How to describe a person?

1. How to write a personal composition narrative mainly reflects the characteristics of a person's thoughts, personality, quality, style and other aspects through the description of a person's appearance, language, movements, psychological activities and typical cases. To write a good narrative, we should start from the following aspects: 1, and write a good character image. Character images generally refer to the appearance, language, movements and psychological activities of characters. The appearance of a character is the appearance characteristics of a character, including appearance, clothing, posture, expression and so on. Appearance description should first proceed from the needs of the central idea of the article, and demand to grasp the essential characteristics of the characters and describe them selectively and emphatically. Character language includes monologue, dialogue, dialogue and tone. "What you say must be done". Characters' language is the direct expression of their inner world. Therefore, successful language description can properly express the identity, age, thoughts, quality, style and personality characteristics of the characters. When describing characters' language, we should pay attention to their identities, express their thoughts and feelings, and reflect their relationship. When describing a character's actions, you should write not only what the character does, but also how to do it. Psychological activity is a silent language and a means to directly express the mental outlook and ideological activities of characters. When describing the psychological activities of characters, we should pay attention to clearly describing the reasons of psychological activities, and also pay attention to combining them with the description of appearance, movements and language. When the appearance, language, movements and psychological activities are written, the characters will be prominent and distinct. 2. Grasp the characteristics of the characters. Everyone has his own characteristics, which can be considered from the aspects of age, appearance, language, movements, interests, personality, living habits and so on. A person's characteristics are various. When writing, you should write selectively according to the central idea. 3. Choose a typical case. People and things are inseparable. When a person does many things, he should choose the typical events that can best express the thoughts, personalities and central ideas of the characters in the text. 4. Describe it in detail. Detail description is a concrete and detailed description of the appearance, language, movements and expressions of the characters, which can fully express the central idea of the article. Narratives written mainly by people in primary school are generally divided into three types; Write one person, two people and several people. Among them, writing about a person should be the main task. Write a person first. Remember that there are three situations in a person's narrative: (1) Write a person by writing one thing. Some writers only write one thing, so we should pay attention to the following points when writing this kind of composition: 1, choose representative vivid examples to draw and write. There are many examples that reflect a person's mental outlook. To write a thing thoroughly, people should choose the most representative vivid examples to write. 2, write the development process of things, so that the characters are gradually complete. 3. Make things concrete. When describing a person with a typical case, you should make the case specific, so that the characters can be full. 4. In order to make readers understand the characters more comprehensively, make this important story have sufficient basis and solid ideological foundation, and enrich the characters' images, the beginning of the article can briefly introduce the characters. (2) Write a person through several things. We will meet all kinds of people in our life. Sometimes it is too simple to reflect a person with one thing, which is not enough to fully reflect the characteristics and qualities of the characters. Therefore, it is necessary to use two or three things to make it clear and fully reproduce. To write a person through several things, we should pay attention to the following points: 1, several things should not be contradictory, and the character's personality should be harmonious and unified on several things. 2. Combination of general explanation and specific description. In a short composition, it is impossible for a person to write several things. Generally, colorful explanations can be combined with specific descriptions. Just give some general examples and then describe one or two things in detail. 3. Write a person by comparison. There are generally three ways to write a person by comparison: the first way is to compare the same person before and after, indicating that this person has changed; The second is to compare the understanding of a person before and after, and explain the quality of this person; The third method is to compare one person with another and highlight one of them. When writing a person by contrast, we should pay attention to (1) highlighting the main characters and their main characteristics. (2) to write the true performance of the characters, don't fabricate facts, and adopt the method of exaggerating or belittling. Second, write two people to write two people, generally write "me and * *", * * should include familiar people such as relatives, classmates, friends, teachers, etc. When writing this type of composition, we must pay attention to: (1) Write a good relationship between people. The title "Me and * *" highlights the word "He", which requires writing from both sides, and writing the connection between "Me" and * * through concrete examples. In the process of narration, you should write out what you think, say and do. Only by writing from both sides can we grasp the key points of the topic. (2) Use dialogue to unfold the plot. When writing the composition "Me and * *", because we want to write about the relationship between two people, we must write a dialogue between two people. Use dialogue to expand the plot and use dialogue to express the center of the article. Third, write a few people. Writing about several people is a complicated narrative, which can be written as "family", "this class" or "several small partners". In short, whether it is family, school or society, as long as it is a few people you are familiar with. There are several ways to write this composition. (a) the list of people who like to introduce. (2) A representative introduction. (3) Write a few people with one thing as a clue. (4) Write a few people through several things. 