Wandering and writing a composition

1. 600-word composition of Nanning, Guangxi, starting with the address of Nanning, then the origin of Nanning's name, and finally the scenic spots.

These words should be enough to write an article. The following is the relevant information about Nanning: Nanning (Zhang:namzningz) is known as the capital of Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, the core city of Beibu Gulf Economic Zone, the megacity of South China, the permanent venue of China-ASEAN Expo, and the political, economic, cultural, scientific, educational, financial and trade center of Guangxi. Nanning is located at the junction of South China, Southwest China and Southeast Asia economic circles in China, south of central Guangxi. It is an important economic center along the Beibu Gulf, and China is a regional international city facing ASEAN countries.

Nanning is an ancient city with a long history and profound cultural accumulation. This is a modern city where many ethnic groups live in harmony. The unique natural conditions make Nanning city green and evergreen all the year round. For a long time, Nanning has formed an urban landscape of "green hills around the city, clear water around the city and green trees around the city". 20 14 10, the world gymnastics championship will be held soon.

The name comes from the first year of Daxing in the Eastern Jin Dynasty (AD 3 18). Jinxing County was separated from Yulin County, and the county was located in Jinxing County, which is now Nanning. This is the beginning of the establishment of Nanning, with a history of 1680 years. In the eighth year of Zhenguan in the Tang Dynasty (AD 634), Emperor Taizong named it Yongzhou, and Nanning was called "Yong" for short.

In the first year of Taiding in Yuan Dynasty (13 14), the central government named the southern Xinjiang peaceful, and the territory of Guangxi was changed from "Tan" to "Nanning", hence the name Nanning. Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region was established 1958, with Nanning as the capital of the autonomous region; So far, the name Nanning has been used to this day.

Tourist attractions include Qingxiu Mountain Park, Nanhu Park, Guangxi Medicinal Botanical Garden, People's Park Ancient Fort and Martyrs Monument, and Autonomous Region Museum. Nearby, there are some tourist attractions such as Long 'an Longhu Mountain, Yiling Rock, Ningming Huashan, Chongzuo Zuojiang Shijinglin, Detian Waterfall and Youyiguan. 2012 * * received 51220,000 domestic tourists and 300,700 overseas tourists.

Among them, there were 209,900 foreign tourists; There are 90,800 compatriots from Hong Kong, Macao and Taiwan. International tourism revenue was 654.38+0.07 billion USD.

Domestic tourism income is 39.7.1.300 million yuan. At the end of 20 12, there were 68 star-rated hotels and 83 travel agencies in the city, including 5 outbound travel agencies.

As early as the Song Dynasty, the literati at that time evaluated the ancient "Eight Scenes of Yongjiang River" (Looking at Immortals, Looking Back at the Ancient, Songtao in Qingshan, Lan Yan in Xiangling, Xiao Xia in Luo Feng, Ma Tui, Late Bell in Hong Ren, Spring Festival in Yongjiang and Huazhou). With the changes of history and the development of urban construction, many of the ancient eight landscapes have become a thing of the past in memory.

Top Ten Scenery in Nanning (Yangmei Ancient Style, Castle Peak Tower Shadow, Famous Mountain Splendid, Wang Xianhuai Ancient, Yiling Shrine, South Lake Charm, Dragon and Tiger Monkey Fun, Yongjiang Spring Festival, Fengjiang Green Field, Dragon and Dragon Play Beads). Nanning has more than 50 natural and cultural landscapes such as parks, gardens, scenic spots and squares for people to play. There are national cultural relics protection units 1 (Beiqiu, Dingsi Mountain), autonomous regional cultural relics protection units 16, and city and county cultural relics protection units 1 16.

The above information can be found on Baidu Encyclopedia.

2. Write a travel note about visiting Mount Tai! Endless green spans Qilu and Qilu. The creator endowed all the mysterious nature here with elegant travel order. Caiyun lave? My mind is free and easy, and birds fly back and forth in front of my nervous eyes. , will be the best, other mountains are short in the sky .. "This is a poem" Looking at Yue "left by Du Fu after visiting Mount Tai. Now let me introduce Mount Tai to you. One sunny morning, we came to climb the mountain at the foot of Mount Tai. Because my father grew up in front of Mount Tai, he said excitedly, "I will be your tour guide today." After that, I solemnly walked up to everyone and imitated the tour guide and said, "Mount Tai stands tall on the land of Qilu, with an altitude of 1545 meters, which is called the head of the five mountains ... To be honest, I can't wait to climb Mount Tai at once.

