How to write this composition about the wonderful plot written by famous artists?

Unit 6, Volume 2, Grade 5, Primary School Chinese S Edition

Oral communication

Masterpiece Appreciation Meeting (II): Wonderful Plot of Masterpiece Writing

In the study of this unit, we feel the diligence, wisdom, joy, distress and confusion of the protagonist, and also feel the vivid and tortuous plot of the writer's pen. In this oral communication, we will continue to hold a masterpiece appreciation meeting with the theme of "wonderful plots written by famous artists".

Charlotte bronte's Jane Eyre

My rest may have been happy enough, but it was destroyed by a sad heart. She wept for her open wound, bleeding heart and broken heart strings. He trembled for Mr. Rochester and his death, because

Regret and wail for him; It calls him with endless longing. Although it is as helpless as a bird with broken wings, it still shakes its broken wings and looks for him in vain.

My experience:

This passage describes the psychology of the characters, vividly depicts their fragile hearts and movements, and vividly shows their characteristics. Let me know that life is gone forever. We should cherish life, protect our bodies and prevent our fragile souls from being hurt.

Wang Jiaqi

Hemingway's The Old Man and the Sea

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Color clamp: When the child came back, the old man was fast asleep in his chair, and the sun had already set. The child picked up an old military blanket from the bed, spread it on the back of the chair and covered the old man's shoulder. These two shoulders are strange and people are very old.

The shoulders are still strong, and the neck is still strong. When the old man falls asleep and his head hangs forward, the wrinkles are not obvious. I don't know how many times his shirt has been mended to make it look like his sail.

In fact, these patches are sunburned into many different shades. The old man's head is very old. His face was lifeless when he closed his eyes. The newspaper was placed on his knee and was pressed by his arm in the evening breeze.

It didn't blow away his barefoot. My harvest:

After reading this article, I think it is beautifully written, with vivid characters and delicate details. I want to bring this writing method into my composition.

Wang ruixin

Never forget

Highlights:

Chapter 14 An invitation letter: In the early morning sunshine, the dense fog gradually dispersed. A red sun rises from the eastern sky. The sea surface is illuminated by sunlight like burning gunpowder. Emit red light. Clouds are scattered in the sky, dyed in different colors, and countless "cat tongues" predict that it will be windy all day today.

My experience and harvest:

The author vividly wrote the scene of sunrise at sea in the early morning with concise language, which made me feel personally at once. Although I have never been to the seaside or seen the sunrise on the sea, I have deeply realized it through the author's wonderful description.

Yang

Uncle Bunce (France) Balzac

Highlights:

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A grotesque face, flat, like a bamboo shoot melon, two gray eyes, no eyebrows on it, only two red ones, adding a little sadness; In the middle of the face is a Don Quixote nose, just like

This is a glacier boulder floating on the plain. Cervantes may have noticed that this nose showed great temperament, but in the end it found nothing.

My experience and harvest:

This passage vividly describes Uncle Bunce's appearance and brings some humor through metaphor. We should learn this method of describing the appearance of characters in order to describe the appearance of characters more specifically.

He hanyu

Small peas by the window

Highlights:

The little peas by the window were written by Japanese writer Tetsuko Kuroyanagi.

My own primary school experience. In this article, President Xiaolin left a deep impression on me. "At this time, Xiao Doudou felt that she had met the person she really liked for the first time in my life! Because I was born from Doudou.

Until now, no one has listened to her for so long. Moreover, for such a long time, the headmaster didn't yawn once and didn't show impatience once. He also likes small peas.

Sample, leaned forward and listened intently. ""Mr. Wang listened to Xiao Doudou for four hours. "

My feelings:

Generally speaking, adults have no patience to listen to a child ramble. In my impression, the principals are very serious, and the children will be afraid to see them. Principal Kobayashi is such an approachable principal, like a grandfather next door. It is such a person who founded a unique primary school and gave children free development space and a happy childhood.

Yang

Let me introduce you to the following: The Scholars describes Fan Jinzhong, an old scholar in his fifties:

He got up, clapped his hands and laughed. "ah! All right! I won! " He broke free with a smile and flew out of the door, scaring reporters and neighbors. Not far from the gate, he kicked in the pond. When he earned it, his hair was loose, his hands were yellow and dripping with water. They couldn't stop him, patting and laughing until he went to gather.

