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Look at the picture and write a composition

1. How to write a composition with multiple pictures? When reading multiple pictures and writing a composition, we should clearly see the changes in the relationship between environment, characters, main characters and secondary characters in continuous pictures, and also analyze the internal logical relationship between multiple pictures. For example, Good Neighbor has four pictures. The first picture: There are some clothes hanging in a yard, and the clothes are floating in the strong wind. Picture 2: It's raining heavily. Rush to the yard. The third picture: The boy is walking into the house with some clothes on his arms and wrists. In the yard, it is still raining heavily. Picture 4: In a room, a boy is folding clothes for an aunt. These four pictures are obviously arranged in chronological order, showing the development process of a thing. As can be seen from the middle two pictures, the plot develops rapidly due to weather changes. From the first and last pictures, I guess the weather must be fine in the morning. Aunt took time to wash clothes and hang them in the yard to go to work. After considering the whole process, we should pay attention to the details when writing the content of each picture. The first picture: Clear sky in Wan Li, clean clothes hanging on a rope. The weather changed suddenly, the sky was getting darker and the wind was getting stronger. Picture 2: It's starting to rain. It was the rain that hit the window and made the boys notice the situation in the yard. What was he thinking when he saw the rain? How did he rush into the yard in three steps and two steps? How does he choose clothes? Verbs should be used continuously to describe the action of picking clothes: stand on tiptoe, stretch your arm, reach for it, pick and pull. The rain soaked your hair and poured it into your neck, and he completely ignored it. Is there a little dress that he hung too high and pulled down ... these details should be reasonably imagined according to the picture and our actual life. The third picture. Maybe he washed the clothes soaked by rain with clear water again and put them in the washing machine to dry before hanging them in the room. Figure 4: Looking at the movements of the two people in the picture, I can imagine that the aunt must be praising and thanking the boy over and over again. It was the child who said, "You're welcome, who let us all be good neighbors?" In short, when reading multiple pictures, we should pay attention to the changes of pictures, the connection between pictures, the association and details when reading. Only in this way can the composition be vivid and touching.

2. Look at the picture and write a composition (300 words). Mother's love is like the warm wind in spring, blowing your heart; Motherly love is like a continuous drizzle, patting your face and nourishing your heart; Motherly love is like a stove in winter, which gives you warm sunshine in severe winter.

I remember when I was a child, it was very cold one winter. Dad is on a business trip, and my mother has to take care of both the business in the store and me.

However, my mother wouldn't let me go out to play and let me stay at home for fear of catching a cold. But she was disobedient and sneaked out while my mother was busy. As a result, in the early morning, I had a high fever and my mother was frightened. You said my dad wasn't here, and it was just my mom and me. What should I do? My mother immediately took me to the hospital.

It was dark on the road. I was so scared that I called out to my mother. My mother said, "Lulu, don't be afraid. Just lie on my mother's back and you will be there. "

When I arrived at the emergency room of the hospital, I saw the doctor. The doctor took my temperature. At first glance, it is a high fever of 465,438+0 degrees Celsius. The doctor said to my mother, "How did you become a mother?" The children were burned like this. How did they get sent here? Must be hospitalized, and go through the hospitalization procedures quickly! "Mom just silently said," well. "

But maternal love is sometimes severe, and my mother never relaxes in my study. It was the first semester of grade five, and I got 76 points in English.

When I handed the paper to my mother in fear and trembling, her mother didn't say a word to me when she saw the score. A man walked into the bedroom and slammed the door. I really can't help it. I walked into the bedroom, stood in front of my mother with tears and said, "Mom, hit me!" " You hit me! I am disobedient, and I will study hard in the future. "

Mom said with tears in her eyes, "Lulu, mom won't hit you, but you have to remember that if you want to get ahead and be a person who contributes to the country in the future, you must be down-to-earth, step by step, and study hard from now on!" Maternal love is the greatest kind of love. Children are flowers and plants watered by their mothers with their own love, and their growth cannot be separated from every drop of their mothers' love.

A mother, who escorts her children all her life, silently guides them behind her back. Can we repay our mother's love? Just like: "But how much love there is in an inch of grass, I got three spring rays."

Great maternal love as the saying goes, "the thread in the hands of a loving mother makes clothes for wayward children", maternal love is great. From the moment you were born, God gave you an angel who will always be with you. Her name is Mom.