2. How to write a good composition As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle." You must have had this experience: when you get a topic, it is always difficult to start writing, but once you start, especially after a good start, you can write an eloquent and thoughtful article. If it is a good, novel and vivid beginning, it will make readers have a strong reading interest and goodwill; On the other hand, if it is vague and divorced from the content, it will make readers feel bored, and even preconceived that the author's writing ability is poor and the quality of his composition is not high. The importance of the beginning of the composition can be seen. How can the composition be recognized by teachers and marking teachers? A good start is very important! Below, I will give some explanations to the students on the two common beginnings of "getting straight to the point" and "setting off the scenery" for your reference, hoping to help improve your writing level. First, the "straight to the point" type "straight to the point" is a widely used way of opening. It is widely used because it goes straight to the subject from the beginning. In today's information age, time is precious, and people who read the article hope to understand what the article is written as soon as possible. If you beat around the bush from the beginning and blindly turn around the topic, then even if the content is good, it is difficult to arouse readers' interest in reading. For the composition in our examination room, the marking teacher bears a heavy task of marking. A "straight to the point" and "not rambling" beginning will certainly win the favor of the marking teacher, make the marking staff leave an excellent impression on your beginning and your composition, and help you achieve ideal results in the exam. The beginning of "straight to the point" is very common in junior high school Chinese textbooks, and it can be said that you can bow your head, for example: 1 I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and the most unforgettable thing is his background. (Zhu Ziqing's "Back") The opening point is to set an ambush for the "back" below with deep fatherly love. 2, poplar is really extraordinary, I praise poplar. (Mao Dun's "Praise of Poplar") The first sentence at the beginning clarifies the object of praise-poplar, and sets the emotional tone of the whole text-praise. 3. On the vast sea, the wind rolls dark clouds. Between the dark clouds and the sea, Haiyan flies proudly like black lightning. (Gorky's Haiyan) first explains the fighting environment of Haiyan's brave takeoff, and then shows the heroic fighting spirit of Haiyan's rapid takeoff from three aspects: color (black), shape (lightning) and spirit (arrogance). Many successful compositions begin with "straight to the point". Seeing this topic, I couldn't help but burst into applause, which expressed my daughter's recognition and admiration for her mother. Two years ago, I would have booed my mother. (Composition MagazineNo. 10/999) This is the beginning of applause from Jiang, the first prize winner of the "Wenxin Cup" national middle school students' composition contest for teachers and students from 1999. This beginning comes straight to the point, and at the same time, I want to publicize first and then suppress it, but also ambush and pose suspense for the back. My hometown is surrounded by mountains and reeds everywhere. Autumn has come, and the reed flowers are scrambling to open, hiding their hometown in a sea of flowers, which is very beautiful. (the same as the second prize Guo's "Reed Flowers in My Hometown") 3. In the spring when I was nine years old, my father bought a black buffalo. He said: "We have a lot of fields in our family, and it is impossible to do without a cow when farming is busy. When this cow grows up, use it to farm the land. " (The same as the second prize Ren Meijuan's "Becoming attached to cattle") 4. I can't forget her smiling face that encouraged me, her simple words that inspired me to make progress, and the green she once brought to my life. I can't forget her, my dearest friend ("I can't forget her") Second, if a painter paints the moon in the style of "setting off the scenery", if he paints a moon alone, it will be particularly monotonous and even lack of expression. If you hook a few clouds around the moon, the situation will be very different, and the moon will be particularly magical. This technique is "contrast". Composition also needs this technique. As a junior high school student, most of the exams are to write narrative compositions. The beginning of a good "setting off the scenery" is conducive to setting an emotional environment and atmosphere for the characterization of characters and the narration of things. As a practical and easy-to-understand writing technique, there are also many typical examples in junior high school Chinese texts. Such as: 1, mountain, what a big mountain! The ups and downs of the green hills change one after another, extending into the distance and disappearing into the confused twilight. (Peng Jingfeng's "Pear Blossom on the Post Road") This is the beginning of the novel "Pear Blossom on the Post Road". The description of the mountain is the basis of the plot. On such a big mountain, dusk is approaching. For people traveling on