Ill Sentence Revision (at least 100)

「06? One of the following sentences in Xiangxi is not ill-chosen.

A. Xiao Wang and Xiao Li meet on the road, and he asks him to go to his house in the evening.

B. in an instant, lightning and thunder, storms poured down together.

C the correct use of Chinese characters is what every citizen of China should follow.

D. Designers and craftsmen adapt to local conditions and are ingenious. Successful gardens are naturally different.

「06? Tianjin "is a well-chosen sentence among the following sentences.

A. Red tide has become a worldwide public hazard and frequently occurs in many regions and countries.

China readers learned about Hawking, a famous British physicist, through the book A Brief History of Time.

C Beijing Olympic Organizing Committee held a press conference and held the first Olympic song collection activity.

D. whether you have a firm will is a prerequisite for a person's career success.

「06? Changsha "is a well-chosen sentence among the following sentences.

A. I was greatly encouraged by watching the 47th World Table Tennis Championships.

B. Our education should focus on cultivating students' logical thinking ability and the ability to solve practical problems.

C when we came to the provincial museum, we were all proud to see those dazzling art treasures.

Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is an important guarantee for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.

「06? Zhanjiang "is a well-chosen sentence among the following sentences.

A. students should not make up their compositions.

The name Liu Xiang is a household name in China.

C. Beijing's hosting of the Olympic Games not only shows traditional culture, but also shows spiritual outlook, which can be described as the best of both worlds.

D Through the joint efforts of the whole city, our city won the title of "National Garden City".

「06? Baise "is a good choice among the following sentences."

A. The school gave a speech with the theme of "Eight Honors and Eight Disgraces".

B. unity is the key to doing a good job.

C. Through the "Red Tour" activity, Baise gained a higher reputation.

D When I was studying abroad, I only published a few bad articles in magazines.

「06? Zhenjiang "is a well-chosen sentence among the following sentences.

A. Recently, the relevant departments issued a notice asking all localities to guard against security problems during the senior high school entrance examination.

B. I object to sending my son to an aristocratic kindergarten because I hope that my son will not ruin himself in a rich living environment and let him be vigorous, honest and hard-working from an early age.

C. Protecting children's rights is the original intention of setting up Children's Day. This essence is not out of date at all today, and adults still need to reflect from time to time.

D. Although the curtain of life slowly opens, in the eyes of teenagers, the world and the future are brand-new and full of charm.

「06? Yangzhou "is a well-chosen sentence among the following sentences.

A. In order to promote cross-strait exchanges and cooperation, the mainland will further adopt 15 policy measures to benefit compatriots in Taiwan Province Province.

B during the B.2006 world cup in Germany, the fan festival held by the host city of 12 will become a holiday resort for fans after the central stadium.

C With the completion of the main project of the Three Gorges Dam, the world's largest water conservancy project will play the role of flood control, power generation and shipping two years ahead of schedule.

Building a new socialist countryside is the key to building a harmonious socialist society and a long-term and arduous historical task.

「06? Taizhou "is a well-chosen sentence in the following sentence.

A. In order to reduce the influence degree and scope of traffic noise on the Beijing Olympic Village, the researchers have worked out a general noise control plan.

B. The reason why the comprehensive quality of young singers is not high is that many singers ignore cultural learning.

C "Poincare conjecture", which has been concerned by international mathematicians for hundreds of years, has been completely solved by scientists in China recently.

D. When writing a composition, middle school students should carefully observe all kinds of things and phenomena, have real feelings and avoid making them up at will.

「06? Yancheng "is a good choice among the following sentences.

A. not running a red light is an important symbol to measure the quality of a citizen.

In a conservation-oriented society, people's effective use of resources has been further improved.

C as a media, the internet must undertake the responsibility of social education.

Resolutely crack down on the production and sale of pirated audio-visual products and earnestly safeguard intellectual property rights.

「06? Yunnan "is the wrong one in the following sentences.

A. Reading excellent literary works can not only increase knowledge, but also enrich emotions.

B. The poem "Flowers in Spring City" is not written for Kunming, but it can also reflect the characteristics of Kunming.

C. Emotional pollution means that one person's mood affects the good mood of others.

D Peking University jumped to 15 in the "2005 Global University Ranking" published by The Times, ranking first in Asia.

Challenge the B-level training for the senior high school entrance examination.

「06? Liupanshui revised the following sick sentences.

According to a recent survey, about 65% of teenagers in China believe that "honesty and trustworthiness" and "helping others" are excellent traditional virtues and the basic principles of being a person.

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「06? Taiyuan "modifies the following ill sentences.