When I was in grade one, my father worked in other places and my mother was the head teacher in a middle school. She is busy with work and often comes home late. But her love for me hasn't diminished at all.

I remember it was a night when silver peas fell from the sky. Because of a cold, I rest at home. My mother was still teaching students in the classroom, but at this moment, I suddenly had a high fever and my forehead was extremely hot.

And my mother just dragged her tired body home and saw that I had a high fever, so she quickly picked me up and rushed out. There are no pedestrians and cars in the street, only her thin figure shuttles through the rain. A cold wind blew and I sneezed. My mother seems to have noticed something.

She held me in her arms and wrapped me in her furry coat. Then, act quickly and run to the hospital.

When I arrived at the hospital, my mother didn't even breathe, so she held me for registration, injection and infusion. I was crying all the time during the injection, so my mother took my hand and whispered to me, "Dear daughter, don't cry, mom will always be by your side."

At that time, after listening to this sentence, my body seemed to be full of strength at once. My mother stayed with me day and night during the infusion.

I am hungry, she feeds me, I want to sleep, and she tells me stories. I lost two days and two nights, and my mother stayed with me for two days and two nights.

I have recovered from my illness and gained weight, but my mother's eyes are red, and I have lost a lot of weight with dark circles. I will study hard in the future and repay my mother with excellent results.

My father loves me like a mountain. My father looks like a slow person. He is usually unsmiling and serious. As far as I can remember, he didn't seem to hug me or say a warm word to me. After a long time, I don't think my father likes me at all. Every time I see him, I feel a little "scared" for no reason. Perhaps seeing the recognition of our father and son's feelings, my mother told me a few things, which opened the floodgate of my memory.

My mother told me that when I was born, my mother was in the operating room, and my father was waiting anxiously outside the door. He kept walking around. Knowing that the mother and son were safe, he jumped up happily and quickly bought some candy and melon seeds to distribute to everyone he met. Dad can't control his feelings. I don't know how many times he walked into the corridor and let the tears of happiness flow.

And when I was six or seven years old, one night, my mother worked the night shift, and my father took me to the newly-built stadium to play. At that time, the lights in the square were not installed, but many people came to exercise. As soon as I got to the edge of the court, I rushed into the sea like an arrow, and my father called me from behind. I pretended not to hear, for fear that he would restrict my freedom. When I enjoyed myself for a while, I found my father was not with me. Suddenly, I felt a little scared. I know the disaster is great, and I am worried about the bad guys. I was afraid to call my father, so I struggled to run home in fear. When I got home, my father had not come back. I also know that my father must be looking for me everywhere, so I sit in a dark corner of the building.

I don't know how long it took before I saw my father limping with his shoes, and his face was full of anxiety. I thought: my grumpy father will definitely hit me hard this time. When my father saw me, he gently picked me up and said to me in a hoarse voice, "Don't run so fast in the future. If an adult calls you, you have to promise at once, okay? " I nodded, and when my father put me down, I found a lot of blood on my father's feet. I know, in order to find me, my father dragged an injured leg for many miles and his foot was worn out.

Now that I think about it, I know that my father loves me, too, but I just buried my love in my heart. My father's love is like a mountain. My father's love taught me to be strong and grow up with me.

My father loves me like a mountain. I wanted to write an article for my father a long time ago, but I didn't start writing.

3. Look at the picture composition. Writing guidance of picture composition

1, observe the pictures and prioritize.

The key to watching a picture composition is to observe the picture. Only by mastering the correct observation method can we accurately understand the meaning of the picture. Every picture incorporates the author's creative intention. Painting, like composition, must be prioritized. Therefore, when observing the picture, we must first distinguish which is the subject, which is the background and which is the foil, and understand the internal relationship between the scenes on the picture, so as to accurately grasp the center.

2. Expand imagination and enrich content.

What is displayed on the screen is often an "instant" scene. Therefore, if you only look at the picture, your thinking will be bound. You have to expand the real-time scene, think about the cause and effect, and add the necessary content outside the screen. Only in this way can the meaning of the picture be more complete, and the still people and things can live and be full of life.

3, grasp the key points, reasonable conception.

After observing the picture and making a reasonable imagination, we should write out the main picture and its association in detail, grasp the internal relationship with the main picture, highlight the main body, and describe the background and background in the picture. In this way, the articles written can be clear and focused. In addition, when conceiving, we should pay attention to highlighting key points, defining priorities and organizing materials in a certain order. If there is no text introduction in the picture, then the time and place can be determined according to the content of the picture, and the characters in the picture can be named by themselves. The meaning is coherent and the language is fluent.