the road, staying at night is really a difficult problem that must be solved. How anxious they should be! It can be seen that a series of plots such as guessing and praising the owner of the cabin have paved the way for the "setting off the scenery" style. The time is eight o'clock in the evening. Although the sun has set, the summer heat has not subsided. There is no wind, and the old trees standing in the park are very quiet. Leaves are quiet, too. The outdoor labor theater is also very quiet. (Ye Junjian's Go to the Theatre) Use "silence" to set off the quiet atmosphere of people waiting for the performance to start. Not only that, but also compared with the tsunami scene when Mei Lanfang performed later, it showed the penetrating power of art and contrasted Mei Lanfang's superb performance skills. On the clean blue sky, a dark cloud sneaked in and the wind pushed it up the mountain. In Yamanobe, the crops in the terraced fields are like rolling waves in the green ocean. (Peak "Golden Hat") Similarly, there are many articles that students have succeeded because of the style of "setting off the scenery", such as: 1,1On February 28th, 999, it rained heavily. The sparkling blisters on the ground burst round and round, crying the sudden death of a centenarian. Blister repeats an eternal name for thousands of times: Bing Xin (see the tenth issue of the composition for Fan Rui's Hundred Years of Bing Xin 1999). My hair is wet and covered with mud. Tomb-Sweeping Day's unique rain will never stop, falling silently from the distant horizon in the desolate Shan Ye. I trudged through the mud, looking for it, and let the rain fall on my head, face and body ... (Paul Hu, "Hello again. 3. A writing composition (300 words) should be wonderful. In my mind, there are many people worthy of my admiration, but there is one person whose character has benefited me all my life-the cleaner. I remember that cold morning, on my way to school, I vaguely saw a man sweeping the floor with a broom. I walked in and turned out to be a cleaner. Just then, I thought, it's so cold. I saw her wearing a uniform and a mask, with a broom in her left hand and a dustpan in her right. The wind that stung her face turned her ears red. She held a dustpan in her left hand and a broom in her right hand, sweeping carefully and patiently. I saw her sweep this stolen goods and that stolen goods. I don't know how many times this action has to be repeated. Look, how well her hands cooperate! When the dustpan is full, pour it into the garbage truck carefully, for fear that the ground just swept will be dirty again. Sweep it again when you're done. I can see from her eyes how much she wants everyone to stop throwing stolen goods and keep the road clean. Just then, a strong wind came and blew the road dirty again. The cleaner said helplessly, "Well, I can't help it. I have to sweep it again." Say that finish, she began to sweep. This time, she swept the garbage together first, and then swept it into the dustpan with a dustpan. When it is full, she blocks her mouth with a broom to prevent the garbage from falling, and then enters the garbage truck. I think it will save more time and sweep the garbage. On second thought, the cleaner swept all the rubbish. I walked into him without hesitation and said with a smile, "How kind of you! I want to learn from you the spirit of silent dedication! " Hearing this, the cleaner's eyes smiled. This is the person I admire most. A person who gets up early every day and is greedy for the dark and silently dedicated. Isn't this man's character worth learning? I hope my answer can help you. 4. How to write a person's composition through one thing? I have a good friend. He has an oval head, big smart eyes, short hair, a small nose and a thin figure. He is just plain and a little ugly, but he is smart. Don't think that he is clever in his studies. His study can be said to be the first in his class. Once after class, he stepped down from his seat, followed by Cai Jinjie, put his hand on his shoulder and shouted, "Ah! Here comes the car, run! Leave me alone! " He pushed him forward and pushed him to the ground. He didn't react on the ground, turned around and looked at Cai Jinjie with meaningful eyes. Say that finish, he quietly stood up and walked to the "big head", his fingers still ringing. I thought there would be a martial arts drama; I thought the mountain would go on the rampage; I thought Cai Jinjie would pay the bill. However, to my surprise, he just rushed forward, faked Cai Jinjie with his fist, thought for a moment and didn't care, and went straight to the toilet. 5. Four essays describing a person are for reference only, hoping to be adopted, and the kitchen knife beats the cutting board rhythmically. Mom is busy in the kitchen. The fire on the stove rang, and the blue flame licked the bottom of the pot affectionately. On the lid of the pot, the steam curled up, and the inclined boiling water could not help sticking its head out. There is a vague and dim light reflecting the mother's holy and gentle face. My mother was fascinated by the notes on the chopping block, just like a enchanted magician. As soon as the arm is lifted and lowered, one naughty and exquisite spirit pops up, dancing around, making this space called "home" full of breath. Mom is a restless person. In the early years, when my family was poor and my mother was bored, she would knit me colorful sweaters with different patterns, including lively and lovely Hello Kitty and interesting Donald Duck ... Now, my clothes have changed from knitting to buying, and my mother put all her efforts in the kitchen. As soon as I came back, the kitchen was so steaming. My mother doesn't know that I am infatuated with her sweater, and I don't know that I am infatuated with the notes in this ear. She only saw her greedy daughter waiting anxiously in the living room. The sound of cutting the board accelerated the speed. "Soon! "She shouted at me and never looked back. Mother thought I was hungry when I was around, and wanted my