Halfway up the mountain, there are many people on the road, and some people struggle to climb up with the railings; Some people are struggling to move their feet with crutches; Others climb for a while, rest for a while, and catch their breath while walking ... The towering trees beside the road are lush; The mountains are rolling in the distance; White clouds float freely, surrounded by towering peaks and steep cliffs.

We climbed to the top of the mountain and looked down at the winding steps, like a dragon lying in the mountains. A figure is like a moving ant. I can't help but think of the sentence "I will be the peak of the mausoleum, and all the other mountains look short under the sky." . Finally, we climbed to the top of the mountain, and suddenly we felt relaxed and happy, just like flying to the clouds!

The scenery of Mount Tai is beautiful, and there is beauty in its majesty. This kind of beauty is unique, and the beauty here makes me linger.

3. Write down 600 words and 8 words on Xingcheng seaside travel notes in the order of wandering, and can't wait today. I was lucky to travel with my mother today. I started my trip to Xingcheng with my mother at the railway station early in the morning. The most attractive building of the railway station is not the waiting hall of the railway station, but the statue of Yuan Chonghuan, a national hero accompanied by cannons. This is a general who made great contributions in the defense of Xingcheng (then Ningyuan City). Speaking of Ningyuan City, we should start with the West Gate of Xingcheng Ancient City. If you take a bus at the railway station, you will clearly see the west gate of Xingcheng ancient city with a history of more than 600 years. This is a city full of vicissitudes and wars. The whole ancient city was built in Ming Dynasty, especially Nanguan. Zushi Square and Ming Dynasty memorial archway added ancient charm to the ancient city and came out from the south gate. Seeking novelty and beauty. However, these shopping malls don't seem to be the places we have been today. My mother and I took a bus directly and started our second trip-the seaside. On the way to the seaside, we saw Shoushan, a beautiful woman with her back to the sky, which is another highlight of Xingcheng and one of the five treasures. But the real beauty of Shoushan is the experience of war. Looking at Shoushan now, the beacon tower with fighting significance is still there. Before I came to my senses, the bus had reached the seaside in the blink of an eye. This is the legendary No.1 bathing beach in Xingcheng, which can be compared with Qingdao. The first thing that caught my eye was the beautiful and generous chrysanthemum female image. Looking from a distance, it says Xingcheng Seaside Scenic Area, a national 4A-level scenic spot. From the south, it is a name composed of three reefs: three reefs, Range Rover, stepping on it, watching the sea and listening to the waves, touching people's hearts, and unwilling to leave for a long time. There are some prominent hills in the sea far from Xingcheng seaside, which is Chrysanthemum Island, the largest island in Bohai Bay. Due to the limited time, I didn't have a chance to go to the island, but the beauty of Chrysanthemum Island made me yearn for it. I want to have a chance to visit the island and feel the customs of the island. Time is really tight. My mother and I quickly took a taxi to the legendary Longhuitou Scenic Spot scenic spot where Longde turned around. It is said that the stone with the words Longhuitou Scenic Spot Scenic Spot comes from Chrysanthemum Island and weighs several tons. Cars are driving fast on the wide coastal highway. This road is wide enough for four or eight cars in parallel. Hehe, I don't understand. The car is really comfortable on this road. There are few cars, few people and wide roads, and all the advantages are taken. It's not far from Longhuitou Scenic Spot Scenic Area, and it takes more than ten minutes to get there. Oh, this is the Longhuitou Scenic Spot scenic spot. I stood on the platform overlooking Huludao Port and the sea, and finally understood why thousands of tourists came here. The scenery here is very unique. The weather is clear, the sea is so blue, so wide and so beautiful. I just want to express my feelings. My mother's cell phone rang. It was the whistle for going home. Although my trip is not over yet, I went home happily with my mother. I thought along the way that my hometown is really beautiful, with many cities, mountains and islands. I will definitely recommend it to friends far away, so that they can all visit my hometown.

I remember that summer vacation when I graduated from primary school, my aunt took me to the seaside in Xingcheng, Liaoning. That was the first time I saw the real sea, and it was also the most unforgettable day for me forever! !