In the composition of reading pictures, it is very helpful for us to grasp these points to improve our ability of reading pictures and writing.

Look at the pictures and write a composition.

Writing by looking at pictures, as the name implies, is to write an article by looking at pictures or photos. In order to make the article accurately reflect the meaning of the picture, it can not be ignored to see the picture clearly. To see the picture clearly, one must have a global view, see the whole picture and observe it step by step. The second is to observe the background and characters. For example, what is reflected in the background of the picture, how the close shot and the long shot cooperate, and what is the relationship with the characters on the picture; And the figure, age and activities of the characters. The third is to observe the details. (such as facial expressions, costumes, utensils, etc.). ). Why can Leonardo da Vinci's The Last Supper remain immortal? Apart from the touching scene of Jesus having his last dinner with his 12 disciples, which constitutes the overall aesthetic feeling of the picture, I am afraid the details of this painting are particularly touching, especially the facial details of Judas, the traitor who betrayed Jesus, which are vividly painted. Painting is like this, and so is composition with pictures. The most important thing is to be good at seeing the details on the screen and thinking about the purpose of the author's painting these details. The fourth is to understand the author's creative intention. Accurately grasp the theme of a painting, and you can write well by looking at the picture. In this way, we should carefully understand the author's creative intention: what does he (she) advocate and oppose in the painting? What do you praise and criticize? What does he want to explain? How do you integrate your intentions into the picture?

Pictures only depict "instantaneous" scenes in life. Writing with pictures is to develop a reasonable imagination, draw out the dynamics from the static state, write the process from an "instant", make the picture move, let the people in the picture move, and let the things in the picture move. How to cultivate a reasonable imagination by looking at the picture composition?

Looking at the composition of the picture and developing a reasonable imagination, we can use the method of "looking forward and looking back" to think about what the scene before and after this painting is; What the people in the photo were doing before and what they will do in the future. It is unreasonable to abandon the content of the picture to think. Reasonable imagination, we should boldly combine our own life reality and put ourselves in the shoes. Suppose you are the person in the picture, what would you do and think at this moment? Doing so can enrich the content of the picture.

Pictures, like articles, have primary and secondary contents. Generally speaking, the picture is in the main position and prominent position. Is the main content, belongs to the key; What is in a non-dominant or non-prominent position is secondary content. Look at the picture composition, is to grasp the key points, write the key points in detail, write specific, so as to show the meaning of the picture. Grasping the key points does not mean that you should not write non-main content on the screen. Highlighting the key points and selectively describing the non-main contents on the screen can play the role of green leaves supporting red flowers.

Look at the picture composition. Besides one picture, there are two, three or even more pictures. When writing a composition with multiple pictures, we must grasp the relationship between the pictures and connect the meanings of the pictures to form a whole. It's like a bicycle. It cannot work with two wheels. Can't turn yet. Only by installing a chain and stepping on the pedal can the wheels be connected. When pedaling, the rear wheel rotates to drive the front wheel, and the bicycle will move. This pedal and chain are connectors between bicycle wheels. So, where are the "chains" and "treads" between multiple pictures? It's not hard to find. The key is to understand the meaning of each picture and connect the meanings of each picture in series to form a complete story.

4. Look at the pictures and write a composition. How to write a good picture composition can be single or multiple, but looking at pictures is the premise of writing. Look at the picture and think in order, or from top to bottom and from bottom to top; Or from far and near, from near and far; Or from the middle to the periphery; Or from people to scenery, from scenery to people. Think about what is drawn on the picture, and first have a general understanding of the main content expressed in the picture. Then look at the picture carefully, understand the environment and place where things happen, and analyze the time when things happen from the scenery and the clothes of the characters. Carefully observe the clothes and figures of the characters and think about their identity, age and occupation; Observe the movements of the characters carefully and think about what they are doing and how to do it; Observe the expressions of the characters carefully and think about their thoughts and feelings. Then think about what the whole painting shows and what the purpose of the painting is. Finally, write an outline according to the meaning of the picture. A single narrative picture only shows part of one thing. In addition to the methods mentioned above, you should also learn to imagine what will happen before and what will change in the future from the content of a picture, and pay attention to writing the beginning and end. If there are multiple pictures, pay attention to the connection between them. Pay attention to things that don't appear in the above picture, such as what new characters have appeared and what changes have taken place. Even if it is the same picture, we should pay special attention to the subtle changes in the picture, such as the movements and expressions of the characters and the changes in the weather. To understand the development and changes of things. Read them one by one, and then read them again in succession, so that things on the screen can happen, develop and result. Make a complete impression in your mind, then list the outline according to the main meaning of each picture, highlight the key points, pay attention to the details, and don't use force evenly in each picture. The narrative description of each picture should be coherent and interrelated, and should not be a pictorial explanation. The picture of reading and writing is static and monotonous We should make the still picture move through careful observation and reasonable imagination, so as to enrich the monotonous picture, such as making the scenery colorful through psychological activities. The method of writing words by looking at pictures can be simply summarized as twelve words: sequential observation, trying to express and reasonable imagination.