beloved daughter to eat delicious food early. Every morning, I stick my head out of the warm bed and always hear the sound of cutting boards in the kitchen, the sound of oil boiling in the pot, and then a fragrance wafts into my room. Careful mother never misses every opportunity to cook breakfast for me. This is eight years, regardless of the cold and heat, never stop. The deep love in the delicious breakfast is sweet to my school every day. "ouch! "Mother gave a gentle cry and the rhythmic chopping stopped at once." What's the matter, Mom? "I put down the book I was looking at." It's nothing. "My mother turned her back on me and stroked her hair tips with her hands. The wet shoulder just shrugged, put his finger in his mouth and took a few sips. "Knock, knock, knock" is ringing again. Delicious food is served. Golden scrambled eggs, oily duck slices, crispy cucumbers ... my favorite colors and tastes are all over the table. Dad came, grandpa came, mom came, and the room was full of people I like. Mother handed me a spoon. Suddenly I found something strange on my mother's hand. My index finger was wrapped in gauze for several times, and there was some faint blood. She didn't find anything unusual about me, so Gu Zi happily scooped soup for me with her injured hand. Looking at the dishes in the bowl, I couldn't help crying. Gradually, every little thing on weekdays flashed through my mind like a movie. Only then did I really understand how deep the pool in my mother's heart loves me. Motherly love is like water, tender and delicate, with a refreshing coolness and sweetness. "Knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock. Knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock when he was with his mother, he heard her talking all the time. My father just keeps smoking and answers once in a while, and most of them are just a sentence or two. When the guests came home, their father accompanied them to dinner, neither letting wine nor persuading them to eat. It is impolite to eat only your own food. It's the same for us children. He seldom asks about our study. He thinks that learning is our own business. Ask him if you have any questions. He also said that you should ask the teacher. My mother is a farmer, but in my eyes, many places are not like real farmers. My father finished primary school and dropped out of school because of poverty in the second grade of junior high school. Then he and several companions ran to Baotou without telling their grandparents, where they went to a technical secondary school for two years. Later, due to natural disasters in the 1960s, the school dissolved his mother and went home to continue to be his farmer. My father wrote a very good hand of calligraphy. Whoever has a wedding or funeral in the village always respectfully asks his father to be a cashier and write something down. Spring Festival is a busy season for my father. The villagers sent red paper to my house early and asked my father to write Spring Festival couplets. Often, before the Spring Festival, my family has long been filled with festive atmosphere. When I was a child, my father asked me to learn to write letters to my uncle in Shandong. What format, how to call it and how to sign it are all taught by my father. Although I like his handwriting, I haven't practiced it for a long time, and it hasn't been shapeless until now. When I go home and have a drink with my father until I am happy, my father always points at me and says, "As far as you are concerned, you are still a Chinese department or a teacher. The writing is not as good as that of a farmer like me. " I can only smile and nod. Mother is a person who loves books. Every time he goes out, he always puts a book in his bag. There is really nothing to read, so I have to bring some newspapers. I remember my father bought books by himself, including Water Margin, Stories of Eastern Zhou Countries, Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio and Three Stories by Feng Menglong, which were published in 1975. During the slack season, other men play cards or gamble, and my father reads on the kang. On rainy and snowy days, I read books all day. In the past two years, my mother has been dazzled, so she bought herself a pair of reading glasses and didn't forget to study. I sometimes look carefully, and the old man really looks like a literati. When I went home this summer vacation, I rummaged through the bookcases and found a set of "Wonders of Ancient and Modern Times" by the old man in Ming Dynasty, which was engraved in Daoguang period of Qing Dynasty. Unfortunately, one roll is missing. I said to him, give me this book. Father said yes, but I can't see at all. My father often said to me with emotion, "During the Cultural Revolution, all the books left by your grandfather when he was a private school teacher were burned while I was cooking, for fear of getting into trouble. It's worth it if you don't stay until now. " So I am also very emotional. Fortunately, our generation will never catch up with the era of "burning books". Of the three children in my family, my mother loves me the most. She said I could sit quietly and behave properly. In winter, I run in the street all day, sweating all over, and my cotton trousers are wet with heat. Before getting up in the morning, my father always lights the stove early, then turns my cotton trousers over by hand and bakes them near the stove bit by bit, shaking them slowly while baking. Soon, I saw plumes of hot air coming out of my cotton trousers. After baking, dad will rub cotton trousers with his two pairs of big hands to make them soft. When I put it on again, I felt very warm. Father is a restless man. 6. How to write a composition describing a character The writer's composition expresses the character's characteristics, personality, moral quality, mental outlook and thoughts and feelings by describing the specific activities of the character. In order to write a good composition, we must learn the following skills and methods. First, grasp the