Imitate new concepts and write essays

1. New Concept 2 Lesson 8 Imitation Composition

Answer these questions in not more than 60 words.

Answer the following questions and combine the answers into one Paragraphs, no longer than 60 words.

1 Where had the writer's friend,Harrison,spent many years?What did he want to do?What did he buy?(but…so…)

Where did the author's friend Harrison live for many years? What does he want to do? What did he buy?

2 Was the summer that year very good,or was it very bad?What did he plain about?(and)

The weather in that summer Good or bad? What is he complaining about?

3 Did Harrison sell the house in the end or not? Did he leave the country or not?(Harrison not only..but also)

Did Harrison sell the house in the end? ? Did he ever leave the country?

Answers to summary writing:

The writer's friend,Hanrrison,had spent many years in the Mediterranean,but he wanted to retire in England so he bought a house in the country.The summer that year was very bad and he plained about the weather.In the end Harrison not only sold the house but also left the country.

Answers to the essay:

1 He bought an old car but it was in a very bad state.

2 The engine was not only worn out but the gearbox was full of sawdust as well.

3 He could neither drive it nor sell it nor even give it away. 2. The beginning of wonderful writing: How to use new concepts to imitate

I don’t know if you have this impression, but there is such a composition in the 2008 College Entrance Examination English, which is said to be a class organization I went on a spring outing and when I got to the top of the mountain, I found that there was garbage all over the mountain, so everyone went to clean it up.

If the narratives are all the same, the teachers who grade the essays will collapse. They will feel like they have eaten moldy steamed buns for a whole year. But if you try to change it and use the beautiful sentences of Lesson 58 to make the narrative rhythmic, the effect will naturally be different.

The students were so excited that they would go outing, for the hard work had tired them. Explain their excitement before going. On their way to the mountain, their thoughts were on attractive scenes and good rest, but when they reached, both were fotten in their sudden discovery that the top of the mountain was covered by rubbish. This sentence can describe their way The mood and the shocking discovery when reaching the top of the mountain.

Lay the foundation for subsequent cleaning. There are countless such classic sentence patterns in new concept texts. If you are interested, you can open the book, understand it carefully, and imitate more, and gradually you will make great progress.

I hope this idea helps you with your writing.

Please remember: those who are close to the best will be red, that is, the more optimistic and classic works they are, you will gradually become a literary giant. 3. New Concept English Volume 2 lesson 32 Imitate yesterday’s article

Who was the thief? People are not so honest as they once were. The temptation to steal is greater than ever before -- especially in large shops . A detective recently watched a well-dressed woman who always went into a large store on Monday mornings. One Monday, there were fewer people in the shop than usual when the woman came in, so it was easier for the detective to watch her. The woman first bought a few *** all articles. After a little time, she chose one of the most expensive dresses in the shop and handed it to an assistant who wrapped it up for her as quickly as possible. Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested, the detective found out that the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl 'gave' her mother a free dress once a week!. 4. I’m looking for a new concept style essay. It’s not required to be too good, 1500 words, or famous.

The Traveling Snail (1)

I don’t know what attitude I should take to write it. Looking back on this long time. Like a traveling snail, full of joy or calm. This is my second time coming to Shanghai to participate in the new concept rematch. I revisit the old place and the past is still the same, but everything is so completely different. The long journey and the fatigue of traveling, the people I met and the things I encountered. Thank you for broadening the contours of my life.

The night before leaving Shanghai, February 3rd. Reincarnation emerges and perishes on the edge of separation. It was a hazy night outside and there was no snow. In Room 208 of Tai'an, there was a gurgling sound of hot water pouring from the showerhead into the bathtub. Soaking in the bathtub, the water was thick and steamy, and the can of beer in his hand was devoured one by one. The years are counting down, and the memories are counting down. If I could, I would drink the memory of seven days in one gulp and let it ferment over and over again in my stomach. What echoed in my ears was Bobo's "Glory" that Chen Siyuan and Ding Ding repeatedly sang when a group of people sang K all night long: Thank you for the glory you gave me. This boy used to be so ordinary. It was you who allowed me to realize my dream to its peak. .

Weiwei texted me and asked me, brother, we are singing karaoke in Metro City, why don’t you come over? I said I was tired and just wanted to be alone and quiet. Xiaoci called me and told me that I was afraid that the song would end and we would all be gone, so you guys should have fun. Soak in the bathtub, drink all the remaining three bottles of beer, and get tipsy. Forgive me as a person who doesn't know how to drink. The bathroom was filled with steam and was hazy. Everything suddenly seemed like a dream. After waking up from the dream, the building was empty.

Ying said, you should smile, right? But why, why are the corners of my mouth so heavy that I can't tilt them up.

January 27-28. On the road.

