Write an argumentative essay on the topic of "learning to communicate" (senior high school)

Material 1: Bernard Shaw, a great British writer, said, "You and I are friends. We each take an apple and exchange it with each other. After the exchange, we still have an apple each." If you have an idea and I have an idea to communicate with each other, then each of us will have two ideas. "

material 2: a former member of NASA's security advisory group warned that the international space station may have a serious accident due to the lack of communication between American engineers and Russian engineers.

material 3: Hong Ying, a contemporary writer, said: "the pain of lack of communication between people is similar to everyone. It is also based on such a state that the online world appears. "

what do you think after reading the above materials? Do you have similar experiences in your life? Please write an article of about 8 words on the topic of "learning to communicate". The topic is self-made and the genre is not limited.

8, 18, 28

When Jin Liyong was eight years old, I was full of curiosity about the whole world, but I couldn't find anyone to talk to.

"Dad, look, look, what is that?" "Well, that's called a roller coaster." "What is this?" "This is called the Ferris wheel." "And here, what is this?" "sand painting!" "So ..." "Are you bored? How come there are so many problems when I get here? If I had known, I would not have brought you. " Dad was obviously angry, so I had to bow my head and say nothing.

"Dad, the teacher gave us homework and asked us to go home and tell stories to our parents. Do you want to listen?" "Son, dad is very tired at work and wants to have a rest. How about another day? " Dad said that and went into the room. I looked through the door and saw him turn on the TV ...

At the age of eighteen, I became reticent and used to burying my heart.

"Dad, money." On the first day of school holiday, I shouted at my father when I entered the door. "Here, 1 yuan." Dad handed me the money with wrinkled hands. I took the money and went into my room, slamming the door.

"Son, it's time to eat!" Mom called me downstairs. I watched TV upstairs for a while, and then slowly walked downstairs. When eating, I only heard the clash between chopsticks and bowls. "Son ..." "Dad, Mom, I'm finished." With that, I got up and went back to my room. I clearly saw that my father's eyes were full of tears, and I swallowed the words that had just come to my mouth ...

At the age of 28, I was completely independent, and I no longer seemed to be the person who needed to talk.

"Son ..." "Dad, come on, I'm busy." I looked at the computer screen and answered the phone. "Your mother and I really want you to go home for the New Year. We know that you are very busy, even if you come back for a meal and leave, we are satisfied. " "We'll see." I prevaricated.

"Come on, do it!" A group of friends and I are having New Year's Eve dinner in a hotel. After a full meal, I went out of the box and called home: "Dad, I'm really busy today, I'm afraid I can't come back." Then a hiccup betrayed me. There was a long silence on the other end of the phone, and I seemed to see my father standing by the phone with a microphone for a long time ... < P > A few years later, I took my daughter to the park. "Dad, what is this?" "This is a roller coaster." "What about this?" "This is the Ferris wheel." "and this?" "This is a sand painting." "And ..." "Are you bored ..." I answered a little angrily. All of a sudden, the long-forgotten memory door suddenly opened, and the years went back. In front of my eyes stood an inexperienced child and a middle-aged man ...

Comments from Miao Jinde

This article is ingenious, concise and concise, and the center is prominent. The article describes the "communication" between father and son in three age groups: at the age of eight, "I" was inquisitive, but my father's "annoying" made "I" bow my head and say nothing; At the age of eighteen, my parents were very concerned about me, but I "buried my heart"; At the age of 28, my parents wanted me to go home for the New Year, but I made excuses not to go back. The article does not have any discussion, but describes several scenes, but people are deeply shocked and feel the necessity of "communication" between relatives.

another feature of this paper is its compact structure and clear organization. It is worth mentioning that the last natural paragraph seems to repeat the previous scene, but it is actually a warning to all adults, please don't forget that you came from childhood, and you have also asked a series of childish questions, so don't let impatience kill children's curiosity at will. People should take care of and care for their loved ones and keep cordial and close communication with them.

What to sing about spring

Chen Xiaoyi

Butterflies are flying freely among the flowers, stopping on the fragrant flowers from time to time. Is it collecting pollen? No, it's communicating with flowers.

the willow branches are swaying gracefully in the breeze, and they depend on each other from time to time. Are they playing games? No, they are communicating.

The puppy blinks drowsily in the sleeping basket, and licks the dog mother next to it from time to time. Is it coquetry? No, it's communicating with mom.

communication is everywhere, and there are many ways to communicate, both with words and eyes, but I think the highest level of communication should be with the mind.

people generally communicate with each other by language. However, language is a very illusory thing, which can't be seen or touched. You can't know whether it's true or not when you hear sweet words.

When the emotion between people rises to a certain level, they communicate with their eyes. When you are lost, an encouraging look brings you endless motivation; When you are happy, a friendly look brings you a comfortable mood; When you are complacent, a worried look makes you understand your own shortcomings. But sometimes, hypocrisy and affectation will put curtains on the windows of the soul, making people unable to see what is inside. As a result, some people are deceived, resulting in pain and failure, which brings many unpredictable consequences to individuals and even society ...

