How to write the recommended places in Chinese books?

Think about it: where are you going to recommend? Where is this place? What's special about it? Write the reasons for the recommendation.

Second, material selection

Landscape, places of interest, amusement places, shopping supermarkets, bookstores, snacks, etc. As long as it is distinctive and worth visiting, you can recommend it.

Recommend an ancient town

This ancient town is very beautiful. ...

Where you can learn about people's past lives. ...

There are many delicious foods in this ancient town. ...

Third, the idea

We take recommending a scenic spot as an example to conceive and simply list the outline of the composition.

Beginning: Cut to the chase and explain the recommended place. (omitted)

Chinese: Describe the reasons why the scenic spots are worth visiting in segments. (detailed)

Conclusion: I want you to see the characteristics of this scenic spot again. (omitted)

Fourth, expression

After drawing up the outline, we began to think about how to make the article attractive. Let's start with the following aspects.

① Introduce the scenery in a certain order, so as to be organized; Describe things from multiple angles to highlight their characteristics.

(2) Use various rhetorical devices to describe the scenery and write down the reasons for recommendation.

(3) Remember to use some good words and sentences accumulated at ordinary times.

(4) Give the article an attractive topic.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) stationery

subject

Charming Forbidden City, interesting geological park, be a farmer, welcome to New Hope Amusement Park.

good news

Colorful flowers and exotic plants are picturesque.

Lakes and mountains, flowers are red and green.

Surrounded by mountains, the snow and ice keep falling.

Powder makeup jade has a unique style.

begin

1. The National Day has arrived, and the long vacation that everyone is looking forward to has arrived as scheduled. Autumn is crisp, and fruits are fragrant. At this time,

Of course, it's perfect to go out for a walk at Christmas! Where are you going? Let me recommend you a tourist attraction!

2. Hello, everyone! Welcome to the beautiful labor park. I'm Wang Hong, today's tour guide. Let me introduce the main attractions here!

final result

1. The labor park is full of beautiful scenery and interesting games. I hope everyone has a good time.

I love my hometown, her beautiful environment, her antiquity and civilization.

cite

1. "If you want to compare the West Lake to the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate." The beauty of the West Lake can be compared with the stone, which is naturally not bad.

As the saying goes, "you are not a hero until you reach the Great Wall". Let's climb the Great Wall together and enjoy its majesty!

Read it yourself first, see if you have introduced this place clearly, and write down the reasons for recommendation. Read it to your classmates again and ask them to make suggestions for revision.

Model essay+comment

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Old Town of Lijiang

During the holiday, I finally went to colorful Yunnan and visited the long-awaited Lijiang ancient town. (at the beginning, the place recommended by the author-Lijiang ancient town. )

The most famous ancient town in Lijiang is Sifang Street. As soon as I stepped into the gate, the sound of running water rushed into my ears. Looking intently, a huge waterwheel at the gate is constantly busy. This waterwheel is 4 meters high, which is similar to the flagpole in the school. By comparing and associating similar things, the author makes readers understand how big this huge waterwheel is. )

The path in Lijiang city is paved with bluestone slabs, which is uneven and comfortable to walk on. There is a stone arch bridge on the slate road. There is a clear stream under the bridge. The stream is crystal clear and there are many small fish in the water. The little fish is swimming freely, so happy. Standing on the bridge, you can hear the sound of rushing water. People walking on the bridge are so carefree, walking in the sun and taking pictures by the roadside. I wrote about the paths, stone arch bridges, streams, small fish and leisurely people on the bridge in the ancient town. )

In the afternoon, the sun is blocked from the roof, and the ancient town is extremely warm. Naxi people love to grow flowers. Under the antique eaves, pots and pans are filled with all kinds of flowers and plants, which are very lovely. The old people sat peacefully at the door, watching their grandchildren smile happily, and the old people smiled happily. I wrote about the flowers and plants under the eaves of Naxi people, kind old people and happy children. )

Evening is the most beautiful time in the ancient town. Those Naxi girls in a street in the bar talked, laughed and sang, and got together to sing and dance. They sing some Naxi folk songs, and their songs attract many tourists. Tourists and Naxi girls are singing and dancing happily, and Old Town of Lijiang at night suddenly becomes an ocean of dancing. (The author uses the method of comparing and associating similar things to connect the dancing scene of tourists and Naxi girls with the ocean. )

Listening to the sound of streams, tasting delicious pineapple rice and carrying a lot of ethnic gadgets, this is the ancient town of Lijiang.