As I set foot on the long-distance bus heading north again, I told myself that this was just a long journey. To rediscover the lost time in Shanghai would be a cruel self-destruction. All the way north. The scenery outside the window has changed, from a patch of green on the southern coast to covered with frost. These scenes I have never witnessed with my own eyes make me very happy. I think of the "latitudinal differences" I learned in high school geography, and I laugh at myself: "My geographical knowledge is finally over." You can connect with reality." Most of the trip was in the long dark night, with blurry lights flashing outside the car window. Occasionally catching a glimpse of thousands of lights can be reassuring. Lying in the berth, with the down of my coat facing out, as a pillow, text messages kept coming to me while I was half asleep and half awake. Weiwei's train departed from Taiyuan and went all the way south, while I went all the way north from Shantou. The destination is Shanghai. Send text messages to each other reporting trips.

Weiwei said, Brother, this is the first time I have walked so far alone. This winter trip has really made me braver. After arriving in Shanghai, I must have a good chat and walk around, and let everything slowly settle and settle over time. I am left-handed, and when I use my left thumb to edit text messages in a rickety car, I feel a slight soreness when I press it. I wanted to go to Shanghai quietly alone, but I still informed my mentors and friends out of reason. Along the way, someone asked me how I was doing. Teacher Xiaowai said, is it cold in the car? I said it wasn't cold, the berth was very warm, just like my heart. I said that I was fully armed. For a child who had lived on the Tropic of Cancer since childhood, ice and snow were a novelty. Teacher Xiaowai and I joked that we already have cotton trousers, cotton coats, cotton socks, gloves and scarves, all we need is a cotton trousers. Teacher Xiaowai said that this guy is said to be the warmest.

The car was driving along the highway in the coastal city. Guangdong. Fujian. Zhejiang. Finally arrived in Shanghai. A journey of more than a thousand kilometers. 19 hours. My favorite part was encountering the biggest snowfall in Shanghai in 20 years. The kind of snowflakes that can be described as "flying as light as goose feathers". Falling from the sky. Fall to the ground. Extremely beautiful. It was the first time I saw real snow, and I couldn’t wait to take out my camera and record it. Because I promised my family and best friends. Don't miss this opportunity. Chunxiao and others said that I was a happy child. God, forgive me for going crazy when I see snow.

Last year when I came to Shanghai, it was a warm winter, but this year it was a severe cold. I've all caught up. Su Xiaoci had arrived two days before me, and Li Chao went to pick her up. The night before she set out, she had already played a killer game with a group of people in Tai'an. It made me gnash my teeth with jealousy and wish I could show up on the streets of Shanghai right away. This little girl from Ningbo, who was born in 1990, has a conciseness in her words that transcends her age. I hate that I am growing old. I think what I wrote when I was her age was extremely immature. Children today are really scary. Before coming to Shanghai, I told her about introducing Weiwei to her. She said yes. The chance encounter between people is so wonderful. We have never met on the Internet, but we can still cherish each other. This time I came to Shanghai, Xiaoci was not a rematch. He was a kid I admired. He loved words and had a good attitude. He was completely different from those kids who cried for their parents when they lost. If we make an appointment to meet in Shanghai, we will really travel across thousands of mountains and rivers. 5. Looking for an English composition on New Concept 2

The traffic police usually give you a ticket if you park your car in the wrong place.The writer found a polite note during a holiday in Sweden.Traffic policeman want him park his car in parking area. If you recevied a request like this, you can't fail to obey it!

(51 words) Mine is absolutely accurate, for the sake of working so hard. Come on, give me some points! ! ! ! 6. How to write a good composition on new concepts

1. Accumulating composition materials. Accumulating rich composition materials is the first condition for writing a good composition.

Many article masters are quick in writing. The important reason is that they have a rich library of materials in their brains. When writing articles, they can use both directions with ease. If students want to write good compositions, they must also make great efforts to accumulate composition materials.

Writer Qin Mu said: "A writer should have three warehouses: a direct warehouse for materials obtained from life; an indirect warehouse for materials obtained from books and materials, and the other is The daily collection of people's language warehouses. With these three, it is easier to write. ”

The first two warehouses mentioned in this paragraph are what students need to write well. 1. The best way to accumulate "materials obtained from life" is to keep writing an observation diary.

A common problem among students when writing diaries is to keep a running account. They find it boring, so they don’t bother to write. I suggest you write according to the method taught by Mr. Lao She: "You should carefully observe the personality and characteristics of Lao Wang or Lao Li next to you. Pay attention to it at any time and write it down at any time... Remember it every day to develop a habit. < /p>

You can write down a gust of wind; you can also write down a gust of rain, because you never know when you will need to describe a gust of wind or a gust of rain in your work. If you don’t have this kind of accumulation, you won’t be able to write richly. " 2. Accumulate "materials obtained from books and materials". On the one hand, rely on in-class reading to combine reading and writing in Chinese classes; on the other hand, rely on extra-curricular reading and insist on writing excerpted reading notes. .

