Write a 700-word composition with the method of promoting first and restraining second.

1. Write an article about someone who cares about me in 700 words, my mother.

The thread in the loving mother's hand made clothes for her wayward son's body. She sewed it carefully and repaired it thoroughly, fearing that it would delay him coming home late, but how much love did an inch of grass win? "It is said that there is one of the kindest and greatest women in the world. She is our mother. It is said that there is one of the most beautiful and gentle voices in the world, and that is the mother's call to her children. It is said that there is one of the greatest, most selfless and hardworking people in the world. She is still our mother!

I'll give you another message, but don't tell my mother! My mother is a very talkative person, and her nagging is handed down from my grandmother, but my mother is "

",nagging than my grandmother! If I finish my homework at the weekend and want to watch TV for a while, it will be a terrible crime for my mother, and my mother will definitely.

Come and say to me: "Xiao Ming, mom is not forcing you to study, but you are graduating from primary school immediately and want to get into a good middle school." How can this work? " Go and read a book! ""Xiao Ming, I usually object to your watching TV. What are you doing? Watch TV when you play chess and computer! "Wait, my ears are going to be calloused, and my mother is still chattering.

Generally speaking, sometimes I can't help but give my mother advice. My mother always looks at me helplessly: "Where have I been nagging?" Whenever I see her face full of doubt, my lips are speechless.

For my study, my mother has always been a time system, that is, the amount of homework and time are stipulated, so that I must complete the task within such a time. Even if I finish it ahead of schedule, I will sit there and grind out the time even if I sit. This is my mother's attitude before, so her grades have improved rapidly! It's just that after I told her, it stopped. I still adopt my father's task system, that is, I don't specify the time, I only specify the task. As long as I finish and feel qualified, I'm finished!

My mother taught me to study hard since I was a child. When I was a child, I always found her annoying. Card I am a primary school student now, and I should be sensible. Mom is for me, because I want to study hard, and I hope I can get into a good high school. In the sixth grade, I just wanted to play, not study. However, I thought a lot this summer vacation. My mother was in poor health and needed exercise, but she gave up.

How hard it is to get up at 5 am and make breakfast for me! I want to study hard for my mother's sake. There has been a power outage for one day in recent days, and the weather is very hot. When I came home for dinner at noon, I said, "It's so hot." Mom quickly picked up the fan and gave it to me. I was too excited to speak at that time. When I leave for a good meal, she often tells me: ride slowly, watch the car and study hard! "I nodded my head. Since I promised my mother to study hard, I should do it. There are also bits and pieces of getting along with my mother, and I can't finish talking for a day and a night. You should, too, so be obedient and don't live up to the hopes of teachers and parents. You should study hard.

Maybe this is just a trivial matter in the eyes of many people, but when you think about it, don't these trivial things also contain a mother's affection?

Dear mom!

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I have an "ice face" father. Why did I say my dad was ice? Because he always has only one expression, cold.

I remember when I was a child, I stumbled and my father took me to the park to play. I was walking when I came across a small stone. I slipped and fell to my knees. I cried and cried for my father, waiting for a pair of warm hands to pick me up, but as time passed, there was still no one to help me. I looked up, and my father looked at me coldly in the distance, without any intention of coming. I struggled to get up and ran to my father. "Hoo!" I fell down again, very pitiful, but my father still didn't come over. Time and again, I fell and fell, but my father never came to help me, so I never felt my father's love.

And now, dad still does this to me.

I took part in the Olympic math class at school. Once, the teacher assigned us several questions. I tried to think of them, but I couldn't think of them. I have to turn to my father, who used to be good at math. He said three words to me calmly: "Think for yourself." I thought hard and tried many methods, and finally succeeded. "Hum, I don't care about anything in my father's life, even my study!"

Later, my math scores also improved a lot, even being the first in the whole year. In retrospect, my father taught me so much: failure is the mother of success, and I will stand up from where I fell. Besides, there is more than one road to success. If this method doesn't work, you can change it. There is always a way that will work and put you on the road to success.

"Ice" Dad, now I understand that you are instructing me how to be a man and how to solve the difficulties in life. Thank you, Dad!

3. Write a 600-word composition describing the characters in a way that you want to praise first. The writer's writing skill is to praise first: cadence shows that "to praise first and suppress first" is a kind of character description skill, which means that the author belittles him at the beginning of the article and praises him when the time is ripe, that is, the author first has a certain view on the object of description, and then denies the original view for some reason and draws a conclusion.

The "suppression" here paves the way for "Yang" and makes "Yang" more powerful and prominent. The method of "restraining first and then promoting" is a reflection of the author's thoughts, feelings and emotional changes, which shows that people's understanding rules are from shallow to deep, from the outside to the inside, and gradually deepen.

If this method is used properly in writing, it can make the plot of the article changeable, ups and downs, swaying and moving, form obvious contrast before and after the article, and leave a profound object for the reader, thus enhancing the positive expression effect of the characters. Test score 1. People and things that you want to promote first can be written as long as they are used properly. 2. As a whole, handle the relationship between "inhibition" and "promotion", which cannot be equated, and should emphasize "promotion" rather than "inhibition".

