and won two gold medals and one silver medal. My mother excitedly brought the medals to the family to see, and saw the shining gold and silver medals, tied with bright red ribbons, heavy. The whole family is happy for him, and I admire him even more. My mother hung the three medals around my neck. My father looked at me with a smile and said, "Son, does it look good?" I blushed and nodded hurriedly. Dad suddenly asked me to send the medal back. I took the medal and walked out, thinking that my dad must have some conspiracy, otherwise he wouldn't have let me send it so quickly. As expected, when I came back, his expression changed from sunny to cloudy.

I just heard my father say: "Chaochao, what do you think after seeing these medals?" Look at what was originally a happy thing, but it has become so complicated, what do you think about me? Brother Dai Yun has been fond of sports since he was a child and has been training for many years. He and I are two different people, so I don’t have any feelings. But I didn't dare not say it, so I had to say: "Learn from him!" Dad's face sank and he said, "That's it? No, go inside and think about it!" I held back my anger but didn't dare to disobey. Just obey the orders absolutely like a soldier, go into your room and "think about it".

Besides, my mother does all the washing and taking out the trash every day at home, so she has no regrets. But my father just let me do it. He and my mother stood by and watched, and they would find faults from time to time, saying that we should develop a good habit of loving labor from an early age. He usually likes to buy me books, which I welcome, but after I finish reading, he wants me to tell him about it or ask me questions in the book. If he makes any mistakes, he will be scolded and told to take it seriously. Read books, think hard, and don't watch the excitement. For another example, I was doing my homework at home and relaxing for a while, but my father wouldn't let me. "Just play and write and be efficient." Hi! Anyway, he has reasons and can't get along with me at all times. Even playing, I can't play well. I remember one time, my father took me to play in Yantai Mountain Park. It should have been a lot of fun, but it was different when my father was here. He told me about the origin of Yantai Mountain, the use of lighthouses and so on. I have to listen carefully because my father will test me at any time. So he took me to play, and I had to concentrate as much as in class. Can this be called playing?

There are too many things that my father doesn’t make me happy about, almost every day. Why! When can I welcome daddy!

The biggest feature of this article is that it tells the truth and writes the truth. At the beginning of the article, the author bluntly states, "The person I least welcome in the world is my father." Then, he tells the story of how his father "makes me unhappy in every way." At the end, he once again emphasizes, "When can I welcome my father?" ". Through these true words of the young author, the image of a strict father who pays attention to training and educating his son in everything in life emerges vividly on the page. Although the young author may not have realized his father's good intentions, and has not yet experienced his father's hot feelings, and has misunderstood his father; but the young author has the courage to tell the truth and write the truth, which is very commendable.

Thinking exercises

(1) Composition, why should you tell the truth and write the truth?

(2) With the title "××, I want to tell you", write something from your heart to your parents or teachers.

3. Write as you say

When people speak, in addition to deliberately imitating others, they usually say whatever they want and how they love to say. Therefore, due to differences in gender, age, personality, living environment and life experience, the characteristics of everyone's speech are different, and everyone will have their own personality and "edges" in their speech. This is just like people's looks, each has its own special features. Personality, characteristics, this is beauty, there is no distinction between good and bad.

The same is true for composition. It is advocated: whatever the mouth says, the hand will write, that is, "my hand writes and my mouth"; write what you want to say and what you like to say, and do not use empty words, cliches, or clichés. Deliberately pursue and imitate the tone of voice of others. In this way, because you write about the scenes you want to write about, say what you like to say, stick to real life, and express your true feelings, it is easy for the articles you write to be specific in content, rich in life, and smooth in expression. Distinctive.

You can put it this way: "liberate" your mouth and hands, focus on real life, keep close to the pulse of life, do whatever you want, write whatever you want, and write whatever you like on weekdays, fully Reflecting your own language personality is a "secret" to improve your composition level. For example:

Nagging mother

My mother is a middle-aged woman in her 40s. She is good at everything except one thing: she loves to nag. This is what my father and I can’t bear the most.

"Hey Yang!" My mother said loudly when she saw me being very bored. "How many times have I told you to read more English when you have time? How many days have you been on vacation? English books I don’t even want to touch it. After school starts...” “It’s here again. It’s so annoying. Why don’t I just go?” I muttered in a low voice and walked into the cabin reluctantly. "And you, He Xin, you still watch TV on Sunday without washing a lot of clothes! Go, go quickly!" "Oh! Got it! Got it!" Dad also put down the remote control and hurriedly walked towards the washing machine.

Our family is like this. My father and I are always suppressed by "Mom". But what can be done? We had to endure her nagging in silence.

