Environmental description of how steel is made.

The environmental description of how steel is tempered is evaluated as follows:

1, this big city and its magnificent life, the endless stream of people, the thunder of trams and the horn of cars all attract him, but the latest ones are those huge stone factories. His heart has flown to his accustomed job.

Appreciation: These descriptions show that Paul is eager to take part in labor after his illness and make contributions to the economic construction of the Soviet Union.

The snow is melting, forming a small puddle, shining in the early spring sunshine. It has begun to thaw outside.

Appreciation: These scenery descriptions not only point out the seasons, but also symbolize the arrival of spring and hope in the Soviet Union.

The trembling air is full of such a rich fragrance of flowers. Like fireflies, the stars shine in the depths of the sky forever, and the human voice is so far away.

Appreciation: a small town full of energy, vitality but sometimes quiet. It reflects the tranquility of the Ukrainian countryside and Paul's happy mood.

4. After seeing off two classmates, tonya stood alone on the gate for a long time, looking at the dark road leading to the town. The never-ending wind, with the musty smell of wet soil and humid air conditioning in spring, blew to him. On the outskirts of the distant town, many people's windows are flashing dark red lights.

Appreciation: Described the environment that tonya saw, and the words "dim, moldy, cold wind, dark red" rendered a gloomy atmosphere, reflecting tonya's mood and worries about Paul.

5. Hundreds of cannons were red through Bilekopp Road, and thousands of shells roared across the sky. The dead earth seems to be falling into a bottomless abyss. The soil on the earth is flying, and black smoke covers the sun.

Appreciation: the environmental description of the image writes out the piercing and horrible atmosphere of the battle.