Observing the weather changes, the composition is urgent and must be handed in today. Really, I won't lie to you. . . 、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、、

I got up yesterday morning and saw it raining in Mao Mao outside the window, so I thought, Hey! It's time to open the umbrella stand again. However, I have to go to school, so I have to bite the bullet and get to school. When I arrived at the school gate, I saw handfuls of "flower umbrellas" blocking the oncoming raindrops. The raindrops falling from the sky fell on the "flower umbrellas" and sang melodious songs. In this way, the naughty light rain kept jumping wow, wow, until noon, when it was tired of playing, it ran back to Mama Wuyun's arms. The weather is getting cloudy, and the shy grandfather Sun has been hiding in his home-the horizon. Time passed quickly, and then slipped away on Thursday. On Friday morning, I just woke up from a sweet dream and a dazzling light flashed in front of my eyes. It turned out that the sun hung in the blue sky and baked the earth. Everyone smiled happily when they saw their long-lost grandson. What an unpredictable magician the weather is! Teacher's comment: The little author of this diary recorded his observation of the weather. The author introduced two kinds of weather in the article, namely rainy day and sunny day. The article uses personification rhetoric, and the author uses his own imagination to vividly describe rainy and sunny scenes, which makes readers feel that the weather seems to be very individual. Articles are written in chronological order, so they are well organized. This article shows the author's meticulous observation ability and good language expression ability. "Rain from the sky drops on the' flower umbrella' and makes melodious songs" is changed to "Rain from the sky drops on the' flower umbrella' and makes melodious songs". "Naughty light rain kept jumping and laughing" was changed to "Naughty light rain kept jumping and laughing".