How to write a composition starting with the weather

1. How to write a good description of the beginning of the weather can be used to set off the theme of your article and your mood at that time.

For example, "it was a crisp autumn evening, and the fallen leaves on the trees had been floating in the sky." It's not that the tree abandoned its hair, but that it was old-taken away by the wandering wind passing by. The cold wind blew out my fire, and my body was so bitter that I couldn't even hear the call of using my hands and brains. I didn't notice anything. I went straight ahead and spread data in my body like a robot, only following orders. Listening to the nagging teacher, this class ended hastily. ? "This passage reflects the center of the article, which is a bit sad.

Generally, adding a description of the weather before the composition can attract the teacher's attention, but you can't write it easily. It depends on your writing. I suggest reading more articles about scenery.

Having said that, I hope you can adopt it, O(∩_∩)O Thank you.

2. How to write a composition when the weather is cold? Beginning of autumn has passed, but the weather is still hot. A leisurely and dripping autumn rain drifted between heaven and earth for a day and a night. The next morning, there was a wet and cold wind coming at me. That coolness permeates the skin, reaches people's hearts and permeates every cell.

As the saying goes: an autumn rain is a cold. The breath of autumn, at a certain moment after rain, rises with some faint thoughts.

"Blue sky, yellow leaves, autumn waves, cold smoke on the waves", in the season when the sky is high and the clouds are light, we can sing many such ethereal and beautiful sentences about autumn at will. Scholars in China seem to have autumn plots. Perhaps it is the artistic conception of autumn, which corresponds to the gloomy mood of ancient literati and gifted scholars. Those poems sublimated from boundless sadness have passed through the cultural corridor of history, like bright stars, shining with charming brilliance in the vast literary star sea.

However, I like autumn.

Autumn, how elegant and quiet, how colorful, like a woman with mature charm and great connotation. Looking up occasionally, white and soft clouds float leisurely in an enlightened manner, just above our heads, as if within reach; The sky is blue, strangely empty and high. Looking around, the orchard is colorful, the green curtain is lush, and it is dotted with rich morning glow and colorful clouds burning in the evening. Everything between heaven and earth seems to have been heavily exaggerated by painters. This is not a human landscape, but a splash-ink oil painting.

From time to time, there is continuous autumn rain falling down, like a sad woman talking, trickling and lingering, which can not help but make people feel dull. After the rain, the gray-black clouds in the sky kept swimming and rolling, like a turbulent sea of clouds, and gradually flashed a gray-blue sky. The sun came out, coating the rolled-up sea of clouds with gold. Colorful clouds spread out in the sky, changing various postures at will, and spreading colorful pictures. The cicadas and frogs are singing one after another. In the evening after the rain, the sound of nature played. At this time, we have to be surprised by the magic and beauty of nature and sigh at this gorgeous season.

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Fan Wen, learn from it.

3. How to write the beginning and end of the composition in thunderstorm weather? How to write in dog days, the child's face, the weather will change.

Just now, the sun was baking the asphalt road, even the air was hot, and people were everywhere. Too thirsty! " Sound, one foot on the asphalt road, will print shallow footprints. A drop of sweat fell to the ground, just like sprinkling it on a hungry and hot stove, turned into white smoke with a "zi" and suddenly disappeared.

After a while, a strong wind blew, and the wind whined and the leaves rustled. Some branches are broken.

The sky suddenly darkened. Raindrops the size of beans crackled on the window.

Lightning doesn't like the human world It "splits" the boundless sky with hundreds of millions of loads of current, as if cutting a dark waterfall. Tripterygium wilfordii didn't like the world, and he flew into a rage and launched a "rumble" sound that resounded through the sky. After the shower, everything was calm again.

In the street, the noise of people "jabbering"; Birds are chirping on the branches. It's really lively! Oh, this is a natural play, a wonderful play! 2。

One day during the thunderstorm summer vacation, the sky was still so blue, and the sun was like fire, making the earth smoke. Suddenly, the sky darkened and the weather became more sultry. My heart was crushed by a stone slab weighing 1000 kg, and I couldn't breathe.