(1) Whenever I hear the song "Lucky Three Treasures", I always feel very warm in my heart.

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(2) Extensive extracurricular reading is the key to improve students' Chinese level.

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「06? Dalian "modifies the following ill sentences.

(1) Reading famous books broadens my horizons and improves my writing level.

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(2) Only by understanding the social background of literary works can we better understand its connotation.

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「06? The following sentences of "Shandong" are all wrong. Correct them on the horizontal line.

In the lecture (1), space hero Fei and Nie Haisheng told many stories about Shenzhou VI to the students.

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(2) The policy of exempting agricultural tax has improved the living conditions of farmers.

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「06? The following sentences in Liaoning are all wrong. Correct them on the horizontal line.

(1) Due to the strengthened management, the social security and hidden dangers in our city have been guaranteed.

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I have been studying hard since the day I went to school.

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「06? The following Lanzhou dialect is a sick sentence, please modify it.

Correct viewpoints, rich materials and fluent language are important criteria to measure the quality of an article.

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「06? Jiuquan revised the following ill sentences, each with only one place.

(1) The West Lake in summer is a good season for people to enjoy the cool and study in summer.

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(2) In order to avoid the outbreak of infectious diseases after the earthquake, the local governments in the affected areas have made great efforts.

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Challenge the C-level training in the senior high school entrance examination

「06? There is something wrong with the underlined sentence in Chongqing. Please correct it on the horizontal line.

One day, a father took his little son on a trip to the countryside, hoping to let him know how the poor live. After the trip, my father asked, "Do you know how the poor people lived this time?" The son replied, "I found that there is only one pool leading to the center of our flower bed, but they have an endless river;" There are only a few lights in our garden, but there are stars all over the sky; Our yard is as small as that one, but theirs is as big as the whole farm! " When the son finished speaking, the father was speechless. The son went on to say, "thank you for letting me know how poor we are!" "

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「06? There are three underlined sentences in the following paragraph of Huai 'an, and two of them are wrong. Please find out the sick sentences first and modify them one by one. Words can be added, deleted or replaced, but the meaning expressed in the original sentence cannot be changed. )

Huai 'an, where four waters cross the city and rivers and lakes crisscross, is a "land on water" and has the reputation of a water town. Although Huai 'an is rich in water resources, there are also hidden concerns in its treasure, protection and utilization. Therefore, it is urgent to cherish, protect and utilize water resources. ③ In order to achieve sustainable development and strive to build a "harmony between people and water", we should start from ourselves, from now on, and from saving water.

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「06? Wuhu "is an enrollment poster for a foreign language training class. The underlined sentences are wrong, please correct them one by one.

Words that I can't recite, sentence patterns that I can't learn, I don't know why I still can't open my mouth after learning English for so many years. I bought so many English books and attended so many cram schools, but I don't know why it hasn't worked. (1) Learn again and again, and give up again and again.

These days, there are many telephone calls for English training in Gleiter, and a large number of students come to our school every day. The scene is extremely hot. Everyone is talking about the great changes brought by the natural mother tongue learning method in Gleiter. Many students have been able to talk fluently with foreign teachers in a short time. More people lament that if you master this learning method earlier, you won't take so many detours and waste so much money.

If you are worried that you don't have time to attend the traditional training, or you are worried that the learning method is wrong, try an efficient and brand-new learning method of Gleiter's native English!

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「06? There are two grammatical mistakes in the following paragraph in Kunming, please correct them one by one.

Reading famous books is really a pleasure. It brings me endless happiness and keeps me away from troubles and worries. Reading famous books is also a kind of spiritual comfort, which helps me to overcome loneliness and guide me to know good, evil, beauty and ugliness. By reading famous books, I understand the meaning and value of life. Friends, let's read the classics together! Because reading a lot of famous books is the key to improving personal accomplishment.

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「06? There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph of Nantong. Please find and correct them.

As a new media for people to obtain information and interact, the rapid development of the Internet has met the material and cultural living standards of the broad masses. However, with the rapid development of the Internet, some websites are also harmful to society, such as spreading unhealthy information and providing uncivilized audio services. ③ Creating a healthy and civilized network culture environment and eliminating bad information has also become an urgent need for spiritual civilization construction in the new period.

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「06? There are three sentences in the next paragraph of Hangzhou, each of which has language defects. Please correct it.

The first National Youth Essay Contest, jointly organized by the Language Application Management Department of the Ministry of Education and the Office of the China Care for the Next Generation Working Committee, was launched in May this year. The purpose of holding the National Youth Essay Contest is to comprehensively improve the language application ability of young people. The winners of this competition will be officially announced at the award ceremony held in the Great Hall of the People in Beijing in late August this year.

