Weather forecast exercise

1. We should constantly improve our learning methods and improve our learning efficiency. ("Increase" and "learning efficiency" are not properly matched, and should be changed to: constantly improve learning methods and enhance learning efficiency. )

There are many historical sites in 2.Xi, including Wild Goose Pagoda, Bell Tower, TV Tower and so on. (The TV Tower does not belong to the scope of historical sites, and should be changed to: Xi 'an has many historical sites, including the Wild Goose Pagoda and the Bell Tower. )

The students of meteorological group record and listen to the weather forecast of the day every morning. The time logic of "recording" is wrong. Listen first and then record. Students of the meteorological team listen to and record the weather forecast of the day every morning. )

He is a literary lover, so he is a sports lover. He is not only a literature lover, but also a sports lover. )

Through the teacher's education, we have improved our understanding. The teacher's education has improved our understanding. )

Today, our class subscribed to several magazines, such as Children's Literature, Youth Literature and Art, Story Meeting and Modern Youth Daily. Today, our class subscribed to several magazines, such as Children's Literature, Youth Literature and Art, and Story Club. )

On July and June 1 day, 10,000 children in Jiangcheng visited the air force skydiving performance. (The logical error between "visit" and subject and object should be participation, that is, on June 1 day, 10,000 children in Jiangcheng participated in the air force skydiving performance. )

Extended data:

Modifying methods of sick sentences:

1, complement grammar: it is often used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components.

For example, "I won the first place in this competition" (lack of subject) was changed to "I won the first place in this competition." (Supplementary subjects)

After listening to the teacher, I got a great education. (Supplementary subjects)

Everyone should set up lofty ideals. (complement predicate)

We should educate teenagers in patriotism. (Complement object)

2. The deletion method is generally used to modify redundant sentences, redundant components, improper collocation and improper classification.

For example, "I conclude that it may rain tomorrow." I'm sure it will rain tomorrow.

3. Variations are mostly used to modify ill sentences such as improper collocation, improper words and unclear references.

For example, "his grades have improved significantly." Change: "His grades have improved obviously."

Whoever breaks the discipline will be criticized.

His writing level has improved significantly.

He seems to have infinite power.

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