The Water Margin?

Water Margin One

"Secretary" tells the heroic story of 108 heroes, led by Song Jiang, who were killed by traitors, from gathering Liang Shanbo in Juyi to being embraced by the court, and then defeating Liao soldiers. After reading the whole book, it has remained in my mind.

There are only two words: loyalty and righteousness. Loyalty means doing your best for your motherland, your relatives and friends around you. Under various threats and inducements, Song Jiang remained loyal to his motherland.

This is loyalty; Lin Chong's wife humiliated Gao Qiu's son after Lin Chong was forced to rebel. She would rather die than surrender, and finally hanged herself. This is also loyalty. In today's society,

I believe that many people can achieve the word "loyalty", but few people can achieve the word "righteousness". Lin Lilian

Fragments of Jane Eyre

What I want to share with you is Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontexq, England.

It was a cold winter afternoon, and in the lounge, my cousins were surrounded by their mother, Mrs. Reed. I don't have this right, so I have to hide behind the curtains of the breakfast room and read quietly. At this time, about

John reid rushed in, 14-year-old villain cursed me as a dependent person and threw the book at my head. I fell and hit my head on the door, bleeding profusely. I don't care about anything

Fighting with him crazily. Aunt reed came running and ordered the servant to put me in the dark red house. Uncle reed died in this room. I begged Aunt Reed to forgive me and let me out.

But no one paid attention to it until I fainted in extreme pain and terror.

John Ridby, the villain. I'm four years older. He is fat and big, but his skin is dark and he looks sick. He has a wide face, thick facial features, likes to overeat, and finally has a bad temper, dull eyes, big hands and loose cheeks.

I

I was seriously ill, and only the maid talked to me from time to time to relieve boredom. From the servant's conversation, I know that my father and mother both died of typhus, and I was taken back by my uncle Reed. After my uncle died, I became an aunt.

Burden. After I recovered, menstruation decided to send me to a charity school and introduced me to Brock Hess, the guardian of the school, saying that I was a bad boy who loved to lie and cheat.

My experience:

The author told us about Jane Eyre's family, and also described john reid as a villain with appropriate words, and portrayed the characters vividly as if they were right in front of our eyes.

Xu Yixin

The Water Margin?

martial arts

Hearing this, Song was puzzled. Three thousands of feet-high guns pierced the sky, with a knife in his right hand and five fingers in his left, and rushed into the building. Jiang Menshen sat in the first place. When he saw that this was Song Wu, he was taken aback and put this heart, liver and five internal organs outside the cloud nine.

Outside. Passing 18-wheeler, when Jiang Menshen was in a hurry to struggle, Song Wu would have dropped a knife, cut his face and cut the top spot. Song Wu turned back to the knife, but as soon as the supervisor's picture was unfolded, it was smashed by Song Wu at that time.

Even his neck was cut and he fell to the floor. Both of them are fighting for their lives. After all, this should always be a military attache. Although he is drunk, he still has some strength. When he saw that two pieces had been chopped, he was forced to sit on the top spot. Song Wu met early.

When I was alive, I only pushed it, looked at it and fell down. Song Wu shot a man and cut off his head with a knife. Jiang Menshen is strong, and he deserves it. Song Wu got up early with his left foot, kicked a somersault and knocked his head. Turn around and put Zhang in jail.

Cut off his head. Seeing the wine and meat on the table, Song Wu picked up the hip flask and gulped it down. After eating for three or four minutes, he went to the dead body, cut off a skirt, dipped it in blood, went to the white powder wall and wrote in eight big characters: "Black boy, kill the tiger and return to the mountain!" "

So is Song Wu. "Spread out the utensils on the table and put a few pieces in your arms. But he took it downstairs, only to hear the voice of the lady downstairs calling, "The official upstairs is drunk, please find two people to help quickly. "

Zhang Xiaoyun

Journey to the west highlights

monkey

"This demon has big eyes, so I can't see!" cried the king. When the devil saw you, he smiled and said, "You are less than four feet, only thirty years old, and you have no weapon in your hand. Why are you so bold and crazy? What do you want me to see? " Wukong scold a way:

"You devil, originally have no eyes! It's not difficult for you to measure me. You measure me unarmed, and I hold the horizon and the moon in both hands! Don't be afraid, just give me a punch! " Jump up vertically and hit the face. The devil stretched out his hand.