One time, I was playing the game console, and my mother finished her work and walked into the big house. "Are you playing again?" I felt that the momentum was wrong, so I looked back at my mother's face: the face was elongated, and the eyebrows changed from "10:10" to "11:5". "I just started playing, it only lasts 10 minutes. Besides, I've finished my homework." I tried.

"I object to you playing game consoles the most! Playing games takes the most out of your eyes. Your vision is 5.3 and should be well protected. Besides, what else can you do in your free time? Reading, drawing, playing ball. I have to..." Although I had my own set of rebuttals to my mother, I just didn't want to listen to her endless nagging, so I had no choice but to turn off the game.

My mother is very clean.

Whenever she sees the "dirty, messy, and bad" situation in the house when she comes home, she will suddenly change her face and point the finger at my father and me: "When I am not at home, you make the house a mess, and I have to clean it up." ..." We immediately put down what we were doing, and while busy agreeing, we cleaned up the housework at the speed of "120 actions per second."

It’s strange to say that you don’t like to hear nagging, but you can’t stop hearing it if you are used to it.

Long-term family life has integrated "mom" and "nagging" into one. If there is no "nagging", there will be no mother, if there is no "mom", there will be no "our family". It seems that nagging is also a way of expressing love, and nagging is also a kind of emotional communication. I love my mother, I love her nagging.

After reading this exercise, it is not difficult for us to feel that the author's language is very casual and fully reflects his own personality. For example: "Dad and I are always suppressed by 'Mom'. But what can we do?" "This face has grown so long, and the eyebrows have changed from '10:10?' to '11:5' "We immediately put down what we were doing and were busy doing the housework at the speed of '120 actions per second.' "It's strange to say that I don't like to hear nagging, but I'm used to it. It’s not enough to listen to it.” It is precisely because the language is so casual that the article is so vivid and thought-provoking.

Thinking exercises

(1) Composition, why should you advocate writing how you say it?

(2) With the title "That time, I was really ____", write about a situation when you were happy, angry or aggrieved at that time. You are asked to write whatever you say on weekdays.

2. Learn to pay attention to things around you

"Content" (what to write) determines "form" (how to write). Composition materials come first and are overwhelming. . When composing, having nothing to say or write is the most frustrating thing. As the saying goes, "It's hard for a wise woman to make a meal without rice." So, how can we make the composition have something to say and write? There are several ways out, among which learning to observe and developing the habit of paying attention to things around you and paying attention to life is the most important way. The great French writer Balzac once said: "Life is nothing more than a bunch of small situations, and the greatest passion is controlled by these situations."

Some people may complain that life now is very monotonous. The surroundings of my life are even more boring and dull, with nothing to observe or pay attention to.

Is this really the case? Life itself is a kaleidoscope, and today's life is even more colorful and full of colorful sunshine. As long as we observe and feel carefully, we will find that there are many things around us that can be included in the article; as long as we love life, pay attention to the life around us, and think about it seriously, we will find that there are many seemingly It's a very inconspicuous little thing, but it is indeed a good composition material.

In short, there is endless content in life. It can be said that life is full of articles. I am afraid of covering my eyes and plugging my ears, turning a blind eye and hearing nothing.

Learning to pay attention to the things around you is not an easy thing to do. It requires taking "three steps": the first step is to learn to follow and observe; the second step is to learn to observe directionally; the third step is to Learn to observe randomly.

4. Learn to follow and observe

Following observation (also called follow-up observation) is to conduct continuous, multiple, and repeated observations of something in life or a person around you (this kind of Observation is generally not something that can be completed once or twice), so as to obtain specific and detailed composition materials. This is the initial stage of learning to observe and develop the habit of mindful living.

For example, students often eat a certain vegetable (or fruit), but they may not be able to write about it well. One of the most important points is that we don’t really understand or be familiar with this vegetable (water or fruit). If you want to write about this vegetable (or fruit) well, you need to track and observe its growth process, and at the same time, record it truthfully in a timely manner once you observe it. If the growth process is too long, plan well, observe regularly, and write down the shape, color, etc. of the vegetable (or fruit) at different stages. In this way, you will be fully prepared to write about this vegetable (or fruit).

Another example is that students have lived with their mothers since they were young and enjoy their mothers’ meticulous care all day long, but they may not necessarily be able to write "My Mom", "Mom's Day" and "Mom" brilliantly. "Sunday" these articles were written. The fundamental reason is that I don’t fully understand and understand everything my mother has done. This requires tracking and observing mothers to capture more and more touching composition materials.

Read the following exercise again and think about why the article is so specific and attractive.

Golden Bear

My family has a golden bear. It is both a little clumsy and a clever guy.

