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Closer, closer, getting closer and closer as the woods outside the window quickly moved back. Isn't the cluster of stone valleys bathed in the sun the tourist attraction we have longed for - the Stone Forest? When we got off the bus, we seemed to be in a magical stone palace. Soft wickers, exquisite arch bridges, quiet pools, and delicate lotus flowers are all accompanied by stones of various shapes. Especially the stone pillar standing proudly in the pool. Did it fall from the sky? Or does it grow in the water? At first glance, those soft lines look like a village girl looking into the distance. The Stone Forest is worthy of being called the forest of stones. It has an inexhaustible supply of stones. Look, there are everywhere inside and outside luxurious hotels: stone screens, stone tables, stone benches... Even the stone inkstones and stone sculptures set up everywhere have become the favorites of tourists. Walking into the stone gate, a majestic picture of strange stones jumps into view: the stone pine with lush branches and leaves has the faint sound of pine waves; the stone lotus with a little silver light in the sun seems to be about to bloom, and the simple "Ashima" It's so charming. What makes people even more nostalgic is the endlessly changing stone shapes. Some are like giant hands reaching for stars, some are like dragons exploring the sea, some are like the waves of the sea, and some are like light streamers about to float away in the wind. It can be said that none of the stones in the Stone Forest is the same. It is so strange! If the wonder of the Stone Forest lies in the stones, then the "interests of the Stone Forest" can be regarded as the path underfoot. After swimming past the "Guanyin Stone", crossing the "One Line of Sky" and walking along the straight avenue, you can see flower paths paved with small stones. The small flower road is like dense silk threads, like a fishing net waiting to be harvested, stretching its arms and legs in all directions; it is also like a small boat taking tourists into the silver bay. At a glance, it is continuous. This path is the artery in the stone forest! The silver world of Stone Forest gives people a strong impression of vitality, and it also has green vitality! With their green eyes open, they tenaciously drilled out of the cracks in the stone, full of vitality, and nodded frequently to people. Their weak bodies told people that warm currents echoed everywhere in the stone forest, passing through deep valleys, twisting caves, and flowing over cliffs. ... Saying goodbye to the flying pictures, I stepped onto the bus. Far, far away, the dense stone forest gradually disappeared. But the wonders of the stones, the interest of the paths, and the beauty of the flowers and plants in the Stone Forest will be engraved in my heart along with this happy trip. Brief Comment: The author chose two points to write about the Stone Forest, one is to write about "the wonder of the Stone Forest" and the other is to write about the "interest of the Stone Forest". In writing "odd", various strange stones are fully displayed, and the strangeness of the stones is expressed with vivid metaphors. In terms of "interesting", the young author contains his own aesthetic taste for the stone forest in the interesting stone forest paths. He embodies emotion and reason in the description of the scenery, praising the beauty of the stone forest and the vitality of green in the stone forest. This travel note echoes the beginning and end, and has a complete structure, especially the opening sentence "near, near" and the closing sentence "far, far away", from near to far, with a beginning and an end, giving people a complete impression, like a tour guide, taking you with you It allows readers to appreciate the scenery of the stone forest.

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Miss Chun came to the world with light steps, carrying life and hope. She couldn’t wait to jump over the mountains, across the fields, and across the streams. , without stopping for a moment. Everywhere you go, there is infinite vitality. Miss Chun is also a shy little girl. She is always hiding, like she is playing hide and seek with us, let us find her together! In the morning, after I got up, I walked to the balcony in a daze. Suddenly, a refreshing fragrance came to the balcony. In an instant, my energy doubled, and my longing for sleep was forgotten. I just stared at the pots of orchids. The orchid has five or six petals, flawless white, crystal clear, and extremely beautiful! There is a yellow stamen hidden inside the white petals. Then I turn my attention to the green pointed leaves, which are about as long as a leek. The leaves are bent, as if they were shyly bent down after being "visited" by me. . There are at least 6 or 7 leaves in each pot of orchid. oh! I found Miss Spring, she is in the orchid! I excitedly put on my coat and went outside to look for spring. In the flower beds on the roadside, I saw clusters of small flowers that were colorful, beautiful and fragrant. They came in so many colors! Some are as red as flames, some are as orange as sunset, some are as white as snowflakes, some are as green as emeralds, some are as purple as crystals, some are as blue as the sea... People are intoxicated there. The green grass can't wait to get out of its head and look at the surrounding spring scenery. Look here and there, and there is always not enough. oh! I found Miss Chun again, she was among the flowers and grass! The willow tree on the roadside sprouted a few buds and shook her long and thin braids, as if to welcome the arrival of the spring girl. oh! I found Miss Chun again, she is in Girl in the Willow Tree! The small river on the roadside is thawing, and the sound of the thawing water is tinkling, tinkling, like Brother Xiuxi playing "Song of Spring"! I found Miss Chun again, she was in the thawing river! oh! I finally understood that Miss Chun’s footprints have been left all over the motherland, and she has spread the spirit of spring to every corner of the world.

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