When people communicate with their hearts, all hypocrisy and lies are gone, only the soul meets each other frankly. Although the experience of each soul is different, it is the most primitive and essential way of communication between people. Perhaps before the formation of language, people communicated with their hearts, so there would be no deception and concealment between people at that time.

Helen? The spiritual communication between Keller and Sullivan opened a window of light; The spiritual exchange between Marx and Engels opened a door of friendship; The spiritual communication between Fu Lei and Fu Cong has shaped a world of pure children. The spiritual communication between Boya and Ziou has sublimated the realm of a bosom friend ... < P > If communication is a beautiful tune, then the collision of hearts is an essential note; If communication is a sky, then the intersection of hearts is the brightest star; If communication is a maple tree, then the overlapping of hearts will be the most beautiful red leaves!

let's sing spring with our hearts!

Comments from Miao Jinde

This article is an excellent examination composition with rigorous structure and beautiful language.

The first three paragraphs of the article use parallelism to lead to the topic, which is naturally appropriate. Then cut to the chase and analyze three levels of communication: one is language communication, the other is eye contact, and the third is spiritual communication. Spiritual communication is the highest realm of communication, and it is also the focus of the article. Therefore, the author does not hesitate to analyze and give examples, and makes clear the meaning of the title "What to sing in spring".

While paying attention to structure, this paper also features the use of language. For example, the flexible use of parallelism, starting with rhetorical parallelism, using adverbial parallelism in the middle (such as "When you are lost, an encouraging look brings you endless motivation …"), and ending with causal parallelism (such as "Helen? Keller's spiritual communication with Sullivan opens a window of light ... ") and hypothetical parallelism (such as" If communication is a beautiful tune, the clink of the soul is an essential note ... "), the sentences are apt and vivid, and they do their best to describe things, giving people a sense of beauty and being in place.

Door, when will you stop crying

Cheng Menglan

Follow the crying and come to the end, only to find that the sound comes from the door of my house!

"Door, why are you crying?" I asked.

"I'm sighing why I always play the wrong role in my life." The door sobbed.

"No, you have been-"

"I have been a mistake since ancient times." My words were immediately interrupted by the door. "I was made of dead branches during the period when human beings ate animals and drank blood." How many times I heard the roar of wild animals outside the cave in the middle of the night, and people huddled by the fire in fear, but I could do nothing. It's just that I'm too fragile to give people enough sense of security. During the Song and Yuan Dynasties, on dark nights for many months, I was kicked off by several hooligans with broadswords, and my master's house was robbed and killed, but I was unable to do so. After so many years of evolution, I still haven't become stronger and harder. " The door continued to be sad.

"But aren't you strong and hard now? With you, we feel safe when we sleep at night. " I comforted it.

"Yes," the door was even sadder. "Now I'm an iron gate, and I'm good at guarding against animals and theft. But when the robbers couldn't get in, the people in the house couldn't get out. In the past, when people were in danger, they could at least huddle together. After being looted, neighbors can at least help each other and be caring and attentive. But now, people are hiding in this' iron box', and no one will come out for air because of nothing important. The most communication activities are actually pointing to the illusory online world. I hate it now. I hate that I shouldn't have evolved so fast, blocking your communication and making people lose their warmth. " The words of the door stopped, followed by sobs.

I was lost in thought. Suddenly, I felt that the place where I was standing was very dark. Open the curtains, trying to let the sun in, only to find that the clouds hid the sun. Looking at the shuttle-like crowd downstairs, I thought, "What the hell weather, I really should go out for air." I took the door and went out.

When I went outside, although the sunshine was not bright enough, the air was fresh. A passing girl waved at me with a lollipop. Then, I saw the photo of Hu Jintao shaking hands with Lien Chan on the billboard on the roadside. The Taiwan Province Strait is also a door. A naughty child ran out of the door and didn't come back for a long time, but now he lingers at the door and refuses to push the door in. Son, when will you come in and make the door stop crying?

I thought about walking, but I was back at home. I opened the door, and my mother had prepared a delicious lunch ...

Comments from Miao Jinde

This article has a unique perspective. Through the dialogue between "I" and the door, it outlines the historical evolution process of the door, which makes people realize the profound truth that in the modern society with rapid economic development, people have lost the most important thing: communication. Doors made of dead branches used to facilitate communication between people, but they could not stop the attacks of wild animals and robbers; Now, the iron gate is "a marketer against animals and theft", but the communication between people has also been blocked.

The article is meaningful and thought-provoking. The change of door implies the change of human nature; The crying of the door is a longing for human nature. The article is about the door, expressing the theme of human nature, which shows the author's intention.

The deficiency of the article is that the Taiwan Province Strait is described as a door at the end, and the connection between the upper and lower parts is not natural enough, which makes the theme appear stiff and labeled.