I remember when the sea first appeared in front of my eyes, really, I could hardly tell where water was and where sky was. When I was walking on the beach, the sea breeze blowing on my face brought a touch of refreshment. Breathing the fresh air by the sea, listening to the sound of waves beating against rocks, as if the sea were welcoming me with open arms. Finally, I couldn't help but rush into the warm embrace of the sea. Swimming in the sea, in the embrace of the sea, there is a coolness and a comfort, and the summer heat seems to have gone away from me. Composition Network home.sanwen8.cn

Sometimes when I am tired of swimming, I float on the swimming ring to rest, but rows of waves push me straight to the shore. Anyway, I just wanted to get up and walk to the shore to have a rest, but I didn't stand firm and was washed to the beach by the rushing waves. At this time, I realized that if I want to remember, I have to act quickly!

On the beach, my feet patted the waves rushing to the shore, and my hands picked up the sand and buried my body. It's so comfortable and warm. Looking up at the dark blue sky, it seems that everything has been forgotten, only remembering this beauty and comfort. composition

Enough rest, I returned to the embrace of the sea. Later, I slowly found that the waves gradually receded and the sea water on the shore became shallower and colder.

Walking on the beach, we watch the sunset while walking, beautiful sunset. I was intoxicated by the beautiful scenery again. I really want to stay by the sea forever and enjoy the beautiful scenery. composition

Ah! The sea is so beautiful! The sea brought me happiness and made me forget all my troubles. I deeply love the sea and everything about it! After leaving the sea for a long time, I thought: without the sea, I can't find my true happiness!

4. Writing a composition with the trail as a clue in the locust tree cave On the fourth day of October, my parents took me to visit the mausoleum. We drove through the orchard, through the ticket gate halfway up the mountain in Ganling, boarded the straight and wide Shima Avenue running through the north and south, and began to visit Ganling.

On the stone road, everywhere is bustling and crowded. Looking up, Ganling is really magnificent. Dark green pines and cypresses surround Weng Zhong and Shima, which stand on both sides of the road, as if they were the guardians of Tang Gaozong Li Zhi and Wu Zetian, making people feel the sacredness, solemnity and sublimity of the mausoleum area, and giving people a spiritual shock.

When we were sightseeing, my father told me the historical story of Ganling. Dad told me that Ganling has been built for more than 1000 years. It is not only the mausoleum of two feudal emperors, but also embodies the spirit of the times of China's feudal prosperity, and is also a symbol of China's splendid culture for thousands of years. China was a very powerful country in the Tang Dynasty. From now on, China is heading for another prosperity.

I had a good time on Shima Avenue. I ran in the crowd for a while, and then I rushed to take photos with the stone man and the stone horse as a souvenir. Here, I saw the wordless tablet of Wu Zetian, a pair of tall and majestic stone lions and Weng Zhong whose head was stolen by crowds. I know there are many touching and complicated legends hidden in it.

Unconsciously, we came to Ganling at the foot of Hou Feng. It's really lively here! Some people sell rice cakes, some people sell folk handicrafts, and some people sell Ganling profiles and tourist souvenirs. There are all kinds of things.

5. Tour Guilin landscape composition According to the trail, my hometown is a garden with flowers overflowing; My hometown is a forest with the coolness of green trees; My hometown is a field with the hope of harvest; My hometown is a snow scene, shining with the light of ice crystals.

Looking back, in order not to worry about eating, every family is fruits and vegetables. All year round, as long as you can plant something, the yard will be full. Look, all kinds of colors are mixed together. It's a mess. This is a crowded and chaotic yard. Nowadays, every family doesn't grow much vegetables, but flowers. Flowers grow all the year round. In spring, roses are in full bloom. In summer.

In the past, the village was bare and there were few trees outside. In summer, adults chatting outside sit along the wall, and most children hide in the house and fan their fans. The room is like a steamer, and the outside is like a hot pot. Now, green trees are planted in front of the house, on both sides of the street and outside the village. Although it is not as dense as a forest, it is also sheltered by trees. In summer, adults ride horses under trees.

Looking back, the fields are full of crops, including corn, rice and peanuts. At that time, people's planting technology was not very high. Although they worked hard, the harvest was not very ideal. The crops watered with a drop of sweat seem to be deliberately against people. Now with the popularization of science and technology, green and pollution-free crops are everywhere, realizing mechanized production, saving time and effort, and farmers' pockets are getting more and more bulging. In autumn, the rice droops its head and the earth is golden. It can be said that "spring seeds are all green, and autumn harvest is all gold". Happily, the fields are full of bumper harvests in my hometown.

