My hometown four seasons composition plus comments

My hometown is in Guangning. My hometown is like a big garden. bloom is so beautiful all year round! The scenery in my hometown is different in four seasons. The following are my essays and comments on the four seasons in my hometown, hoping to help you!

My hometown is called Sanshan. Speaking of my hometown, although it is not a famous town, it also has charming scenery.

My hometown in spring is full of colorful clothes. I came to my hometown and put on colorful clothes for my hometown. Look, there are some buds on the willow tree. In the morning, you can already hear the birds singing outside the window. This is the bird singing the song of spring. After a spring rain, everything in the field revived and was beautiful.

My hometown in summer is very lively. Bees are busy collecting honey in the morning, and cicadas are chirping in the trees at noon. At night, frogs sing in the pond. In the pond in summer, lotus flowers are in full bloom and dragonflies are flying all over the sky. It's really "Xiao He just showed his sharp corner, and the dragonfly has long stood on it."

Hometown in autumn is golden. In the fields, golden red fruits are hung everywhere, and the leaves on both sides of the road fall rustling. Autumn in my hometown is the season of maturity and harvest, and it is also the season of sowing.

My hometown in winter is happy. Although the wind is biting, it is covered with white and glittering snowflakes. This is our children's "natural playground", where we can enjoy ourselves. Make a snowman, have a snowball fight and sleep on it when you are tired.

This is my hometown, which has its own characteristics all year round, although there are no places of interest. But in my eyes, the scenery in my hometown is always the most beautiful.

Teacher's comment: This article is about the narrative of scenery. Describes the unique scenery of my hometown all year round: spring, colorful; Summer is very lively; Autumn is full of fruits; In winter, there is great joy. The article uses metaphor and personification to make it more vivid and interesting.

My hometown is a charming place, with beautiful scenery and flowers. The stream flows down from the mountain, singing all the way, just like a group of naughty lambs jumping.

Spring has arrived, and the peach blossoms in my backyard are pink. Swallows twittering in the garden, like singing spring music, is wonderful.

Summer is coming, the weather is sultry, the goldfish at home are swimming happily in the water, and the willow branches are swinging their waists in the breeze, as if dancing.

When autumn came, Miss Qiu Feng sent us a telegram telling us the joy of harvest. When the autumn wind blows, Wanling, Qian Shan, puts on a fiery red autumn dress. Poetic as a picture, beautiful.

Winter comes quietly, and the opposite Yulong Snow Mountain is white, attracting many tourists to linger. The pine trees on the mountain are still green and tall, and the river flows slowly to the east like a mirror in the Ming Che.

Ah! I like the four seasons in my hometown.

Teacher's comment: This article describes the four seasons in my hometown. The article is rich in content, sincere in feelings, friendly and natural in language, clear in structure and distinct in levels. It describes the four seasons in my hometown in four parts and expresses my love for the four seasons in my hometown.