Traditional Culture Encyclopedia - Travel guide - Please correct the sick sentence.

Please correct the sick sentence.

Etiology: You can't travel with an object.

Correction: This summer vacation, I traveled to Huangshan Mountain.

Etiology: improper use of words

Correction: He talks a lot.

Cause: word repetition

Correction: A hundred flowers blossom.

Etiology; inconsecutive

Correction: On the calm river, there is a boat coming to the shore.

Etiology: semantic repetition

Correction: the whole school teacher attended the literary evening with us.