English composition about crossing the line of fire?

On July 2 1st, the rainstorm in Beijing reached the rainstorm weather, with an average rainfall of 170mm, which is the maximum rainfall with complete meteorological records since1951ST. Among them, the maximum rainfall in Hebei Town of Fangshan District reached 460mm. Heavy rain triggered Fangshan mountain torrents, and the flood peak of Juma River discharged. By the 22nd 17, 37 people had been found dead in Beijing.

On July 2 1 day, there was a rainstorm in Beijing, and the average precipitation in the city was 170 mm, which was the largest precipitation with complete meteorological records since 195 1. The largest rainfall point is 460mm in Hebei Town, Fangshan District. Torrential rain triggered mountain torrents in Fangshan area, and the flood peak in the upper reaches of Juma River discharged. As of 22 17: 00, 37 people have been found dead in Beijing.

I have just been promoted from Grade One to Grade Two, and some words can be looked up in English-Chinese translation. Hope to adopt