Ren rewrites his works.

In life, work and study, people often come into contact with composition. According to the different writing time limit, composition can be divided into limited composition and unlimited composition. So have you ever studied composition? The following is the rewritten composition of "Zhou Du An Ren" compiled by me for your reference only. Welcome to reading.

The boat crossed Anren to rewrite the composition 1 The sparkling lake rippled round and round. Sister Liu by the lake used this clear water as a mirror to gently comb her hair. The sun shines on the lake, and there are golden waves on the lake, and ripples are naughty floating on the lake; Look, the little fish in the water are playing happily; Listen, birds are constantly enjoying the beautiful scenery. On the banks of the river, the green grass is dense, and when the breeze blows, the grass dances beautifully. The mountains in the distance are undulating, just like a charming landscape painting, which makes people feel relaxed and happy.

Suddenly, a burst of laughter broke the silent scenery. There is a boat floating in the distance, and there are two laughing children sitting on it. They are very cute and chubby. One of the children put away the bamboo pole, stopped the paddle and sat in the middle of the fishing boat. One child said to another, "The boat is now in the middle of the lake. What can we do to make it walk without paddles or poles? " Another child is holding his chin and quietly trying to find a way; Oh, yes! We use umbrellas to push the boat forward. " With that, he quickly took out his umbrella from the cabin and opened it. He held it high and let the wind blow on it. The wind pushed the fishing boat. In this way, the fishing boat moved slowly.

Passers-by saw it, and they all thought in surprise that it wouldn't rain now. What are these two children doing with umbrellas? Oh, no wonder everyone takes umbrellas when it doesn't rain. Originally, it was not to shelter from the wind and rain, but to use the wind to let the ship move forward. When these passers-by figured it out, they couldn't help praising the two children, saying that they were smart and admirable.

When these passers-by looked back again, their fishing boats had gone away, leaving only some ripples on the water. ...

Yang Wanli, a great poet in the Song Dynasty, likes to travel around the mountains. Once, he passed by Anren and was attracted by the picturesque scenery here. He decided to visit here for two days, so he found an inn to stay.

The next afternoon, it was sunny. Yang Wanli decided to go to the river to see the beautiful scenery. On arriving at the river, Yang Wanli was intoxicated by the beautiful scenery. In the distance, the towering peaks rise and fall, and the green is absolutely dripping; Lush reeds on the water, lush; Colorful fish in the water are carefree. ...

"Gege-"a burst of laughter was introduced to Yang Wanli's ear, and he sought success. I saw two children sitting on a small fishing boat in the river, with the fishing rod flat at the stern. Strangely, this small fishing boat neither punted nor rowed. Only two children sat side by side in the bow. One is wearing a white shirt, one is wearing a red pocket, and the other is wearing a white shirt outside. The child is holding an open bamboo umbrella. Yang Wanli was stunned and thought: What are these two children doing? It didn't rain. What are they doing with umbrellas? He bowed his head and was silent for a while, then smiled and said to himself, "These two children are so clever. They have come up with a good idea to use the power of the wind to make the boat move forward." It was getting late, and Yang Wanli returned to the inn and found the scene on the river in the afternoon very interesting. So I wrote a poem:

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One-leaf fishing boat, two children,

The pole is in the boat.

It's strange to have an umbrella without rain.

It's not covering your head, it's creating wind.

In summer, on a sunny afternoon, on the quiet lake, patches of dense reeds are floating in the wind, and microwaves burst on the lake. This beautiful place is by a quiet lake. A boatload of Yang Wanli was deeply fascinated by them and intoxicated by them.

Just as the poet slowly shifted his sight, a small fishing boat came into view. Two lovely children are boating and playing on a small fishing boat. The poet decided to see what they wanted to do and planned to write a wonderful poem with them. When he thought of this, the poet observed it more carefully.

Two children are playing. Suddenly, one child discussed with another for a while, stopped the boat, put away the bamboo poles and paddles for rowing, and opened a beautiful bamboo umbrella. But it's not raining now. When the poet saw this scene, he was very confused.

The poet thought for a moment, as if he had thought of something, and couldn't help exclaiming, "How clever these two children are! Rewrite the boat crossing Anren. No wonder the umbrella is open when it doesn't rain. It turned out that it was not to shelter from the rain, but to use an umbrella to let the wind push the boat forward! "

The poet admired two children and wrote a poem:

One-leaf fishing boat, two children,

The pole is in the boat.

It's strange to have an umbrella without rain.

It's not covering your head, it's creating wind.