Looking back, garbage has a paradise-streets, which stay in every corner at will, sometimes dancing against the wind and even swimming in the water, making people want to hide. It's really dirty Now, garbage has its own home-garbage dump, the streets are clean and tidy, paved with cement roads, which has become a dazzling bright spot. It's clean, and my hometown shines like ice crystals.

My hometown is constantly changing. In my mind, my hometown is like a young girl, and it is getting better and better. I love my hometown from my heart.

6. Analysis of test questions: This is a semi-propositional composition, and the topic requirements are very specific, and it must be "visited scenic spots". So we should think about where we swam, where we left a deep impression on you, why we left a deep impression on you and what lessons you learned from it. This scenic spot can be natural scenery, urban scenery, campus scenery and so on. After reviewing the questions in this way, you will know what to write.

When writing specifically, we must pay attention to the composition requirements of "explaining vagrancy clearly, grasping the characteristics of scenery, focusing on describing the scenery that attracts you, and integrating our emotions into writing".

Comments: Fill-in-the-blank problem of semi-propositional composition is very important, which shows the material selection, conception, emotional attitude and language ability of the composition and also determines the success or failure of the composition.

Common ways to complete the problem:. We can choose different angles when doing the problem. The more familiar we are with the angle and content, the greater our confidence in writing. To complete the topic, we must first turn the topic into something we are familiar with, starting with what we are familiar with and the genre we are good at; Turn big into small. Turning the big into the small means choosing a smaller breakthrough point and cutting into the topic from a specific angle, thus narrowing a relatively "big" topic to a relatively "small" topic; Use rhetorical devices. Rhetoric can be used to make the article smart and attractive, and at the same time, it shows the ability to control the language.

7. Write a composition of 100 words by changing the scene. The scene change method is generally suitable for travel notes or interviews. When people describe the scenery, with the change of observation points, they constantly change the scenery and show new pictures. When describing a scene by changing the scene, we must first explain the transformation of observation points clearly. In this way, readers can clearly know the route of sightseeing or visiting. Secondly, we should show the scenery we see during or after walking, so that readers can see colorful and vivid pictures. When describing scenery by changing scenes, we should pay attention to showing different pictures around a center to avoid the feeling of fragmentation. Secondly, the most distinctive scenery along the way should be carefully cut and described, and the general description should be deleted to avoid running accounts.

The method of changing scenery on foot is to describe different scenery in turn while walking without fixing the foothold and observation point. Wu, a contemporary writer, literary critic and aesthetician, uses this structure to describe the beauty of Alishan. Its main manifestations are as follows: (1) Explain clearly the destination: Taipei-Chiayi-taking the train into the mountain-Alishan-Shenmu-forest area-winding path leading to a secluded place-seeing Shenmu-downhill. (2) When entering the mountain, grasp the characteristics of the deep forest to write: the virgin forest is boundless-clear pool water-quiet forest area-moss trees in the mountain-endless forest-Shenmu after great creation. In this way, the author takes his own whereabouts as a clue to show the characteristics of various scenery in different times, so that readers can feel a dynamic beauty and overall beauty.

When using the scene change method, you should pay attention to the following points:

(1) Trace clues are consistent and clear. Because the wandering masters are mostly the authors themselves, it is generally more appropriate to use the first person. In this way, the article will be written with "I" as the clue, and it will not be chaotic.

(2) The change of foothold must be made clear. Walking and changing scenery must be consistent, and you must never go beyond your own foothold to describe the scenery. In other words, as the protagonist "moves" and constantly changes his foothold, what kind of "observation object" he should have.

(3) both form and spirit. Form refers to the external appearance; The essential characteristics of divine reference. When describing, it requires both "likeness" and "spirit" without "form". It is necessary to have both form and spirit, focusing on "spirit" and highlighting the uniqueness of the described object as much as possible. Therefore, "Changing Scenes" is by no means a naturalistic wandering landscape, and the author's unique feelings must be written.

4 thickness should be combined. Rough outline and detailed description should be dialectically unified, so that people can not only have a rough outline impression of the described object, but also realize the details of the scene in detail, so as to have a more comprehensive understanding of the described object.

⑤ Real writing and imaginary writing should be combined dialectically. It is a general requirement to describe the reality and the reality. "Changing scenery" should be based on reality and combined with reality, so that readers can not only see the entity, but also mobilize subjective association and imagination.

[Example Appreciation]

Autumn morning mist

Nan Zhao

Autumn morning fog is like a colorful box, full of fog, giving people a mysterious feeling.