characteristics. Some students like studying, some students like helping others, some students like making small crafts, some students like eating snacks, and so on. This love of learning, helping others, making small crafts and eating snacks are the main characteristics of these people. Writing a person's composition is to grasp these characteristics and reflect what kind of person this person is, what kind of ideological quality he has and so on. The more accurate these features are, the more specific the examples will be, and the more impressive they will be to readers. Such as "Timid Me", it is to catch my "timid thing and write my" timid character. Second, choose a good example. When writing a person's article, you should also write examples, and express the characteristics of this person through one or several examples (it is best to write that a person has two or three things). When choosing cases, we should choose those that can impress, influence and infect people, that is, we should choose typical and novel cases. When writing, don't use the first situation you think, and don't use the second situation you think. The third or even the fourth or fifth situation you think of is generally attractive and impressive. This is because it is easy for you to think of it, and it is easy for others to think of it. Everyone writes such things in the composition, and the composition becomes a "staple food", and it won't get high marks or praise from teachers. The selected examples should fully show the character and quality of the characters. When you finish reading "Timid Me", you will be deeply impressed by me, and your composition will be successful. Third, use description. If you want to write the characters vividly, you must use various description methods such as action, language, psychology, expression and portrait. For example, in "Timid Me", I let out a cry of fear, blindfolded quickly, and my heart was pounding. This action description vividly describes my timid character. The description should conform to the age, identity and occupation of the characters. The same thing, what a primary school student said is definitely different from what a university professor said. Fourth, write the details. It is necessary to show the subtle movements of the characters and their changes concretely and vividly. For example, in "Timid Me", the gift was put in an obvious place and was deliberately forgotten the next day. When I let go of "forgetting", I wrote my timid character into my life. Fifth, make good use of contrast. Contrast is a common writing method in writing. You can compare your own characteristics, hobbies and specialties with others, that is, horizontal comparison; You can also compare how you compare yourself in a certain way now with how you compared yourself in a certain way before, that is, vertically. Through horizontal and vertical comparison, we can vividly show a person's ideological quality, mental outlook and main characteristics. Contrastive description is not suitable for forced improvisation, but suitable for contrastive writing, not suitable for contrastive writing. To sum up the above steps, it is: first, grasp the characteristics. Second, choose a good example. Third, use description. Fourth, write the details. Fifth, make good use of contrast. 7. I want an article about people. In the world where mothers hold hands, there are industrious hands, lazy hands, rich hands and dexterous hands. However, I wrote about my mother's hardworking hands. Her hands are not that big. Long-term labor has made the cocoon skin climb on her fingers, and a layer of light black skin has grown on the back of her hand. When the cock crows three times, mother's hands have already started to work: busy making breakfast. Near noon, her hands began to work again: busy cooking lunch. In the afternoon, her hands began to work again: busy cooking dinner. At night, when the moon is high, my mother's hands are working again: busy washing clothes. In short, my mother's hands have been working. Mother's hands are hardworking and full of maternal love. I remember a cold winter afternoon. I am doing my homework and my mother is doing needlework. It was late at night, and the weather became colder. My hands are shaking, I dare not write, for fear that I can't do my homework well. At this time, my mother came up to me and said with concern, "Is it cold?" I gently clamped my hand in hers. Suddenly, I felt extremely warm. With her encouragement, I finally finished my homework seriously. I remember another morning in the middle of winter, and it was very cold. In order to keep out the cold, my friends and I went skating by the river. I accidentally fell into the lime pit. I tried to lift my feet, but my boots were stuffed with lime. "I can't wear it." I resolutely took off my boots and prepared to let my mother wash them for me. Another thought: My mother will criticize me. Finally, I came up with a way to kill two birds with one stone. I hid my boots under the door until it was warm. The next day, the weather was a little warmer, so I went to wash my boots. But there are no traces of boots under the door. I was so anxious that I almost cried. After a while, I calmed down and went to look elsewhere. No sooner had I found the back door than I heard the familiar sound of "wooshing, wooshing, wooshing". Isn't that the sound of mom's hands working? I followed the sound. In the yard, I found my mother who was washing my boots. Her hand was red with cold and cracked several times. Although it was very cold, there were still a few glittering and translucent beads of sweat slipping from my mother's cheek. I walked up to her, grabbed the brush for brushing my boots and said, "Mom, I'll wash it." Mother said with concern, "Zhen Zhen, I'll wash it." I never promised, but she has taken her boots and brushes. Finally, mother washed it. After washing, she carefully dried her boots. Tears blurred my eyes when I put them back on. Ah! I want to praise, praise mother's hand, but also praise you-mother.