Read the following passage with a bad language. Can you "treat" this passage according to the "diagnosis"?

One day in the summer vacation, I went to my grandmother's house in the country. The sun is burning at noon, and the weather is really hot! There is not even a shady place along the way, and the loess baked by the sun seems to be smoking. It happened that there was a big bluestone by the roadside. I sat on the stone and felt as if it had been cooked.