Zhou Du An Ren rewrites composition 4 In the autumn, the scenery is pleasant. Taking advantage of the crisp autumn, I went to Beijing to do business and relax myself.

It was a long way, so I went down the river. When the boat passed Anren, I was thirsty, so I asked the boatman to buy some fruit, and I sat in the pavilion by the lake and waited for him.

I don't know if this pavilion is too close to the market, or because there are many people in the market and business is busy. I can hear those noisy voices sitting here. It seems that a vendor selling calligraphy and painting is shouting: There are some original works of Yang Wanli, come and see them and buy them! The words sound just fell, only to hear the crowd mixed with rushing footsteps. I thought to myself: my calligraphy and painting are so sought after, and I'm sitting here but nobody cares. This world is really realistic. Why hasn't the boatman come back yet?

At this time, a cool breeze blew and I couldn't help looking at the lake. I saw a small fishing boat on the lake. There are two children on it. They are putting away bamboo poles, stopping oars and holding umbrellas. It didn't rain at this time, but why did they stop for an umbrella? I can't figure it out. Another cool breeze is coming, oh! In doing so, they don't want to shelter from the rain, but want to let the ship sail forward with the help of the wind! Really naughty and clever. Thought of here, my mood can not help but be cheerful, suddenly full of poetry. I wrote what I saw and heard in front of me into a poem, "Boating in Peace", which was engraved on the pavilion post.

Just after the carving, the boatman came back. Sorry to keep your husband waiting! Get on the boat! . In this way, I embarked on a journey again.

Once, when Yang Wanli, a poet of the Song Dynasty, passed by Anren County by boat, he saw the green grass on both sides of the river like a bright green carpet, flowers everywhere, singing and dancing, and everything was so vibrant and prosperous.

Zhou Guoan wrote 500 words. Deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery, he couldn't help getting out of the cabin and standing at the bow looking up. At this time, the spring breeze brushed my face, and the flowers smelled fragrant. I was refreshed and relaxed. So, he opened his arms, breathed the fresh air deeply and enjoyed the beautiful scenery given to nature by this spring.

Suddenly, a crisp song came into my ears. I looked intently and saw a small fishing boat on the river not far away. There are two lively and lovely boys sitting on the bow. They rowed and punted while singing loudly. After a while, the two children suddenly stopped singing, then put away the bamboo poles and paddles of the punting, ran into the cabin, took out an umbrella and stood at the bow, spreading it out. "Ah, it doesn't rain or sunny at this time. What are they doing with umbrellas? " Yang Wanli felt very strange and puzzled. Curiosity prompted him to tilt the boat forward and asked, "Now it's sunny, why do you want to take an umbrella?" The two children opened their eyes wide, cocked their heads and said innocently, "We have no sails on this ship. Let's spread an umbrella as a sail. In this way, the ship can move forward quickly and save energy! " Yang Wanli suddenly realized this. He nodded, gave a thumbs-up and praised, "You two are so smart to come up with such a good idea. Not simple, not simple! "

Later, Yang Wanli walked into the cabin and scribbled: "A fishing boat with two children parked on it. It's strange to play an umbrella when it doesn't rain, not to cover your head but to make wind. " A well-known poem was born in this way and has been passed down to this day.

In a crystal clear river, the mirror-like surface of the river was broken by the waves, and the waves aroused by the ripples dispersed and became bubbles floating away.

Who broke this beautiful realm? Oh! It turned out to be two children about four or five years old! One of them is rowing, and the other uses a bamboo pole to control the direction.

After a while, a strong wind blew over, blowing the boat stagger, and the children swayed from side to side, as if they would fall into the water carelessly! But the children put away their paddles and bamboo poles and picked up an umbrella. Hey! Are they going boating with umbrellas? I saw a child open an umbrella and put it on his head. At this time, another child said, your method doesn't work. If not, we will drink water later! The child with an umbrella said, nothing. The whole village belongs to me. Are you still afraid that I will hurt you? Another child thought, forget it, thank God you won't let me fall into the water soon!

After a while, the ship seemed to really stop shaking and move forward quickly.

The older child said, what's the matter? I didn't ask you to take it, did I? I told you I was the smartest in the village! Another child said, boss, you are really amazing. I really admire you!

After talking and laughing for a while, they came to the lotus pond, which was full of lotus flowers, flowers in bud and bones in bud. Some have already blossomed; Some lotus flowers dance with the wind; One or two dragonflies are parked on some lotus flowers, probably because the arrival of young children collided with the lotus flowers, which scared the dragonflies away. The young children plopped into the water and looked for lotus roots in the deepest part of the river. Another one met them on the boat, and soon they picked a boat full of them. The children who came up from the water were also soaked.