3. "Restraint" and "Yang" are in sharp contrast, and strong contrast can leave a deep impression on readers. The "Old Dumb" (novel) written by Fan Wen, a candidate from Jiangsu Province, meanders among the mountains. It is the lifeblood of the town and the only communication channel between the people of the town and the outside world.

That boat, which has experienced many vicissitudes, is the only means of transportation in the town. It is because of the river and the boat that we can find the touching story of the ferryman.

His unkempt hair, small eyes and flat nose are disproportionately embedded in a wrinkled face-he is so ugly that people call him "old mute" because he is born unable to speak. I don't know when the old mute became the only ferryman in town.

He silently took a pole that many people didn't want to take, and walked in the wind and rain every day, sending away one villager after another in the town without interruption. The old ferry full of nameless wildflowers was covered with his stumbling footprints.

The old mute doesn't get paid for his work. He never asks for anything. People call him a "fool". That day, the villagers and I came to the ferry, and the old mute sat alone in the wild flowers and stared at the sky.

"Old dumb! Sail! " The villagers gave a cry, and "Ya Ya" answered. He quickly untied the rope and set sail. The boat walked slowly, with reeds and horsetail grass swaying in the breeze.

In order to avoid seeing the old dumb face, I deliberately sat at the stern and quietly played with water. Unexpectedly, I accidentally dropped my newly bought slippers into the river, and I was so anxious that I shouted, because my mother bought them this morning, and I was sure to be scolded if I lost them.

While being transported, the old mute jumped into the river, and soon the slippers were thrown into my hand. I was so excited that I almost cried, and even said "thank you, old mute" smoothly. Everyone in the village laughed, which embarrassed me.

This spring, I came to that small mountain village again, and the shadow of the old man had disappeared. A few days later, I heard an extraordinary story about the old man from the villagers. After rescuing a drowning child, the deaf-mute ferryman finally rested quietly in the river that accompanied him through thousands of ships.

When I walked across the ferry again, I felt so deeply about the old man. It is this river that makes me see his beautiful and moving side. Standing quietly on the ferry, I said softly in my heart, "Thank you, uncle."

4. Write a 600-word composition about people by encouraging first and then restraining. My father's hand touched my heart. At night, I fell asleep, the door was quietly opened, and I was confused when I saw my father coming. He covered me with a quilt with his warm big hands, and I was immediately warmed by the chill.

When I was a child, I liked my father's hands. Although they are rough and hurt a little when touching me, I don't mind. I like my father's hands.

After school, my father's hands are a pair of comforting hands. When I am bullied or wronged, my father often touches my furry little head with those kind and warm hands. When he said something comforting, I smiled at once. Isn't that because I love dad's hands?

Finally, time passed little by little and matured. I can no longer rely on my father's hand to comfort me, but the heavy study has gradually made me forget my father's hand, the rich feelings and the infinite memories contained in it.

But when I often find more scars on my father's hands, I can't help but feel very sad. I thought again, can I really forget those hands? That's my father's hand!

The big exam is coming. In the evening, I was so tired and upset that I burned the midnight oil. Why does my father revolve around me again? The more impatient I am.

Father habitually reached out and touched my head. After all, I can't stand it. I suddenly turned my head and shouted at my father, "You are so annoying! Can't you see I'm busy? " My father was stunned first, then smiled and said, "OK, OK, I'll go, I'll go."

I can't forget my father's smile. Why does my father laugh? Laughter makes me feel guilty, because my father's smile is obviously helpless and sad. My heart is no longer calm.

In fact, I am tired and don't want my father's hand to touch me and comfort me! At this time, my heart was shaken. Yes, I really can't forget my father's hands My heart is calling ...

5. Describe a person's maternal love with the writing technique of wanting to be promoted first. Author: Zou, 60 1 class instructor of Wujiagang Primary School in Yichang Source: Network (composition network) Does maternal love just give us delicious and fun love? No, at least not for me. Motherly love is varied. One thing before, I don't understand the meaning of this sentence. When I was very young, I accidentally fell down in kindergarten and lost a lot of blood. I went home and cried to my mother. I thought my mother would say, "Oh, what's going on!" Come on, mom, let me show you and give you some medicine. "But unexpectedly, my mother said something that I will never forget:" What's the matter? Oh, nothing. It's just a minor injury. What are you afraid of? Just apply some medicine. "I was surprised and sad after hearing this. Mom certainly doesn't like me. That's what I was thinking. I secretly cry when I sleep at night. I heard my mother say, "You know what? The child will grow up soon. She can't rely on us anymore. Sooner or later, she will live alone. What should I do if she is hurt? "I suddenly understood that my mother loves me. She did it for my own good! I cried again, but this time my tears were not grievances, but gratitude! Because of my mother's words, I never bow in the face of difficulties: I don't do well in the math exam, so I should study hard at home and try to do well in the next exam ... I also know that people are destined to live independently all their lives and cannot rely on their parents. So, I will solve a small matter by myself now and solve it to the best! Is maternal love just delicious and fun love for us? No, at least not for me. Mother's love is diverse, selfless and great! This article wants to write about the mother's true maternal love, but it is typical to write about the mother's good intentions first. The reason why I choose primary school students' compositions is to avoid direct plagiarism. Of course, you wouldn't do that. You can rewrite or expand on this basis. Junior high school students are better than primary school students.