The golden bear is covered in a light pink "fleece coat", which is very soft and smooth to the touch. Its head is pointed and small triangular. Its two eyes are black and bright, like two black agates. Its ears are small, but very sensitive. Otherwise, how could it be frightened by the slightest movement and hide in the corner? Its nose is really small and exquisite. There are two small holes on the black nose the size of a mung bean, which are its nostrils. Its mouth was curled up, as if it was angry with someone.

Under its limbs, there are small claws with five toes spread out. Its tail is very short and slightly raised, and it sways from side to side as it walks.

One night, while I was watching TV, the golden bear chewed a big hole in its "hut" and ran out to play. Early the next morning, I was woken up by a "thumping" sound. It turned out that the Golden Bear was tired after playing all night and wanted to go back to his "hut" to sleep, but he couldn't find the entrance to the cave. What a little fool.

At noon during a summer vacation, I cut some radish strips to feed it. It picked up one end of the radish strips with its little paws and ate them hungrily. Then, one, two, etc. were all eaten in a few minutes. I was about to praise it for eating quickly, but suddenly I found that its pointed head became flat. It was so strange! I wanted to take a closer look at what was going on. At this time, it was turning its back to me and tasting radish strips with relish. I took one look at it and thought: Where did these carrot sticks come from? I must solve this mystery. So, I walked back to the house as if nothing had happened, and immediately hid behind a closet close to the golden bear, quietly watching its every move. The golden bear squirmed vigorously. Suddenly, a radish stick came out of its mouth, then two, three... and after a while, a "hill" was piled up. Then he ate it with relish. I think of the answer given to us in "A Hundred Thousand Whys": There are two pouches on both sides of the golden bear's mouth. In order to let itself eat more, it hides food in the pouches. When it wants to eat, it Get the food out and enjoy it alone. This little golden bear has so many clever ideas, he is really clever.

Golden Bear, I really like you.

This exercise is very well written. In the article, the cute appearance of the golden bear is described in detail and vividly, the situation of escaping from the "hut" when the little owner is not paying attention but getting lost, and the secret of hiding radish sticks in the bag in order to eat more. The reason why the article is so specific and attractive is all the result of the young author's follow-up observation.

Thinking exercises

(1) What is follow-up observation? Why should we learn to follow and observe?

(2) Follow up and observe "Mom After get off work" or "Mom's Sunday", and then write about what you observed with the title "Mom After get off work" or "Mom's Sunday"

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5． Learn directional observation

Directive observation (also called focused observation) is to conduct directional, selective, and focused observations of many people or things in life, so as to obtain specific and detailed insights. Composition material. This is the second stage after "following and observing", learning to observe and developing the habit of mindful living.

For example, ask students to write "A Person I Respect". This requires students to conduct selective and focused observations among family members, relatives, neighbors, school staff and other broad groups of people, and then discover and accumulate composition materials that can express a certain aspect of this character's qualities.

For another example, the teacher asked students to write compositions such as "My Little Partner" or "He is Really Worth Learning from Me" this week. This requires students to conduct directional and focused observations among many characters such as brothers and sisters, surrounding relatives and friends, school classmates, etc., and then discover and accumulate moving composition materials that can express this character.

In order to discover and accumulate more vivid and touching materials to express the writing object, on the basis of directional observation, of course, you can also make some follow-up observations. Such as the following short article:

My Dad

If someone asks me, who is the person you admire most? I will answer without hesitation: I admire my dad the most.

My father is an ordinary worker over forty years old with no outstanding talent or impressive appearance. He has a rectangular face, eyebrows, and big eyes. He often wears a half-worn Chinese tunic suit and a pair of patched shoes that never leave his feet.

Dad is a frugal man. He often said: "Now our life is better, but we still need to be frugal. Didn't I hear that the song also sang 'diligence and thrift are our family heirlooms'!" One of my father's vests has been worn for many years and has been sewn again and again. For this reason, I advised my father: "You can't spend much money on a new vest. It's nothing to buy just one!" But my father said: "This vest can still be worn, so don't buy it if it's just a makeshift one!" Oh, it's true. Listen, my brother was also joking with his father: "Dad is always inseparable from this vest, as if this vest has a deep relationship with you." Dad listened and just smiled. Dad’s frugality is not just one thing, there are many more!

Dad can always be seen eating leftovers and rice when eating. Look, everyone else was eating fragrant rice, and kept filling their bowls with scrambled eggs, peanuts, and fried celery... But dad was nibbling on yesterday's leftover steamed buns. I spoke again: "Why are you bothering? You are leaving the newly cooked rice instead of eating the leftovers." Dad smiled and said: "It doesn't matter, the steamed buns are just pickles, they are delicious. Besides, there is no one for the leftovers." Eat it, it would be a pity to throw it away." Then he ate the dry steamed buns again.