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「06? There are two grammatical mistakes in the following passage in Weihai. Please find out and correct it.

Recently, Huang Jie, Vice Minister of Health, pointed out that medical dereliction of duty and corruption occurred frequently in various places, mainly because of the lagging reform of China's medical and health system and the low professional ethics of medical and health teams. ② In order to protect people's health rights and improve medical quality, we must solve and face up to the main problems existing in current hospital management.

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「06? There are language defects in the following paragraph in Weifang, please correct it.

When we rode over the mountains and headed for Argentina, we met an obstacle under the green vault formed by towering trees: it was the root of a big tree, which blocked our way and was higher than our mount. We had a lot of trouble and finally got through with an axe.

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「06? There are two grammatical errors in Chongqing underlined sentences. Please point out and correct it.

Material 1: The word "gossip" often appears in various media. Many people and even some famous radio and television presenters pronounce "Fei" as "fěi", but the correct pronunciation is "fěI".

Material 2: ② A survey was conducted among the students of Grade One and Grade Two in a middle school. The results are as follows: among the 45 students in the class, 39 people think that the "non" of "gossip" is pronounced as "F ē i", and 6 people think that it is pronounced as "Fē i"; The former also thinks that Fei is a polyphonic word, which is pronounced as "fěi" in Bagua and "fēi" in Jiang.

Material 3: The survey results also show that students' cognition of "gossip" comes from watching TV, internet and radio entertainment programs, and the word "scarlet" is acquired through formal classes.

Material 4: In some news reports, the word "gossip" is often misspelled as "scandal". For example, 4 fabricating a colleague scandal was sentenced to 3000 yuan.

There are two grammatical mistakes in the underlined sentence. Please point out and correct it.

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「06? There are three underlined sentences in the following paragraph of Baotou, and two of them are wrong. Please find out the sick sentences first and modify them one by one.

There are many reasons why junk bestsellers sell well, either to satisfy readers' curiosity, or as a supplement to temporary news, or to show off, but their characteristics are short-lived and may not stand up to careful scrutiny. They live for quick success and die for quick success. Walking through the old book stalls on the street, you will often find their traces. (3) They are travel-stained and mixed in some old magazines, without their arrogance.

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「06? There are three underlined sentences in Nantong, two of which are wrong. Please find out the sick sentences first and modify them one by one.

The influence of books on people is subtle. In a word, reading can not only improve yourself, but also increase your knowledge. Generally speaking, reading can improve the quality of the Chinese nation. Let books overflow every corner of society and life, and be a happy reader.

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1. (Zhejiang Province, 2005) One of the following sentences is ()

A China is considering building five cross-sea tunnels in the next 20 to 30 years.

B. air pollution affects the sowing, planting and harvesting of crops.

C. The mystery was finally solved in the first national wetland park.

D. Lien Chan and James Soong's visit to the mainland caused great repercussions in Taiwan Province Province.

2. (Huzhou, 2005) The following sentence is ()

A community hopes to prevent people from wasting electricity by carrying out energy-saving education.

Not only students but also young teachers like this kind of game.

We should guide young people to see the world with beautiful eyes and feel the world with beautiful hearts.

Through this social practice, we have honed our will and increased our knowledge.

3. (Heze City, 2005) One of the following sentences is ()

A. After Beijing's successful bid for the Olympic Games, I sprouted the desire to learn foreign languages well. In 2008, I went to Beijing as a volunteer to serve the Olympic Games.

B: I grew up in a drama family, and Henan opera is no stranger to me.

C. Don't think that rocks are indestructible; they are attacked from all directions all the time.

D. After technological innovation, the cost of material factory doubled, while the output value increased by 10%.

4. (Suizhou City, 2005) Among the following sentences, () is not bad.

A. Since Suizhou became a prefecture-level city, the economic and social development situation is very good. The Municipal Party Committee hopes that painters and literary and art workers will go deep into the factory community and create more and better works for the people of the city.

B In recent years, various well-made public service advertisements have been landing on Suizhou main roads.

C. Whether there is a good class spirit and style of study is one of the criteria to measure an excellent class.

D. Teachers often say that the senior high school entrance examination is a key step in life, and this step must be done well.

5. (Wenzhou City, 2005) Among the following sentences, () is not bad.

A. We should cultivate the virtue of honesty and trustworthiness from an early age.

Through hard work, our city was rated as "Top Ten Economic Vibrant Cities in China in 2004".

C. After listening to the report on Li Xuesheng's heroic deeds, my heart could not be calm for a long time.

D. At the concert, smiling faces were immersed in joy.

6. (Nantong, 2005) Among the following sentences, the one with poor language is ().

