Rewrite the composition with the Third Person in Spring.

1. The ancient poem "Spring Day" was rewritten into a 400-word composition. On a sunny day, I came to Surabaya to visit the beautiful scenery. There are flowers in full bloom and the smell is fragrant. The mountains in the distance are high and low, looming. A waterfall falls from the sky, just as the title of a poem written by Li Bai is "Suspected that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days". There is also a stream at the foot of the mountain. The stream is crystal clear, and small fish and shrimps are playing in it.

In the distance, a small village is hidden among the flowers, and the flowers are overflowing. People all know that there is a spring breeze, but to really see it, we must see it through the colorful scenes of blooming flowers, green grass and sprouting young trees. . Who woke them up? Oh! It turns out that Miss Chun woke them up with her gentle hands!

Spring has come, and the spring breeze has blown the flowers away, and there are flowers everywhere. With the spring breeze, there is this boundless beauty!

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Appreciating [TV Poetry Prose] Good Poems Like the Wind, A Journey to the Famous Works of the Ages (I) [Zhu's Spring Day]

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Beautiful spring outing in Surabaya, the endless scenery is new.

Everyone can see the face of spring, the spring breeze blows flowers open, thousands of purple, and the scene of spring is everywhere.

I chose a beautiful spring day to enjoy flowers and grass and came to Surabaya, only to see the endless scenery changed for a while. No matter where you are, you can see the face of spring breeze, which makes flowers bloom and the colors of spring are everywhere.

It is generally believed that this is a poem describing a spring outing. Judging from the scenery written in the poem, it is also very similar. The first sentence is "winning the sun to find the fragrance of Surabaya", and "winning the sun" refers to sunny days, indicating the weather. "Surabaya" indicates the location. "Looking for fragrance" means looking for beautiful spring scenery and pointing out the theme. The following three sentences are what you saw when you wrote "Looking for Incense". The second sentence, "boundless scenery is new for a while", is about the initial impression gained by watching spring scenery. Use "boundless" to describe all the scenery in front of you. "A Moment of Novelty" not only describes the return of spring to the earth, the natural scenery is brand-new, but also describes the refreshing joy of the author during his outing. The word "knowledge" in the third sentence inherits the word "search" in the first sentence. "You can easily know" means that the features and features of spring are easy to recognize. "East wind" refers to spring. The fourth sentence, "colorful is always spring", means that this colorful scene is made up of spring, and people know spring from this colorful scene. This specifically answers why we can "wait for the east wind". The "colorful" in this sentence also takes care of the "new situation" in the second sentence. The third sentence and the fourth sentence describe the new situation and the gains from finding incense in vivid language.

Spring returns to the earth, and the poet is full of energy. It is this fresh feeling that makes the poet understand the east wind. As if the east wind blew away colorful flowers overnight; And the scene of a hundred flowers blooming, isn't it a vibrant spring? The poet deepened from "seeking" to "knowing", and the word "new" dominated the whole poem. But Surabaya is in Shandong, and Confucius once gave lectures and preached on the shore of Surabaya; In the Southern Song Dynasty, this place had fallen into the hands of the State of Jin. Why did Zhu go for a spring outing? It turns out that this is a philosophical poem. "Surabaya" in the poem is a metaphor for Confucius, "seeking incense" is a metaphor for the sage's way, "Dongfeng" is a metaphor for enlightenment, and "Spring" is a metaphor for benevolence advocated by Confucius. If these meanings are written in philosophical lecture-style language, it will inevitably be boring. This poem, however, melts philosophy into vivid images, leaving no trace of reasoning. This is the genius of Zhu.

Literally, this poem seems to describe the impression of a spring outing, but the place to look for fragrance is the shore of Surabaya, which was occupied by Jin people in the Song Dynasty. Zhu has never been to the north, and of course it is impossible to swim to Surabaya in spring. In fact, the word "Surabaya" in the poem implies Confucius, because in the Spring and Autumn Period, Confucius taught his disciples with string songs between Zhu and Si. Therefore, the so-called "seeking incense" refers to the way of seeking saints. "Colorful" is a metaphor for the richness of Confucianism. The poet compares the sage's way to the spring breeze, which promotes the occurrence of opportunities and touches everything. This is actually a philosophical poem by the richest man, which combines reason with interest in the image.