5. How to write "picture composition" 1 of multiple pictures? Observe and analyze the pictures.

Look at the pictures in your composition. Pictures are the basis of your composition. Therefore, you must first look at the content of the picture. What people, when and where are drawn on the screen, and the relationship between the characters must be made clear, and no detail can be missed. The methods of observation are generally from top to bottom or from left to right, from people to things or from scenery to people. Observe orderly, and the articles written can be organized; Careful observation can reveal vivid plots and touching details; Observation is comprehensive, and the written article can be complete; Distinguish priorities, and the articles written can be focused and the details are appropriate. Especially for the composition of multiple pictures, it is necessary to see the order of the pictures clearly and understand the direct relationship of each picture, so as to lay a good foundation for further conceptual writing.

When you look at a picture composition, the meaning of painting is the orientation of thinking. If you accurately grasp the meaning of painting, your thinking is not. What should I pay attention to when looking at a picture composition? The design and layout of each painting have a certain purpose. After observing the pictures, we should seriously think about the central idea reflected in the pictures. To infer the central idea of a picture, we should start from three aspects: first, look at the titles of the picture, some of which are the themes of the picture; Second, from the text description of the picture; The third is to analyze the people and things described in the picture and their relationships. Only by grasping the center can the written article meet the requirements of illustrated composition.

Second, cultivate a reasonable imagination.

Imagination is the core of picture composition, which should be centered on painting. We should use our brains, expand our reasonable imagination and "live" those still characters and scenes on the screen. We can conceive the plot according to the facts of life and our own experiences, we can imagine ourselves as the protagonist in the painting, and we can arrange the scenes in the painting into real life. Therefore, the characters on the screen should not only have appearance and manner, but also have actions, language and psychological activities, so that the scenery on the screen has color and sound, and appropriate names can be arranged for the characters according to needs to enhance the vividness of the article.

Third, choose points, make ideas and write.

Choosing a point is choosing an angle. After examining the topic and looking at the painting, we can determine the focus of thinking according to the meaning of the painting. Choose something accurate and don't deviate from the meaning of the painting. It is best to choose only one point, which sometimes affects writing. The intention is to establish the central idea and formulate the theme. Because the starting point (angle) is different, the idea will not be exactly the same, but no matter what central content you choose to write, you can't leave the basic meaning of the picture, and you must conform to the main idea of the picture. According to the meaning of writing, that is to say, we should conceive, plan and write according to the topic and picture. When you start writing, you must contact the pictures and deepen the theme. We should prevent Wan Li from deviating from the picture and from his lack of imagination. Reasoning should focus on reasoning, avoid being widely dispersed, and prevent being bound by pictures, so that ideas cannot be displayed.

In addition, the language of the composition should be lively, and various expressive techniques such as narration, description, lyricism, discussion and explanation can be used to connect the people, things and scenes in the picture into a whole, making it a good article with complete structure, accurate and vivid language and prominent center.

We can look at the pictures written by the following two young authors. If you are interested, you can also take a written test yourself according to the pictures.

6. Write a composition around a picture "click", and my favorite photo was born in my mother's camera in an instant.

Whenever I see it, I will think of the time when I went to Qiandao Lake with my parents. Look, I'm smiling in the photo, my eyes are narrowing, and a small dimple appears on my cheek.

I'm wearing a black T-shirt and jeans, with a big fish-shaped lock on my back. How handsome I look! Behind me is a dense grove. Kobanawa has tall and straight trees, green grass and yellowish low bushes. What a beautiful scenery! Look at this photo, and the floodgate of my memory will open automatically. On that day, Wan Li was clear, and our family came to Qiandao Lake with the school tour group.