"You are so short and I am so tall," Lu said. "You want to use your fist, I want to use a knife, so it will kill you and people will laugh at you. When I put down my knife, I'll show you the road fist. " Wukong said, "Come on, good man!" Namowang

Throw away the shelf and hit it. The monkey got in and bumped into each other. He punches alternately, one punch at a time. It turned out that the long fist was empty and short, and the demon king was hit hard by Wukong with a few short tendons. He flashed,

Pick up a big steel knife and cut it as soon as you see Wukong. Wukong hurried out, and he cut an empty space. Seeing that he was fierce, Wukong pulled out a handful of hair, chewed it in his mouth, looked at the air and sprayed it out, shouting, "Change!" Instantaneous change

There are two or three hundred little monkeys gathered around.

Liu jialu

Wonderful paragraph (1):

On one occasion, Guan Yu was shot with an arrow in his left arm during the battle. The arrow is poisonous, the poison has reached the bone, and

It's dark and swollen, so I can't move. Hua tuo, a famous doctor, heard that Guan Yu's arrow wound could not be healed, saying that he could cut open his flesh and scrape the bones to detoxify. During the action, Hua Tuo's voice was harsh, and people around him were frightened to hide their faces, while Guan Yu

Still drinking and playing chess, as if nothing happened. When Hua Tuo scraped all the poison from the bone, applied the medicine and sewed the thread, and the operation was successful, Guan Yu laughed and said happily, "Mr. Wang is really a great doctor." Look, my arm has been bent and stretched freely.

No pain. Hua Tuo also said: "I have been practicing medicine all my life, and I have never seen such a calm and strong person as you. What a gentleman! "

My experience:

This paragraph describes the scene when Guan Yunchang was scraping medicine, and describes the strength and vividness of Guan Yunchang, so I like this paragraph.

Zhu Wenjie

Lin Xue hai yuan

Highlights:

Yang Zirong disguised himself as Hu Biao, the horse-feeding adjutant of another group of bandits who had been eliminated, and came to Weihushan alone. On the Tiger Mountain, he skillfully answered the questions of the mountain carving and his "Eight donkey kong" and used the mountain carving.

Eager to expand his strength and territory, he showed the contact map of the captured enemy and the bandits' underground advance troops. At first, he won the trust of the Mountain Carver and was named "Colonel Laojiu" on Tiger Mountain. Yang Zirong is at the "Hundred Chicken Banquet"

The gangsters were all thirsty and wobbly. The team arrived in time, and Yang Zirong and his comrades raped the stubborn bandits of Weihushan in one fell swoop, and the battle won an all-round victory.

My experience:

This wonderful passage, matched with Yang Zirong and his comrades-in-arms, won the battle. After reading this paragraph, my experience is that as long as we are United as one, no matter how difficult the struggle is, it can be overcome.

Dong juanzhe

hurried

Highlights:

Swallows have gone, and there is a time to come again; Willow withered, there is a time to green again; The peach blossom withered, but it blossomed again. But, smart, tell me, why are our days gone forever? Someone stole them: who is that? Where is it hidden? They escaped by themselves: where are they now?

My experience and harvest:

The wonder of this article is that swallows, peaches and willows will come again, bloom again and be green again, but our time is gone forever, because time will not go back and it is impossible to go back to the past.

Why is it wonderful: Because everything may bloom again, but our time will not go back to the past, so it is very wonderful.

From this, I know that time will pass by minute by minute, so we should cherish time, cherish every minute, and race against time. Only in this way can we not waste precious years.

DJ Jane

robinson crusoe

Highlights:

Savages are still very brave, with strong limbs, but they don't look heavy; Tall and healthy, he looks very young, about twenty-five or six years old; He has regular facial features and is not ferocious at all. He has the heroic spirit of a man and the gentle and amiable appearance of a civilized man, especially when he laughs.