3. Write a beautiful hometown from the perspective of the third person.

My hometown is in Dahong City, where birds are singing and flowers are fragrant. It is a beautiful place.

In spring, the snow and ice melt there, and it is a vibrant scene. The land stretched out and became soft, and the grass slowly poked its head out of the ground. Willow shoots, the water in the river melts, and the fish play happily. Swallows flew back from the south, twittering as if to say, "Spring is coming, spring is coming".

In summer, there is shade, flowers are in full bloom, peach blossoms are blooming and trees are getting thicker. The children are all dressed. How hot the sun is in summer! Bake trees and bend them in frustration. But children are different. They are not afraid of the heat, but they still like to play in the sun.

In autumn, my hometown is a rich and charming place. Apples, pears and corn ... are all ripe. The big red apples are covered with branches and are almost broken. If you come to our hometown as a guest, I will warmly entertain you, let you taste the fruits of our hometown and ensure that you are full.

4. 450 words in the third person for the composition of mountain water conditions. Mountain water conditions are mountains and water, mountains are static and water is moving; The mountain is yang and the water is yin; Mountain standing, water lying; The mountain is proud, and the water is humble; The mountain yearns for the sky, and the water leans against the earth; The mountain calls for birds, and the water accommodates fish.

The mountains and the water depend on each other, and I am always closely connected with the mountains and rivers. On a vast land of 9.6 million square kilometers, China has been raising generations of yellow-skinned China people with iron-containing soil and calcium-containing tap water.

I grew up between heaven and earth supported by three mountains and five mountains, and the aura and personality endowed by mountains and rivers flowed in my blood. Chongqing, known as the "mountain city", is my hometown.

I will never forget what the mountains and rivers in the mountain city have given me. As the saying goes, relying on mountains to eat mountains, relying on water to draft.

A word "eat" contains countless ups and downs. Mountains and rivers reflect the vicissitudes of history, so that we can't forget the roots that grow on the land and the souls that drink in the Yangtze River.

Never forget the sincere smiling faces of hospitable people in ancient and simple villages before the high-rise buildings that have sprung up like mushrooms after rain; I will never forget who carried the washbasin to the river and drew a string of water marks, and sang cheerful songs to go home and raise smoke; Never forget, we climbed trees to pick oranges, bathed in ponds, caught frogs and fish, caught snails and other beautiful and precious childhood memories; I will never forget how the revolutionary martyrs fought bravely with the enemy in this mountain and river in exchange for today's happy life ... the scenery has given us too much. The scenery is still there, and the love for it is still there.

Between mountains and rivers, what impressed me the most was the magnificent epic-Three Gorges Immigrants. The huge resettlement project of the Three Gorges was born in the mountains and rivers in the south, but I don't think the green mountains and green waters in the south have given me all my personality.

The light and agile Jiangnan is beautiful, and the northwest whistling in the north wind also makes me yearn for it. I like to pursue camels that have disappeared in the sand for thousands of years. I like to experience the vastness, solemnity and solemnity of life from the towering mountains.

The calmness of the mountains and the agility and beauty of the water have invisibly influenced me and taught me to constantly improve myself. Mountains and rivers, Qian Shan Wanshui always cares.

Mountains and rivers are endless.

5. Rewrite the text and answer it for you in the third person.

A boy had a bad day.

Yesterday was a terrible day. The alarm clock didn't go off, so (he) woke up late. It's half past seven when (he) wakes up, and (he) must get to school before eight o'clock! He ran to the bus stop. But (he) still missed the bus. It was half past eight when he got to school. (His) teacher is very angry, and (he) has been miserable all day. At half past four, it's time to go home. While he was waiting for the bus, suddenly, it began to rain heavily. It's like a really crazy rainstorm! (He) thought (he) had an umbrella in his schoolbag, so (he) continued to look for it. He was so busy looking for an umbrella that he didn't see a car. And there is water everywhere (hum)! (He) just waited .. completely wet. Almost an hour. At last the bus came and took him home. He took a hot bath and ate some warm food. It feels good to be home!

