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Beijing is a big city. It is the capital of China and a capital city with a long history.

(Ancient means "ancient", and Beijing is still the capital, so "historic" is used here)

Beijing is one of the oldest cities in China.

Beijing is not the only city with the longest history, but just one of them, which is in line with historical facts.

Beijing has a history of about 3000 years.

(This is an authentic English expression)

It's in the north of China.

Beijing is in the north, not in the east.

The population of Beijing is about170,000. It is the second largest population in China.

It is said that Beijing is one of the largest cities and here is the second largest, which is illogical. In terms of population, it is better to change it to the second largest.

Beijing is a good place to visit. It is famous for the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. Beijing is a modern international city.

Beijing has long been a modern international city, not "becoming".

It's 2008. The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in August. Although it will be a little hot in August, it is very attractive anyway.

This year is 2008. Typical Chinglish has been revised. Although the weather in August is hot, we can't just talk about it if we want to put forward its advantages. It's a little hot in August, but Beijing is still charming.