If you use a piece of paper for each excerpt, it is a reading card. As the saying goes: "A good memory is worse than a bad writing."

No matter how strong your memory is, as time goes by and there are too many things to remember, you will always forget some. If you excerpt the content that you think is very exciting while reading, not only can you avoid forgetting it, but it will also be easy to read.

The so-called "wonderful content" worth excerpting. It is related to the reader's interests, hobbies, level, needs and other factors, and there is no unified standard.

Generally speaking, wonderful warning sentences, vivid descriptions, novel and profound viewpoints, lively and interesting dialogues and even beautiful words can be classified and excerpted. For the convenience of future reference, it is also necessary to indicate the source of the material after excerpting the original text.

Many students have written excerpts or reading notes, but they insist on not writing much. It is a pity that a useful work should be abandoned halfway.

According to some statistics: Marx wrote "Das Kapital" and wrote "summaries" of more than 1,500 books; Lenin wrote "Philosophical Notes" and directly quoted dozens of philosophical works. Like a revolutionary mentor, insist on writing excerpted reading notes. It will make you a smart, fulfilled, and wealthy person, and will enable you to be quick and creative when writing in the future.

2. Training in a step-by-step manner. Improving writing ability is not something that happens overnight. It requires a long-term plan. Therefore, the sequence of composition training must be arranged. What kind of sequence is the most reasonable? From the growth process of many writing talents, we have seen a variety of "sequences", and it is difficult to say which one is the universal truth.

The following introduces the training sequence of "seven first, seven last", which may be a more common one. Please refer to it according to your own situation. 1. Practice writing narrative and descriptive articles first, and then practice writing explanatory and argumentative articles.

2. First practice writing about your own personal experiences, and then practice writing about things reported by others. 3. First focus on training observation and accumulation, and then focus on training analysis and expression. 4. Practice writing simple things first, and then practice writing complicated things.

5. First, do not be restricted by the "framework" of writing and write boldly; then, conduct standardized training according to the basic requirements and characteristics of different articles. 6. First "imitate" and write articles that follow the example; then "create" and write novel and unique articles.

7. First, strive to write long articles, emphasizing expansion and elaboration; then strive to write short articles, focusing on conciseness and conciseness. The above "seven first and seven last" are consistent with the law of people's understanding of things, from concrete to abstract, and the law of ability cultivation, from low to high, from clumsiness to skill.

As for when or to what extent should be used as the boundary between first and last, this is another issue that cannot be "one size fits all" and must be analyzed on a case-by-case basis. If some students alternately arrange the above seven first and seven later, such as imitating and creating and then imitating and creating again, it is not a bad idea.

3. Develop good writing habits. After students enter junior high school from elementary school, their composition training embarks on a new journey, and they must pay special attention to cultivating their own good writing habits. From the writing experience of the award-winning students in the essay competition, we have summarized the following seven good writing habits for students’ reference.

1. The habit of "writing every day and writing more or less". Many award-winning students said that their award-winning compositions were attributed to their insistence on keeping diaries. When they had more time, they wrote more, and when time was tight, they wrote less. Even if it was as few as dozens of words, they never stopped.

This is indeed a rule of thumb. As the saying goes, "Fists never leave your hands, music never leaves your mouth." If you write every day, you can practice writing more dexterously and accumulate a lot of composition materials.

2. The habit of "conceiving the whole article and writing an outline". When writing a composition, do not write the first paragraph without knowing what to write in the next paragraph. You must conceive the whole article and fix the "framework" of the composition in the form of an outline.

People who have been writing for a long time also have an outline before writing, but some hide the outline in their stomach, which is called "belly draft". 3. The habit of "reciting the first draft of an article silently".

In ancient poetry writing, there was a habit of "yining" and "humming", because there were many problems that could not be "seen" and read out loud. If you are in the examination room, you can only read silently to find out whether the sentences are smooth, whether the tone is coherent, whether the context is smooth, and whether the phonology is harmonious.

4. The habit of "revising carefully". The ancients said: "An article never gets tired of being revised a hundred times." This is a golden saying for writing good articles, and it is also the experience of all article masters.

Without this habit, it would be almost impossible to write good articles. 5. The habit of “not telling lies”.

Any good article must express the author’s true feelings. No falsehood can deceive the readers. If students who are just learning to write contract the terminal disease of disease-free ***, there will be almost no hope of getting better in their future of writing.

6. The habit of "Don't write hard, force yourself to write". Lu Xun said that if you can't write, don't write hard. Of course, he is right, because what you write hard is inevitably false.

However, if students are unable to write the composition proposition given by their teacher, they must not use the excuse of "don't write it hard".