How to write a composition when going out to play on National Day?

The essay model for going out to play on National Day is as follows:

Fan Wenyi:

This National Day, because of my excellent performance, my parents took me to travel to Huashan Mountain in Xiyue. We stood at the foot of Huashan Mountain. In order to save energy, we chose to take the cable car up the mountain from Dongshanmen. The cable car glided between two mountains, and when it shook, everyone's heart lifted and everyone screamed. Looking out of the window, huge stones stand like walls, and distant peaks point to the blue sky like swords. I dare not move, for fear that this cable will break and I will be shattered.

After getting off the cable car, I didn't go far, but I came to the North Peak of Huashan Mountain, where the legendary Huashan Sword was located. My parents and I took a group photo here as a souvenir. Then, we passed the memorial pavilion, the ear-wiping cliff, the ladder and the Black Dragon Ridge. When we arrived in Jinsuo Pass, we were exhausted. Looking back at the steep mountain road we just climbed, we feel a great sense of accomplishment.

It's already 5: 30 in the afternoon. In order to catch the train, we have to go down the mountain. Huashan is indeed famous for its "danger", but there are still many tourists, so we went down the mountain ahead of time. I lingered and reluctantly said goodbye to it.

Fan Wener:

Today is National Day, and the blue sky is endless. My mood is also very happy, because my mother promised to take me to the "Garden Expo Park" long ago. After breakfast, our family of three came to the "Garden Expo Park", where lights and decorations were everywhere, full of festive scenes.

After buying the tickets, we lined up to enter the "Garden Expo Park", which was very lively and full of happy people. The scenery is also beautiful. There are green lawns, fountains and colorful flowers. Gardeners have these flowers in various patterns, such as dragons, peacocks and Sutong Bridge ... and there are two national pavilions next to them, where people take pictures as souvenirs. I also took many photos as a souvenir.

Bright five-star red flags are hung on both sides of the path, and the breeze blows and the red flag flutters in the wind. Later, we played fishing, boating and catching mazes ... laughing and shouting, it was already four o'clock in the afternoon, and we reluctantly left the "Garden Expo Park". We really had a good time today!