There are beautiful scenery, birds and flowers, and many small islands. We came to the "Lock Island" and saw countless small "heart locks".

People are locking messages and pinning their good feelings. Let's move on.

Wow! There is a big lock here! Although this kind of lock is very similar to our common lock in appearance, it is extremely huge-hundreds of times larger than the usual lock! While introducing, the tour guide pointed to a nearby place and said that there stood a key, and whoever could turn it could open the lock. Dad's curiosity came up. He went to the big key and mentioned the guy with difficulty. He really opened this huge lock, and we all cheered ... We walked for a while, and suddenly, a huge stone carp appeared on the roadside! A closer look reveals that it is a carp-shaped lock! I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it, and pestered my mother to help me take a photo with the "big carp".

This is my favorite photo, and I will cherish it in the long river of memory forever.

7. I read a cartoon in a cartoon: in a big forest, a man was cutting down a tree with a sharp axe, and the tree was crying. On that man's shoulder.

A woodpecker stopped. The woodpecker looked at the man's head and said, "There must be bugs in this piece of wood." I wonder if you can understand the meaning of this cartoon. That man does have a "bug" in his mind, but this bug is not another bug. This "worm" refers to the heartworm of the person who destroys the ecological balance. Woodpeckers say that they "have worms in their heads", which is hard to blame. However, in our daily life and in the world, there are countless people with such "worms in their heads", but woodpeckers are few and far between.

Usually, many students' draft papers are thrown into the trash can after only a few strokes. You know, these documents

A tree; The water is quite boiling when you wash your hands. Needless to say, I washed my hands and left without turning off the water. You should know how precious water is in arid areas. Usually throwing garbage on the ground affects both the environment and the appearance. . You know, our planet has been greatly damaged now, but those who "have worms in their heads" never realize that they are destroying the environment for their own interests: deforestation and destruction of vegetation; In order to facilitate the discharge of sewage into rivers, I don't know how many rivers can't be drunk, and our mother river, the Yellow River, has become turbid; Chengdu, once the land of abundance, is no longer beautiful, and the land is marching towards desertification; Air pollution is getting worse and worse, and acid rain is almost everywhere. . Before such a shocking thing happened, human beings didn't seem to wake up, the greedy bugs in people's minds were getting bigger and bigger, and people were already fascinated by desire. Since it comes to human footprints, animals have never lived a peaceful life, once docile and comfortable Tibetan antelope.

I am exhausted to avoid human pursuit; Whales that once dominated the ocean are on the verge of extinction. . hear nothing of

How many creatures died out under the greedy worm of human brain, and died out in the long river of history.

Now we must protect our beautiful earth, because saving the earth means saving the future, and I

The first thing we should do is to kill the greedy bugs in our minds. Students, please light you up.

Endoscope, "Do you still have worms in your head?"

8. What are the advantages of primary school students writing a composition about pictures? First, it can improve our observation ability.

When writing a composition with pictures, you should first observe the pictures in front of you and then start writing, so as to write a good article. How to observe? What to observe first? After observing what? What are the main observations? Which ones are secondary? In this way, after long-term training in reading pictures and writing, the observation ability has been exercised and improved.

Secondly, we can use our imagination. Looking at the picture composition, we don't shoot the picture content like a camera. To make it a central, organized, concrete and complete article, to make the characters in the picture alive, and to make the story in the picture finish, it is necessary to associate and imagine.

Picture composition is the basis of propositional composition and the comprehensive training of observation, thinking and expression ability, which plays an important role in composition training in primary schools. In some provinces, cities and counties, this form of composition often appears in the final examination of primary school graduation, and even in the senior high school entrance examination and college entrance examination.

Therefore, it is very important to train good-looking compositions from primary school. Formally speaking, there are two kinds of compositions: single composition and multiple compositions.

A single composition requires performance around the center of the picture and accurate and hierarchical writing of the picture content. Picture composition requires understanding the content of each picture, studying the relationship and changes between pictures, and then grasping the main content of these pictures as a whole. Look at the picture composition from the expression.

It can be divided into narrative, descriptive, explanatory and rational categories. The primary school stage is mainly to train narrative composition of reading pictures, but descriptive, explanatory and relatively simple and rational composition of reading pictures can not be ignored.