What's the weather like today?

It's really cold today, and everyone in the classroom is afraid to go out for activities.

It's really cold today in the original sentence. Although it can express the feeling of cold weather, it lacks specific description and is not vivid enough. It's really cold today, which describes the weather more accurately and increases the vitality of the sentence.

Everyone is afraid to come out in the classroom, and there is an unknown subject. I don't know who is afraid to come out to do activities. Therefore, we can all hide in the classroom and dare not go out for activities, which clearly expresses the subject and action and increases the image of the sentence.

It's really cold today. We all hide in the classroom and dare not go out for activities. This modification not only expresses the feeling of cold weather more accurately and vividly, but also clearly expresses the subject and action, avoiding ambiguity and misunderstanding.

Methods of modifying sick sentences:

1, addition and subtraction: This method mainly corrects language barriers by adding or subtracting words, sentences and other components. For example, he likes watching TV dramas.

Strengthen the subject's emotional attitude by adding adverbs of degree. Or you can change the original sentence to he likes watching movies, but he doesn't like watching TV dramas, and add negative words to express the different preferences of the subject.

2. Sorting method: This method mainly corrects language barriers by adjusting the order of words, sentences and other components. For example, he not only studies well, but also is good at sports.

By adjusting the order of clauses, the overall quality of the theme is highlighted. Or you can change the original sentence to "He studies well and is good at sports", and adjust the word order to enhance the compactness and fluency of the sentence.

3. Lexical changes: This method mainly corrects language barriers by replacing words. For example, his smile is warm and gives people a kind feeling, which can be changed into his smile is kind and gives people a close feeling.

Changing the adjective warm into kind can express the subject's personality characteristics more accurately. Or we can change the original sentence into his friendly smile, giving people a feeling of trust, and replace the adjective kindness with friendliness, which can more accurately express the subject's interpersonal skills.