A. In order to make China's economy develop continuously and healthily, the CPC Central Committee has made macro-control on the growth rate of the national economy.

B. CCTV will focus on the growing environment of minors and call on the society to pay more attention to minors.

C. In the information age, whether a person can read quickly and capture effective information determines the size of a person's achievements.

D With the improvement of Nantong's popularity, tourism projects with the characteristics of rivers and seas are increasingly favored by many foreign tourists.

7. (Ziyang, 2005) One of the following sentences is ()

A. when you are in the spring breeze, you should not be complacent because of a little achievement, let praise go to your head, and you should not be cynical about your superior conditions.

Whether you can overcome your own ideological weakness is the key to a person's career success.

C. After this interesting experiment, I like biology class.

Meteors are whispers. When approaching the earth, it is attracted by the strong gravity of the earth and enters the atmosphere at a speed of tens of kilometers per second.

8. (Taizhou City, 2005) Among the following sentences, () is well chosen and has a clear meaning.

A. It is the key to implement quality education to effectively reduce the excessive learning burden of primary and secondary school students.

B. Mr. Mei Lanfang, a famous Peking Opera performer, is from Taizhou, Jiangsu.

C. Not only Zhang Ming knows this, but also the whole class knows it.

D. Several school leaders are studying how to strengthen students' ideological and moral education.

9. (Yancheng City, 2005) Among the following sentences, () is not bad.

A. In today's increasingly frequent international cultural exchanges, we should fully inherit and carry forward China's cultural traditions.

B At the Spring Festival party, Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, a large-scale dance performed by the disabled, won unanimous praise from the audience.

C on weekends, everyone must pay attention to traffic safety when going out for an outing to prevent accidents.

D strengthening the ideological and moral construction of minors is an important and urgent task for schools, families and society.

10. (Beijing, 2005) In the following ill sentences, the incorrect modification is ().

A. Since he entered middle school, he has been training for the school track and field team.

Correction: Delete "always" or "always".

B. Through this violin competition, her self-confidence has been enhanced.

Amendment: Delete "pass" or "make".

C. at retirement age, he is still full of energy and strong body.

Revision: Change "robust" to "rich".

D. We should make use of all outstanding achievements of mankind to serve the construction of the motherland.

Revision: Put "everything" after "human".

1 1. (Jiaxing, 2005) The following sentence is wrong, please correct it in the original sentence.

(1) The reduction or exemption of agricultural taxes by local governments is one of the reasons why farmers' income has increased year by year.

⑵ It is our strategic decision to actively participate in the cooperation and exchange activities in the Yangtze River Delta region and actively dock with Shanghai.

12. (Lanzhou, 2005) Modify the following sentences:

(1) After several months of study, everyone has mastered the technology of using computers.

(2) In today's study, what we lack is not cleverness, but lack of effort and perseverance.

13. (Luoyang, 2005) Modify the following sick sentences.

(1) I will tell you the details about it later.

(2) Whether you can study hard is the key to improve your academic performance.

14. (Yangzhou, 2005) The following two sentences are wrong. Please correct the original sentence.

The great changes in Yangzhou in recent years are very familiar to the general public.

② Xu Benyu, a college student, went to Dashi Primary School in Guizhou mountainous area to teach. Through his efforts, the school's running situation has been improved.

15. (Huangshi City, 2005) Use symbols to modify the following ill sentences, and only change one place in each sentence.

(1) In summer, Xiandao Lake is a good opportunity for people to enjoy the summer and study.

(2) In order to avoid the outbreak of infectious diseases after the tsunami, countries all over the world and local governments in the affected areas of the Indian Ocean have made great efforts.

16. (Suzhou, 2005) There are two wonderful revisions in the article What's in the Universe. Some of the following sentences are pre-modified and some are modified. Choose the sentence you think has been modified and fill it in the horizontal line of the original text (only write the serial number), and then tell me why you want to change it like this.

It takes tens of thousands of years! Although the stars are big, almost every star can hold millions of earths (only a few are smaller than the earth), and in the vast space, it may be even smaller.

A.what a vast ocean. What a vast space.

C. these stars are like sand in the sea. These stars are like water drops in the sea.

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17. (Hangzhou, 2005) There are three sentences in the following paragraph, each with language defects. Please correct it.

(1) Recently, at the 2005 Flower Show held in Hong Kong, the "Liuhe Bell" made by Qianjiang Management Office in Hangzhou won the "Design Award for Large Garden Attractions". "Liuhe Bell", as an entry in Hangzhou, embodies the producer's hard work for more than half a month. The judges believe that Liuhe Zhong won the prize because of its exquisite conception, full image and the most Jiangnan characteristics.