Looking eastward, the sky is reddish, like a smooth and soft silk. And the sun, like a shy little girl, pulled up her beautiful curtains, probably dressing up! Looking up, the sky is reddish with a little yellow. Looking to the west, the sky is blue and gray. These colors form a colorful "air quilt", covering the whole earth.

I am walking on a country road, and there is a fog belt in front of me. Suddenly, the fog band disappeared. I scratched around with my hand, but I caught nothing. It turned out that I was standing in the fog belt, and of course I couldn't see or catch it. I walked into the edamame field and my shoes and pants were wet. The fog balls on the leaves of edamame rolled slowly. The grass gently leans on my feet, as if making out with me. I put my hand on the dew, and the dew turned into small drops and spread in all directions. Unconsciously, I came to a new village. Looking south, the tall buildings in the past can only see vague outlines today, and the trees in the past can only see some shadows today. The early bird is chirping, as if singing this charming morning, and as if calling people out to see this charming morning scene.

Through the new village, I stepped onto expressway. People in the street are walking through the fog, their hair is wet, as if they had just come out of the bathhouse. The tractor braved white smoke and drove slowly; The horn of the car "beep" urges people to move forward, and the headlights of the motorcycle form a straight light in the fog; The bicycle slowly "Rinrin". It is these voices that play the "morning song in the fog".

Fog, like an ivory veil, separates me from others. I looked at the white fog around me and felt like swimming in a sea of clouds. How poetic! If I were a poet, I would regard it as a poem; If I were a scientist, I would take the fog home for people to enjoy. If I were an engineer, I would build an indoor swimming pool in foggy weather. ...

The intoxicating and daydreaming fog, I really want to hold you in my arms forever!

Comments:

This is a poem, sung in the magical autumn morning fog; This is another painting, which outlines the beautiful scenery in the autumn morning fog in the countryside, fascinating and intoxicating.

The full text adopts the method of "changing scenery", constantly changing observation points and observing things from different angles, so that the scenery is displayed in front of readers and readers have the feeling of being there.

Observing from the original place, the article feels that the sky in the morning fog is like a "quilt"; Walking along the country road, I also enjoyed the charming morning light; Various stereos in the street form "morning songs" ... giving people a fresh and mysterious feeling.

It's sunny today, and it's a good time to go to Lianhua Mountain.

I armed myself and set off. Grandpa and I sat in the car, enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. Unconsciously, we soon arrived at our destination-Lianhua Mountain.

As soon as I entered the gate, it was green everywhere, as if I had entered a green ocean, and the air was filled with the fragrance of trees. Further on, I came to the Lotus Waterfall, and the water flew down from a height, forming a beautiful waterfall. At this time, I can't help but recite a poem from the Tang Dynasty poet Li Bai's "Looking at Lushan Waterfall": "Flying straight down thousands of feet, it is suspected that the Milky Way has set for nine days."

After seeing this beautiful Lotus Waterfall, we came to Lotus Wonderland. He is a lake, full of lotus flowers, which makes you feel like walking into a fairyland. Lotus flowers are grotesque, some like umbrellas, some like plates, and some like lamps. They are really beautiful, very beautiful.

After enjoying the lotus, move on and come to the ruins of the ancient quarry. This is the place where our ancestors mined stones on a large scale more than 2000 years ago, leaving countless cliffs, strange rocks and caves. After thousands of years of natural weathering, it has formed a spectacular and thrilling scenic tour line, which is famous for its "artificial unintentional" stone scenery.

After seeing the quarry, after a hard journey, I came to Wanghai Guanyin. There is a long step in front of Wanghai Guanyin, and I thought to myself: How many steps are there? So, I counted as I walked. At the beginning, my strength was more than enough and I felt energetic. I ran and counted, but I ran and ran and I was sweating. I feel my strength is running out, and my legs are as heavy as dragging a boulder. I wanted to give up, but when I remembered the idiom story of giving up halfway, I immediately got up the courage to continue walking. Finally, "many good things grind", we completed this step.

Look! There are two stone lions in front of Guanyin, looking at the sea. They are alive and kicking as if they were still alive. After seeing the stone lion, I went to visit Guanyin on the sea.

It is golden, about 40 meters high, and has a face of Zhang Shanliang. Of course, it is impossible for such a spectacular Guanyin to shoot this Guanyin without my equipment-camera. As time goes by, I can't bear to go down the mountain. Lotus Hill is full of beautiful scenery. I hope you have a chance to have a closer look.