Dad is frugal in food and clothing, and he pays even more attention to saving in work. A few days ago, the factory asked my father to write materials. Dad thought about it from morning till night. The paper I used made me want to write on every corner, let alone the back.

I said to my father again: "Why are you so stupid? The paper does not belong to our family, and the government paper is not used casually!" Dad said: "The government paper belongs to the country, and the country's paper cannot be wasted!"

< p>Ah, the image of my father is so deeply imprinted on my soul. It urges me to always be a frugal person.

Among the many members who are worthy of respect and love, the author is observing his own father. After determining the key objects of observation, the author inevitably conducts detailed follow-up observations. Because of this, the young author discovered so many excellent composition materials, which showed his father's good qualities of frugality and thrift in three aspects: clothing, food, and daily necessities.

Thinking exercises

(1) What is directional observation? How to perform directional observation?

(2) Directly observe teachers or classmates in the school, and then write out the observations with the title "A Teacher I Respect" or "A Classmate Worth Learning from".

6． Learn to observe randomly

Random observation is to face the colorful world in your own life, observe at any time and anywhere, and capture people, things, scenery, and accidents in all aspects and corners of life in a timely manner. Events seen, heard and thought about.

Random observation cannot have any preparation in advance, nor can it have any special purpose or direction. Therefore, this kind of observation is relatively difficult to achieve. It is the highest stage of learning to pay attention to life and developing good observation habits. Of course, it is also the goal that students should pursue and strive to achieve with all their strength. Because most of the materials in the composition come from "random observation".

This requires us to do it no matter when (at home or away), no matter where we go or what we do (go to school, walk to the mall, go to the market, visit relatives, watch movies, travel, visit, etc.) , always pay attention to your ears (listening), eyes (seeing), hands (touching), and heart (thinking). In short, as big as the field of your life is, you should expand the scope of random observation as much as possible; pay attention to everything and be a thoughtful person in life; you should incorporate random observation into your life, make it a part of your life, and completely abandon the observation just for the sake of the current composition. An approach that is eager for quick success.

Pay attention to knowledge everywhere, pay attention to articles everywhere. The famous writer Mr. Ye Shengtao once emphasized this point: "Developing the habit of precise observation and careful understanding in real life is a kind of preparation. Even if you don't write articles, you have to develop this habit. If you develop it, it will be important for writing. The article is of great use.”

Read the following article to see what the young author did and what he said.

I love shopping

I love shopping, but my shopping is not as monotonous as my mother’s shopping. I like everything on the street.

I stood quietly on the street and looked at the clothes of the passers-by. The world ruled by black and gray "ka" uniforms is gone forever. People who have stepped out of subsistence and are moving towards a well-off life have begun to work hard to dress themselves up. Look, young men are either in suits and elegant, or they are in T-shirts and jeans, free and easy, which always makes people feel full of youthful vitality. The girls are the most eye-catching. Their clothes are colorful and unique, giving people a sense of beauty. The children were also dressed up like flowers. Even the old ladies followed the "fashion" and put on "maverick clothes". It’s so happy to see their (her) energy.

I stood on the high overpass and looked into the distance. The continuous highway connects overpasses with novel designs, like a recumbent dragon. I recognized many types of cars by comparing them with car pictures. Now, I can accurately identify the names, models, countries of production, features and performance of 70 or 80 types of cars. For this reason, my classmates also gave me the nickname "Automobile Expert". All kinds of cars speed on the wide and flat roads. I always feel like this is like the blood of a dragon flowing. The dragon is moving and is about to take off. Whenever this happens, I wish I could grow up and fly with the dragon.

Shopping enabled me to accumulate a lot of writing materials, which helped me win prizes in many composition competitions. Shopping enabled me to gain a lot of knowledge that I couldn’t get in class or books. Shopping made me appreciate the reform. The tide brings vitality to China; shopping allows me to see the glorious tomorrow of our motherland; shopping makes me realize the meaning of the saying "the successor has a long way to go".

The "shopping" mentioned in the article has a purpose, but the author pays attention to randomly observing everything in the world during "shopping"; the young author said: "Shopping has enabled me to accumulate a lot of writing skills. Materials", "gained a lot of knowledge that cannot be obtained in the classroom or books..." Isn't this the meaning of random observation? Just talking about this article, isn’t it also the result of random observation?

Thinking exercises

(1) What is random observation? Why should we learn to observe randomly? How to make random observations?