Childhood is an indelible memory and the brightest star in life.

Yang Wanli sat on the boat and enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. When the boat sailed to the riverside of Anren, he saw some soft willows, which made Yang Wanli feel particularly comfortable.

Inadvertently, Yang Wanli saw a boat with two innocent and lovely children sitting on it. They ran and jumped on the boat, and then they put away the bamboo poles and paddles for punting. Yang Wanli felt very strange. Two children opened their umbrellas, but it did not rain. Yang Wanli stepped forward and asked, "Why did you take an umbrella?" The two children said naughtily, "We want the wind to blow the umbrella and let the boat go forward!" " "Yang Wanli finally understood the purpose of the two children.

Yang Wanli thought: They are too clever to think of this method. The naughty and naive appearance of these two children lingered in Yang Wanli's heart for a long time.

In the southeast of Hunan Province, there is a place called Anren County.

Spring is coming. On a sunny day, Yang Wanli, a poet of the Song Dynasty, went there to play by boat. When he came to Anren, Yang Wanli immediately fell in love with this place. Everything here is revived, birds are singing and flowers are fragrant, and lakes and mountains are beautiful!

In this charming scenery, Yang Wanli heard the children's laughter and couldn't help looking around. He found two lovely children sitting on a fishing boat not far from the river, one wearing a red Chinese-style chest covering and a clever ghost. Another older child, wearing shorts, is walking slowly with the boat. After a while, the boat stopped slowly, and the older children put away the bamboo poles and stopped the oars, so the boat did not move. Yang Wanli felt very strange and thought: What are they doing? At this time, he found a child holding up an umbrella, but it was sunny and there was no rain, which made Yang Wanli wonder: I wonder what they want to do? A mystery. Yang Wanli couldn't help asking them, "What are you doing with umbrellas?" The child replied, "We want to save some energy and let the wind take the boat forward. We are using the wind. As soon as the wind blows the umbrella, we can take the boat away, hee hee! "

Yang Wanli suddenly realized at this moment and sighed: These two children are really smart!

One sunny afternoon, the poet was very happy because of the sunny weather and decided to go out for a walk.

Arriving at the lake, the poet stood by the lake and sighed: This kind of sight should only be seen in the sky, but rarely heard on earth. "A few green lotus leaves on the lake set off the beauty of several lotus flowers, which makes people feel just right.

Suddenly, not far from Yang Wanli, a small fishing boat is slowly approaching the middle of the lake. Yang Wanli was wondering what this Ye Zhou Xiao wanted to do when the strange ship suddenly stopped in the middle of the lake. The bamboo wormwood is put away, and the paddle stops there. Yang Wanli looked carefully and suddenly panicked. It turned out that there were two Warawako on board. Yang Wanli thought: They won't fall! Actually, Yang Wanli thought about it. Two Warawako said, what if there is no wind? "Why don't we open the umbrella and see if it can be a little windy!" Then, a small umbrella appeared on the fishing boat, ok! "See here, I heard that, Yang Wanli in distress situation, the in the mind move, but the heart of the big stone finally fell down. When I think about it carefully, I can't help but smile on my face, and I feel that I really think too much, because both children have his unexpected cleverness and ridicule themselves. Yes, why can't those children figure out a way by themselves? When he looked back, the river was empty, and the composition had long since disappeared. He smiled again because the child was childish.

When the poet returned home, he recorded the scene at that time:

One-leaf fishing boat, two children,

Collect mugwort and stop on the boat.

It's strange to have an umbrella without rain.

It's not covering your head, it's creating wind.

One day, the poet Yang Wanli came to Anren to visit his friend. On the way to Anren, the poet thought: What should I say to my friends? The poet thought and thought. "wow! How beautiful! " The poet said. It turned out that the sun shone on the water, making it sparkling. Suddenly, the poet saw two children playing in the boat.

Suddenly, a child jumped into the water. After a while, the child came out of the water with two fish in his hand. The child swam to the boat, handed two fish to another child, and climbed up by himself. A child seems to be tired of playing, so he puts away his bamboo pole, stops paddling and sits on the boat.

After a while, a child opened an umbrella. The poet looked up at the sky, and the sun was still high and sunny. The poet is puzzled. He thought, when it doesn't rain, why do the two children have umbrellas? After a while, the poet suddenly realized. He said: "It turns out that those two children didn't want to hide from the rain, but wanted to use an umbrella to let the wind push the boat forward!" " "The poet has repeatedly praised the two children for their cleverness.