18. (Changzhou, 2005) The following is a drug advertisement in a newspaper. According to the requirements of the text, modify it directly in the original text with the specified symbols.

① A new generation of green Chinese medicine, Qingxin Anshen Granule, was developed by China Academy of Medical Sciences, Beijing United Institute of Traditional Chinese Medicine and other scientific research units after eight years of clinical case follow-up. ② This medicine is of high quality and safety, and has achieved 65,438+0,000% curative effect on intractable insomnia, depression, neurosis and other mental diseases. Especially for patients who have drug dependence after taking western medicine for a long time, they can get rid of drug dependence. People in the medical field regard this drug as the savior of mental patients, and it is a new type of drug with the international leading level at present. Patients can basically recover after taking 2 to 3 courses of treatment.

Requirements: (1) Sentence ① There is a language barrier and a word must be deleted.

(2) Sentence (2) There are many punctuation and expression errors. Please choose a place to correct it.

19. (Jinhua City, 2005) The following is a paragraph that a classmate said to Xiaoming on the phone. Please modify the numbered sentences as necessary.

Xiao Ming, (1) write a manuscript for the publication of our school literature club at once! At the same time, please encourage your classmates to contribute actively in class. The style of the manuscript is not limited, and innovation is advocated. ② It should be no less than 600 words. (3) After the article is written, it must be handed over to the editorial department of the school magazine or directly to me.

(1) The first sentence is duplicated, and the word to be deleted is _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

(2) The second sentence is self-contradictory and should be changed to _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

(3) An inappropriate word in the third sentence is _ _ _ _ _, which should be changed to _ _ _ _ _.

20. (Shaanxi Province, 2005) Read the following passage carefully, find out the mistakes and correct them.

Life is like a colorful song. Let's learn to judge, associate, chew and appreciate. Taste every peony jasmine, and the national color and fragrance float in different realms; Lenovo's ups and downs of life, even if it is windy and rainy, is also chic and calm; Chew the ordinary and great life, the heroic and magnificent life is the life of the sea, and the leisurely and agile life is the life of the stream. Appreciating the ups and downs of the moon and the joys and sorrows of the world, every scenery is a kind of beauty, and every sentiment is a special harvest.

2 1. (Guangdong province, 2005) There is something wrong with the underlined part in the following paragraph, please correct it in the original text.

A program broadcast on the travel channel on May 4th was protested by many animal protectors. In this program, ① a cat was dropped from the fourth floor as an experiment to confirm whether the cat was still safe after falling from a height. According to relevant data, ② Even if the cat can quickly adjust its posture and land on all fours during falling, it can only play a certain buffering role, ③ it still can't completely avoid fracture and internal organ rupture. Animal protectors expressed their anger at the cruelty to animals program. Today, the person in charge of the program center of the travel channel said that there will be no live animal experiments in the future, and he apologized to the audience.

22. (Jiangxi Province, 2005) Read the following advertisement fragment of a shopping mall: "May Day" Golden Week, and complete the related topics.

During the activity, in order to thank us for our care and love for customers for many years, the mall gave back 500 thousand yuan to consumers; At the same time, the mall will provide (a) home delivery services (b), (c) and (d) to local customers who buy large household appliances.

(1) The underlined sentence in the paragraph is not properly selected and should be changed to:

(2) In order to make the meaning clear, the word "free" should be added in places A, B, C and D. ..

23. (Henan Province, 2005) Revise the underlined sentences in the following paragraphs to make them semantically coherent and free from language errors.

Time is a magical and ruthless meat cleaver, creating a miracle between heaven and earth. It can melt hard ice into spring water and support seedlings into big trees. Of course, you can also turn the garden into a desert, and A can turn the ruins into cities. If you cherish it, it will grow shade around you and bear heavy fruit; You ignore it, it becomes light smoke, and B disappears.

Correction: a: b:

24. (Zhenjiang City, 2005) There are five language errors in the underlined part of the following paragraph. Please choose three of them to correct.

A few years ago, ① Changhong Electric Appliance Factory took the lead in reducing the price when the color TV market was seriously unsalable. Although the loss, but the production and marketing double harvest, ③ economic benefits quickly jumped to the first place in the same industry in China. Through the management concept of Changhong Electric Appliance Factory, we have learned a truth: ⑤ If an enterprise is good at using the strategy of "losing money to earn money", it can make great achievements and add icing on the cake; 6. On the other hand, stick to the frame of "only earning but not losing" and refuse to sacrifice the petty profits in front of you, otherwise you will lose your blood in the end.

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