English composition: weather forecast

It will be cloudy tomorrow, sometimes with light rain, 23 degrees Celsius to 28 degrees Celsius, and the northeast wind is 4-5.

Or:

It is predicted that there will be showers or thunderstorms this week due to the weak cold front from south to north of 12, and there may be easterly rainstorm accompanied by showers due to the typhoon "Senlake" from 13. It is expected to be rainy for 2-3 days this week, with a maximum temperature of 32 degrees.

Ps: not necessarily correct.