Composition describing the scenery of Daoxugou, 400 words, urgent! ! !

During holidays, if I have free time, I always follow my art teacher to sketch in remote mountainous areas. The environment of the scenic spot is like Yaochi fairyland, which makes people linger, but what really impresses me is a high threshold in front of the farmhouse hall where we temporarily live.

My teacher likes undeveloped, artificially carved environment. What he wants is natural and simple scenery. In that place, the only farmhouse we can live in is the shabby doorway and different doorways.

When I first went out to sketch a few years ago, I often tripped over the threshold, from the base to the calf. I often walk into a door without warning and stumble. I slapped the bodhisattva on the table of the Eight Immortals on the head. After a lot of boring losses, I finally learned to be smart. Whenever I see a door more than two meters high and more than ten centimeters thick, I will subconsciously do leg lifts.

Only later did I understand the mystery. It turns out that in this remote mountainous area, folk customs are old-fashioned and backward, and thoughts are feudal and conservative. And the height of that threshold is equal to the family's local status and so on. The higher the threshold, the higher the status of the symbol. I was very happy. What if I live in the village head's house?

So I began to pay attention to those thresholds and this closed village.

The weather in July, although the summer heat in the mountains is not heavy, is still dry and sultry. We started painting at five o'clock in the morning and painted until around nine o'clock in the morning. Some people wander in the mountains from time to time, occasionally look back, as if afraid to disturb us, shrink aside and say nothing. There are only some teenagers in the mountains, but they don't go to school and run all over the mountain. When they saw someone drawing, they gathered around and began to be timid and silent. Then a bold child asked, "Is it a golden haystack in the distance?" My answer is that they started talking a lot and asked me how much this painting cost. I smiled and told them that it was just a work, not for sale. A child asked me if I could give it to her. I nodded, took the painting and told her to wait until it was dry before taking it away. In the meantime, I asked them why they didn't go to class. A group of children frankly said that their families were poor, or that there were no scholars in their ancestors, and that the theory that reading was useless came from their parents. Suddenly, I remembered the high threshold and the dark hall inside, as if it had been blocked by doors for thousands of years.

When the painting dried up, it was blown by the wind with a lot of fine dust and embedded in the art paper. The children didn't dislike it and held it like a baby. I'm beginning to find this scene less pleasant.

When I got home, my landlady came to hold my hand and I helped her across the threshold. She held me trembling and trudged out. She said she would come next time with a strong accent. I nodded and stared at her little feet. The car is drifting away.

I turned around and looked at the old woman leaning against the door. When the sun sets, the door is yellow, but it doesn't shine on her lost years.

Comments: This is a rare narrative.

The idea of the article is obvious. Remote rural areas must cross the threshold of conservative folk customs and feudal conservatism. But the author didn't make a slogan, but turned it into a series of tangible images: high-pitched doorsteps, dim halls, children who don't go to school, and grandmothers with strong local accent and little feet. The ending is particularly prominent. The afterglow of the sunset shines on the old woman standing by the door and the door with a high roof, but it does not shine on the old woman's lost years and the dim hall in the roof. Obviously, the countryside has not crossed the backward hurdle, suggesting that they must cross this hurdle before they can enter the modern civilized society. The language of the article is very plain and clean, and sometimes there are no compound words, such as natural and simple "scenery" and fine "dust", but it makes people memorable. The exquisiteness and concreteness of the description are even more admirable.

Of course, as an exam article, you also need to make the meaning of the main points more clear at the end.

Fan Wen Er must cross this hurdle.

Weeds rushed out of the cracks, so they ushered in vitality; Running water rushed out of the valley and the river burned. In life, hidden obstacles cross in front of us from time to time. If we can't jump over them, we can't shine, so we always remember: we must cross this hurdle!

We must cross the threshold of youth. "Youth is like the germination of a hundred flowers, like the rebirth of a sharp blade", which is a symbol of light and hope. However, just like the undercurrent surging under the cheerful running water, youth is mixed with rebellion, impetuousness and impulsiveness. Chen, a national table tennis player, was young and promising, but after losing the game, he dropped his racket and behaved rudely. This can't help but make us sigh. His young mind did not grow with fame, but gained fame and burden prematurely in a period when he did not have a calm mind. Youth is a book that is too hasty. If the correct emotional values are not formed under the correct guidance, it will not only hinder the development of individuals, but also hinder the formation of social ethics. Instead, let's compare the success of Liu Xiang. His confidence and publicity made him win at the starting line. While crossing the track hurdles, he crossed the young and impetuous autumn with vigorous spirit, so in him, we saw a domineering attitude and rare quality!

We must overcome the obstacles of setbacks. "Real warriors also face a bleak life and dare to face dripping blood". When encountering setbacks, only Nuo Nuo will be lost in setbacks forever; Reckless and hard-hitting, it is inevitable that the head will be broken; Therefore, correct introspection and optimistic attitude are the internal and external forces to cross this threshold. Demosthenes, an ancient orator in Athens, overcame stuttering with immortal faith and achieved his career. To overcome this hurdle, we need the self-evaluation of a strategist and the wisdom of a philosopher. Admittedly, the most important thing is the courage to rush out of obstacles like an adventurer. My thoughts are immortal, and I am fearless in the face of setbacks!

We must cross the threshold of thinking. Narrow-minded will hurt the truth.