Seeing this scene, the poet had an idea and sang: A fishing boat with two children on board. No wonder it didn't rain. They opened the umbrella. They didn't want to protect the rain, but wanted to use the umbrella as a sail to let the boat go forward.

In the morning, the sun rises in the east and Anren River wakes up. The golden sun shines on the river, revealing a large area of red, just like the shy blush on the face of a beautiful girl. Anren River is very wide and flows from west to east. The water is very clear, you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river, and small fish swim happily in the river. Surrounded by green hills, the shore is covered with all kinds of plants. Anren River is like a beautiful necklace, hanging on the green land. The author was intoxicated by the beautiful scenery.

Suddenly, a ship in the distance caught my eye: there were two children sitting on it, one wearing a white jacket and naked. The other is rowing in a red Chinese-style chest covering. The naked child said, "How tired it is to paddle!" If only we could let the boat move by itself. "Children in red Chinese-style chest covering thought for a moment. Suddenly, he had a brainwave and said, "Hey, I have a good idea. "So he put away the bamboo pole, stopped the oar, sat down at the bow, opened the umbrella he carried with him, and the umbrella was like a sail on a boat, pulling the boat forward. The boat passed by gently, and there was a child's silvery laughter. When the author saw this scene, he was infected by the children's innocence and intelligence, so he began to write: a fishing boat with two children was parked on board. No wonder it didn't rain. They opened the umbrella. They didn't want to protect the rain, but wanted to use the umbrella as a sail to let the boat go forward.

Zhou Du An Ren rewrites the composition 1 1 Jiangnan in early summer is really intoxicating. The trees on both sides of the river are lush, and the green trees and red flowers set each other off, which really looks like an endless picture!

There is a boat floating in the distance. Such fishing boats are common on such rivers. But there are only two little fishermen on this boat. They are resting on the boat. Paddles and paddles are randomly placed on the boat. There are two small stools at the bow. Both children are wearing short clothes. Suddenly, a child turned into the hut and took out an umbrella and propped it up. It seems that he is ready for rain. Yang Wanli was full of doubts and couldn't help asking the two children what was going on. I want to see this, oh! It suddenly dawned on me that they were not sheltering from the wind and rain, nor basking in the sun, but acting as paddles, in order to make the ship sail with the wind and speed up the navigation! Yang Wanli couldn't help heart, two little naughty boys! Yang Xian was afraid that two children would jump into the water, so he couldn't help shouting to the boat: Two children, the scenery is good, but pay attention to safety. A clear child's voice immediately came from the boat: I see, thank you, old man!

How much like my childhood! What a naive child! The poet hurried back to the boat, studied the pen and ink, put down the paper, and wrote this scene in one go: a fishing boat with two children was parked on the boat, and it was strange that it didn't rain with an umbrella, not to cover his head, but to make the wind.

On a fishing boat, two six or seven-year-old boys are punting, ready to return with full load.

Xiao Ming is wearing a pair of shorts and a light coat, showing his belly and holding a bamboo pole to punt at the bow. Xiao Qiang, wearing a red Chinese-style chest covering, was also at the bow, waving a single paddle. When the two of them think that they can be praised by their parents when they go home, they can have a sumptuous Manchu-Chinese banquet, and the leftovers can be sold at a good price in the market when they go to the market. They can't help but feel that it is really worthwhile to get up early and go fishing. It's a win-win situation for a group of fish! They couldn't help laughing at the thought, and the paddles and bamboo poles in their hands shook faster. The spacecraft rushed to dozens of meters away.

However, after a while, they had no strength and the boat could only move slowly again. Xiao Ming looked sad and said sadly to Xiao Qiang, "Xiao Qiang, what can I do?" ? If we go at this speed, we will be lucky to go home at night! We're going to be quarreled by our parents, so we can't eat the fish feast. You have too many ideas. What can you do to get home as soon as possible?

Xiao Qiang's eyes rolled several times, and suddenly he clapped his hands and said, Xiao Ming, I have an idea! Do as I say, it's absolutely true! Put away the oars and bamboo poles and watch me! With that, he opened the umbrella on the boat. Xiao Ming cleaned up with a grain of salt. Unexpectedly, the ship was sailing very fast. A person saw it and laughed to himself: Oh, no wonder they all carry umbrellas when it doesn't rain. It turned out that they didn't use them to shelter from the rain, but used them as sails, trying to use the wind to make the ship move forward!

The water is very clear, and you can see the fish and shrimp below, which makes people want to drink a bowl. The wind is blowing, the reeds on both sides of the river sway with the wind, and the place where the ship passes is sparkling. What a beautiful view! Xiao Qiang is holding an umbrella and Xiaoming is whistling. The two of them looked at each other, then at the fast-moving boat, and smiled in unison.