6. Rewriting Modern Prose in Spring It's spring again, so I'm going to play in the suburbs.

There are faint white clouds floating in the sky, which look like pieces of white silk dancing from a distance. There is a breeze blowing in front of me, just like a child's tender little hand stroking my cheek.

Near noon, the sun radiates warm sunshine and shines warmly on the body. I walked among the willows.

Strong willows are like a huge umbrella. They dance like strong girls, and their waterfall-like hair is swaying in the spring breeze. Colorful flowers on both sides of the road waved to me frequently, as if nodding to me.

Unconsciously, I boarded the stone bridge in the forest. Standing on the bridge, looking around, white clouds, breeze, sunshine and flowers and willows constitute a colorful spring picture! At this time, I miss playing with my friends in my hometown when I was a child.

Being in this pleasant scenery, I was completely intoxicated. There are passers-by in twos and threes pointing at me in the distance.

They don't know how happy I am! I seem to hear them talking about me and say, "Look at him, he is so old, and he is as busy as a child, playing everywhere!" " "How did they know that I was intoxicated by this beautiful scenery! After many years, I still remember this spring outing vividly. Whenever I recall this incident, I will have a deep nostalgia for my hometown.

7. Rewriting Modern Prose in Spring It's spring again, so I'm going to play in the suburbs.

There are faint white clouds floating in the sky, which look like pieces of white silk dancing from a distance. There is a breeze blowing in front of me, just like a child's tender little hand stroking my cheek. Near noon, the sun radiates warm sunshine and shines warmly on the body.

I walked among the willows. Strong willows are like a huge umbrella. They dance like strong girls, and their waterfall-like hair is swaying in the spring breeze. Colorful flowers on both sides of the road waved to me frequently, as if nodding to me. Unconsciously, I boarded the stone bridge in the forest. Standing on the bridge, looking around, white clouds, breeze, sunshine and flowers and willows constitute a colorful spring picture!

At this time, I miss playing with my friends in my hometown when I was a child. Being in this pleasant scenery, I was completely intoxicated. There are passers-by in twos and threes pointing at me in the distance. They don't know how happy I am! I seem to hear them talking about me and say, "Look at him, he is so old, and he is as busy as a child, playing everywhere!" " "How did they know that I was intoxicated by this beautiful scenery!

After many years, I still remember this spring outing vividly. Whenever I recall this incident, I have a deep nostalgia for my hometown!

8. Rewrite this article into a third-person walk

They are walking in the fields: him, his mother, his wife and son.

Mother doesn't want to come out. She is old and in poor health. She will feel very tired if she goes any further. He said that because of this, he should walk more. Mother nodded convincingly and went to get her coat. She listened to him as he did when he was a child.

The weather is fine. This year's spring has come too late, too late, and some old people can't hold on. But spring has finally come. His mother survived another severe winter.

In this field in the early spring in the south, large tracts of new green are paved at will, some heavy and some light; The buds on the trees are also dense; The winter water in the field is also bubbling. All this reminds people of one thing-life.

He and his mother walked in front, and his wife and son walked behind. The little guy suddenly cried. "There is a mother and son in front and a mother and son behind." They all laughed.

Later, there was a disagreement: mom had to take the main road, and the road was smooth; His son wants to take the path, which is very interesting. But everything depends on him. His mother is old and has long been used to listening to a strong son; The son is still young and used to listening to the tall father; What about his wife? Outside, she always listens to him. For an instant, he felt a great responsibility. He tried to find a way to kill two birds with one stone, but he didn't find it; He wants to break up the family and split it into two parts, each of which has its place, but he doesn't want to. He decided to do his son a favor because he has been with him for a long time. He said, "Take the main road."

But the mother touched her grandson's little brain and changed her mind: "Let's take the path." Her eyes followed the path: golden cauliflower, two rows of neat mulberry trees, and a sparkling fish pond at the end. "Where I can't walk, you carry me." Mother said to him.

In this way, they walked towards cauliflower, mulberry trees and fish ponds in the sun. In one place, he squatted down to carry his mother, and his wife squatted down to carry his son. Although his mother is tall, she is thin and naturally not heavy; Although my son is fat, he is young and naturally light. But he and his wife walked slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what was on his back and what was on her back added up to the whole world.