(2) With the title "On the way to (or after) school", "Walking on the street", "Walking in the mall" or "Going to the market", write down what you randomly observed.

3. Pay attention to accumulating composition materials

To solve the problem of "nothing to write" in composition, learn to observe and develop the habit of paying attention to the life around you, this is the prerequisite. On this basis, we are still learning to accumulate materials.

Accumulating material means taking notes in a timely manner and storing what you see, hear, think about, or meaningful and interesting content you experience personally.

Accumulating materials can strengthen memory and fight against forgetting. If the material is not recorded in time, it will become blurred and forgotten over time. The more materials you obtain and accumulate, the greater the scope for selecting and screening materials when composing. My mind is as empty as a wild field, and naturally there will be no good materials to choose from when writing. In addition, strengthening accumulation can gradually improve one's own understanding. As your cognitive ability improves, your writing skills will naturally improve.

The best way to accumulate materials is to prepare a small notebook to record materials and store composition information. This notebook is a library of materials. When you need to write a composition, you can flip through it, search for it, and come up with information. In this way, you no longer have to worry about running out of things to write in your composition. There are many ways to accumulate composition materials, the main ones are: accumulation by observing the life around you, accumulation in your own life, accumulation in interactions with others, accumulation in reading inside and outside class, and accumulation in the compositions you have written.

7. Accumulating material from observation

Accumulating material from observation means accumulating content and experience gained from observation. Specifically, it requires students to describe the meaningful or interesting content they see, hear, and think about every moment in their lives, as well as the new things they touch, taste, hear, and witness. Record it promptly. Accumulating through observation is an important way to accumulate composition materials. Because primary school students mainly practice writing narratives, and most of the narratives are written about the author’s experiences and feelings.

The most common way to accumulate content and experience gained from observation is to write an observation diary. When following up and observing, you can record while observing, or you can write an observation diary regularly. This kind of record emphasizes that it must have a certain degree of consistency. When conducting directional observation, in order to facilitate observation, it is best to make retrospective notes after the observation.

Random observation, emphasizing on capturing notes - promptly and accurately record new things, good materials and sudden whims that you accidentally observe. Because these materials are sporadic and fleeting, the "notes" must be timely, just like catching a small animal, and "capture" it in your own notebook. This kind of catchy notes is the most valuable. It is the most helpful in broadening the writing surface and writing articles with new ideas and depth of understanding.

No matter what kind of observation diary it is, it can be long or short. It can be written in writing, or it can be a fragment (note down the elements and outline). As long as the observations and feelings are recorded in a timely manner, the purpose will be achieved. What needs attention is: when writing an observation diary, you should not just write a diary about observing scenes and objects, but also pay more attention to writing a diary about observing people, things (activities).

The following short article is based on observation notes. Please read it and understand the meaning of writing notes.

I am proud to have such a father

Today, my father drove me back to my hometown in a car. As we set off, there were snowflakes in the air. After the car traveled more than ten kilometers, the snow became heavy and the ground turned white.

For safety, my father slowed down the car to more than 20 kilometers. When the car reached a crossing, we found a jeep parked on the side of the road. Dad quickly stopped the car, jumped out of the cab, and came to the car, and I followed. The driver was a young man in his twenties. He was covered in oil. It was obvious that he had done repairs under the car. When he saw my father, he said: "I am from Jugezhuang. I went to the county town to do errands and came back. Unexpectedly, the car broke down, but I couldn't find anything wrong with it." Dad said, "It doesn't matter, I will help you fix it." Young man. I was very excited to hear that.

Dad skillfully opened the front hood of the car and inspected it carefully. It didn't take much, and my father's body was covered with snowflakes, and his face was red from the cold. In about one class, his father helped him repair the car. The young man was very excited: "Without your help today, I wouldn't be able to go back. Please accept the 50 yuan." The father smiled and said, "Put this money away. Whoever encounters this situation, Everyone will help. It's getting dark soon, so hurry up!" After that, Dad turned back to his cab and started the car. When our car was about to leave, my father stretched his hand out of the cab and said "Goodbye!" I saw the young man holding the money with red eyes. He stood next to the car, raising his hands and watching us.

I was touched by my father’s enthusiastic actions to help others. I am proud to have such a good father.

Isn’t this an excellent article? "Start driving → drive slowly in heavy snow → stop at the intersection → help others enthusiastically → refuse to accept payment → say goodbye and set off", the writing is smooth, real and touching. This is all the result of the young author being good at accumulating material from observation and writing notes in a timely manner.

To accumulate the content and feelings gained from observation, in addition to writing an observation diary, you can also create and use observation cards.