His hair is black and long, but it is not curly; His forehead is tall and big, and his eyes are sharp and lively; His skin is not dark brown, unlike the ugly light brown of Brazilians, Virginians or other Native Americans, but dark brown, shiny and pleasing to the eye, but difficult to describe in words;

My experience:

This passage mainly describes the appearance of Robinson's companion on Friday, involving his appearance, figure, hair and skin, as if he were standing in front of us.

Deng penghao

Highlights:

he

Short and fat, thick and strong neck, athlete's figure. He has a broad red brick face, but only in his later years did his skin become sallow and morbid, especially in winter, when he stayed away from the fields and stayed indoors.

This is especially true when. His forehead was wide and high, and his black hair was unusually thick and stood at sixes and sevens, as if he had never combed it, quite like "Medusa's snake hair." There is a strange power in his eyes, let him see.

His people were stunned, but most people couldn't tell the difference. Because these eyes shine with a wild light, and they have a bronze and slightly tragic face. Although they look black, they are actually blue-gray.

Yes Once emotional or angry, these deep-set little eyes suddenly widened and kept turning in their eyes, which truly reflected all his thoughts. His melancholy eyes often look at the sky. A broad nose

Son, short and square, just like a lion! The mouth is quite delicate, but the lower lip protrudes forward than the upper lip. The gums are firm as if chewing walnuts, and there is a deep pit in the right chin, which makes the whole face look strange.

Symmetry. According to Moses, "He has a beautiful smile and an approachable attitude when he speaks. But that smile was unpleasant, rude, ugly and short-lived, as if it were not used to a happy smile. The watch on his face

Love is always unhappy, as if suffering from an "incurable disease."

Ma Xinyu

Highlights:

One day, Lu Bu came to challenge again. Sun Zan, the satrap of Beiping, was furious, and Pegasus went forward to meet Lu Bu.

After being defeated in a few rounds, Lu Bu came riding a red hare. That horse walks thousands of miles every day and flies away like the wind. On the verge of catching up, Lu Bu raised his painting halberd and stabbed Gongsun Zan in the middle of the back. Just then, a man next to him shouted, "Lu Bu, there!

Let's go Yan Zhang Fei is here! I saw the general coming, his eyes wide open, his beard erect and his snake spear in his hand. So Lu Bu spared Gongsun Zan and came to meet Zhang Fei.

The energetic Zhang Fei stepped forward and killed him. The two men fought for more than 50 rounds, regardless of the outcome. Seeing that Zhang Fei couldn't win, Guan Yu waved an 82-pound dragon crescent moon blade to attack Lu Bu. After thirty rounds, I still can't beat Lu Bu.

Liu Bei saw that his two younger brothers still couldn't win Lu Bu, so he waved a double-edged sword and came forward to help. Liu Bei, Guan Yu and Zhang Fei surrounded Lu Bu and tried to kill him like lanterns. Look at passers-by

The beauty of this passage lies in: it shows that these four heroes have high martial arts.

Song Yuchen

Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry"

Swallows have gone, and there is a time to come again; Willow withered, there is a time to green again; The peach blossom withered, but it blossomed again. But, smart, tell me, why are our days gone forever? Someone stole them.

Go: Who's that? Where is it hidden? They escaped by themselves: where are they now?

The author describes the passage of time with delicate brushstrokes and the alternation of scenery and things in the four seasons, and then talks about people's feelings. He constantly describes the inner activities of characters with questions and rhetorical questions, which is very wonderful and vivid.

week

Luxun's beautiful passages.

"ah! Pay in one hand and deliver in one hand! " A man in black stood in front of the old bolt with eyes like two knives, and the old bolt was cut in half. The man was holding a bright red steamed bun in his hand, and it was dripping red bit by bit. -"medicine"

There is a golden moon hanging in the deep blue sky, and below is the beach by the sea, with endless green watermelons. In the meantime, there was a boy of eleven or twelve, with a silver ring around his neck and a steel fork in his hand, who tried his best to stab a horse. But Yan wriggled away from his crotch.

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