Spring Tour Composition (Dapeng Ancient Town)

The spring breeze gently blows across my cheeks, and it slowly blows into my heart, making me relaxed and happy.

Today is my long-awaited spring outing, and we came to the beautiful Daqinggu. Although the weather is not very good today, my mood is not affected by the weather at all, and I have an overwhelming joy.

As soon as I entered the Daqing Valley, thick green appeared in front of me. Birds are singing rhythmically in the trees, and the new leaves follow the rhythm. Frogs see it "quack, quack" from time to time. Everything on the earth seems to be dissolved in this natural little concert, and they cooperate tacitly without any mistakes. After listening to the music of nature, I.

I sat with my classmates, telling jokes and eating together, but I was immersed in the beautiful scenery. Everywhere is green, with mountains, grass and pavilions. Even the water in the stream seems to be green, and the air is filled with the green breath of nature. I really want to live in nature and breathe fresh air every day. My life will be better.

The stream is crystal clear, and occasionally a small group of tadpoles can be seen passing by. This stream is very cold, so I think it will be cool for people to bathe in the small lake downstream in summer. I put a little water in my hand to see if it was sweet, so I took out a paper towel and shook it in the water. It's really sweet, but I'm afraid of bacteria, so I dare not drink more.

How charming nature is. Today, the students had a good time in Daqinggu and enjoyed the beauty of nature.

How to write a composition for a spring outing

"The grass grows in February, and the willows are drunk with spring smoke." How happy it is to go on a spring outing and be intoxicated by the lakes and mountains! However, many students frown at the thought of the composition asked by the teacher after each spring outing, and don't know how to write it well.

The composition of spring outing is a travel note, which is a composition written after the tour, describing the process and experience of the tour. You can take the spring scenery you saw during the spring outing as the main content, supplemented by the emotions generated during the scenery appreciation; You can also record unforgettable things that happened during the spring outing ... When writing, you must first write in a certain order. Generally speaking, the order of sightseeing can be used as the order of travel notes. Because travel is usually carried out in time or route order, travel notes are usually in time or route order. Sometimes, when you visit the same thing from different angles, or stand at a scenic spot and look around the scenery, it is more appropriate to take space as the order. For example, in the lesson "Remember Jinhua Shuanglong Cave", the route of the author's visit to Shuanglong Cave is: on the road-outside the cave-in the pore-inside the cave-outside the cave. The article is written one by one according to the tour route, with clear context and clear organization.

Secondly, we should focus on describing the scenery. Writing travel notes is to record the author's travel footprints, so that readers can realize their love for famous mountains and rivers, praise for scenic spots and historical sites, and respect for revolutionary holy places ... So we should seize the lens that can arouse tourists' interest most and focus on describing several places. Don't describe everything you see and hear, use your strength evenly, but write down what impressed you most through careful observation. For example, in the article "Remember Jinhua Shuanglong Cave", the author focuses on the feeling of entering the inner cave from the outer cave, especially the experience of the inner cave. Through vivid description, people feel immersive.

We should also grasp the characteristics of scenery description. When observing the scenery, we should pay attention to the unique characteristics of the scenery, especially the strange scenery, and carefully observe and compare it from the aspects of color and shape. He is good at capturing its unique features, and vividly depicts the unique features of the scenery by using rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification, exaggeration and parallelism. For example, in the lesson "Guilin Landscape", the author swims on the blue waves and grasps the characteristics of Lijiang River: quiet, clear and green, while Guilin Mountain is characterized by strangeness, beauty and danger. While reading the article, we seem to appreciate the beauty and strangeness of Guilin's landscape.

Composition must be "mixed". This means that landscape writing must be closely combined with lyricism. A beautiful scenic spot will definitely bring pleasant enjoyment to tourists. Writing this beautiful feeling can enhance the appeal of the composition and make readers yearn for the scenic spots you wrote after reading your article. To achieve this effect, your composition will shine brilliantly.