Help me write an English composition about the weather, not too many words 100 or so.

Shanghai is located in the south of China. In spring, the weather is changeable. Sometimes it's cold, sometimes it's warm. In summer, the weather becomes hotter and hotter. The highest temperature is over 40 degrees. Autumn in Shanghai is very good. It's neither cold nor hot. Winter in Shanghai is not very cold. It seldom snows. But most children look forward to a white Christmas

Shanghai is a city in the south of China. In spring, the weather is changeable. Sometimes the temperature is very low, sometimes it is very high. Summer becomes particularly hot, with the highest temperature above 40 degrees Celsius. The autumn temperature in Shanghai is suitable. Neither too cold nor too hot. Winter in Shanghai is not very cold, and there are few snowy days. However, most children still look forward to a white Christmas.