After a while, a gust of wind blew the dust on the ground everywhere. The tree shook violently in the wind, as if it were going to fall down.

The branches lashed wildly like thousands of whips, and all the dead branches and leaves fell off. A storm is coming! Looking up at the sky, I saw dark clouds pouring in, like thousands of runaway wild horses, bravely raising their manes.

Suddenly a zigzag lightning flashed across the sky, casting a Yin Hui on everything; Then a loud noise came into my ears, which made people feel scared. Then, the rainstorm is like a milky way bursting its mouth, as if to swallow it up.

It's raining harder and harder, like thousands of beads falling from the air in Qian Qian, with a huge momentum. Heavy rain, electricity like a fire dragon, thunderbolt.

Looking through the glass, I can't see anything in the distance. The earth is covered with a layer of water mist, like a layer of white gauze. There is too much water on the eaves, which is pulled into a line.

Big trees and small trees danced happily in the rain, and the grass twisted its delicate waist to welcome the arrival of heavy rain. Half an hour passed, the wind stopped and the rain stopped. The tiles on the roof drank enough water and ticked "tick-tock, tick-tock".

The outdoor air is so fresh that it is no longer so sultry. They heard the laughter of several children in the street. It turns out that they are jumping on the pond! Flowers and trees also absorbed enough water, washed away the dirt and became more energetic.

In the pond, small fish and shrimps also come out to breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Ah, thunderstorms come and go quickly.

It dispels the sultry heat, brings coolness and relieves troubles for us. I breathe the air after the rain and feel very comfortable.

4. At the beginning of rainy weather 100 word composition is fluent and silent.

Inadvertently looking up, I was shocked.

I don't know when it began to rain in the sky, which brought a little freshness and pleasure to the originally lifeless gray sky. A little rain, like a girl's waterfall of hair, and like a love story that lovers can never talk about. Rain is so transparent, like ethereal crystal and thorough jade. It is so shiny that even the striking diamond is eclipsed in front of it. What a strange feeling it is to be bathed in rain?

Open the window, lean out, close your eyes and let the rain touch my cheek with the wind. Cold, cool, but gentle. I don't feel cold at all, but I look like my mother's hands when I tuck in the quilt at night. I'm not worried that the rain will get my hair wet at all. Its existence will only add a shiny diamond to my hair and make my hair more dazzling, right? Stick out your tongue to taste the rain. Well, My Sweetie's, sweet from the tip of the tongue to the heart.

I opened my eyes and didn't know when the rain stopped. I don't know. It's really quiet I can't help reciting the Delighting in Rain on a Spring Night written by Mr. Du Fu: "Good rain knows the season, and when spring comes, it sneaks into the night with the wind, moistening things silently."

The scenery after the rain has a unique charm. The flowers drank enough water, straightened up and continued their beauty contest. I wonder who will be the champion this time. Grass is also full of vitality, desperately upward, want to grow up quickly, grow tall, really a stubborn child. The raindrops left on the leaves are crystal-clear and beautiful under the sunlight, which makes people reluctant to leave their eyes. The reckless bird stopped on the branch and tried to sing, but it scared away the rain beads. Falling into the water, causing ripples. What a beautiful scenery! This is an obscure dedication from Yu Chunyu!

"Wow-wow-"There was a noise in my ear, and I turned my head in disgust. That's an old man sweeping the floor. Sweat fell from his forehead and his clothes were a little wet. I don't know whether it's rain or sweat. I can't help blushing for "disgust" just now. It is precisely because of the hard work of sanitation workers that the city has become so clean! I think of the police uncle and my beloved teacher, but how much they have contributed to us! Ren Changxia, Yin. . . . . . They will live in our hearts forever. Why not think about the soldiers guarding the frontier? They are not afraid of hardship and fatigue, guarding our country. These lovely and respectable people, I can't use any beautiful words to describe you. You are the embodiment of the spring rain!

