Real Writing and Imaginary Writing under the Windbreak Peak of Xijiang Moon

Under the three peaks of wind resistance

Full of autumn colors, driving on the wide and open river. Wave God (1) told me to watch the sunset and set off scale waves.

If the wind blows tomorrow, the weather will be better, so why not camp outside tonight? A play in the Crystal Palace must be on the Yueyang Tower. [ 1-3]

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1 Poseidon: Water God.

② Return air: change to downwind.

(3) Crystal Palace: an underwater palace in ancient legends.

④ Nishang: namely "Colorful Feather", which is a popular dance music in the Tang Dynasty.

Modern translation of this paragraph:

A boat full of autumn colors is sailing on the vast and flat river. It seems that the water god left me to enjoy the sunset, and the breeze made the waves sparkling. It's better to sail tomorrow when the wind changes. It doesn't matter if you sleep outside tonight. When you climb the Yueyang Tower, you will play neon music, just like the Crystal Palace.

The creative background of this paragraph:

Zhang Xiaoxiang met Tanzhou (now Changsha City, Hunan Province) on 1 167 (the third year of Song Xiaozong trunk road). Later, Guan Gai left Hunan and went north by boat, passing through Huangling Mountain near Dongting Lake. When he was blocked by the strong wind, he wrote this song "Under Three Winds" in Xijiangyue.

Appreciation of works:

Appreciation 1:

1, the first two sentences of the first part, are about the boat moving slowly on the charming river in Qiu Guang. The autumn wind gradually rises, the smoke waves are vast, and the lake is ten miles long. "Autumn color" is an intangible thing, meaning "a boat full", which changes the intangible into tangible and gives people a sense of freshness. In the sentence Poseidon, the poet's voyage was blocked by the wind and waves, but he said humorously that it was the wind and waves that prevented him from enjoying the beautiful sunset and the fish-scale waves on the lake. Imagination is strange and interesting, revealing the poet's happy-go-lucky, optimistic and open-minded mentality.

2. The next film moves from the scene to the artistic conception. After the storm, the lake was calm, and the poet imagined that the weather would improve and the wind would clear tomorrow. He said happily that even if he slept on the lake today and the cool wind came, his heart was very comfortable. The word "Crystal Palace" is imaginative and unique in landscaping, taking care of the "wave god". The Shuifu Fish Palace in front of us seems to be accompanied by the autumn wind, patting the wooden boat gently and making bursts of sounds, just like the "colorful feathers" played by the aquarium people. It is beautiful and beautiful. Finally, he concluded with "quasi-quasi-quasi-Yueyang Tower", saying that he must climb Yueyang Tower in order to appreciate the beautiful scenery of Dongting Lake. When the Yueyang Tower is mentioned, people will think of Fan Zhongyan's famous sentence, "Worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later." While enjoying the beautiful scenery, the poet is still subconsciously driven by Fan's lofty ideal of taking the world as his own responsibility. He hopes to show his ambition and build his achievements one day.

3. The whole poem is full of emotion, full of scenes, rich in imagination, bold in brushwork, dynamic in silence, full of romance, humorous in language, strong in artistic effect and unique in style.

Appreciation 2:

1, "Xijiang Moon under Three Winds" is written in the first part, which describes what I saw and felt when my ship was blocked by the wind and moored under Zhoushan Island.

2. "The boat is full of autumn colors and ten miles of lake light." The first two sentences are about the scenery before the wind rises. Autumn colors on a boat is the author's emotional work, which outlines the characteristics of seasons and makes people daydream. It is conceivable that at this time, the surrounding mountains are lush and green, everything is full of vitality, flowers are gorgeous and fruits are numerous; "Ten Miles of Lake Light" is about the vastness and magnanimity of the lake. These two opposing sentences use "full load" and "tiling" to draw lakes and mountains together. The previous sentence said that the beautiful autumn scenery has a panoramic view; When there is no wind, the lake is calm. From a distance, it seems to be "tiled" there. The mountains and rivers complement each other, and the people on board are relaxed and happy. These two sentences are purely about scenery, and the author Zhang Xiaoxiang's happiness is in them, which is the so-called love in the scenery.

3. The word "wave god" means that "the water god intentionally doesn't let me see the beautiful sunset, causing ripples like fish scales." This is about the sudden change of the weather, the scenery on the lake at the beginning of the breeze, and it is also a precursor to the weather change. Experienced boatmen are bound to anchor and take emergency measures, because the sun is shining, and after the "small waves", it will be the bad weather described by Fan Zhongyan in Yueyang Tower. These two sentences humorously wrote that the ship was blocked by the strong wind and forced to dock, which reflected the author's very relaxed mood at this time. Use "sunset" to point out that it is evening, "fine waves" to explain the weather changes, and the wind is a wonderful pen.

4. The next book "The Moon on the West River under Three Winds" describes the author's psychological activities after stopping the ship. "The wind will be better tomorrow", writing his feelings of expecting the wind to turn, the weather to improve and boarding the ship in time. "What's wrong with sleeping outside tonight?" "Why not?" And "What does it matter?" In fact, they are all helpless words, but they also show his broad-mindedness of "sleeping out" when he has to. Clothes in the Crystal Palace and Crystal Palace are commonly known as Dragon Palace. "Nishang", that is, "gorgeous feather clothes", is the name of a large dance music. When the author heard the sound of the waves, his strange imagination came to life. He compared the underwater sound to the music of the Dragon Palace. Since the Dragon Palace is playing a celebration, it will be all right tomorrow, and the ship will move forward normally. "It will be planned on Yueyang Tower", and the last sentence envisages enjoying the beautiful scenery of Dongting Lake on Yueyang Tower tomorrow.

5. The Moon on the Xijiang River under the Three Peaks Against the Wind describes a scene where a ship is blocked by a strong wind, writes about scenery, expresses emotions and even imagines "tomorrow". Writing without any frustration is easy.

6. The language of the whole word "Xijiang Moon under the Three Winds" is simple and elegant. After reading it, I only feel that the author Zhang Xiaoxiang loves mountains and rivers infinitely, but he is not annoyed that the ship is blocked by the headwind. This is the characteristic of this word, and the author Zhang Xiaoxiang has a unique idea.

The author introduces:

Zhang Xiaoxiang (1132-1169) was born in Wujiang, Liyang (now Anhui), and154 (the 24th year of Shaoxing) was the first scholar. Book tired officer, Jiankang stay, Jinghu North Road, and so on. His ci works are full of patriotic thoughts, heroic and broad, including Yu Hu Ju Shi Ji and Yu Hu Ci.