In summer, on a sunny afternoon, on the quiet lake, patches of dense reeds are floating in the wind, and microwaves burst on the lake. This beautiful place is by a quiet lake. A boatload of Yang Wanli was deeply fascinated by them and intoxicated by them.

Just as the poet slowly shifted his sight, a small fishing boat came into view. Two lovely children are boating and playing on a small fishing boat. The poet decided to see what they wanted to do and planned to write a wonderful poem with them. When he thought of this, the poet observed it more carefully.

Two children are playing. Suddenly, one child discussed with another for a while, stopped the boat, put away the bamboo poles and paddles for rowing, and opened a beautiful bamboo umbrella. But it's not raining now. When the poet saw this scene, he was very confused.

The poet thought for a moment, as if he had thought of something, and couldn't help exclaiming, "How clever these two children are! No wonder the umbrella is open when it doesn't rain. It turned out that it was not to shelter from the rain, but to use an umbrella to let the wind push the boat forward! "

The poet admired two children and wrote a poem:

On a fishing boat, there are two children. They put away their bamboo poles, stopped their oars and sat on the boat.

No wonder it didn't rain. They opened the umbrella. They didn't want to protect the rain, but wanted to use the umbrella as a sail to let the boat go forward.

On a sunny day, Yang Wanli, a great poet, passed by Anren County in a boat. The boat sailed slowly and he was attracted by the beautiful scenery on the shore of the lake.

The lakeshore is full of trees, birds and flowers, and full of vitality. Although small, but numerous, like countless colorful stars, like a colorful carpet, very eye-catching. In particular, the clumps of bamboo are surprisingly bright and green, and the clear lake is sparkling under the sunlight. In front of us is a charming picture scroll, in which the poet is intoxicated.

There is a small fishing boat on the lake not far away. Happy songs came from there, and his strong curiosity made him want to have a look. Near, near, Yang Wanli is getting closer and closer to the small fishing boat.

There are two lovely children sitting on the boat. They sang while rowing, and their faces were filled with happy smiles. In a short time, they put away the bamboo poles for punting, put down the wooden paddles for rowing, and sat at the bow together. Huh? There was no rain and the sun was not strong. Why do they hold their umbrellas high? Yang Wanli frowned and smoothed her beard. I don't know why.

He asked politely, "It didn't rain and the sun wasn't strong. Why did you hold up an umbrella? " The child giggled and replied, "because our ship has no sails, it's too slow!" " We use umbrellas as sails, which can not only improve speed, but also save energy. Isn't it the best of both worlds? Yang Wanli suddenly realized, gave a thumbs-up and nodded again and again, and praised, "You are very clever! Very clever! "

When the poet turned back to the cabin, he was deeply impressed by the book: a boat and two children were parked on the boat. No wonder it didn't rain. They opened the umbrella. They didn't want to protect the rain, but wanted to use the umbrella as a sail to let the boat go forward. In this way, the masterpiece "Boat Crossing Anren" came out and has been passed down to this day.

Zhou Guoan's rewriting composition 15 "Zhou Guoan" is a famous poet Yang Wanli in the Song Dynasty. Most of his poems are written in spoken language, with simple and lively language, especially improvisation. Let us enjoy it together!

Boat Crossing Anren is about a fishing boat with two children and no fishermen. Later, they put away their bamboo poles, stopped their oars and sat on the boat. The ship stopped quickly, probably fascinated by the beautiful scenery. One child is wearing a red Chinese corset, and the other child is naked. Those two lovely children are probably twins. One child is wearing a red Chinese-style chest covering, probably because his mother is afraid of being confused. Green grass and rivers crisscross here.

Suddenly, the child in a red Chinese-style chest covering took out an umbrella. Yang Wanli happened to be there. Yang Wanli looked puzzled and thought, "Why do you want to take an umbrella?" It didn't rain, even to cover the sun, the sun is not big. "Yang Wanli asked two children curiously," children, why do you want to take an umbrella? "The two children said: rewrite the boat and live in peace." We want to move the boat forward with the help of the wind. "

Yang Wanli suddenly realized that this puzzling problem was suddenly opened, and it turned out to be with the help of the wind! Oh, no wonder they open umbrellas when it doesn't rain. It turns out that they don't want to shelter from the rain, but want to use an umbrella to let the wind push the boat forward! The ship swam slowly and disappeared.

These two children are so cute and smart, which is really enviable!