Oh, why do my thoughts drift so far away? I closed the window and my heart was filled with emotion. I want to write an article "Moistening things silently", praising the selfless spring rain and praising the people's love!

5. How to write at the beginning of the composition [thinking analysis] There are generally the following methods at the beginning of the composition.

You can choose different starting methods according to different articles [problem-solving process] There are five ways to start a composition: if the beginning of an article is unique, novel and original, it can often be fascinating, and some can also play a role in opening up ideas. 1. Cut to the chase is cut to the chase.

For example, a passage at the beginning of Bing Xin's ode to cherry blossoms sets the tone of the whole article, which is to praise the cherry blossoms and the friendship between the Chinese and Japanese people. I began to use two "firsts" to write that people who go to Japan always "think of cherry blossoms" and "speak of cherry blossoms".

Japanese friends always take cherry blossoms as an emotional bond when they receive guests' regrets or retention. Cherry blossoms, like Mount Fuji, are a symbol of Japan and a bond of friendship between the Chinese and Japanese peoples, which is also the theme of this paper.

The article is described around this theme from beginning to end. To write a composition with this opening method, we must accurately grasp the theme of the article, that is to say, we must not only determine the performance center according to the materials, but also accurately summarize it.

The advantage of this opening method is that when you are writing a composition, you can always consider describing around the center, so that the center of the article can easily stand out. It is also convenient for readers to grasp the essentials, grasp the basic content and deeply understand the theme of the article.

2. Lyric disclosure method. For example, Wei Wei's Who is the cutest person reveals the theme from the beginning.

But it also has its own characteristics, which is to introduce the center step by step in expressing feelings. At the beginning of the article, I wrote down my uncontrollable thoughts-I want to tell my friends in my motherland all my feelings.

A word "Dan" not only writes a turning point in the meaning of the article, but also highlights the key point to be expressed: the important experience of thoughts and feelings. At this point, although the article said "I feel more and more deeply who is the cutest person", it did not point out who is the cutest person.

Then use the rhetorical question "Who is the cutest person?" To further attract people's attention. But there is still no direct answer, but who is "extremely cute" first, and then who is the cutest person.

This opening is full of emotion, gripping and thought-provoking, which makes people have a deep understanding of the theme of the article from the beginning. Another outstanding feature of this starting method is to move from the general to the individual, and to set off the individual with the general: writing a friend who is moved by everything and wants to tell everything to the motherland is to highlight and set off the "important experience of thoughts and feelings"; Writing "extremely cute" is to further highlight "the cutest".

3. At the beginning of the flashback method, starting from the present situation, the past events are linked to arouse memories, and the past events are described along this line of thought to form flashbacks. When writing in this way, we should pay attention to several problems: first, we should describe what we see in front of us and give people a strong impression; The second is to reveal the meaning of what you see and summarize it in accurate and refined language; The third is to write something related to it, which leads to a series of vivid memories.

4. The opening paragraph of "Xianglinsao" describes the social environment in which Xianglinsao lives, including the gloomy scene at the end of the year, the grand occasion for every family to prepare for happiness, and even the hypocritical, reactionary and conservative master Lu Si and his study, revealing the typical environment in which Xianglinsao lives and providing a background for the development of Xianglinsao's tragedy. This opening is a prelude to the development of the plot. Although it doesn't directly touch the theme of the article, it renders a suitable atmosphere for the full text, and explains the place and time of the story, which is closely related to the theme of the whole article.

5. The method of describing scenery, such as Sun Li's Lotus Lake, is to describe the scenery of Lotus Lake with light colors and sparse brushwork. The article writes from the moon in the sky to the fog on the water surface; From a white world in the distance, write to the cool and clean yard in front of you; From the vision-the night view of Lotus Lake, I wrote the smell-the fragrance of lotus leaves.

This description of natural scenery from different angles is beautiful and poetic, which makes people feel a mellow local flavor. This is the beginning, that is, it exaggerates the beauty of the natural scenery of Lotus Lake, sets off the beauty of the inner world of working women in the liberated areas who love new life and new labor, and naturally introduces the article into the text.